Unit 5 单元写作【知识精讲+拓展延伸】 九年级 英语教材精讲课件（人教版）

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九年级上册单元话题写作Unit5Whataretheshirtsmadeof?话题分析一、话题分析本单元以“中国制造的东西”为话题，围绕某种产品的材质、产地、用途及特殊性等信息而展开。与之相关的话题作文通常会涉及民间艺术以及文化传承。介绍特色产品。本话题适合记叙说明两种题材相结合。写作此类话题作文时，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时，行文中注意准确捕捉写作的“精髓”，表达被描述的事物时，有可能要用到被动语态结构，写作时要立足事实，表达真情实感。写作步骤“总分总法”写产品介绍类的作文1.总起点明产品的名称；2.详细地描写产品的特征样式、质量、性能；3.总结评价。Ihaveahandbag.Itisbeautiful.It’smadeinSuzhou,JiangsuProvince.It’smadeofleather（皮革）.Also,it’scompletelymadebyhand.It’sred.It’ssospecialbecauseithasapieceofembroidery.Theflowersandbirdsonitaresolivelythatyoumaythinkthepictureonthehandbagisreal.Ilikeitverymuch.Readthepassage,whatcanyoulearn?Whatitlookslike物品样子Whatitsmaterialis他的材质Whereitismade在哪里制作Whyitisspecial为什么是特殊的Whattheproductis产品是什么Whoitismadeby被谁制作Whatitcando它的功能Moreinformation(symbol,howtomake...)howtodiscribeobjects如何描述物品VocabularyCollections词汇收集素材积累产品介绍类常用词汇：chopstick,fork,blouse,gloves,glass,cotton,steel,handbag,material;produce,process,product,local,heat,bemadeof,byhand,tuninto,cover...with,everyday,lively,beknownfor,soft,strong,interesting,smooth,real,small,cute,useful,helpful回顾单元写作素材产品介绍类常用句型：1.Mytown/city/countryisfamousfor...2....isbecomingmoreandmorepopular.3.It'smoreconvenientfor...4....ismadeof/from/by/in...5....is/areknownfor...6....is/areusedfor...7....is/arespecialbecause..8.Chinaisfamousfor…9.It’sgreatthatChinaissogoodat...·10.…wishthatinthefuture·will…11.Theseusuallytrytoshow....12.Theyareseenassymbolsof...·万能模板开门见山，直接表述你要介绍的对象讲物品的产地，原料，外观，制作方式用途等讲感受物品名称产地Itismadein地点原料Itismadeof/from材料外观制作方式Therearedifferentkindsofpicturesonit，suchas举例Itismadeby方式用途Itisusedfor用途Itisgoodfor，weshould优点美好祝愿1.Ihavea/an+物品2.物品+isfamousinmycity/town.3.Oneoffamousproductsinmycountryis+物品3aWhataresomespecialthingsthatyourhometownorcityisfamousfor?WhattheproductisWhatitismadeof/fromWhoitismadebyWhereitismadeWhatitcandoWhyitisspecialDuilian要点提示：1.风筝的象征意义；2.原材料：竹子、纸或布或塑料(plastic)、细绳(string)；3.用途：过去用于送信，现在用来娱乐和锻炼。【思路点拨】1.

定基调体裁：应用文(邮件)；邮件的主体部分为说明文时态：介绍事物时用一般现在时人称：第三人称2.

谋布局、写句子

isfamous/known/well-knownforitskitesAninternationalkitefestivalisheldinmycityinAprileveryyearKitesareloved/liked/enjoyedbylotsof/many/

alotofpeopletheyareoftenpaintedwithcolorfuldrawingskitesareusedforfunandexercise3.巧衔接

第一次提到“风筝”时用kites，再次提到时可以用they代替；为了避免重复，inmycity在成篇章时可以用here来代替，这都是使用照应手段来使文章衔接的方法。在陈述风筝的意义时可以使用表示原因的连词because，这是使用逻辑纽带的方式使文章衔接的方法。4.

成篇章DearMarcus,Howareyoudoingthesedays?I’mexcitedtohearfromyou.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutkitesinmycity.________________________________________________________________________________________________________Welcometomycity!Ihopeyouwillflyakitehere!Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua5.

化“平凡”为“非凡”Peopleusedkitestosendamessageintheolddays.→Kiteswereusedforsendingamessageintheolddays.DearMarcus,

Howareyoudoingthesedays?I’mexcitedtohearfromyou.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutkitesinmycity.Mycity,WeifanginShandongProvince,isfamousforitskites.AninternationalkitefestivalisheldhereinAprileveryyear.Kitesarelovedbylotsofpeoplebecause

theyriseintotheairwithpeople’swishesforabetterlife.Theyareusuallymadeofbamboo,paperorclothorplasticandstring.Thereareallkindsofkitesandtheyareoftenpaintedwithcolorfuldrawings.Andkiteshereoftenhavespecialdesigns.Peopleusedkitestosendamessageintheolddays.Today,theyareusedforfunandexercise.

Welcometomycity!Ihopeyouwillflyakitehere!

Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHua写作训练二假如你叫李华,来自江西省景德镇市。近日，你的加拿大笔友Marcus发来一封电子邮件，他说要来你市旅游，询问你市以什么而闻名，并让你推荐有什么值得赠送朋友的纪念品。请你根据下面的要点提示给他回复邮件。要点提示：1.

以瓷器(china)闻名及其意义；2.

原材料：陶土；3.

用途：可供人们欣赏、也可用来装(contain)东西；4.

最佳推荐：青花瓷(blueandwhiteporcelain)。【思路点拨】1.

定基调体裁：应用文(邮件)；邮件的主体部分为说明文时态：介绍事物时用一般现在时人称：第三人称列提纲写句子引出介绍的产品(1)Mycity,JingdezheninJiangxiProvince,___________________.介绍产品意义(2)Chinaisspecial.ChinaisanexampleofexquisiteChinesecraftsmanship(精美的中国工艺)._____________________________________________(瓷器是中国传统文化的一个象征).原材料(3)______________________.介绍产品用途(4)_______________________________.(5)_______________________________.Manythingsaremadeofchinainoureverydaylife,suchascups,bowlsandplates.最佳推荐(6)_________________________________________________(每天有许多不同种类的瓷器被生产)inmycity.Blueandwhiteporcelainisthemostfamousone.Youcanbuysomeforyourfriendsandrelatives.邀请及祝愿Welcometomycity!Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtimehere!【参考范文】DearMarcus,Howareyoudoingthesedays?I’mexcitedtohearfromyou.I’dliketointroducesomethingspecialinmycitytoyou.Mycity,

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here.Blueandwhiteporcelainisthemostfamousone.Itisknowntopeoplearoundtheworld.Youcanbuysomeforyourfriendsandrelatives.Welcometomycity!Ihopeyouwillhaveagoodtimehere!Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua写作训练三HaimenPastriesHaimenPastriesmaterialswaytomaketimetofinishtastetimetokeepmeaninghistoryHomeworkHaimenPastriesmaterialswaytomaketimetofinishtasteusemeaninghistoryleeks(葱)fat(肥肉)sauce(酱)sesame(芝麻)byhand8hourssweetandsoftsnacksandtributes(贡品)

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随着中国经济的腾飞，越来越多的中国人意识到保护非物质文化遗产的重要性。请你以“HaimenPastries”为题，写一篇110词左右的英语文章，介绍海门糕仔。要点包括参考词汇：leeks（葱）；fat（肥肉）；sauce（酱料）sesame(芝麻);stream(蒸）;intheshapeof(用…的形状）place海门镇History数千年Materialsused葱；肥肉；酱料；芝麻等Howtomake手工制作，约8个小时Features圆形；味道清甜软糯Beusedfor零食和贡品meaning传承传统技艺审题1.文体：_________;时态：____________________