读后续写浙江省历年高考教案学习试题及欣赏

浙江高考：

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocamp

overnightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubject

cameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,Janewas

soangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"

andwalkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehad

climbedtoahighplace.sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,

shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenly

realizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!"shecried."Help!"

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落）somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的重点词语：

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

续写达成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的重点词语。

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Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

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ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.

Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that'sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofhearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追赶）。Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoshowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeekyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的重点词语：

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

续写达成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的重点词语。

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Thecarabrubtlystoppedinfrontofhim.

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Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.

201711.浙江高考Avacationwithmymother

Ihadaninterestingchildhood:Itwasfilledwithsurpriseandamusements,

allbecauseofmymother-loving,sweet,andyetabsent-mindedandforgetful.One

strangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.

MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparents

decidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalong

theway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:”YoustandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh⋯Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdrivinginvainforsometime,Momsuddenlygotagreatidea:Whydidn’twefindahousewithalikely-lookingbackyardandaskifwecouldsetuptentthere?DavidandIbecamenervous.Toourgreatrelief,Dadturneddowntheidea.Momnevercouldunderstandourastrangefamilyshoweduponherfrontdoorsteps,Momwouldhavebeendelighted.Shethinkseveryoneintheworldasasniceassheis.Wefinallyfoundavacancyinthenexttown.

注意：

所续写短文的词数应为150左右；

应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的重点词语；

续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；

续写达成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的重点词语。Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtent

wehadbrought

with

us.

Para2:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.

20186Itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.HedecidedtotakemeonatriptotheWildWest.WetookaplanetoAlbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofNewMexico.WereachedAlbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.UnclePaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminPecos.HiswifeTinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.MydadandIspentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning,UnclePaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast."Thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,"hesaid.Afterbreakfast,IwenttohelpAuntTinafeedthechickens.whilemydadwentwithUnclePaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).IwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclePaulridinghorses.Theylookedreallycool.Intheafternoon,IaskedUnclePaulifIcouldtakeahoseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.Iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandIputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains."Don’tbelateforsupper,"UnclePaulcried,"andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!""OK!"mydadcriedback.AfterawhileUnclePaulandhisfamhousewereoutofsight.Itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoon

sunmixedtocreateamagicscene.Itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的）blanket

spreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.

注意：

所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；

起码使用5个短文中标有下划线的重点词语：

续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；

续写达成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的重点词语。

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.

Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.

参照范文一：Paragraph1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Janehadtostayaloneintheforestforanothercoldnight.Atthatmoment(时间),shefeltalittlesad,butshewasn’tsofrightened(感情).Sheremindedherselfconstantly,(心理)“Tommusthavecalledforthosehelicopters.Maybe(感情)hewasinoneofthemandwillreturnsoon(动作)!Ihavetoguidehimtomorrow.”Shefeltasleep(动作)anddreamedofseeingTom(动作).Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Sheatesomeberriesandthen(时间)walkedalongthestream,hoping(心理)tofindasuitableplacetoguidethehelicopter.Shewalkedandwalked,exhaustedbutfullofhope.Suddenly(时间),shespotted(动作)ahugeflatrock.Shemanaged(动作)toclimbontoitandwaitedwithpatience.Themoment(时间)thehelicopterappeared(动作)again.Theneareritgot(动作),themoreshewaved(动作)theyellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,(感情)thehelicopterdidn’tmissJanethistimeanditlandednearthebigrockslowly.Tomjumpedoffthehelicopterandrushed(动作)towardsJane.Theyhuggedeachothertightly(情感)andburstintotears(感情).参照范文二：Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycleanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Hethenranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,aswell,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Whenspottingthis,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.Paullookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolf

standingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Maccriedtothem.Macretrieved（取回）hisbicycle,andthethreemenresumed(持续）theirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmilesdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandburstintotears.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtolettheformeremotionout.”参照范文三：Para1:Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Mominsistedthatwemustmakefulluseofitsincewehadbroughtit.DavidandIlookedatDad,hopinghecouldstophercrazyidea.Toourgreatdisappointment,heagreed.Wespentawholeafternoonseekinganicecampingplaceandsetupourtentbeforethenightfell.ItwasthefirsttimethatIhadthoughtmomcouldbewiseasIadmiringourstunningtent.“Oh,Iforgotthepillows!”whatamisconception.Despitetheacheofmyneck,wehadsomegreatnights.

Para1:Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Thebrightbluesky,thelimitlessgreengrass,thegroupofsheep,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsinthecurtainofnightskeptmespellbound.Notonlydidweseethepicturesquescenery,wealsomanagedtoconsidermom’sscandalsasakindoffun.IreallylovemyMum.Toourrelief,wearrivedatgrandparents’placeandwentbacktoourhomewithalloffourpeople.Itwassofortunatetoseemyfriendsagain.范文四：Paragraph1Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Instinctively,Iyelledoutloud,pullingbackthereinshardinordertostopthehorsefromhurtingthelittlecreature.Badlystartledbythesuddenincident,thehorsespedoffthetrackintoanotherdirection.Dadfollowedcloselybehind,callingouttotellmehowtosoothetheterrifiedhorseandIdidastold.Finally,thehorsecalmeddown,butweseemedtogetlost,unabletogobacktothemountainroad.Paragraph2Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wanderingaround,wewerestillstuckinthedilemma.Muchtoourdelight,thesoundofwaterinthedistancecaughtourattentionanddroveustotheriverbank.Dadproposedthatweshouldwalkalongtheriverwhichmayleadustothefarmhouseandnothingseemedbetterthanthat.Timeappearedto

bemerrierandshorterwhenIstay