读后续写雪中救马学案-高三英语二轮复习

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Benracedoutofschool.Christmasholidays!Whenhegothome,hewenttocheckonhispony,Scout.Heslippedhimacandy,andScoutnuzzled（用口鼻轻擦）hisshoulder.BenstartedtowardthehouseandfoundhisolderbrotherJackstartingthesnowmobile（雪地机动车）todelivergastoUncleMike.Benjumpedonthebackandjoinedhim.

Theysetoffslowly.Thesnowwasfreshanddeepontheremotemountainpath.Whentheyarrived,Jackwentoverwiththegascan.Benlookedupthemountainandsawsomethingmoving.Hegotbinoculars（望远镜）andsawtwoanimals.Coulditbeahorse?JackclimbedbackonthesnowmobileandaskedBentoleave.WhenBentoldJackhesawhorsesupinthesnowytrees,Jackdidn'tbelieveit.Benlookedbackupthemountain,buthecouldn'tseeanything.

AtdinnerBentoldhisfatherhesawtwohorsesuponthemountaintoday.“Iftheyarehorses,theymustbetrappedbyallthissnow."saidhisdad."Ifthey'retrapped,wehavetodosomething,"saidBen,hisvoicerising.

HisdadlookedatJack."Well,inthemorninggoandtakealook.Takethegunandsomehay（干草）.Iftheylookasiftheycansurvive,givethemthehay.Ifnot…"Jacklookedserious,andslowlynodded.Benknewwhatthegunwasfor,andhischestwentcold.

Inthemorning,theysetoffinthecoldsnow.WhentheygottotheplacewhereBenhadseenthehorses,theystoppedandlookedupusingbinoculars.Nohorses.Theywaitedforafewminutes.

"Iseethem.They'rehorses.Let'stakethesnowmobileupthere."Bensuddenlyexclaimed.Theydrovethesnowmobileinthedeepsnowandfinallyreachedtheplace."Ohno!"saidBen"They'restarving!"Oneofthehorseshadlostalotofhair,andtheirtailswerealmostgone.Theireyeswerelifelessandtired.

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Jackwalkedaroundthehorses.

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2:Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingeveryonetocomeandhelp.文章大意：主人公本与哥哥杰克在雪地开车时，本偶然看见了两匹山上受困的马，本回家向父亲说了这事。父亲让两兄弟第二天再开车去看马的情况，带上干草与枪，交代说马的情况不好，就使用枪。本非常同情这两匹马，他会怎么做呢？

文本特点文章伏笔容易找到，主线清晰，容易续写故事线Chrimasholiday-----Benjoinedhisbrother’stripandbychancehespottedthehorse---Theyspottedthehorsetrappedinthesnowagain---Thebrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingforhelp----man’seffortstosaveanimals情感线Excited---worried-----trilledandconcerned---hopeful---atpeace语言积累“熊”的描写Probably

angeredbythespray,thebearstarted

attackingthefence

evenmoreviolently.(攻击栅栏)The

bearstopped

poundingthefence

andwalkedtowardsthebread,butwentbackagaininaminutewhenhefinishedthebread.(猛打栅栏)Thenoisesofthehelicopterfrightenedthebearaway,

leapingclumsilyinto

thebush.（笨拙地跳进)Thepolarbear

letoutonelastroar

andthen

scamperedoff.（咆哮；逃跑）Theenormousgrizzlybearroaredwithrageanditsdrippingjawswerewideopen.Thebearroseupand

roaredat

me,

baringitsrazor-sharpteeth.（咆哮；露出锋利的牙齿）Thebear

snarledatthem,inching

closer.(snarlat咆哮；inchv.缓慢移动)

“狗”的描写The

dogsatpatientlywithits

tonguehangingoutofitsmouth.（舌头下垂)Thedogwasbiting,

growlingandwaggingitstail.(咆哮并摇尾巴)Butbeforehecouldgrabthedog,it

letoutaferociousbark

andrammeditsbodyagainsthim,almostknockinghimdown.(发出凶猛的狗吠)Thedog's

earprickedup

atthesound.(竖起耳朵)Uponhismaster’sarrival,thedogleapttohisfeet,

snorted

cheerfullyandboundedforward.(喷鼻息）Thedogletout

astringofroaringbarks.(吼叫)Thedogleaptand

waggeditstail

inexcitement.（摇尾巴)Thedog

licked

hishandsandpusheditsheadagainsthisleg.(舔）

“猫”的描写The

catsuddenlyjumpedupand

yowled.Itstoodtherewithitsfurstandingstraightup.（哀嚎)Thecat

archeditsbackandhissed.(弓起背并发出嘶嘶声）Thecat

letoutapurr.(发出呼噜声)Thecat

curledintoaball

andwenttosleep.(蜷缩成一团)Thecat

purred

asIstrokeditsfur.(咕噜咕噜叫)The

littlecreature

madeasoftmeow

andcurleditselfintoafurrylittleball.(喵喵叫)

“马”的描写Theunexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,whichmadeitrunwildly.Thehorse

snorted,tosseditsheadandthengallopedaway.(喷鼻，甩头，飞奔而去)Thehorse

reared

interror,throwingitsrider.(后腿直立)Alantookholdofthereinsandthesmallhorsestarted

trotting.(慢跑,小跑)Thehorseseemedrestless,too,

stampingitsfeet,andsnorting.(跺脚，喷鼻)

“狼”的描写Seeing

this,thewolfstill

howled

outsidethedoorforsometimeandthenleftunwillingly.(嗥叫）Quickaslightningitturnedround,its

eyesflaminganditsmouthwideopeninahowlofrage.

它像闪电一样迅速地转过身，眼毛怒火，张大了嘴，怒吼着。The

wolfglaredatherforamomentinsilence,

lashinghistailwrathfully.(愤怒地摔着尾巴)Abruptlythewolfletoutalongsnarling,terribleshrilland

chargedat

himlikeagrayarrow.(冲向)In

aflash,thewolf

slunkinto

thethickforest,andtrottedsouth.(潜入）The

wolfcameclosetotheman,bareditsteeth,and

sniffed

inhunger.(嗅)

“猴子”的描写A

pairofshiningeyesseemedtofloatinthedarkness.Monkeywere

screeching

inthetrees.(发出尖锐刺耳的声音)Themonkeywas

hopping

onthetree.(跳行)Thebabymonkey

clungto

itsmother.(依偎)

“鸟”的描写Arobinwas

perching

onthefence.(栖息；停留)Thesparrowswere

peckingat

whatevertheycouldfind.(啄)Theswan

flapped/fluttered

itswingsandflewaway.(拍打翅膀)Thebird

swoopeddown

tothelake.(猛冲)Thebird

soaredintothesky.(飞向天空)Perching

onmypalm,she

chirped/squeaked

merrily,eyesfixedonmineagain.(吱吱叫)Thebird

tuckeditsheadunderitswing.(把头缩进翅膀下)Abird

trimmeditsfeathers.(修整羽毛)Ahawk

hovered

intheazuresky.(盘旋)

“松鼠”的描写Startledbytheunexpectedstranger,thegraysquirrel,

crouchingonthetree,chatteredfiercelyandtrembledhisfurrytail.(蹲在树上，凶猛地吱吱叫，并抖着毛茸茸的尾巴）范文：

Jackwalkedaroundthehorses."Well,"saidJack,sighing,pickingupthegun."IguessIbetterusethis.”"No!Weshouldatleasttry!"pleadedBen,strokingthehorsesgently.Jackwalkedaroundthehorsesagain.Hepattedoneofthemontheneck.Itmadeasad,smallgroaningsound,"Maybeyou'reright."Hesuredidn'twanttohavetoshootthesehorses.Benquicklygotthehayandspreaditaroundinpiles.Thehorsesatehungrily.Withonemorepattoeachhorse.JackandBenclimbedonthesnowmobileanddrovebackdownthemountainasquicklyastheycouldtoreporttheirnews.Backathomethefamilyhadahurriedmeeting.Afterdiscussingallkindsofpossiblewaystoputthehorsesoutoftheirmisery,theyfinallydecidedtoshovelatunnel.

Thetwobrotherswentfromdoortodooraskingevery