好的英文简历要少用以下5句话

-.z.好的英文简历要少用以下5句话原文地址：.shangwu900./zhichang/280.htmlThreeyearsago,jobsearche*pertJennyFosswroteoneofmyfavoritearticlesoncoverletters.Itwascalled,"BadPick-UpLines:TheyDon'tWorkinBars,TheyDon'tWon'tinCoverLetters."(Yes,Irememberiteventhreeyearslater.)三年前，猎头专家JennyFoss在笔者最喜欢一篇求职信的文章上写了这么一句话。它是这样说的："最糟糕的话：对调酒师没用，也不会出现在求职信上。〞〔是的，甚至三年过去了笔者仍然记得很清楚。〕Evenafterreadingthatarticle,ittookmesometime—longerthanI'dliketoadmit—tostepoutsideofthe"Iamwritingtoapplyfor[position]"lead-in,becauseit'swhatIwasfortablewith.Butit's2021,andpeoplearestillwritingformletters,whichleadstothespreadofterribleadvicelike,"Noonereadscoverlettersanyway."甚至在读完那篇文章后，还让笔者花费了相当长的一段时间，跳出那个"来信的目的是申请*个〔职位〕〞的框框，因为这是我最习惯的做法。但这已经是2021年了，而人们仍然在写求职信，以致得出很多不耐烦的建议，"已经没有人会看求职信了。It'snotthatnoonereadsthem.Thehardtruthisthatifyourletterlookslikeeveryoneelse's,thehiringmanagerwillreadit—andpromptlyforgetit.这也不是说没有人查看这些求职信，残酷的现实是，如果你的求职信千篇一律，hr看完后，也就忘了。So,readonforthefiveofthemostclichélinestostrikefromyourcoverletterimmediately.所以，快点查看你的coverletter，看看有没有以下这5种陈词滥调吧。1."Iamapplyingfortheroleof[title]at[pany]"1."我想申请的是贵公司的**〔职位〕〞Yearsago,whenapplicationsweresentthroughthemailandsecretariessortedthroughletterafterletter,itwasprobablyreallyimportanttodedicateyouropeninglinetothejobyouwereapplyingfor.Butnowadays,I'dguessyou'reapplyingviasomesystemthatmakesitclearwhatpositionyou'reinterestedin—suchasanonlineportalwhereyoucancheckthatbo*orinanemailwiththesubjectline.Inotherwords,thepersonreadingyourcoverletterknowswhyyou'rethere.多年前，当人们通过电子发送求职申请，然后通过人事秘书的逐一筛选后，则你的信件抬头真的很有可能对你的求职结果至关重要。然而到了如今，笔者会推断，你会通过一些求职平台来清晰地表达自己的求职意愿，比方在线求职端口，你既可以查看，也可以根据来信的标题来判断一个职位。换而言之，对方了解你的求职意愿。Ofcourse,I'mnotsuggestingyounevermentiontheposition.Theveryoppositeistrue:Youshouldabsolutelymentiontheposition,thepany,andwhyyou'reafitforboth.WhatI'msayingisthatifyouopenyourcoverletterwiththelineabove,you'llhavethesameopenerasseveralothercandidates.Translation:当然，笔者没有建议你绝口不提求职岗位。实际上最应该做的是：必须提到职位，公司，还有你的求职优势。笔者想表达的是，如果你以上面的这句话作为开场白，你就会跟其他的求职者一样，可以解读为：You'llhavewastedyourfirstimpressionaswellasvaluablespace.你浪费了留下第一印象以及表达自己长处的大好时机。So,startyourletterbygrabbingthehiringmanger'sattention,andthenleadingintowhyyou'reafitfortheparticularroleandorganization.所以，信件开头必须抓住hr的眼球，吸引对方的注意力，然后他/她就会有耐心继续往下阅读你的求职信，了解你对岗位和公司的求职优势。2."I'mafastlearner"2."我的学习能力很强。〞Confession:EverytimeI'vewrittenthisinacoverletter,it'sbecauseIdidn'thavethepreferrednumberofyearsofe*perience.And,I'mprettysurethepersonreadingmyapplicationtranslatedthislineaccordingly.坦白说，每当笔者在写求职信时加上这句话的时候，都是因为笔者并没有足够的工作经历。所以我也很肯定查看我的求职信的hr也会这么解读。Sayingthatyoulearnquicklyisn'tgoingtoknockanyone'ssocksoff.So,whatshouldyouwriteinstead"Includeastatorstorythatshowswhatafastlearneryouare.Ifyouhaveaphotographicmemoryortaughtyourselftocode,mentionit.Ifyourbossaskedyoutolearneverymajorclient'snameinonemorningandyoudidit,sharethatanecdote.Itwillbemuchmorememorablethan"I'mafastlearner."这句话的意思并不是要哗众取宠。所以，你应该要怎么表达自己的学习能力强呢？用事实或故事说明自己是个学习能力强的人。如果你有过目不忘的能力，要说清楚。如果你的老板让你记住在一个早上记住所有重要客户的名字，而你也办到了，也要把这件轶事说出来。这样会比"我的学习能力强〞这句话更让人印象深刻。3."Ithinkoutsidethebo*"3."我能跳出思维的框框〞Let'sstartwiththeironyofusingaclichétodescribehowcreativeyouare.Seriously,though,ifyouaresomeonewhothinksoutsidethebo*,whynotdojustthatwithyourcoverletter"首先用这种陈词滥调的话来显示自己的创造力是很可笑的。说真的，如果你确实能够跳出思维的框框，何不直接在求职信里表达呢？Yourbestbethereistoshow—ratherthanwriteasentenceabout—yourinventiveness.Maybeyouapplyforyourjobinacreativewayorprovideane*ampleoftimewhenyouringenuitysavedtheday.Or,justproveitrightoffthebatbyopeningupyourcoverletterwithawittylinethatgrabpeople'sattention.最正确的方法就是事实胜于雄辩。也许你用一种新颖的方法表达求职意向，或者给出一个你为公司摆脱困境的例子。又或者直接用诙谐幽默的开头吸引读者的注意。4."I'mthebestpersonforthejob"4."我最适合这份工作〞Firstthingsfirst,doyouknoweveryotherapplicant"Takeitfromsomeonewho'slostouttoapersonwithadecademoree*perienceinagivensector:Youcan'tmakethisassertion.先说重要的，你了解其他的求职者吗？这是输给另外一个比自己多10年工作经历的人的教训：决不能说出这种武断的话。Notonlycouldtherebesomeonewhoisinfactmorequalifiedthanyou,butyourprospectivebossmayalsohaveadditionalconsiderationsthatyou'reunawareof.Maybeyou'rethepersonwithadecademoree*perience,butthepanyislookingforsomeonegreenerbecauseofbudgetconstraints.Orperhapsyoucheckalltherightbo*es—butthebestpersonisactuallyin-house.不仅是确实有人比你更有资格，你的未来雇主也会有你没有预料过的额外考量。也许你就是拥有比别人多10年工作经历的人，但公司也有可能因为公司的预算想雇佣职场新人。又或者你查看了所有的消息，发现最适合这份工作的人早已在公司里工作了。"Best"isasubjectiveterm,sosticktostatementsyouknowtobetrue.Thiswouldincludeallofthelinesabouthowwell-matchedyoure*perienceisandwhyyou'repersonallydrawntotheorganization.Bythetimesomeonefinishesreadingyourcoverletter,heorsheshouldknowthatyou'rethebestperson."最适宜〞是主观的判断，所以要注意言辞要客观真实。这就需要包含所有想匹配的工作经历以及为什么你会被录用。当别人读完你的求职信，他/她就知道你是最适宜的。5."Thisise*actlythekindofroleI'mlookingfor"5."这正是我想找的工作。〞OK,thisstatementmeanswell.You'retryingtoshowthatyou'reherefortherightreasons,thatyou'repassionateaboutthepany,thatyou'reinvestedintherole,andsoforth.好吧，这句话还可以承受。你在尽力显示适宜这份工作的理由，你对公司的热诚以及你对岗位的投入，等等。Butitdoesn'thavetheimpactyou'regoingfor.First,itcaneoffalittleself-indulgent(i.e.,thatyou'remorefocus