专题03建议信-2023年高考复习英语写作思维导图

/12/12/专题03应用文建议信2023年高考复习英语写作思维导图【题型解读】建议信是生活中常见的一种文体,是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构,信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。邀请信结构布局思维导图二、范文模板Dearclassmates,HaveyourealizedMother'sDayis________________________________________即将到来?Andwhatideashaveyou_________________________________________tocelebrateit?Inmyview,howmuchyou’llspendforyourmother_____________________________并不重要;theessentialissueisifitcan__________________________________表达我们衷心的爱和感激toourmothers.Soabunchofflowers,apostcardorahugisallacceptable_______________________________作为回报theirdevotiontous.Butdoingwhattheydoforuseveryday,Ithink,ismoresignificantinhonorofthem.___________________________________________只有这样willwebeoverwhelminglyawareof__________________________________母亲给了我们多少.I’vemadeaplantocookamealformymotherthatday,eventhoughIneverdiditbefore.Mydearfriends,_________________________________________你做好决定了吗?Yours,LiHua三、优秀范文1、假如你是一家报社的编辑布莱克先生，收到了高一学生李华的来信。近来他在英语的阅读上有些困难，做阅读理解题时常出错，因此他很着急，不知该如何做，请求你给想想办法，尽快调整好，适应高一的学习生活。DearLiHua,I’mgladtohearfromyou.I’mhonoredtobebelieved.Iknowyouhavetroubleindoingexercisesinreadingandyouareworried.Hereissomeadvice,whichmaybeofhelptoyou.Firstly,youshouldknoweveryonecanmeetwiththesamedifficulty.Youshouldhaveconfidence,whichisthekeytosuccess.Secondly,you’dbetternotbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Thirdly,youshouldgoonreadingthepassage--onepassageaday.Afterashortperiodoftime,youwillfindyoumakefewermistakes.Insistingonreadingtotheendistovictory.Lastly,youshouldmakeaproperplanforyoursubjects,whichwillbehelpfulforyourfuturestudy.AsfarasI’mconcerned,ifyoudolikethis,Ibelieveyouwillmakegreatprogress.Bestwishes!Yours.MrBlack【分析】这是一封建议信格式的应用文。根据信中要求回复给出学习上的建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。结构：总分法???总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.?了解到阅读学习上有困难，你很着急。提出给建议，也许可以帮到你。Iknowyouhavetroubleindoingexercisesinreadingandyouareworried.Hereissomeadvice,whichmaybeofhelptoyou.2.建议如下：?1）你应该知道每个人都会遇到你相同的困难。Firstly,youshouldknoweveryonecanmeetwiththesamedifficulty.你应该有信心，这是成功的关键。Youshouldhaveconfidence,whichisthekeytosuccess.2）你应该不要害怕犯错误。Secondly,you’dbetternotbeafraidofmakingmistakes.3）你应该继续进行阅读训练，每天一篇文章，Thirdly,youshouldgoonreadingthepassage--onepassageaday.短时间后你会发现你犯的错误减少了。Afterashortperiodoftime,youwillfindyoumakefewermistakes.坚持阅读直到你成功为止。Insistingonreadingtotheendistovictory.4）你应该制定合适的阅读计划，这样会有助于你将来的学习。Lastly,youshouldmakeaproperplanforyoursubjects,whichwillbehelpfulforyourfuturestudy.3.表示愿望：据我所知，如果你照我说的去做，我相信你会取得巨大的进步。AsfarasI’mconcerned,ifyoudolikethis,Ibelieveyouwillmakegreatprogress.4.表示祝愿：Bestwishes!第二步：列提纲?（重点词组及句型）havetroubleindoingexercises；inreading；andyouareworried；beofhelptoyou；meetwiththesamedifficulty；haveconfidence；thekeytosuccess；you’dbetternot；beafraidof；makingmistakes；goonreadingthepassage；afterashortperiodoftime；makefewermistakes；insistingonreadingtotheend；istovictory；makeaproperplan；foryoursubjects,；behelpfulfor；yourfuturestudy.第三步：连词成句Iknowyouhavetroubleindoingexercisesinreadingandyouareworried.Hereissomeadvice,whichmaybeofhelptoyou.Firstly,youshouldknoweveryonecanmeetwiththesamedifficulty.Youshouldhaveconfidence,whichisthekeytosuccess.Secondly,you’dbetternotbeafraidofmakingmistakes.Thirdly,youshouldgoonreadingthepassage--onepassageadayAfterashortperiodoftime,youwillfindyoumakefewermistakes.Insistingonreadingtotheendistovictory.Lastly,youshouldmakeaproperplanforyoursubjects,whichwillbehelpfulforyourfuturestudy.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列补充关系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,Aswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表转折对比关系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(从句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果关系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult,notbecause…butbecause…连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，第五步：润色修改【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式和词汇：非限制性定语从句：Hereissomeadvice,whichmaybeofhelptoyou；Youshouldhaveconfidence,whichisthekeytosuccess；Lastly,youshouldmakeaproperplanforyoursubjects,whichwillbehelpfulforyourfuturestudy.?高级词汇：haveconfidence；thekeytosuccess；you’dbetternot；beafraidof；makingmistakes；goonreadingthepassage；afterashortperiodoftime；makefewermistakes；insistingonreadingtotheend；istovictory；makeaproperplan；高级句式和词汇的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。2、假如你是李华，你校学生会即将组织一次徒步活动，已在校园网发布方案，征求师生的修改意见。你需要写一封邮件，包含以下两点:1.提出你觉得需要改进的地方；2.需要改进的原因。徒步活动主题:发现重庆时间:5月1日下午2点路线:从人民大礼堂(theGreatHallofthePeople)到解放碑、(LiberationMonument),全程徒步DearSir/Madam,holiday.HowevertedtohearthatahikingactivityfromtheGreatHallofthePeopletotheLiberationMonumentisgoingtobeheldontheLaborDayholiday.However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.last.Inactivity.Onlysuccess.WhatSquare.Bydinmoredetailsastheinformationreleasedonlineappearstobetoogeneral.Asparticipants,weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.Inthemeantime,wearewillingtohaveaclearerpictureofsecurityprecautionsandnecessarymedicalsupportfortheactivity.Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.What’smore,Isuggestthehikebemoresuitedtothetheme“DiscoverChongqing”throughadditionalactivities.IproposeanintroductionofthearchitectureonChaotianmenSquare.Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.succeed.Il,ifthehikeisorganizedinmoredetailsandinamoresupportiveway,itissuretosucceed.Ihopethatmyvoiceabovecanbeheardandconsideredandwishtheactivityagreatsuccess.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求李华写一封邮件，对徒步活动方案提出修改意见。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：建议信人称：第一人称时态：一般将来时；一般现在时要点：1.听说学校徒步方案，指出有待改进。2.需改进的地方和具体原因。第二部??列要点写提纲Para.1beexcitedtohearthat…;isgoingtobeheld;furtherimprovement;postonthecampuswebsitePara.2planindetails;haveaclearerpictureofsth;securityprecautions;medicalsupport;proposeanintroductionofsth;gainadeeperinsightintosthPara.3inamoresupportiveway;besuretosucceed;第三步连词成句1.I’mreallyexcitedtohearthatahikingactivityfromtheGreatHallofthePeopletotheLiberationMonumentisgoingtobeheldontheLaborDayholiday.2.Theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite.3.Thehikeneedstobeplannedinmoredetailsastheinformationreleasedonlineappearstobetoogeneral.4.Weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.5.Wearewillingtohaveaclearerpictureofsecurityprecautionsandnecessarymedicalsupportfortheactivity.6.Isuggestthehikebemoresuitedtothetheme“DiscoverChongqing”throughadditionalactivities.IproposeanintroductionofthearchitectureonChaotianmenSquare.7.Whenweappreciatetheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.8.Ifthehikeisorganizedinmoredetailsandinamoresupportiveway,itissuretosucceed.9.Ihopethatmyvoiceabovecanbeheardandconsideredandwishtheactivityagreatsuccess.第四步润色提高1.添加关联表达However;Firstofall;Inthemeantime;What’smore;Allinall2.句式升级However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.Asparticipants,weneedtoknowhowlongthehikewilllast.Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.第四步漂亮书写【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，分段合理。本文句式运用灵活，运用了种句式。比如使用了定语从句However,theremaybefurtherimprovementoftheschemeyou’vepostedonthecampuswebsite,asI’dliketopointout.使用了only的倒装句作小结：Onlybydoingsoareyoulikelytomakeitasuccess.使用介词短语，让文章更加连贯简洁：Byappreciatingtheartisticstyleofthelandmark,wecangainadeeperinsightintotheprosperityofourcity.四、题型练习[A] 假如你是李华，现在伦敦某中学做交换生，该校要开设一个中国书房，现向中国留学生征集建议。请你给负责人Smith写一封建议信，内容包括：1．书房采用中国传统风格设计；2．提供蕴含中国文化的书籍；3．定期举办读书交流会或中国传统文化讲座等。注意：1．词数80左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。??DearSmith,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSmith,I’mmorethanpleasedtoknowthatweareplanningtoopenaChinesestudyinourschool.AsanexchangestudentfromChina,I’mhappytogivemysuggestions.Firstly,thestudycanbedesignedintraditionalChinesestyle,providingreaderswithastrongChineseculturalatmosphere.Secondly,itmaybehelpfultooffersomeexcellentbooksthatreflectChineseculturetohelpreadersraisetheirreadinginterestandbroadentheirculturalhorizons.Inaddition,holdingregularreadingexchangemeetingsorlecturesontraditionalChineseculturewillalsomakethestudymoreappealing.Hopemyideaswillbehelpful!Yourssincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生作为在伦敦某中学的交换生，学校即将开设一个中国书房，现要求考生给学校负责人Smith写一封建议信，提出相应的意见。第一步：词汇积累非常：morethan→extremely/very开心的：happy→delighted建议：suggestion→recommendation吸引人的：appealing→attractive第二步：句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstly,thestudycanbedesignedintraditionalChinesestyle,providingreaderswithastrongChineseculturalatmosphere.拓展句：Firstly,thestudycanbedesignedintraditionalChinesestyle,whichwillprovidereaderswithastrongChineseculturalatmosphere.第三步：高分句型【高分句型1】Firstly,thestudycanbedesignedintraditionalChinesestyle,providingreaderswithastrongChineseculturalatmosphere.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语）【高分句型2】Inaddition,holdingregularreadingexchangemeetingsorlecturesontraditionalChineseculturewillalsomakethestudymoreappealing.（运用了动名词作主语）[B] Ms.Li光中学高三学生李津。为了改进教学并有效提升每个学生的英语水平，你的英语老师Ms.Li希望了解你的英语学习情况，并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。①对英语学习的认识；②自己目前的英语水平；③自己英语学习存在的主要问题；④对英语教学的两点建议。注意：1.词数100左右；2.信的开头和结尾已给出。Ms.LiMs.Li,I’mveryhappytohaveyouasourEnglishteacher._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!Yours,LiJin【答案】DearMs.LiLearningthatyouseektoenhanceyourteachingmethodsoastoimproveourEnglish,Iammorethangratefulandpleasedtoofferyousomeinformation.Firstandforemost,I’dliketotalkaboutmyviewonEnglishlearning.AsIseeit,thecoreofEnglishlearningisbasedonextensivereadingandspeaking,bywhichwecanbefamiliarwithscoresofEnglishgrammarrulesandexpressions.IamnowquitefluentinoralEnglish.However,tomydiscouragement,IamterribleinworkingoutquestionsaboutEnglishpassages.Therefore,IhopethatyoucangiveaclearanalysisofthestructuresofsomeEnglisharticles.Inthisway,wewillmasterhowtofigureoutthemainideaofanarticle.Inaddition,itwouldbebetterifyoucaninstructustocompleteEnglishcomprehensionquestions.Thanksagainforyourdevotedteaching.????Yours,LiJinMs.Li是一篇应用文。要求考生应英语老师Ms.Li的要求，谈谈自己对英语学习的看法，说明自己目前英语水平及不足之处，并最后提出英语教学方面的建议。第一步：词汇积累提供：offer→provide提高；改善：improve→enhance搞清楚；查明：figureout→findout教授；讲解：teach→instruct第二步：句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Firstandforemost,I’dliketotalkaboutmyviewonEnglishlearning.拓展句：Firstandforemost,I’dliketotalkaboutmyviewonEnglishlearning,whichmayhelpyoutoorganizeyourteachingmoreproperly.第三步：高分句型[高分句型1]LearningthatyouseektoenhanceyourteachingmethodsoastoimproveourEnglish,Iammorethangratefulandpleasedtoofferyousomeinformation.(运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]AsIseeit,thecoreofEnglishlearningisbasedonextensivereadingandspeaking,bywhichwecanbefamiliarwithscoresofEnglishgrammarrulesandexpressions.(运用了介词+which引导的非限定性定语从句)[C]假如你是一名英语课代表，为了帮助同学们提高学习英语的效率，你用英语给全班同学写了一封倡议信，倡导“坚持每天高效晨读”，内容如下：1.倡议目的；2.你对晨读的看法和建议；3.希望大家积极响应。注意：1.词数80左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Mydearfellowstudents,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________