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考研英语作文范文10篇
范文1"GoodHealth"
1.身体健康的重要性。2.保持健康的途径。3.我自己的实践。
GoodHealth
Thedesireforgoodhealthisuniversal.Inourcompetitivesocietyitisimportanttomaintaingoodhealth.Ontheonehand,peoplewithgoodhealthcandoworkwithfullconfidenceandtheirprogressinworkinturncontributestotheirhealthandhappiness.Ontheotherhand,asickpersonisusuallynotinterestedineverythingaroundhimandthereforehelosesmanyopportunitiestobecomesuccessful.
Therearemanywaystokeepit.First,thosewhoarealwaysonthegofrommorningtillnightshouldfindtimetorelaxbecausetoomuchstresswillaffecttheirhealth.Second,enoughtimeshouldbeleftforsleepbecausethatwillhelponebecomerestedandrefreshed.Finally,regularphysicalexercisesbenefitone'shealthalot.Sooneshouldalwayskeepinmindthatacertainamountofexerciseisnotawasteoftime.
Asforme,Ilikeplayingtennisinthemorning.Ialsoattachmuchimportancetoenoughsleepandrelaxation.Ibelievethiswillensuremygoodhealthfortherestofmylife.<评析>这篇文章语句通顺,语言流畅,句式变化多样,用词面比较宽。就内容来说,则很切题,包括了提纲中的所有要点。第一段的第二句即主题句是从提纲发展而来的,第二段的首句,即主题句也是由提纲中的第二点发展而来。范文2HopeProjectEducationplaysaveryimportantroleinthemodernizationofourcountry.However,becauseofhistoricalfactors,therearestillalotofpeopleinChinawhoareundereducated,especiallyamongyoungstersinruralareas.Theycannotaffordtheexpensesofschoolingandneedhelp.Atthesametime,Chinaisnotabletoinvesttoomuchmoneyinthematteratpresenttime.Itisinthisparticularsituationthattheauthoritiescarryoutthe"HopeProject".
Thisprojectisnecessarytoourcountry.Itisanurgentmeasurethatthegovernmenthastaken.Inthefirstplace,thisprojectwillprovideconditionsfortheyoungsterstogobacktoschool,whichwillcontributetotheirfuturesuccess.Thusitwillleadtotheenhancementoftheintelligencelevelinourcountry.Secondly,educationmakesitpossibleforpeopletoacquireknowledge,whichisusefultotheirfuturework.Hence,thisProjectbenefitsthemodernizationofourcountryalot.Finally,itcanmakemorepeopleeducated.Therefore,itmayindirectlyresultintheincreaseofthelivingstandardsofourpeople.
Inmyopinion,thisprojectisofgreatimportancetoourcountryatthepresenttime.Anditalsowillhaveaprofoundeffectonthefutureachievementsofourcountry.Isuggestthatmoreworkbedonesothateverychildinthecountrysidecanreceiveelementaryeducation.<评析>次序词的使用不仅限于first,second,third,本文第二段使用了inthefirstplace,secondly,finally列举原因,说明希望工程为什么对我国很必需,条理清晰,层次分明范文3ModernizingChinaModernizationwillbringanumberofbenefitstothepeopleofChina.Advancementsinscienceandtechnologywillresultinbetterindustrialandconsumerproducts.Newroads,trucksandtrainswillimprovetransportationforbothpeopleandgoods.Withnewhealthcaremethodspeoplewilllivehappierandlonger.
However,modernizationalsogivesrisetoanumberofnewproblems.Pollutionoftheair,ground,andwaterhasbecomeaseriousprobleminmanypartsofChina.Anincreaseinvehiclesontheroadshasalsoresultedinmoretrafficaccidents,injuriesanddeaths.
Wecan,however,dealwiththeseproblemsifwearecareful.Wecantrainmanyenvironmentalscientistswhocanhelpfactoriesoperatecleanly.Wecanpassnewlawstoregulateourtrafficmoresafely.Finally,wemustexpandoureducationsystemtopreparebettereducatedpeoplefortomorrow.
<评析>本文是段与段之间使用过渡句较好的例子。文章第一段说现代化给中国人民带来许多益处,第二段一开始就由however引出过渡句,指出现代化也同样带来新的问题。第三段段首的过渡句则用一个however巧妙地过渡到如何解决这些问题。过渡句的使用既表达了各段之间语义上的转折,又使文章各段衔接自然。范文4PopulationControlProgressinscienceandtheimprovementoflivingconditionshaveledtotherapidgrowthoftheworldpopulation.Modernmedicine,forexample,hasmadeitpossibleforbabiestogrowuphealthilyandforpeopletolivelonger.Withimprovedlivingconditions,particularlyinthecountryside,peopletendtohavelargerfamilies.Asaresult,theworldpopulationhasincreasedsorapidlythatithasnowexceeded6billion.
Buttheovergrowthofpopulationpresentsathreattotheexistenceofhumansociety.Alargepopulationdemandsagreatdealoffoodsupplyandshelterspace.However,limitedproductivityandscarceworldresourcescanhardlymeettheneedsoftheever-increasingpopulation.Thus,inthelongrun,theovergrowthoftheworldpopulationwillonlyharmmankind.
Toguaranteethesteadydevelopmentofhumansociety,mankindmustrealizetheconsequencesresultingfromfastpopulationgrowthandcarryoutafamilyplanningprogramme.Onlybyadoptingeffectivemeasures,canhumansocietydevelopsteadilyandhaveabrightfuture.
<评析>本文把各个段落巧妙连接的方法是利用转折关系:文章第一段说:科学的发展和生活条件的改善使世界人口出现了迅速增长。第二段却一转,说道:人口的过分增长威胁了人类社会生存,第二段段首句引出的问题,是第一段讨论内容的又一方面。最后一段提出解决办法,即人们必须采取行之有效的人口政策限制人口的增长。
转折过渡句往往用在这样类型的文章,即所有事物都有正有负,正、反两方面均提出后,再寻找解决办法。
范文5ControllingCancerTherearetwomaincausesofcancer:heredityandenvironment.Wecandonothingtochangeourheredity,thatis,thebasicphysicalcharacteristicsthatwerepassedontousbyourparents.However,wecandoagreatdealtocontrolourenvironment,whichmayaccountfor80-90%ofallcancers.
Environmentalpollutioncanbedividedintotwokinds:personalandimpersonal.Personalpollutionmaybedefinedroughlyasunhealthyhabitssuchassmoking,drinking,andeatingthewrongfoods.Clearly,withenoughwillpowerwecancontrolthispersonalenvironment.
Impersonalpollution,ontheotherhand,referstothosethingswhicharebeyondourindividualcontrol.Oneexamplewouldbeindustrialpollution,whichisveryhardtocontrolbecauseoftheexpenseinvolved.Itwouldbeexpensiveintermsofprofitsandperhapsjobs.TheAmericanautomobileindustry,forexample,resistedthelawrequiringsmog-controldevicesbecauseitfearedtheaddedexpensewouldreduceprofits.Nevertheless,somelawsprotectingtheenvironmenthavebeenquitesuccessfulinreducingpollution.<评析>文章第一段说:癌症的起因有二,遗传和环境。第二段说环境原因又有两种,人为的和非人为的。第三段讨论非人为原因造成的环境污染,这是全篇的重点,所以笔墨最多。文章的讨论由粗到细,由大到小,最后归结到了问题最严重,也最为关键的那一点。范文6EqualityBetweenMenandWomenAtpresent,moreandmorepeoplethinkthatmenandwomenshouldenjoyequalrights.Manycountriesevenhavepassedlawstoguaranteesuchanequalitybetweendifferentsexes.Accordingly,therearenownolongercertainjobsorcertainplacesthatareclosedtowomen.Thenumberofbusinesswomen,femaledoctors,scientistsandleadersisconsiderablyincreasing.
Therearethreemainreasonsfortheimprovementofwomen'ssocialposition.First,womenthemselveshavebeenpersistentlystrugglingforequality.Second,menalsorealizethatwomenarenotborninferiortothem.Womencandoagreatmanythingsaswellasorevenbetterthanmen.Third,socialdevelopmenthasproducedagreatdemandforwomen'sparticipationineveryfield.
Inspiteofthesechangestheliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealized.Prejudiceagainstwomenisdeeplyrootedstillinsomepeople'smind,especiallyindistantruralareas.So,mankindshouldtakefurtherpainstakingeffortstoreallyrealizeequality.<评析>本文过渡词使用较好。文章的第二段,就是非常典型的用first,second,third为次序词从三方面进行论证的例子。范文7GettingtoKnowtheWorldoutsidetheCampus
1.大学生了解社会的必要性
2.了解社会的途径(大众媒介,社会服务等)。
3.我打算怎么做。GettingtoKnowtheWorldoutsidetheCampus
Withtherapiddevelopmentofoursociety,thecampusisnolongeran"IvoryTower".Studentsmustgetintouchwiththeworldoutsidethecampussothattheycanadaptthemselvestosocietymorequicklywhentheygraduate.
AlmostallstudentskeepthemselvesinformedbyTV,radiobroadcastsandnewspapers.Someofthemeventakeupapart-timejobintheirsparetime.Workingastutors,servinginsomefast-foodrestaurants…Allthesehavekeptstudentsintouchwithsociety.
NowthesummervacationwillcomeandI'vealreadyfoundmyselfajob-workingasatypistinanoffice.I'velearnedtypingformanyyearsandIthinkIcandoitwell.It'sagoodchanceformetogettoknowsociety,tolearnhowtogetalongwithmycolleaguesandtoseehowmyknowledgeisputintopractise.Whenthenextsemesterbegins,I'llstilltrytogetthiskindoflittlejob.Regardlessofthepay,IthinkthemostimportantthingisthatIcanreallyknowalotaboutsociety.<评析>本文采用重复使用中心词(组)的方法来达到过渡。文章虽没有使用任何过渡词,但通篇文章读起来通顺流畅,并无逻辑问题,原因在于文章运用关键词重复的手法。文章标题为“了解校园以外的社会”,所以文章的中心词定位于“了解社会”。第一段中有"getintouchwiththeworldoutsidethecampus",第二段末尾有"getintouchwiththesociety",第三段中有"gettoknowthesociety",段尾又有"knowalotaboutthesociety",四次重复出现关键词点出文章的主旨所在。范文8HumanBeingsandAnimalsHumanbeingsaredifferentfromanimalsinmanyways.Oneofthedifferencesistheabilityofhumanbeingstobuild.Itistruethatmanyanimalsarebuilders.Birdsmakenests,andbeesmakehives.ButnoanimalcouldbuildthepyramidsortheGreatWallortheEiffel范文9
Title:DifferentSocialCustomsBetweenAmericansandChinese
Keywordsandexpressions:
1)differ,if…not,misunderstanding,informal,social,impolite
2)difference,inaconversation,coat,cost,impolite,age,politics,religion,avoid
3)manyother,keep…inmind,better,understand
DifferentSocialCustomsBetweenAmericansandChineseSocialcustomsdifferindifferentpartsoftheworld.Ifwedon'trealizethis,misunderstandingmayarisebetweenpeoplethatbehavedifferently.IntheUnitedStates,peopleareveryinformalinsocialsituations.Forexample,theycalleachotherbytheirgivennameswhentwopeoplefirstmeet.Sodotheyoungtotheold.InChina,itwouldberegardedquiteimpolitetodoso.
Anotherdifferenceisaboutwhatcanbetalkedaboutinaconversation.AChinesethinksnothingofbeingaskedhowmuchhiscoatcostwhileAmericansthinkitimpolitetoasksuchaquestion.AChinesewomandoesn'tcareifsheisaskedaboutherage.Politics,religions,aswellasincomesareoftentalkedaboutamongChinese.ButintheUnitedStatesthesekindsofsubjectsareusuallyavoidedinconversation.
SincetherearemanyotherdifferentsocialcustomsbetweenAmericansandChinese,thewaythatwebehaveandwhatwetalkaboutrequiresourattention.Ifwekeeptheseinmind,wewilldoitbetterandunderstandeachotherbetter.<评析>:本文以所给关键词为主线,合理填充内容。第一段从世界范围阐述社会习惯的存在,以美国作为例子,紧扣标题。第二段
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