【课件】Unit1ReadingforWriting建议信课件高中英语人教版必修第一册

Unit1TeenageLifePeriod4ReadingforWritingDearSusanLuo，Ihaveaproblem.MybestfriendChenLeibecomeagameloverrecently.Heisinterestedincomputergames.Everyweekend,whenIaskhimtogoforawalkoutdoors,healwaysrejectedmeastostayathometoplaycomputergames.Sometimes,Ithinkhemayevenforgettohavemealsorsleepinordertostayonlinealldaylong.WhatshouldIdotohelphimgetoutofthesituation?I’mveryconcernedabouthim.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Thankyouinadvance.Yourssincerely,StevenWhatistheboy’sproblem?TalkingWhatistheboy’sproblem?TheboyisworriedabouthisfriendChenLeibecausehe__________computergamesandstayed________fortoomuchtime.isaddictedtoonline02STEP01STEP03STEP04STEPThinkingIfyouwereSusanLuo,whatwillyoudo?

aletterofadviceReadingWhatisMsLuo’sadvice?Talktohisfriendabouthisbehavior.Discusstheproblemtogether.Encouragehisfriendtotrynewhobbies.Besidestheproblemsandsuggestions,whatelsedoesSusanLuosayinherletter?SheunderstandsWorriedFriend’sproblemandfeeling.Shealsotalksaboutthenegativeeffectsofcomputeraddiction.02STEP01STEP03STEP04STEPThinkingWhatdoesaletterofadvicecontain?PartA:Iknowwhattheproblemis.PartB:Iunderstandhowyoufeel.PartC:Thisismyadviceandreason(s).PartD:Ithinkmyadvicewillhelp.Anadvicelettermainlycontainsthefollowingfourparts:Readtheletterandfindoutthefourparts.Reading

010203HowdidSusanLuogivesuggestions?Irecommendthat…Ithinkyoushould…Whynot…?Tomakesuggestions:Irecommendthat…Ithinkyoushould…Whynot…?Howabout…?I’dliketosuggest…Whatdoyouthink…?Itmightbeagoodideato…Toshowunderstanding:I’msorrytohear/know/learnthat…Iknowhowitfeelsto…Ithappenstoeveryone.Iknowyoudidn’tmeanto…Everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong.Paragraph1：the____________oftheletter点明写作目的：就某事/问题提建议Paragraph2：the____________thatyougive阐述具体建议，并说明理由Paragraph3：thewriter’s____________

希望建议被采纳并有所帮助。purposesuggestionshopeDear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).Hereareafewsuggestions(引出作者的建议).First/Tobeginwith,itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.（部分建议可适当扩充以说明提出建议的原因或采纳建议的益处）Ihope____________(表达愿望)。YoursSincerely,LiHua1.Itisnotunusualforteenagersofyourgenerationtobeattractedtocomputergames…attractv.吸引；激发，引起attractiveadj.

有吸引力的；吸引人的

attractionn.

吸引力；吸引【归纳】

attractsb.to

把某人吸引到……attractone’sattention

引起某人的注意力

beattractedto...

被……所吸引人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting课件(共40张PPT)人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting课件(共40张PPT)【语境应用】用attract的适当形式填空。1)Janeissuchabeautifulgirlthatsheis__________eyesallthetime.2)BruceisalwaysannoyingusandIdon’tthinkheisan____________boy.3)Thetelevisionhaslittle__________forme.4）Babies_______________brightcolours.

婴儿喜欢鲜艳的颜色。attracting

attractive

attraction人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting课件(共40张PPT)人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting课件(共40张PPT)areattractedto2.SomestudentsevenbecomeaddictedtotheInternet…有些学生甚至上网成瘾…be/becomeaddictedto沉溺于,醉心于人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting课件(共40张PPT)人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting课件(共40张PPT)【拓展】addictn.吸毒成瘾的人；对……入迷的人addictiveadj.使人上瘾的，使人入迷的addictionn.瘾，入迷，嗜好，与介词to搭配【语境应用】根据提示补全句子1)Johnisonly9yearsoldbutalreadyaheavycomputergame______(addictive).2)Barbara______________________(addict)TVsoapoperasandneverwantedtowork.3)Morrisaddictedhimself_______rockmusic.4)Cigarettesarehighly

________(addict).5)Somestudentsareaddictedto________(play)computergamesandsomeoftencheatintheexams.addictbecameaddictedtotoaddictiveplaying人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting课件(共40张PPT)人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting课件(共40张PPT)Usefulwordsandexpressionsintheletter:beworriedabout为……而担心，忧虑beattractedto喜爱focuson集中；特别关注beaddictedto(doing)sth.对(做)某事很入迷concentrateon集中精力于；全神贯注于encouragesb.todosth.鼓励某人做某事allthebest一切顺利，万事如意人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting课件(共40张PPT)人教版（2019）高一英语必修第一册Unit1TeenageLifeReadingforWriting课件(共40张PPT)Myparentswon’tlistenwhenItellthemthings.Iguessit’sbecausethey’readultsandcan’tunderstandme.Doyouhaveanysuggestions?suggestionreasonTobeginwith,youaresupposedtohaveatimelycommunicationwith…Inordernottomakethingsworse,you’dbetter…andIthinkinthiswayyou’llsurely…Inthatcase,youcantryto…andIbelievethat…Theyneedyourhelp!Ialwaysfeellonelyafterschoolbecausemyparentsworkinanothercity.WhatcanIdo?suggestionreasonItwillcertainlyhelpalotifyou...Itisadvisabletodo...Isuggestthatyoutrytodo...ThereisagirtIlikeinmyclass,butI’mtooskytotalktoher.Pleasehelpme!suggestionreasonI(don’t)thinkitwiseofyouto…because…Itwouldbemuchbetterifyou...Inadditiontothat,wouldn'titbeagoodideato…?Supposeoneofyourfriendsalsohassomeproblemsinthenewterm,pleasewritehim/heraletterofadvicetohelphim/herout.writing假如你是李华，你的好朋友苏茹在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。1.要交朋友首先要做一个朋友；2.要和朋友同甘共苦；患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友；3.友谊需要时间和投入(effort)。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；Howtowritealetterofadvice?建议信是书信的一种形式，属于应用文。建议信是写信人向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告，有可能是写给个人，就收信人遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务等方面提出建议或忠告。1.定义Paragraph1：the____________oftheletter点明写作目的：就某事/问题提建议Paragraph2：the____________thatyougive阐述具体建议，并说明理由Paragraph3：thewriter’s____________

希望建议被采纳并有所帮助。purposesuggestionshope2.结构建议信注意事项第三段：避免笼统的期待和祝愿第二段：建议的内容要详尽具体，同时要注意内在的逻辑。（1）说明建议的内容（是什么）；提出具体建议的原因

（为什么）/指出采纳建议的益处（怎么样）；（2）建议一般为多个，要注意不同建议之间的衔接。第一段：弄清对方问题，顾及对方感受(语气诚恳有礼貌）建议信一般以________人称为主，时态主要为_________________第一、二一般现在时（+将来时）Dear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出对方需要建议的主题).Hereareafewsuggestions(引出作者的建议).First/Tobeginwith,itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.（部分建议可适当扩充以说明提出建议的原因或采纳建议的益处）Ihope____________(表达愿望)。YoursSincerely,LiHua3.写作模板1.Wordsandphrases①_____________________________n.建议②_____________________________n.情况③_____________________________交朋友④_____________________________做……有困难⑤_____________________________接受某人的建议⑥_____________________________和……同甘共苦⑦_______/need______________________需要⑧_____________________________全心全意

tip(s)/advice/suggestion(s)situationmakefriendshavetrouble/difficultyindoing...takeone’sadvicesharehappinessandsorrowwith...callforputone’sheartinto4.本篇习作相关表述2.Sentences①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很抱歉。(havetroublein...)________________________________________________________________________②如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋todo)________________________________________________________________________③要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(whynot)________________________________________________________________________④你和朋友同甘共苦难道不是一个好主意吗？(Wouldn’titbeagoodidea...？)________________________________________________________________________⑤正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(asasayinggoes)________________________________________________________________________Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.Thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Whynotbeafriendfirst，ifyouwanttomakefriends?Wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes,afriendinneedisafriendindeed.

Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwordsandphrases.however，tobeginwith，inaddition(另外），lastbutnotleast(最后但同样重要的是)Let‘sdoit!作文写后讲评15Sept，2019DearSuRu，Iamsorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Herearesometipstohelpyou.（para1)1.范文Tobeginwith，whynotbeafriendifyouwanttomakefriends？Inaddition，wouldn’titbeagoodideaifyousharehappinessandsorrowwithyourfriend?Justasasayinggoes，afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Lastbutnotleast，Irecommendyoushouldputyourheartintomakingfriends.Itiswellknowntousallthatfriendshipcallsfortimeandeffort.（para2)Ihopeyouwillfindtheseideasuseful.（para3)Allthebest.Yours，LiHua1.建议信首段常用句式（表明写作目的）1.I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...很高兴收到你就……征求建议的来信。2.Learning/Knowingthat…,I’dliketogivesomesuggestionswhichIthinkshoudbehelpful.得知...因此我写信来提供一些有帮助的建议，2.建议信常用表述概括表述1.建议信首段常用句式（表明写作目的）3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...你向我征求关于……的意见。4.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…我正在写信是想表达我对……的看法。5.Herearesometips/afewsuggestionstohelpyou.这里有帮助你的一些建议。

6.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.我的建议如下2.建议信常用表述1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。2.IhavereceivedyourlettersayingyouplantoplayavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。3.YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。4.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。具体表述2.表达建议常用句式Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthatyou…当涉及到这样的情况的时候，我建议你...2.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…

我认为（怎么做）....是有好处的3.IfIwereyou,Iwould…如果我是你，我将会...4.First(ly)，whynot加动词原形?5.Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyou….Bydoingthis，youwill….6.AsfarasIamconcerned/Inmyopinion，youshould…7.Lastbutnotleast，youshould概括表述2.表达建议常用句式1.First(ly)，whynotjoinaclub?Ifyoudothis，youcanmakefriends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。2.Second(ly)，youshould/cantrytotalkwithothers.Then/Thatway，youwillfeelbetter.其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。3.Third(ly)，itwouldbeagoodideaifyoureadabookorlistentomusic.Bydoingthis，youwillcalmyourselfdown.第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。4.Lastbutnotleast，youshouldtalkwi