【学案与测评】高中英语 写作篇 图画类议论文课件 人教

专题三议论文

对于图画类议论文首先要把握其寓意，透过图画的表面内容去把握本质:一是理解画面意义;二是联系现实生活进行思考,透视图画隐含的意义;再次就是要正确选点,即抓住一“点”,深入钻研,讲深讲透;最后进行合理的联想和引申,表达自己的观点和看法,这一点是和说明类作文的不同之处。文章通常采用三段式:第一段:提出论点;第二段：根据图画内容提出论据,展开论证（也可以用两段）;第三段:总结全文,得出结论（或提出相应的建议）。

（南京市2011届高三英语学情调研）上海至南京的城际高铁（theintercityhigh-speedtrain）于2010年7月1日正式开通。请您简要描述以下两张图片的内容,列举人们对高铁开通的不同看法（至少两点），并谈一谈您的个人观点。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;2.词数：150词左右；文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。OnJuly1st,Chinaopenedtheintercityhigh-speedtrainbetweenShanghaiandNanjing.

________________________________________________________1.文体信息：①文体：议论文;②语体：正式语体;③人称：第一人称;④中心大意：人们对城际高铁开通的不同看法。2.主导时态：一般现在时。3.内容要点：①简要描述两张图片的内容;②列举人们对高铁开通的不同看法;③谈一谈您的个人观点。4.温馨提示：审题时要把握好文章主线，适当发挥，用简洁的语言描述图片。重点在于论述人们对高铁的不同看法，行文尽量使用较高级的词汇和句式，恰当地运用连接词。OnJuly1st,Chinaopenedtheintercityhigh-speedtrainbetweenShanghaiandNanjing.Ittakesaboutseventy-fiveminutesfromNanjingtoShanghaionthehigh-speedtrain.Passengersenjoysafeandcomfortableserviceduringthewholejourney.

Comparedwithotherformsoftransportation,thehigh-speedtrainhasmanyadvantages.Itprovideshigherspeedoftravelforitsusers.Inaddition,ithelpssharetheburdenofothertransportsystems.Lastbutnotleast,thehigh-speedtrainservicecontributestohelpingboosteconomy,tourismandtheexchangebetweentheprosperouscitiesalongtheline.

However,noteveryonethinkshighlyofthehigh-speedtrain.Firstly,theticketpricewillbeabout50percenthigherthanthefareforthe“D”trainsalongthesameroute,whichistooexpensiveforordinarywage-earners.Secondly,mostofthemaredesignedtomakestopsateverystation,socoveringthewholedistancewilltakenearlytwohours.

Inmyopinion,thehigh-speedtraincanbedescribedasafast,safe,comfortableandenvironmentally-friendlymeansoftransportation.Itwillbemorebeneficialtothedevelopmentofourcountry.

这是一篇典型的图画类议论文，文章中长短句错落有致，使文章跌宕生姿，富于变化;整体层次清楚，时态，人称正确，内容表达流畅，语言地道，行文连贯。文章中使用了一些较复杂的句式结构和高级词汇，如:过去分词作状语Comparedwithotherformsoftransportation，非限定性定语从句whichistooexpensiveforordinarywage-earners；还恰当地使用了过渡连接词，如：Inaddition,Lastbutnotleast,However,Inmyopinion等,不仅使行文流畅，而且使文章层次清晰。如能把下列句子加以优化则文章能更上一个档次：1....thehigh-speedtrainservicecontributestohelpingboosteconomy,tourismandtheexchangebetweentheprosperouscitiesalongtheline.→Itisthehigh-speedtrainservicethatcontributestohelpingboosteconomy,tourismandtheexchangebetweentheprosperouscitiesalongtheline.(强调句)2....mostofthemaredesignedtomakestopsateverystation,socoveringthewholedistancewilltakenearlytwohours.→...mostofthemaredesignedtomakestopsateverystation，leadingtotakenearlytwohourstocoverthewholedistance.(分词作结果状语)常用句式：①Recentlythephenomenonof...hascausedpublic...concern,and...②Nowadays,itiscommonto...Manypeopledon’tlike...because...Besides,...③Onthecontrary,therearesomepeopleinfavorof...Theybelieve...Moreover,theythink...④Inaword,thewholesocietyshouldpaycloseattentiontotheproblemof...Ohefuture.OnJuly1st,Chinaopenedtheintercityhigh-speedtrainbetweenShanghaiandNanjing.Nowadaysthereisawidespreadconcernovertheintercityhigh-speedtrain.Aspartofthelong-termplanoftherailwaynetworkinChina.Thenewtrainservicewouldtakeseventy-fiveminutesfromNanjingtoShanghai.Somepeoplegofirmlyforit.Firstly,theythinkitprovideshigherspeedoftravelforitsusers.Secondly,ithelpssharetheburdenofothertransportsystems.What’smore,Itisthehigh-speedtrainservicethatcontributestohelpingboosteconomy,tourismandtheexchangebetweentheprosperouscitiesalongtheline.Justasapopularsayinggoes,“Everycoinhastwosides.”Somepeopleareworryingaboutitsdisadvantages.Firstly,theticketpricewillbeabout50percenthigherthanthefareforthe“D”trainsalongthesameroute,whichistooexpensiveforordinarywage-earners．Secondly,mostofthemaredesignedtomakestopsateverystation，leadingtotakenearlytwohourstocoverthewholedistance.Inmyopinion,thehigh-speedtrainisafast,safe,comfortableandenvironmentally-friendlymeansoftransportation．Itwilldogoodtothedevelopmentofourcountry．

Thereisawidespreadconcernovertheissuethat_________(文章讨论题目）.Butitiswellknownthattheopinionconcerningthishottopicvariesfrompersontoperson.Amajorityofpeoplethinkthat___________（观点一）.Intheirviewsthereare2factorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows:inthefirstplace,________（原因一）.Furthermore,inthesecondplace,______（原因二）.Soitgoeswithoutsayingthat_______（观点一）.People,however,differintheiropinionsonthismatter.Somepeopleholdtheideathat______（观点二）.Intheirpointofview,ontheonehand，_______（支持原因一的理由）.Ontheotherhand,_____（支持原因二的理由）.Therefore,thereisnodoubtthat________(观点二).

AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat_______(观点一或二).Itisnotonlybecause,butalsobecause____________(支持你观点的理由).Themore,themore_________(结论).请根据下面四幅图画及提示内容，写一篇不少于120词的英语短文。注意：1.描述图画中的内容;2.从合作、团结的角度谈谈你的感想。参考词汇：合作cooperation团队协作teamworkOnepossibleversion:Inthepicturesabove,ananttriesinvaintomoveaworm.T