高考英语读后续写素材积累讲义

英语高考读后续写素材积累具有人物特点的语言描写7句1Shesaidshewantedto

livesomewhereremoved,detached(分开的),

where

neighborswouldn’tstareatherbelly,pointather,snicker(窃笑),or,worseyet,assault(攻击)herwith

insincerekindnesses.

Nana的话语体现了她被人看不起的内心的感受：想远离这群对她嘲笑的人们。这些人是不尊重她的：

stareat，pointat，snicker(窃笑)，assault(攻击)herwith

insincerekindnesses。她是自卑的。2Buthesaidhelikedthe

enchanting

sounds

theArabicwordsmadeasthey

rolledoffhistongue.Hesaidtheycomfortedhim,

easedhisheart.这段话表达了玛丽雅姆父亲对语言的感受：喜欢这些迷人的声音enchanting

sounds；rolledoffhistongue；comfortedhim,easedhisheart。3"Ifyoureallycareabouther,thenyou

makeherseethatshebelongshereathomewithhermother.Thereis

nothingoutthere

forher.Nothingbutrejectionandheartache."

这是玛丽雅姆母亲娜娜对玛丽雅姆老师说的一段话。因为玛丽雅姆想出去与同龄人一起读书，老师为她到她母亲那里去说情。于是娜娜说了这番话。makeherseethatshebelongshereathomewithhermother，让她明白她属于这里，而且外面只会给她拒绝与令人心痛的事情。Thereis

nothingoutthere

forher.Nothingbutrejectionandheartache.我们可以看出她的思想是有局限性的。可是为何她要这么说?4“That’snotagoodidea,”saidNana.Hervoicewas

calm,hadthecontrolled,politetone

sheusedaroundJalil,butMariamcould

feelher

hard,accusingglare.细节描写：对声音的形象描述calm,hadthecontrolled,politetone冷静，控制性的礼貌语气。作者还从听者角度来描述Mariamcould

feelher

hard,accusingglare。在听的时候，玛丽雅姆能感觉到母亲严厉与责备的目光。从直接与间接的角度来描述母亲娜娜说话的样子以及话语传达的言外之意。5“Whatrichlies!”NanasaidafterJalilleft.“Richmantellingrichlies.

Henevertookyoutoanytree.

Anddon’tlethimcharmyou.Hebetrayedus,yourbelovedfather.Hecastusout.Hecastusoutofhisbigfancyhouselikewewerenothingtohim.Hedidithappily.”这段话表明玛丽亚姆母亲娜娜的辛酸：未能受到丈夫的尊重，被排挤在外。她的话也表示了她对丈夫的控诉：Henevertookyoutoanytree.Hebetrayedus；Hecastusout；Hecastusoutofhisbigfancyhouselikewewerenothingtohim.Hedidithappily.这些话也深刻揭示了当时社会对待娜娜这些底层人的冷漠以及不公。6Nanasaid,“Learnthisnowandlearnitwell,mydaughter:Likeacompassneedlethatpointsnorth,

aman’saccusingfingeralwaysfindsawoman.

Always.Yourememberthat,Mariam.”

娜娜要女儿玛丽亚姆记得男人永远不会对女人满意，男人总是责怪女人aman’saccusingfingeralwaysfindsawoman。而且要求她女儿：Always.Yourememberthat,Mariam.这也为玛丽亚姆之后不幸的婚姻生活做了铺垫。她丈夫Rasheed对她的还不仅仅是责怪，而是虐待。娜娜的教育也造就了之后玛丽亚姆的忍耐与屈从。7“And,believeme,”Nanasaid,“itwasarelieftoyourfatherhavingmeoutofsight.

Itsuitedhimjustfine.”这段话表明娜娜对于丈夫已经不抱幻想。她已经彻底领教了社会的残酷，丈夫的无情。所以她才会说：believeme，itwasarelieftoyourfatherhavingmeoutofsight...多么痛的领悟。细腻的表情与情绪描写10句1WhenNanasawthebowl,

herface

flushedred

and

herupperlip

shivered,and

hereyes,boththelazyoneandthegood,settledonMariam

inaflat,unblinking

way.

看到碗的反应，神态。写作技巧：作者从脸，嘴唇、眼睛等各个方面进行描述。herface：flushedred

herupperlip：shiveredhereyes：

settledonMariam

inaflat,unblinking

way.flush

[flʌʃ]：Whenmygirlfriendfeelsembarrassed,herfaceflushedtomatored.

当我的女朋友感到难堪的时候，她的脸就变得通红。拓展学习：aflushofanger/embarrassment/excitementetcasuddenfeelingofanger,embarrassmentetc=surgeShefeltasuddenflushofanger.flush

同义词:

blush

chase

color

even

flat

full

level

redden

rush

pale2Butlater,whenhebroachedNana,she

droppedtheknife

withwhichshewasslicing(切片)onions.“Whatfor?”

用具体动作droppedtheknife，刀子掉了，表示惊讶。拓展学习：drop

同义词:

abandon

cease

descend

dismiss

dive

end

fall

giveup

letgo

plunge

stop常用词组dropacross

偶然遇见dropaway

(一个一个地)离开,散去dropbehind

落伍,落后,落在...之后dropby

[美]顺便访问一下droponsb.

顺便走访(某人);顺便进去dropinto

1.跌入,落入2.偶然进入(某地)3.不知不觉地进入(某种状态)dropupon

偶然遇到;偶然发现dropout

退出,(中、小学生)中途退学,脱离dropthrough

落空;毫无结果;不再被讨论;彻底失败dropto

下降到;跌到3She

kepthergazetotheground,onherfeet,

stepping

onthegraystonepath.Shewasawareofthepresenceofpeopleinthegarden,

murmuring,

stepping

aside,assheandJalilwalkedpast.She

sensedtheweightofeyeson

her,

lookingdown

fromthewindowsupstairs.描述Mariam

到Jalil家沉重的心情。她的目光：盯着地面，然后移到她的脚，踩在灰色的石板路上。

She

kepthergazetotheground,onherfeet,

stepping

onthegraystonepath.这句话将她这种紧张不自在都体现出来了。她的感觉：她感觉到大家都看着她sensedtheweightofeyeson

her，反映出玛丽雅姆是个敏感的女孩，第六感告诉她，人们关注她，而且不太友好。文中多处使用分词murmuring,

stepping，lookingdown，语言简洁有力。4Whenshesawherfriendatthedoor,hiswhitebeardandhisamiable,

toothlesssmile,Mariam

felttearsstingingthecornersofhereyesagain.

哭的细节描写：

felttearsstingingthecornersofhereyesagain(文章中多次出现toothlesssmile来描述老师的外貌，是累赘吗？为何这么写？用重复的手法强化老师的特定形象，一个人因为关爱，因为美德，即使外表不好看，在我们的心里，他再丑都是美，都是他独有的特点)

5“Ikeep,”Mariambegan.Shehadtostop,

feelinglikearockhadlodgeditselfinherthroat.“IkeepthinkingofwhatshesaidtomebeforeIleft.She—”表示难过的细节描写：feelinglikearockhadlodgeditselfinherthroat感觉就像一块石头落在她的喉咙里，表明她难过的心情。6

Mariam’schestwastightening.Theroom

wasreelingupanddown,theground

shiftingbeneathherfeet.听到消息后，Mariam的反应Mariam’schestwastightening，而且连房间也

reelingupanddown上下摇摇欲坠，地面

shiftingbeneathherfeet在脚下移动，

很形象地表明她的震惊与不能接受。7He

shook

thericeangrilyfromhisfingersandpushed

theplateaway,spillingsauceandriceonthesofrah.

Mariamwatchedashe

stormedoutof

thelivingroom,thenoutofthehouse,

slamming

thedooron

hiswayout.表达生气的细节描写：shook，pushed

theplateaway，stormedout，slamming

thedoor一连串的动作表示了玛丽雅姆丈夫的生气情绪。8“What’sthematter?”Mariamasked,

hatingtheapologetictoneofhervoice.Shecould

feelherpulsequickening,herskinshrinking.玛丽雅姆问的时候，憎恨自己抱歉的口气hatingtheapologetictoneofhervoice。她是个善良的女人，可在那样的社会她无奈无助。她的生活是依附与她丈夫的。而且她已经害怕她丈夫这种粗暴的行为，却无能为力。她的脉搏加快，皮肤起皱Shec