四六级作文评析

六级作文评析

六级作文题型：六级作文题目出现的形式主要是论说文（解决问题型作文；分析利弊型作文；正反阐释型作文），书信和图表作文交替出现。(书信及图表是解决问题型作文的一种子题型，把握好这类论说文就可以举一反三、触类旁通地攻克图表及书信作文)。

评析六级作文范文PartIWriting(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledTheImportanceofReadingClassics.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1、阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要2、现在愿意阅读经典的人越来越少，原因是……3、我们大学生应该怎么做这道作文题是典型的“解决问题型”，这一类文章的写作思路就是描述现状－分析原因－提出解决方案，文章采用“三段总分式”展开。可以看出，题目给出的三点提纲其实很好地契合了这个思路。第一段，简要提出经典的重要性。如：1.Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatreadingclassicsplaysanimportantroleinthegrowthofpeople.2.Nowadays,somepeople,especiallytheelderly,areoftheviewthatclassicsplayasignificantroleinourlife.之后展开说明阅读经典是如何影响成长的，可以用几本名著来辅证自己的观点。第二段，先总的说一下现在愿意阅读经典的人越来越少了，切忌lessandless这样的恶俗语言。紧接着分析原因，可以想到的原因有很多，比如现代人的生活节奏越来越快，以致于忙得没有时间静下心来读书；新兴的媒体，比如网络对于人们阅读习惯的改变；现代社会快餐式文化产品的兴起对经典的冲击，等等。

最后一段写大学生应该怎么做。分点分层次写总是最简单的方法，可以说大学生首先自己要阅读经典，同时可以鼓励和影响身边的人阅读经典；也可以说政府文化部门应该做什么，大学应该做什么来鼓励阅读经典，然后大学生本身要提高对经典的重视程度，等等。

1、阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要

Nobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatreadingclassicsplaysanimportantandbeneficialroleinourdevelopmentandgrowth.Personally,eversincemychildhood,nothinghasbeenmoreattractivethanreadingtheclassicmasterpieces.Takingalookaround,wecanfindclassicsfromwhichpeoplehugelybenefittoonumeroustolist:TheDreamintheRedChamber,TheLegendofThreeKingdoms,Bibleandthelike.2.现在愿意阅读经典的人越来越少，原因是……However,itiswidelyacknowledgedthatanincreasingnumberofpeoplearelosinginterestinclassics.Anumberoffactorscouldaccountforthechange,butthefollowingarethemostcriticalones.Foronething,practicalreadinghasoccupiedthemarketandstudents’sparetimeinsuchamaterialpossessionorientedsociety.Foranother,theboomofinternetindustrygivesrisetothechangeinstudents’readinghabitwhichconsequently,incomparison,makesreadingclassicstime-consumingandlessentertaining.3.我们大学生应该怎么做

Inviewof/becauseoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.Tobeginwith,itisessentialthatcollegerulesandregulationsbeworkedoutandenforcedtoencouragecollegestudentstoreadclassicalworksandstartclassics-readingcampaignsoncampus.What’s

more,collegestudentsshouldenhancetheirawarenessofabsorbingtheessenceoftheclassicsinwhichourancestorslefttheirwisdomsandexperience.Withproperrulesandanalertpublic,itwillonlybeamatteroftimetoseethisproblembecomeathingofthepastinthenearfuture.IncreasedCollegeEnrollment1）.近年来大学入学率逐年上升2）.大学扩招的益处及潜在问题3）.我对大学扩招的看法这是一篇典型利弊两分法的议论文。第一段引入主题：高校扩招。第二段分析高校扩招的益处：缓解了父母和高中生们的心理压力；提高全国教育水平；培养更多有专长的人才。第三段扩招造成的一些问题：造成大学里师资和教学设施短缺；使就业市场竞争更加激烈。第四段阐述我的观点。Recentyearshaswitnessedasteadyincreaseincollegeenrollment.Tomanyhigh-schoolstudents,it’sdefinitelygoodnews，fortheywouldhavebetterchanceofreceivinghighereducation.Youdon’thavetolookveryfartofindouttheadvantagesoftheincreasedcollegeenrollment.Foronething,itlessenstheworriesofbothhighschoolgraduatesandtheirparents.Foranother，collegeenrollmentexpansioncancontributetoraisingtheeducationallevelofournation.What’smore,increasedcollegeenrollmentcanprovidemorestudentswithspecializedknowledge,thusservingourdevelopmentinapositiveway.Ontheotherhand,wecannotdenythattherearesomepotentialproblemsaboutincreasedcollegeenrollment.Tobeginwith,withtheincreasednumberofstudents,theshortageofteachingstaffandfacilitiesbecomesclearlyseen.Worstofall,increasedcollegeenrollmentleadstoincreasedcompetitioninthejobmarket.It’snotaneasytasktotellwhetherthetendencyshouldbeencouragedornot.Astome,it’slaudable/deservingpraisetograntmorestudentshighereducation.Butacollegedegreeisbynomeansaguaranteeforabetterjoborfuture.Tocastapromisingcareer,weneedalotmoreabilitieswhichwecannotlearnfromcollege.Direction:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledShouldOneExpectaRewardWhenDoingaGoodDeed?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1、有人做好事期望得到回报；2、有人认为应该像雷锋那样做好事不图回报；3、我的观点。这是一篇典型的正反阐释作文第一段总起说一句对于是否应该期望得到回报这个话题有不同的看法，然后马上接着说第一种观点。Whenitcomestowhetheroneshouldexpectarewardwhendoingagooddeed,people’sopinionsdiffer.这个句子相信大家再熟悉不过。第二段直接写第二种的对立观点。最后一段写我的观点，可以赞同第一种，或者同意第二种观点，也可以两种都有条件地支持，实在觉得最后一段字数写不够了，也可以说现在存在什么问题，并想出解决方法。LeiFeng,acommunistsoldier,who“devotedhislimitedlifetothelimitlesscauseofservingthepeople”,haslongbeensetasanoutstandingexampletoencourageustosparenoeffortstohelpthoseinneed；whereas,withthepassageoftime,peoplevoicedifferentopinionstowardsdoinggooddeeds.Someinsists“Agoodturndeservesanother”,astheoldsayinggoes,whichindicatesthatagooddeedoughttobringaboutareward,themotivationorthestimulusforthefavor.Meanwhile,

othersbelievegooddeedsbelongtovoluntarywork,purelyoutofwillingness,whichhasnothingtodowithexpectationforrewards.Astome,gooddeedsaresupposedto

resultfromspontaneousreactionconfrontedwithcertaincircumstances,rangingfromgivinguponeseattoasilver-hairedpassengeraboardthebus,donatingbloodtothedesignatedorganizationbyRedCross，totravelingtotheremoteandpoverty-strickenareastoserveasavolunteerforawholeyear.Inshort,rewardsarebynomeansthetriggerorpurposeforintentionofconductinggooddeeds,nomatterhowtrivialtheyare.高分作文的四句话基本准则：

结构合理三（四）段式；

中心突出主题句；

层次清晰导航语；

词汇闪光亮点句。六级写作必备句型“It”isusedasasubject:Itcannotbedeniedthat/mustbeadmittedthattheovergrowthoftourismmaydestroytheecologicalbalanceofsomescenicresorts.Itisknowntoallthatphysicalexercisescanimproveandenrichourphysicalandmentalwell-being.Itisobvious(evident,clear,undeniable,apparent)thatthesituationiscauseddirectlybyexcessivecommercialfishing.Itiscurrentlydifficultforauniversitystudenttofindanidealjobuponhisgraduation,especiallythosemajoringinfundamentalcoursessuchashistoryandmathematics.Itisimperativethatsomethingurgentbedonetocombatthewidespreaduseofillegaldrugsamongteenagers.Itishighlynecessaryforourgovernmenttostopthecorruptionofgovernmentofficials.

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Withthegrowingnumberofcollegegraduatesbeingturnedouteachyear,thesituationinthejobmarketisgettingtighterandtighter.Asthereformprocessofstateenterprisesspeedsup,moreandmoreworkersarelikelytobelaidoff,enteringthecompetitioninjobmarketAsindustryandagriculturedevelops,theproblemofwatershortagewillbemoreserious.therebe

Recently,therehasbeenastrongdebateonwhetherhumanbeingsshouldbecloned.Therearestillquiteanumberofchildrenwhocannotaffordtogotoschoolbecauseofpoverty.Thereisnoneedforpeopletoworryaboutthepossibleeffectsofdonatingblood.make＋object＋adj./make＋it+adj.＋forsb.todosthThewidespreadintroductionofinformationtechnologywillmakeourworkandlifemoreconvenientandmorebeautiful.

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…Theyaresoeagertomasternewskillsthattheycanbequalifiedtothejobmarket.Therearesomanypeople,bicycles,carsinthestreetsthatyouwillsometimesfeelitdifficulttomovealong.NonrestrictiveAttributiveClauseLakesandriversarebecomingseriouslypolluted,whichaggravates(worsens)theshortageoffreshwater.Theincreasinglyhighdivorceratewillcauseaseriesofproblems,whichdeservesgreatpublicattention.Participlephrase:People,notrealizingthatwaterresourcesontheeartharelimited,wasteagreatamountofwatereveryday.Withtheimprovementoflivingstandards,moreandmorepeoplebegintobuycarstomeettheneedsofworkandlife,therebyworseningthetrafficproblems.Contraststructure:Somepeoplebelievethatreadingselectivelyisagoodwayforustoenrichourknowledgewhilesomeothersinsistthatreadingextensivelyiswaytoobetter.Mostmenwouldliketheirspousestobeyoungandbeautifulwhereaswomenoftenputemphasisontheirspouses’character,education,profession,incomeorfamilybackground.Sentencestructureabout“reason”:Severalreasons/factorsareresponsiblefor/mayaccountfor/contributetothecomingbackofmanyChineseoverseasstudents.Itspopularityisdueto/resultsfrom/is

causedby/canbeattributedtothecleanandcomfortableenvironmentandtheexcellentservice.Asfor(asto);for…Thus,forsomestudents,cheating,thoughrisky,isabsolutelyashortcuttogetasatisfyingacademicevaluation.Asfor(asto)thesociety,the7-dayholidaywellservesthepurposeofstimulatingconsumptionandpromotingthedevelopmentoftourism.

Whenitcomesto…;asfaras…isconcernedWhenitcomestowhethercollegestudentsshouldbeinvolvedinbusinessactivities,therearedifferentopinions/peoplevoicedifferentopinions.

Asfarasindividualsareconcerned,nomatterwhatreasonsdrivethemtobuylotterytickets,theyactuallycontributetothesocietybylendingahelpinghandtounfortunatepeopleandtothedevelopmentofsportsinourcountry.Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…Admittedly/Undoubtedly,thereareadvancedresearchenvironmentandbetterlivingconditionsindevelopedcountries,andstudentsfromdevelopingcountriescannotresistthetemptationofearningmoresalaryinthewest.Noonecandenythat/ThereisnodenyingthefactthatE-economyhasgreatpotentialsandadvantagesinmanyaspects.Itisindisputablethat（无可争辩）therearemillionsofpeoplewhostillhaveamiserablelifeandhavetofacethedangersofstarvationandexposure.Noonecandenythefact（没有人能否认）thataperson'seducationisthemostimportantaspectofhislife.Infact,wehavetoadmitthefact（我们必须承认）thatthequalityoflifeisasimportantaslifeitselfWith…;Without…

Withprivatecars,peopleareabletoenjoytheirleisuretimetothefullbymakingtripsintheircarstothecountrysideorseasideattheweekends.Withoutadequatelatestinformationnecessaryinhiswork,onewillachievenosuccessinhiscareer.regard/thinkof…as…Inspiteofthesearguments,therearethosewhosee(view)itasahastydecision,whichhassomepotentialproblems.However,somepeopleconsidermankind’sexplorationintothespaceasawasteoftime,moneyandresources.Howtoexpressopinions:Therearedifferentopinionson(Peoplehavedifferentideasabout/Differentpeoplemayholddifferentviewsabout)whetherdrunkdrivingshouldbebanned.Recently,therehasbeenaheateddebate(discussion)overwhetherornotsportsstarscangotocollegeorgraduateschoolwithouttakingtheentranceexams.Viewsontheissueinquestionvarywidelyfrompersontoperson.Quitealotofpeoplehold/claim/argue/advocate/suggest/believethatowningprivatecarsisofgreatbenefit,whileothersassume/maintain/stressthattheremaybeproblemswiththeincreasingnumberofprivatecars/(butothersset/(putforthadifferentargumentabout/oppositiveviewsonthematterinquestion).Some(people)advocate/endorse/favor/arefor(或oppose/objectto/areagainst)...Yetothersstickto/holdonto/clingtotheoppositeviews/argument/points.Tosomepeople'smind/Fromsomepeople'spointofview/Intheeyesofsomepeople,thematterinquestionis/seems/shouldbe/means...Buttoothers'mind/fromothers'pointofview/inothers'eyes,itisjust/quitetheother/contrary/oppositewayaround(或theopposite/reverseisthecase/true.)Basedontheabovediscussion,Iholdtheopinionthatbothsidesoftheargumentarerightinsomeway.However,Iwouldliketotakeamoreneutralposition.Someotherimportantsentences:Theproblemofinternationaltourismhascausedwidepublicconcernovertherecentyears.(近些年引起了广泛关注）Despitemanyobviousadvantagesof…,itisnotwithoutitsproblem.(但是它也存在问题)Althoughruralemigrantscontrib