【公开课课件】短文改错之突破母语负迁移的影响

短文改错之突破母语负迁移的影响当我还是个孩子的时候，我希望住在城市里，我以为在那将会很快乐。现在我就居住在一座城市里，但我却非常想念我在乡下的家，那里山是绿的，空气是新鲜的。不幸的是，随着工业化的发展，环境已被污染。许多研究显示全球变暖已经成为一个非常严重的问题，我们呼吸的空气正变得越来越污浊。许多珍稀的动物正在灭亡，我们必须找到方法来保护环境。如果我们没有这样做，我们会对此后悔一辈子。翻译练习

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we‘lllivetoregretit.thought∧theandwithseriousairManyour/thefindA篇：2015年新课标IWhenIwasachild,Ihopetoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbeveryhappythere.Ilivinginacitynow.Imissmyhomeincountryside.Therehavegreenmountainsandfreshair.Themountainsaregreen,theairisfreshthere.Unfortunate,withthedevelopofindustrialization,theenvironmenthaspolluted.Manyresearchhaveshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaseriousproblem.Theairwhat

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breatheisbecomingdirtieranddirtier.Manyrareanimalareendanger.Ifwefailtodoso,we‘lllivetoregretit.B篇：学生习作1.A篇:Ithink(thought)

Iwouldbehappythere.B篇:Ihope(hoped)toliveinthecity.2.A篇:Much(Many)rareanimalsaredyingout.B篇:Manyrareanimal(animals)

aredyingout.3.A篇:Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriously(serious)problem.B篇:Unfortunate(Unfortunately),onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.4.A篇:Theretheairiscleanor(and)themountainsaregreen.B篇:Themountainsaregreen,(and)theairiscleanthere.时态误用名词单复数adj./adv.误用连词误用比较A篇与B篇高考短文改错命题特征1.选材：语言材料通常取自学生自己的作品，或类似学生的作品。2.话题：内容来自学生身边的常见话题。3.结构：难易程度符合学生的实际水平。4.语言：语言明白易懂，不涉及生僻语句结构。错误来自习作中的表达错误，受母语负迁移的影响2011-2016考点分布考点动词名词连词冠词形容词副词介词代词2011课标421101102012课标311010112013课标I&II522221312014课标I&II441203312015课标I&II632211222016课标I,II&III73423025总计2915129151210五类常考考点的考查方向考点动词名词形容词和副词连词考查方向时态(13)单复数(10)adj.和adv.混用(8)并列连词误用(6)非谓语(6)修饰语(4)副词误用(3)从句关联词误用(4)语态(4)所有格(1)比较级或最高级(2)遗漏连词(1)主谓一致(2)Verb(动词)中英时态(tense)有语态(voice)“被、让、受”非谓语(non-predicate)有考查方向：时态(13题)，非谓语(6题)，语态(4题)无be+过去分词无Verb(动词)突破：找出动词，确定谓语，判断时态语态，检查非谓。

考查方向：时态(13题)，非谓语(6题)，语态(4题)动词谓语非谓语时态/语态tododoingdone1.Iwasonlyfourwhenshepassesaway.(2013河北)2.Wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.(2014课标II)3.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesandhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.(2016新课标I)passed时态误用visited谓语/非谓语误用used被动语态误用4.IreallywantsharewithyousomeoftheproblemsIhavebeenexperiencing.(2015四川)5.IwasatShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.(2013陕西)to谓语/非谓语误用buying谓语/非谓语误用∧名词(Noun)中英单复数有可数/不可数有考查方向：单复数(10题)，修饰词(4题)/……们无无名词(Noun)突破：1.留意名词单复数；2.关注名词前修饰词考查方向：单复数(10题)，修饰词(4题)常见不可数名词：advice,furniture,equipment,air,water等常见修饰语：many,much,few,little等1.Withinthenextfewminute,mygrandfatheralsocaughtafish.(2013陕西)2.AsItoldyoulasttime,Imadethreenewfriendhere.(2015四川)3.Montaughtmesomebasicstepofbaking.(2015陕西)minutes可数名词复数friends可数名词复数steps可数名词复数4.Ifyougoontripabroad,wecanbroadenourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.(2016新课标II)5.Wedon’tneedtodosomanyhomework.(2014课标II)knowledge不可数名词much修饰语Adjective&Adverb(形容词和副词)中英形容词有副词有常省略“的”常省略“地”考查方向：形容词/副词混用(8题)，比较级(2题)Adjective&Adverb(形容词和副词)突破：1.细查处于不同位置的形容词和副词；2.留意比较级标志(如than等)考查方向：形容词/副词混用(8题)，比较级(2题)尤其注意句首，句末等1.Afterwaitingforabouthalfanhour,Iwasbeginningtogetimpatiently.(2013辽宁)2.IlearnedearlyinlifethatIhadtobemorepatientandlittleaggressive(好强的).

(2012全国)3.Interesting,ithadaconnectiontotheBritishporcelain(陶瓷)industry.(2013新课标II)4.Don’tpanicorgetoutofline,andtrytoremainquietandcalmly.(2014四川)impatient形容词/副词混用calm副词作状语Interestinglyless比较级“主系表”结构Conjunction(连词)中英并列连词有有时会省略考查方向：并列连词(6题)，从句关联词(4题)Conjunction(连词)突破：1.看逗号，检查两句之间有无连词；2.理清逻辑关系，检查连词是否误用。考查方向：并列连词(6题)，从句关联词(4题)逻辑错误，and，or，but，so1.IboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.(2011全国)and并列连词(逻辑错误)2.Wearewarnednottocheatagainsotheteacherwouldneedtoseeourparents.(2013四川)3.Hehadadeepvoice,whichsethimapartfromothers,hewasstrongandpowerful.(2013新课标II)4.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesameplaceyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.(2016新课标I)or并列连词(逻辑错误)∧and并列连词(遗漏)并列连词()ConsolidationMyfathertookmeoutcampingforthefirsttimewhenIwasseven.Hewantedteachmeaboutanimals,insectsandtrees.Myunclesallcomealongwithbowsandarrowsforhunting.Oneeveningatsunset,wesatbythefire,haveourbarbecue.Justthenabirdwasflyin