【省级公开课】高中英语读后续写训练课件38

读后续写Doyouliketravellinginthewild?Whatifyougetlostinthewild?Howtosaveyourself?WhatdidtheyseeintheUnclePaul'sfarm?

UnclePaul'sfarm?

SomestepstoanalyzebeforeContinuation:

2.Readforplot1.Readforinformation

3.Interpretationofgiveninformationandpredictthedevelopment4.Arrangetheplotsindetail.1.Readforinformation

WhoWhatWhenWhereWhyWhowasabout?Whathappened?Whydidithappen?Whendidithappen?Wheredidithappen?HowHowdidithappen?I,dadandUnclePaultookahorseinthewildandthengotlostOnesummerbecauseIwantedtotakeahorsebymyself,butwegotlostbychance.?InUnclePaul'sfarmhouse

mainideaGivethemainideainastatingway:Sbdosth.forsomepurposeinsomewayinsomesituationatsometimeinsp.withsomefeeling.

Onesummer,thewritertookahorserideinthewildwithhisfatheratUnclePaul'sfarm.Bychance,hecameacrosslittlerabbitandgotlost.2.Readforplot(Background)onesummerdayspentthenight(thefirstday)inthelateafternoon(thesecondday)veryearlyinthemorningafterthebreakfastintheafternoonafterawhile?Inwhatorderisthematerialdeveloped?timesequencebehaviorsfeelingspara.1para.2

para.3

para.4Para.5-6takemeonatripreached,pickedusupanddroveus

delighted1）tookahorseride,putonhats,gotonandheadedslowlytowardsthemountain.2)criedbackimpressedcoolcookedus,listeningtothefrogs,havebreakfast,helpAnutTina,peacefulandquietmagicdreamlikejoyful？3)jumpedout4)gotlostDrawthestructureoftheplotdevelopments.BeginningClimaxEndingimpressedjoyfulreturned?feelings?takemeonatripreachdelightedlisteningtothefrogshelpAnutTinatookahorserideheadedslowlytowardsthemoutainArabbitjumpedoutgotlostcoolpeacefulhadnoideawherewegofeelings?3.Interpretationofgiveninformationandpredictthedevelopment情节拓展四原则2.Conflict-SolutionPrinciple3.Actions-ReactionsPrinciple4.Negative-PositivePrinciple1.Up-down-upArabbitjumpedoutWegotlostanditwasgettingdark.Conflict1

solution1Conflict2

solution2Ending续写情节拓展图Clues:rabbit,horse,me,MydadClues:Mydad，meriver,UnclePaulClues?Clues?

Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Paragraph2:

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.__________________________________________________________________________________________

分析两个段首句之间的逻辑关系,预测续写方向及故事结局---Prediction

Werodeourhorsesalongtheriver.Shortlyafterwards,theUnclePaul'sfarmcameintooursight.Wegotothefarmsafely.Whatathrillingbutunforgettableexperienceitwas!Paragraph2？Paragraph1？Myhorsewassacred.…Wehadlosttherighttrack.Agoodending!1.Itturnsoutthere'salwaysawayoutofanyplightaslongaswestaycalm.2.OurbeinglostaddedaspecialtastetomyadventurousvacationwhichIwouldrememberallmylife.3.Reflectingonthismemory,Iregardedthisexperienceasmyspecialadventurewithmydad.4.Arrangetheplotsindetail.1tips22.次要人物的出现及反应，(动作+情感/心理活动)1.回答开头提示语内容。衔接提示语，可以描写主要人物（情感+动作)33.出现问题与矛盾冲突44.为了解决问题，说/做了什么+心理活动55.问题解决，（做了什么）6.衔接Para2开头提示语，作为第一段最后一句6

Paragraph1:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.Wehadlosttherighttrack.1.Seeingtherunningrabbit,whatwasthehorse's/writer'sreaction?5.Whatdidthewriter'sfatherandwriterdotosolvetheproblem?2.Whatwasthewriter's/horse'srabbit'sreactionatthattime?3.Whathappenedsurprisingly?4.Asforthehorse'sreaction,Whatwasthewriter'sreaction?6.Whatathrillingbutunforgettableexperienceitwas!Wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark1tips2

次要人物的反应，可以是动作+情感/心理活动3456Paragraph22主要（次要）人物说了什么，做了什么)1回答para.2开头提示语内容，可以是动作描写以推动情节3主要（次要）人物的反应，心理、情感或动作描写4主要人物在什么情况下做了什么,推动情节5问题解决，（做了什么）6呼应原文开头，或是主要人物的感悟，或是点题的语句5.Werodeourhorsesalongtheriver.Shortlyafterwards,theUnclePaul'sfarmcameintooursight.Wegotothefarmsafely.2.Whatdidtheyhearandseeandwhatdifficultiesdidtheymeet?1.Whengotlost,whatwastheirfeelings?4.Howdidtheyplantodealwiththedifficulty?3.Howdidtheyfeel?小试牛刀—句式翻译与句型转换1.受到惊吓，马突然跑了起来，跑得如此快，以至于我什么也看不见只能听见风在耳边呼啸。__________________________,thehorsesbegantorace.Itranso______thatIcouldhardlyseeanythingbutthewind__________________.Frightenedbytherabbitfastwhistlinginmyears2.突然，我们听见远处有潺潺的水声。爸爸说或许我们可以沿着河流找到回农场的路。Allofasudden,weheardthefaintsoundofwater_______________.It____________tomyfatherthatmaybewecouldfindourwaytothefarmby___________________________.trumblinginthedistanceoccuredwalkingalongtheriver小试牛刀—句式翻译与句型转换3.我尽力的拉回缰绳，转移马儿的注意力并尽力阻止马儿但是一切都是徒劳的。I_____________thereins,distractedthehorseand__________________tostopthehorsebut_____________.pulledbacktriedeverymeansinvain4.想到河水可能能够引导我们回去，我们瞬间情绪高涨开始沿着河边快步小跑。___________________________________________,(运用独立主格结构）ourspiritssoaredandwebegantotrotbrisklyalongtheriver.Realizingtherivermaybeaguideback小试牛刀—句式翻译与句型转换5.最后，我们安然无恙地到达了叔叔的农场。Finallywearrivedthefarmhouse,safeandsound.6.然后我们沿着岸边走最后农场的房子出现在我们眼前，我们脸上露出了甜美的微笑。Thenwefollowedtheriverbankandfinallythefarmhousecameintooursight.Atthatmoment,allofusburstintoasweetsmile.7.无论发生什么事情，你都要保持冷静，然后你就可以战胜一切困难。

Nomatterwhathappened,youshouldkeepcalmandthenyoucanovercomeeveryth