专题20 读后续写：情感刻画(原卷版)-2022年高考英语读后续写核心素养与实战演练

专题20读后续写：情感刻画(原卷版)情感细节包括人物的感受、情绪，是续写中必不可少的细节描写之一。合理的情感情绪描写与刻画，可以凸显人物的性格、人际关系的特征、以及烘托故事高潮进而突出语篇主题等。因此，合理的情感情绪刻画在续写中是非常必要的。以下就是读后续写过程中，刻画人物情感情绪的四个方法：［一、直接描写法直接利用恰当的表情感的形容词、副词或名词、介词短语等表达人物的喜怒哀乐例如：快乐(happy,delighted,pleased,joyful,enjoyable等)、吃惊(surprised,shocked,amazed,astonished)等形容词或介词短语(toone'ssurprise,inrelief,inpanic)等描述人物的情绪。［二、环境烘托法利用环境细节“融情于景”烘托人物的情感【例1】Dellafinishedhercryinganddriedherface.Shestoodbythewindowandlookedoutunhappilyatagraycatwalkingalongagrayfenceinagraybackyard.(小、说《麦琪的礼物》中利用3个形容词gray，体现了Della的难受和不开心。)【例2】涌上心头sth.welluponme/sth.sweptovermeAfloodoffearwelledupinme.—股恐惧涌上心头。高考真题：［2020.7全国新爆米花］Hewassodelightedthathecouldhardlyspeak,buthisbrightsmilefacespokeforhim.［2020.1浙江给Poppy买狗作伴］Poppyjumpedwithjoyatthesightofthelittledog.［2017.11浙江与善忘母亲一同旅游］Everytimewementionedthefunnyincidentsofthejourney,apleasantsmilewouldspreadoverMom'sface.［三、动作反映法利用恰当的动作描写反映人物的情绪例如：下面文章片段中的句子：Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturned..around,.hopingtoseethelake.（动作描写，说明Jane满怀期望）To.her.,surprise,（利用介词短语体现Jane的吃惊）shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnow-cappedmountaintop.（寓情于景，体现Jane的无望失落）Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.［四、句式变换法利用高级句式和修饰成分细化情感细节句型1独立主格结构“Absolutely！”repliedJohn,excitementshinninginhiseyes.（利用名词excitement和独立主格结构，描写John的兴奋激动）约翰答道，“一定”，他两眼兴奋地闪闪发光。句型2：so・・・that结构Soangrywasthebearthatitroaredandsmackedthefenceviolently.（so...that侄U装句型）熊怒火中烧，开始咆哮并用爪子猛烈地拍击护栏。句型3：how+宾语从句Youcannotimaginehowfrightenedwewereattheapproachofthepolarbear.（how弓丨导的宾语从句，介词短语）你无法想象北极熊向我们逼近时我们多么的恐惧。句式4：非常…Iammorethan+情感类形容词to…I'mmorethanhappytolearnthatyouareadmittedtoPekingUniversity得知你被北京大学录取，我非常高兴。句式5：让我非常…的是…Muchtomy+情感类名词，…Muchtomydisappointment,noonecameuptogivemeahelpinghand令我非常失望的是,没有人站过来帮助我。［句子演练I•按要求补全下面动作、情感和心理细节的句子简又害怕又无助，靠着一棵树坐下，歇歇疼痛的双脚。,Janesatagainstatree,.（形容词短语/非谓语动词作状语）“如果我没有和汤姆吵架，我现在就不会被困在这里了，”她想，悔恨的泪水模糊了她的眼睛。“，”shethoughttoherself.（虚拟语气的倒装句，with复合结构）她挣扎着站起来寻找那个湖。她精疲力竭，她爬上一块大石头，躺了下来，很快睡着了。（so...that状语从句，一连串的动作）简醒来时天已经亮了。尽管很沮丧，她还是决定继续前进。,shedecidedtocontinueforcingherwayahead.（让步状语从句）,shedecidedtocontinueforcingherwayahead.（状语从句的省略句）随着小溪的声音，她向水边走去。,shewalkedtowardthewater.（非谓语动词作状语）突然，她注意到远处有一个熟悉的身影向她走来。（非谓语动词作宾补）II•将以上补全后的各句合并为短文，注意恰当的衔接过渡［【补充语料1】愤怒类Hewasfumingwithrage.他气得大发雷霆。(fumev.发怒)Hecouldhardlycontrolhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。⑶Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他气得脸色阴沉。(脸上一块乌云)悲伤忧愁类⑴Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她手在颤抖，她快要哭了。(verge边缘)Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathewasdrownedwithsadness.听到消息，他淹没在悲伤中。Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirface.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。害怕类［2018.6浙江卷：农场游玩迷路］Tearsoffearandregretrolleddownmycheeks.［2017.6浙江卷：与朋友骑车遇狼］AfterhearingMac'sexperience,theyfroze,theirmouthshangingopen.Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。⑷Fearsslowlycreptuponher.恐惧慢慢蔓延到她身上。(5)Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她脸色苍白站在那里，舌头打结，说不出话。［【补充语料2】关于情感句子的积累：(表达情感的形容词+动作具体描写)，用so・・that・・・1、兴奋：Iwassoexcited/thrilledthatIgaveajumpintheair.我激动得跳了起来2、开心：Iwassohappy/cheerfulthatIjumpedupanddown我高兴得上蹿下跳。3、感动：IwassomovedthatIfailedtosayaword我感动得一句话也说不出来。4、悲伤：IwassosadthatIhidmyfaceinmyhands我难过得用手捂住了脸。5、生气：IwassoangrythatIfailedtosayaword.我气得一句话也说不出来。6、害怕:Iwassoscared/frightenedthatmypalmssweatedandmyheartpounded我害怕得手心冒汗，心怦怦直跳。7、羞愧：IwassoashamedthatIcouldfeelmyfaceburning我羞愧得感觉自己的脸在燃烧。［模拟练习01读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。MissusSommersonedayfoundherselftheunexpectedowneroffifteendollars.Itseemedtoheraverylargeamountofmoney.Foradayortwoshewalkedaroundinadreamystateasshethoughtaboutherchoices.HerdaughterJaniewaswearingwornshoesandneedednewones.Shewouldbuyclothfornewshirtsfortheboys.HerdaughterMagshouldhaveanotherdress.Andstilltherewouldbeenoughleftfornewstockingsforherchildren.Theideaabouthowtospendthedollarsmadeherrestlesswithexcitement.Onthedaysheplannedtogoshoppingwiththemoney,sheatealightmeal-no!Betweengettingthechildrenfedandthehousecleaned,andpreparingherselftogoshopping,sheforgottoeatatall!Whenshearrivedatthelargedepartmentstore,shespottedapileofsilkstockingsattheentrance.Asignnearbyannouncedthattheyhadbeenreducedinpriceayounggirlbehindthecounteraskedherifshewishedtoexaminethesilkylegcoverings.Shesmiledasifshehadbeenaskedtoinspectdiamondjewelry,andstartedtofeelthesoft,expensiveitems.MissusSommerspickedupablackpairandlookedatthemclosely.Tworedmarkssuddenlyshowedonherpaleface.Shelookedupattheshopgirlandsaidproudly,“Well,Iwillbuythispair."MissusSommerschangedhercottonstockingsforthenewsilkonesintheladies'restarea.Shehadletherselfbecontrolledbysomemachine-likeforcethatdirectedheractionsandfreedherofresponsibility.Howgoodwasthetouchofthesilkonherskin!Thensheputhershoesbackonandputheroldstockingsintoherbag.Next,shewenttotheshoedepartment,whereshetriedonapairofnewboots.Herfootandanklelookedlovely.Shecouldnotbelievethattheywereapartofherself.注意：1•所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2•至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3•续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4•续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Afterbuyingapairofnewboots,shewalkedintotheclothingdepartment.Paragraph2:Shewasabouttoleavethestorewhenakidrunningaroundremindedherofsomething.翻译小练习：来到化妆镜前，上下打量着镜子里的自己，眼睛盯着鞋子，"如果我的鞋子和我身上完美的衣服搭配，我看起来会更漂亮吗？萨默斯太太心想，向部门的女售货员招手。萨默斯太太问她今年的时装款式是什么，是否可以试穿