商务英语翻译5凝练翻译法

TheWorldTradeOrganizationupheldtodayitsrulingagainstthesteeltariffsimposedbyPresidentBushlastyear,givingthegreenlighttoEuropetoimposemorethan$2billionofsanctionsagainsttheUnitedStates.EmboldenedbyaWorldTradeOrganization

ruling,Japan,SouthKoreaandtheEuropeanUnion

onTuesdaydemandedtheUnitedStatesimmediatelydropitsdutiesonimportedsteelorfacethepossibilityofbillionsofdollarsinretaliation.第四章

凝练翻译法教学要点与要求1.什么是凝练翻译法2.凝练翻译法的适用范围英汉翻译中的凝练翻译法Theretailersperformmanyfunctions.First,

hemayprovideaconvenientlocation.Also,he

oftenguaranteesandservicesthemerchandisehesells.Third,theretaileraidsinpromotingtheproduct,oftenthroughdisplaysandadvertising.Fourth,theretailersmayfinancethecustomerbyextendingcredit.Further,theretailerperformsstoragefunctioninhisoutlet,byhavinggoodsavailable.零售商还发挥学多功能。其一，（）可提供便利的场地；其二，（）对他所经销的商品提供担保和服务；其三，（）帮助促销产品，经常进行商品展示活动和发布广告；其四，（）为顾客提供信贷。另外，由于供货及时，零售商还可发挥其商店的仓储功能。

在英译汉时，应该避免在句子里过多使用代词和连接词。Helikestopointoutotherpeople’sshortcomings,buthemeanswell.

他喜欢指出别人的缺点，但用意是好的。Thislittleboyalwayswasheshishandsbeforemealsandthendriesthemwithnapkins.

这个小男孩饭前都洗手，然后用餐巾纸擦干。Thesunisbright,andtheskyisclear.

阳光灿烂，（和）晴空万里。(1)CuttingpronounsCuttingthepronounassubject根据汉语习惯，后句主语若与前句相同，不必重复出现。e.g.Butit’sthewayIam,andtryasImight,Ihaven’tbeenabletochangeit.。2.泛指人称代词作主语时，即便是第一个主语，也往往省略掉。e.g.Youcannevertell. e.g.Weeattolive,butnotlivetoeat. e.g.Anyonewhodoesnotrecognizethisfactisnotamaterialist.

(1)CuttingpronounsButit’sthewayIam,andtryasImight,Ihaven’tbeenabletochangeit.—不过我就是这个脾气，虽然竭力想改，终究还是改不了。e.g.Youcannevertell. —很难说。e.g.Weeattolive,butnotlivetoeat. —吃饭是为了活着，可活着不是为了吃饭。

e.g.Anyonewhodoesnotrecognizethisfactisnotamaterialist.—不承认这个事实，就不是唯物主义者。Cuttingthepronounasobjecte.g.Beforehandinginyourtranslation,youhavetoreaditoverandoveragainandseeifthereisanythinginit

tobecorrectedorimproved.

Cuttingthepronounasobjecte.g.Beforehandinginyourtranslation,youhavetoreaditoverandoveragainandseeifthereisanythinginit

tobecorrectedorimproved.—交出翻译之前必须多读几遍，看看里面有没有要修改的地方。Cuttingthepossessivepronoune.g.Fortwoweeks,hehadbeenstudyingthehouse,lookingatitsrooms,itselectricwiring,itspathanditsgarden.e.g.Thetraincame.Hepinchedhislittlesisterlovingly,andputhisgreatarmsabouthismother’sneckandthenwasaway.

Cuttingthepossessivepronoune.g.Fortwoweeks,hehadbeenstudyingthehouse,lookingatitsrooms,its

electricwiring,itspathanditsgarden.—连着两星期他都在观察房子的情况，检查各个房间，查看线路、通道和花园的布局。e.g.Thetraincame.Hepinchedhislittlesisterlovingly,andputhis

greatarmsabouthismother’sneckandthenwasaway.—火车来了。他疼爱地捏了捏小妹妹，粗壮的胳膊搂了一下母亲的脖子，然后就走了。(2)CuttingconjunctionsCuttingthecoordinatingconjunctione.g.HeconsideredtheNationalSecurityCounciltoolargeandbulkyandthustooleaky,toomanypeoplewhotalkedtoomuch.e.g.Yourparentsoryourwifeoryoursonoryourbestfriendsmightbeexpectingyoubackhomesafeandsound.

(2)CuttingconjunctionsCuttingthecoordinatingconjunctione.g.HeconsideredtheNationalSecurityCounciltoolargeandbulkyandthustooleaky,toomanypeoplewhotalkedtoomuch.—他认为国家安全委员会机构过于庞大臃肿，人多嘴杂，容易泄密。e.g.Yourparentsoryourwifeoryoursonoryourbestfriendsmightbeexpectingyoubackhomesafeandsound.—也许你的父母，妻儿，或者你最好的朋友都在盼望你平安回家呢。Cuttingthesubordinateconjunction省略表示原因的连接词e.g.Weknewthatsummerwascoming,aswecouldseeaswallow.

e.g.Becausethedeparturewasnoteasy,we’dbettermakeitbrief.

Cuttingthesubordinateconjunction省略表示原因的连接词e.g.Weknewthatsummerwascoming,aswecouldseeaswallow.—我们看见一只燕子，知道夏天就要来临了。e.g.Becausethedeparturewasnoteasy,we’dbettermakeitbrief.—离别不是件容易的事（离别真叫人难受），我们还是简短些吧。省略表示条件的连接词e.g.Ifwintercomes,canspringbefarbehind?e.g.IwouldnothavesaiditifIhadknownit.

省略表示条件的连接词e.g.Ifwintercomes,canspringbefarbehind?—冬天来了，春天还会远吗？（雪莱《西风颂》）e.g.IwouldnothavesaiditifIhadknownit.—早知如此我就不说了。表示条件句中的连接词if，

在日常口语体或文言文中，往往省略不译Ifyoudon’tgotomorrow,they’llgetangry.（如果）你明天不去，他们会生气的。省略表示时间的连接词e.g.Whenatlasthestooduponthebluff,heturnedtohislittlesisterandlookeduponhersorrowfully.e.g.Atlonglast,onJune6,1944,aftertheEuropeanwarwasbasicallydecidedandHitlerwasdefeated,theallieslaunchedtheirlong-delayedwesternfront.

省略表示时间的连接词e.g.Whenatlasthestooduponthebluff,heturnedtohislittlesisterandlookeduponhersorrowfully.—最后他站到了悬崖上，转过身来，悲哀地看着他的小妹妹。e.g.Atlonglast,onJune6,1944,aftertheEuropeanwarwasbasicallydecidedandHitlerwasdefeated,theallieslaunchedtheirlong-delayedwesternfront.—1944年6月