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【命题趋势】新高考英语科目考试题型有重大变化，其中英语写作分为两部分：第一节为应用文写作；第二节为读后续写或概要写作。应用文写作与往年的写作变化不是很大，已为广大师生所熟悉，但是第二节的读后续写或概要写作是一种新题型题型介绍选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。【满分技巧】（1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右（词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分）；（2）应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力，主要包含以下四个方面：1.把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力；2.语言运用的准确性和丰富性；3.对语篇结构的把握能力；4.创造性思维能力。（一）【新书面表达-续写作文】(2022届浙江杭州市长征中学高三上期中试题)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Therewasathickforestonthesidesofamountain.Manykindsofanimalslivedintheforest.Adeerwaseatinggrassandleaveswithhertwoyoungones.Theyoungoneswanderedhappilyhereandthere.Thedeerfollowedherfawns（幼鹿）intoacave.Thedeerwasfrightenedbecauseitwasatiger’scave.Therewerebonesofdeadanimalsalloverthecave.Fortunately,thetigerwasnotinsidethecaveatthetime.Thedeerwastryingtoleadheryoungonesoutofthecavewhensheheardaloudroar.Shesawthetigeratadistancecomingtowardsthecave.Itwasdangeroustogooutofthecavenow.Shethoughtofaplan.Thedeerraisedhervoiceandshouted,"Mydeeryoungchildrendonotweep.Ishallcapture（捕捉）atigerforyoutoeat.Youcanhaveagooddinner."Thetigerheardthesewordsandbecamefrightened.Hethought,"Whoseisthatstrangevoicefromthecave?Adangerousanimalisstayinginsidetocaptureme.Ishallrunawaytoescapedeath."Thetigerbegantorunawayfromthereasfastaspossible.Ajackal（胡狼）sawtherunningtiger.＂Whyareyourunningingreatfear?"thejackalasked.Thetigersaid,"Myfriend,apowerfulandfierceanimalisinmycave.Theyoungonesarecryingforatigertoeat.Themotherispromisingtocaptureatigerforthem.So,Iamrunningaway."Thecunningjackalwasnowsurethetigerwasacoward（懦夫）.Itsaid,"Don’tbeafraid.NoanimalisfiercerorstrongerthanatigerLetusgotogethertofindout.＂Butthetigersaid,"Idonotwanttotakeachance.Youmayrunaway.Iwillbeleftalonetodie.So,Iwillnotcomewithyou."Thejackalsaid,"Trustme.Letusknot（打结）ourtailstogether.ThenIwillnotbeabletoleaveyou."Thetigeragreedunwillinglytothisproposal.Sothejackaltiedtheirtailsinaknot.Nowtheywalkedtowardsthecavetogether.Thedeersawthejackalandthetigercomingtogether.…………Thetigerwasshockedtohearthisandhewassurenowthejackalcheatedhim………………【参考范文】Thedeersawthejackalandthetigercomingtogether.Sheagainraisedhervoice.Sheshoutedtowardsherchildrenstandinginsidethecave,＂Mydearchildren,Irequestedmyfriend,thecleverjackal,tocaptureatigerforus.Nowlookthejackalhascapturedatigerforus.Hehastiedthetiger’stailtohistail.Thisistopreventthetigerfromescaping.Youwillsoonhavethetigerfordinner."Thetigerwasshockedtohearthisandhewassurenowthejackalcheatedhim.So,thetigerdecidedtoescapefromtheterribleanimalstandinginsidehiscave.Hestartedrunning.Heforgotaboutthejackal.Hedraggedthejackaloverrocksandthorns.Inthemadescapethejackalwascaughtbetweentworocks.Thetigerpulledwithallhismight.Histailgotcut.Thejackalwaskilledinthisincident.Thetail-lesstigerranawaytoanotherpartoftheforest.Thedeerandheryoungonesleftthetiger’scave.Theyjoinedtheirherdsafely.Presenceofmindandintelligencecansaveonefromdangeroussituations.（二）【新版书面表达-读后续写】(2022届新素养大二轮浙京津鲁琼版专题突破卷2)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“Whatdoyouthinkaboutmyaudition(试奏)yesterday？Mytrill(颤音)shouldhavebeenbetter，don’tyouthink？”AbbieaskedMelandclosedthelidofherviolincasebeforeschool.“It’snobigdeal，Abbie，”Melsaidastheywalkedoutthedidn’thavetimetoSheforgotabouttheauditionresultsuntilAbbiedraggedhertothemusicthoughtshe’dprobablybeinthefirstviolins.MelandAbbiefoundthelistofnamesonthescreamed，“Ican’tbelieveit！”“Ican’twaittotellMumandDad！”Abbierushedtowardkept？Therehadtobesome’dfigureouttomorrow.Thenextmorning，Melslippedintothemusichercourage，Melsaid，“MrBenson，Iwanttotalktoyouabouttheorchestra(管弦乐队)seats.”“Yes—youmustbeproudofyoursister，”MrBensonsmiled.“Abbieisarareshecontinuestopracticehardandgrowasamusician，shecouldbecomeawe’lllookbackonourlittleorchestraandthinkabouthowluckyweare.”注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Melfrozeastherewasn’tanymix­up.Paragraph2：Afterschool，MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside，playingtheviolin.【参考范文】Melfrozeastherewasn’tanymix­up.Sherealizedshewastheonewho’dmadeamistake.Herlittlesisterhadearnedthefirstchairthroughefforts—andshehadn’tevencongratulatedher.Melwalkeddownthehall.Mostdays,shespenthertimethinkingaboutsoftball,herclassesandherfriends.Everydaywassofullthatshedidn’talwayspracticeherviolinwhileAbbieplayedeveryday.Determinedtomakeachange,MeldecidedtohaveatalkwithAbbie.Afterschool,MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside,playingtheviolin.MelmadeuphermindtoapologizetoAbbieafterabriefinnerstruggle.Sheclearedherthroatandstarted,“I’msoproudthatyou’reconcertmaster.I’msorryI’vebeensomean.IguessIwasjealous.”Abbiewassurprised.“Butyou’repopular,Mel.Yougetbettergrades.You’rebetteratsports.Youcandoeverything.”Melshookherhead.“Ican’tmakeatrilllikeyoucan.”“Youcanifyoukeeppracticing.”AbbiesmiledandaskedifMelwouldliketoplaywithher.Melagreeddelightedly.（三）【新书面表达-读后续写】(2022届浙江杭州地区高三冲刺模拟卷14)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onceuponatime,therewasafarmercalledRipVanWinkle.Helivedinavillageinthemountainswithhiswifeandtwoyoungchildren,adaughterandason.Ripwasaveryhappyandkindmanandhegotonwellwithallthechildreninthevillage.Theylovedhimbecauseheplayedgameswiththemandoftentoldthemstorieswhilehewassittingoutsidethe“KingGeorge”,thevillageinn.Hespendalotoftimeintheinnbecausehewasaverylazyman.Insteadofworkingonhisfarm,hewouldgofishingorhunting,orsitinthevillageinntalkingtohisfriends.Hisfamilywaspoorandhiswifeusedtogetangrywithhim.“Whatkindoffarmerareyou?”Shewouldsay.“Whydon’tyougetdowntosomework,youlazyman!”Afterargumentswithhiswife,Ripalwayswentoffhuntingwithhisdog,Wolf.Oneday,afteranotherargument,Ripwentfurtherthanusualinthewoodsandcametoabeautifulvalley.Suddenly,heheardastrangevoicecallinghisname.Anoldman,dressedinold-fashionedclothes,wastryingtocarryabarrel(木桶)andaskedRiptohelphim.Ripagreed.Theytookthebarreltoacave,wherethereweremorepeople,alldressedinthesamestrangeclothes.Afterthat,theoldmangaveRipadrinkfromthebarrel.Ripimmediatelyfellintoadeepsleep.注意：所续写的短文词数应为150左右；1.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；3.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1：Sometimelater,hewokeupunderatreeinthesamevalley.____________________________________________________________________________________________Para2：Whenhegottohishouse,hesawthatitwasoldandabandoned.___________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Comparedwithpapertowels,handdryershavemoreadvantages,whichwillbenefitschoolinfourways.First,theyarecleanandhealthybecausebacteriacan’ttouchkids.Additionally,itcanhelpschoolsavemoney.Thirdly,ourbathroomcanbekeptcleanandneat.Besides,itcandryourhandsmoreeffectivelyifwetakelongertime.Therefore,schoolisadvisabletofixtheequipmentatonce.(66)（四）（山东省2022年普通高等学校招生模拟卷）话题：救治流浪狗的故事难度：★★建议用时：7分阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Thoughitisoneofthefadedmemoriesofmylifetoday,therearetimeswhenIrememberhisfaceclearly,especiallyhiseyes.AshehadyellowspotsonhiseyeswecalledhimSpotty.Hewouldhavebeenastray(流浪)dog,untilhecametome.Iwassevenyearsold.MydadhadjustgotanewjobinNasik.Wehadmovedintoarentedhouse.Itwasrainingveryheavilyonthedaywemoved.Itwasacolddarknight.Wehadourmealandwenttosleep.SomehowinthemidnightIheardsomestrangesoundsoutsidethemaindoor.IgatheredcourageandlookedoutthroughthewindowandIwasreallyamusedwithwhatIsawoutside.Therewasasmallpuppylyingonanolddoormatwhichmymotherhadputoutsidethedoor.Itwaswetandtrembling.Atfirstitwasdifficulttoseetheliteone.Itwastheyellowspotsonitseyesthatmademerealizeitspresence.ItwastryingtogetunderthedoormattoavoidthecoldairoutsideandithadmanagedtogetinasIcouldseeonlyitsheadoutsidethedoormat.Wasitsickorinjured?Ifeltpityforthepoorsoul.Iwentinandcameoutwithanoldtowel.Iwentneartheinnocentoneandhelditinmyhandandwipedthepuppytillhehadbecomedry.Itookhimintomyroomandmadeabedforhimwithawoolenblanketandasmallpillow.Heseemedveryhealthyandcomfortableinhisnewbedashewenttosleepimmediately.Thenextmorning,everyoneinthefamilycametoknowabouttheunusualguest“Shallwekeephimwithus?"Iquestionedmymom.Likeanyotherparentswould,myparentsfirsttallyrefusedmyideabutmysisterandIconvincedthemtokeepSpotty.SlowlySpottygotonwitheveryoneandbecameoneofthefamilymembers.Para.1：Oneday,Spottyreturnedfromhisdailywalkwithabrokenleg._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Para.2:Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】DayspassedonandoneeveningwhenSpottyreturnedfromhislongwalk,heappearedveryexhausted.Hecametomyroomandsatnearme.ItwasthenthatIsawhishindlegwasinjuredandwasbleeding.Icalledoutmymotherandshequicklytiedabandagearoundhislegandgavehimfoodtoeat.Iwasveryupset.Butthenextday,Spottywasuptohisusualpranksthoughhelimpedabit.AfterthisincidentmyrelationwithSpottybecamemoreintense.Ireallyadmiredhimalotforhiscourage.Almostayearlater,onemidnightweheardSpottybarkingbreathlessly.Wecameoutandsawthathewasbarkingcontinuouslyheadingsomewhere.AftersometimeSpottybecamequiet.Ipattedhimonhisbackandcameinside.Thenextdaymorning,myheartskippedabeatwhenIdidn’tseeSpotty.Isearchedforhimineachandeverycornerbuthewasnowhere.Andthistimehehadgoneandwouldnevercomeback.Icriedandwaitedforhim.Wewaitedforonelongweek.Buttherewerenosignsofhim.ThenonedaymyDadgottransferredtoMumbai.WeshiftedbacktoMumbai.WhatwouldhavehappenedtoSpotty?Wouldhehavedied?Theseweretheonlyquestionsinmymind,buttheyallremainedunansweredforever.（五）（2022届新素养大二轮浙京津鲁琼版专题突破卷2）话题：Abbie和Mel之间发生的关于乐队的故事难度：★★★建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。“Whatdoyouthinkaboutmyaudition(试奏)yesterday？Mytrill(颤音)shouldhavebeenbetter，don’tyouthink？”AbbieaskedMelandclosedthelidofherviolincasebeforeschool.“It’snobigdeal，Abbie，”Melsaidastheywalkedoutthedidn’thavetimetoSheforgotabouttheauditionresultsuntilAbbiedraggedhertothemusicthoughtshe’dprobablybeinthefirstviolins.MelandAbbiefoundthelistofnamesonthescreamed，“Ican’tbelieveit！”“Ican’twaittotellMumandDad！”Abbierushedtowardkept？Therehadtobesome’dfigureouttomorrow.Thenextmorning，Melslippedintothemusicroom.Gatheringhercourage，Melsaid，“MrBenson，Iwanttotalktoyouabouttheorchestra(管弦乐队)seats.”“Yes—youmustbeproudofyoursister，”MrBensonsmiled.“Abbieisarareshecontinuestopracticehardandgrowasamusician，shecouldbecomeawe’lllookbackonourlittleorchestraandthinkabouthowluckyweare.”注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Melfrozeastherewasn’tanymix­up.Paragraph2：Afterschool，MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside，playingtheviolin.【背诵范文】Melfrozeastherewasn’tanymix­up.Sherealizedshewastheonewho’dmadeamistake.Herlittlesisterhadearnedthefirstchairthroughefforts—andshehadn’tevencongratulatedher.Melwalkeddownthehall.Mostdays,shespenthertimethinkingaboutsoftball,herclassesandherfriends.Everydaywassofullthatshedidn’talwayspracticeherviolinwhileAbbieplayedeveryday.Determinedtomakeachange,MeldecidedtohaveatalkwithAbbie.Afterschool,MelfoundAbbieonabenchoutside,playingtheviolin.MelmadeuphermindtoapologizetoAbbieafterabriefinnerstruggle.Sheclearedherthroatandstarted,“I’msoproudthatyou’reconcertmaster.I’msorryI’vebeensomean.IguessIwasjealous.”Abbiewassurprised.“Butyou’repopular,Mel.Yougetbettergrades.You’rebetteratsports.Youcandoeverything.”Melshookherhead.“Ican’tmakeatrilllikeyoucan.”“Youcanifyoukeeppracticing.”AbbiesmiledandaskedifMelwouldliketoplaywithher.Melagreeddelightedly.（六）（2022届浙江杭州地区高三冲刺模拟卷14）话题：农民RipVanWinkle的故事难度：★★★建议用时：7分阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Onceuponatime,therewasafarmercalledRipVanWinkle.Helivedinavillageinthemountainswithhiswifeandtwoyoungchildren,adaughterandason.Ripwasaveryhappyandkindmanandhegotonwellwithallthechildreninthevillage.Theylovedhimbecauseheplayedgameswiththemandoftentoldthemstorieswhilehewassittingoutsidethe“KingGeorge”,thevillageinn.Hespendalotoftimeintheinnbecausehewasaverylazyman.Instead