英语教学课件The Last Leaf

读后续写EnglishContinuationWritingThelastleaf教师：孙乃珠Dearstudents,Iknowthatyoucangetthemainideaofthetextbutcan'tanalysethetextindetail,youcanwritebutthelanguageisnotvividandplotsarenotlogicallyreasonable.Inthisclass,allofyouaretrainedtoanalysethetextthoroughlybasedonreadingcircles,andmaketheendingofthestorymoreattractiveandlogicallyreasonablebyadoptingthematicandrhematicprogressionandpolishingyourlanguageaswellassentencepatterns.Yours,Mr.SunLet’swatch：AnintroductiontoO.Henry文本分析part1Onceuponatime,therewasatownofpoorpaintersonahighhill.SueandJohnsywerebothtrainingtobepainters.Theylivedinalittlebrickhouseattheedgeoftown.Johnsyhadcaughtpneumonia(肺炎)andstayedinbed,feelingveryill.Returninghomeafterwork,Suewasexhausted.“Thewindissocoldoutside.Winteriscoming.Haveyoubeencoughingalot?Haveyoutakenyourmedicine?”askedSue.Johnsywastooweaktorespond,lyinginherbedandstaringoutthewindow.0102Therewassomeivy(常春藤)ontheoppositewallandshecouldseetheleavesdancingintheharsh(刺骨的)wind.Meanwhile,Johnsybegantocountbackwards:“Ten,nine,eight,seven...”.“Whenthelastleaffalls,Iwilldietoo.”hopelesslysaidJohnsy.“Howcanyousaythat?That’sridiculous!Youarenotaleaf.”saidSue.03AlthoughJohnsyhadnowilltolive,Suetriedherbesttogiveherhopeandencouragement.SuegentlytookJohnsy’shand,“PleaseJohnsy,bestrong.Thedoctorsaysyouwillbealright.”saidSue.“Iamsotiredofcoughingallthetime,andofseeingyouworksohardtosupportme.Iwanttorest,toslipawayquietlylikethosefallingleaves.”repliedJohnsy.04Suehadnochoicebuttoturntotheirpoorneighbor,MrBehrman,forhelp.Hewasapaintertoo,buthehadn’tpaintedanythinginalongtime.Somepeoplebelievedhesimplyhadnotalent.Buthebelievedsomedayhewouldpaintamasterpiece.SuetoldhimthatthedoctorsaidJohnsycouldstillrecoverifshefoundthewilltolive.05BehrmanandSuelookedoutthewindowattheivyandnoticedthattherewasjustoneremainingleaf.What’smore,acoldrainwasfalling,mixedwithsnow.BehrmanwassoworriedaboutJohnsy’shealththathehopedtofindawaytogiveherstrength.

06阅读小组长DiscussionLeader组织小组讨论，并针对阅读内容提问。篇章大师PassagePerson讲解阅读内容中有意思、重要或较难的段落。生活实际联结者Connector将阅读内容与生活实际相联系，分享经验。单词大师WordMaster讲解阅读内容中的生词、重点单词及词组。篇章概括者Summarizer用自己的话概括篇章的主要内容。文化采集者CultureCollector寻找阅读内容中与自己国家文化相同或不同之处。ReadingCircles单词大师WordMaster[edʒ]n.边缘;刀口;优势vt.&vi.（使）徐徐移动;给...加边attheedgeof在...边缘edge单词大师WordMaster[njuːˈməʊniə]n.肺炎pneumonia单词大师WordMaster[ɪɡˈzɔːstɪd]adj. 筋疲力尽的;疲惫不堪的;用完的;耗尽的;枯竭的exhausted单词大师WordMaster[kɒf]v. 咳嗽;(从喉咙或肺中)咳出;突然发出刺耳的声音;n. 咳嗽;咳嗽声;咳嗽病;cough单词大师WordMaster[rɪˈspɒnd]v. 回应;响应;作出反应;(口头或书面)回答;respond单词大师WordMaster[hɑːʃ]adj. 严厉的;严酷的;恶劣的;残酷的;艰苦的;强烈刺眼的;丑陋的;刺耳的;粗糙的;harsh单词大师WordMaster[rɪˈdɪkjələs]adj. 荒唐的;荒谬的;愚蠢的;ridiculous单词大师WordMaster[ˈmɑːstəpiːs]n. 杰作;名著;代表作;masterpiece篇章大师PassagePersonReturninghomeafterwork,Suewasexhausted.“Thewindissocoldoutside.Winteriscoming.Haveyoubeencoughingalot?Haveyoutakenyourmedicine?”askedSue.Johnsywastooweaktorespond,lyinginherbedandstaringoutthewindow.记叙文narrative文体一般过去时pasttense时态第三人称thirdperson人称篇章大师PassagePerson语言描写:

“PleaseJohnsy,bestrong.Thedoctorsaysyouwillbealright.”;“Iamsotiredofcoughingallthetime...”SuegentlytookJohnsy’shand,“PleaseJohnsy,bestrong.Thedoctorsaysyouwillbealright.”saidSue.“Iamsotiredofcoughingallthetime,andofseeingyouworksohardtosupportme.Iwanttorest,toslipawayquietlylikethosefallingleaves.”repliedJohnsy.篇章大师PassagePerson动作描写:

BehrmanandSuelookedoutthewindowattheivyandnoticedthattherewasjustoneremainingleaf.BehrmanandSuelookedoutthewindowattheivyandnoticedthattherewasjustoneremainingleaf.What’smore,acoldrainwasfalling,mixedwithsnow.BehrmanwassoworriedaboutJohnsy’shealththathehopedtofindawaytogiveherstrength.

篇章大师PassagePerson隐含线索:

Buthebelievedsomedayhewouldpaintamasterpiece.Suehadnochoicebuttoturntotheirpoorneighbor,MrBehrman,forhelp.Hewasapaintertoo,buthehadn’tpaintedanythinginalongtime.Somepeoplebelievedhesimplyhadnotalent.Buthebelievedsomedayhewouldpaintamasterpiece.SuetoldhimthatthedoctorsaidJohnsycouldstillrecoverifshefoundthewilltolive.篇章大师PassagePerson事件：Behrman想帮助JohnsyBehrmanandSuelookedoutthewindowattheivyandnoticedthattherewasjustoneremainingleaf.What’smore,acoldrainwasfalling,mixedwithsnow.BehrmanwassoworriedaboutJohnsy’shealththathehopedtofindawaytogiveherstrength.

人与人之间的帮助与关爱人与社会阅读小组长（DiscussionLeader)人物分析情节发展主题语境

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Rereadthestoryandfigureouttheplot.Johnsygotsickwithpneumonia(Johnsy)painful(Sue)kindandconsiderateJohnsycountedtheivyleavesandthoughtshemustdiewhenthelastleaffalls.(Johnsy)hopeless(Sue)helplessBehrmanandSuelookedoutthewindowandfoundoneleafleft.(Sue&Behrman)worried续写部分续写部分cold&windywinterinatownJohnsySueBehrmantobringJohnsyhope故事要素WhenWhereWhat Who WhyJohnsyhadnowilltoliveDoctor本文情节线setting环境risingaction发展climax高潮人物时间地点患有肺炎的Johnsy倒数树叶，认为自己的生命会随着树叶的凋零而结束。好姐妹Sue和热心肠的邻居Behrman发现常春藤的叶子只剩下一片。resolution解决ending尾声续写部分续写部分“Haveyoubeencoughingalot?Haveyoutakenyourmedicine?”Suecaring“Howcanyousaythat?That’sridiculous!Youarenotaleaf.”Suekind“PleaseJohnsy,bestrong.Thedoctorsaysyouwillbealright.”SueanxiousworriedSuehadnochoicebuttoturntotheirpoorneighbor,MrBehrman,forhelp.SuehelplessJohnsywastooweaktorespond,lyinginherbedandstaringoutthewindow.Johnsyweak“Whenthelastleaffalls,Iwilldietoo.”Johnsyhopeless“Iamsotiredofcoughingallthetime,andofseeingyouworksohardtosupportme.Iwanttorest,toslipawayquietlylikethosefallingleaves.”JohnsytiredpainfulunbearableButhebelievedsomedayhewouldpaintamasterpiece.BehrmanconfidentdeterminedBehrmanwassoworriedaboutJohnsy’shealththathehopedtofindawaytogiveherstrength.

Behrmanwarm-hearted生活实际联结者ConnectorDoyouknowhowtocomfortsomeone?篇章概括者SummarizerJohnsy因感染肺炎对生存失去信心，认为自己的生命会随着常春藤树叶的飘落而结束，好姐妹Sue十分担心她的身体状况和精神状况，向好心的邻居Behrman求助，Behrman得知事情的经过后决定想法子帮助Johnsy，然后？Johnsywasseriouslyillbecauseofpneumonia,havingnowilltoliveandwillingtodiewiththefallingleaves.SueandtheirneighborBehrmandecidedtofindawaytohelpJohnsy.写作构架part2平行性延续性三种叙述模式交叉性01Johnsyhadthewilltolive02SueandJohnsyembraced03Suesentforthedoctor04PlotDesignThedoctorbelievedJohnsywouldrecoversoonParagraph1Thenextmorning,whenSuepushedthecurtainsopen,sheandJohnsyweresurprisedtofindthelastleafsurvived.TheLastLeafParagraph2ThedoctorwasabouttoleavewhenhesuddenlyrememberedtotellSueherneighborBehrmanwasbroughttothehospitalthatmorning.Paragraph1Thenextmorning,whenSuepushedthecurtainsopen,sheandJohnsyweresurprisedtofindthelastleafsurvived.Paragraph1Thenextmorning,whenSuepushedthecurtainsopen,sheandJohnsyweresurprisedtofindthelastleafsurvived.Johnsyfoundtheleafwasstrongandshealsohadthewilltolive.JohnsyandSuesmiledateachotherandembraced.Immediately,Suesentforthedoctortoinformhimofthegoodnews.AfterthedoctorcheckedJohnsy'scondition,hebelievedshewouldrecoververysoon.平行叙述01020304延续叙述Johnsyfoundtheleafwasstrongandshealsohadthewilltolive.JohnsyandSuesmiledateachotherandembraced.Immediately,Suesentforthedoctortoinformhimofthegoodnews.AfterthedoctorcheckedJohnsy'scondition,hebelievedshewouldrecoververysoon.TheLastLeafParagraph2ThedoctorwasabouttoleavewhenhesuddenlyrememberedtotellSueherneighborBehrmanwasbroughttothehospitalthatmorning.Paragraph1Thenextmorning,whenSuepushedthecurtainsopen,sheandJohnsyweresurprisedtofindthelastleafsurvived.01Behrmanwasfoundlyinginthestreet02Behrman'shandswerestainedwithpaint03SuelookedagainatthelastivyleafParagraph2ThedoctorwasabouttoleavewhenhesuddenlyrememberedtotellSueherneighborBehrmanwasbroughttothehospitalthatmorning.PlotDesign04SherealizeditwasBehrman'smasterpieceParagraph2ThedoctorwasabouttoleavewhenhesuddenlyrememberedtotellSueherneighborBehrmanwasbroughttothehospitalthatmorning.ThedoctortoldSuethatBehrmanwasfoundlyinginthestreet.Behrmanwasuncounciousbecauseofthecold,andhishandswerestainedwithpaint.WhenSuelookedatthelastivyleafagain,shefounditwasn'tmovinginthewind.ItwasreallyBehrman'smasterpiece.交叉叙述01020304ThedoctortoldSuethatBehrmanwasfoundlyinginthestreet.Behrmanwasuncounciousbecauseofthecold,andhishandswerestainedwithpaint.WhenSuelookedatthelastivyleafagain,shefounditwasn'tmovinginthewind.ItwasreallyBehrman'smasterpiece.润色批改part3词汇润色看

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观察到observe一般动词细节动词词汇润色WhenSuelookedatthelastivyleafagain,shefounditwasn'tmovinginthewind.WhenSuestaredatthelastivyleaf,shefounditwasn'tmovinginthewind.一般动词细节动词词汇润色bemovedtotearswordsfailedsb.when.....smilelightsupone'sfaceJohnsyandSuesmiledateachotherandembraced.JohnsyandSueembracedeachotherandsmileslituptheirfaces.情绪状态身体表征词汇润色oagentleembrace=oatighthugutterlyamazed

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amazedImmediately,Suesentfor...couldhardlywaittodeeplymoved...副词单一状语多样状语词汇润色withhishandsstainedwithpaintshepoppedherheadoutofwindowwithcuriosity介词短语单一状语多样状语句式润色Johnsyfoundtheleafwasstrongandshealsohadthewilltolive.Findingtheleafwasstrong,Johnsyalsohadthewilltolive.非谓语动词单一状语多样状语句式润色AfterthedoctorcheckedJohnsy'scondition,hebelievedshewouldrecoververysoon.

HavingcheckedJohnsy'scondition,thedoctorbelievedshewouldrecoververysoon.非谓语动词单一状语多样状语句式润色WhenSuestaredatthelastivyleaf,shefounditwasn'tmovinginthewind.状语从句单一状语多样状语Paragraph1Thenextmorning,whenSuepushedthecurtainsopen,sheandJohnsyweresurprisedtofindthelastleafsurvived.【1】Findingtheleafwasstrong,Johnsy,sittingupstraightonherbedthen,alsohadthewilltolive.【2】SuepulledJohnsyintoagentleembrace,smileslightinguptheirfaces.【3】Immediately,Suejumpedouttosendforthedoctorandcouldn'twaittoinformhimofthegoodnews.【4】HavingcheckedJohnsy'scondition,thedoctorbelievedshewouldrecoververysoon,whichbroughtgreatjoytothesisters.(69words)Paragraph2ThedoctorwasabouttoleavewhenhesuddenlyrememberedtotellSueherneighborBehrmanwasbroughttothehospitalthatmorning.【1】ThedoctoraddedthatBehrmanwasfoundlyinginthestreet,r