高考英语写作高分策略课件

Writing主讲人：黄永霞高考英语写作高分策略Writing高考英语写作高分策略高考英语写作高分策略[课件]Whichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive,why?Whichcompositionfeelsmorea漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面Whichsentencedoyouthinkattractstheteachers?1.Thecharacterofthisgalaisthatitrelatespeople’slives2.Themoststrikingfeatureofthisgalaisitstraditionallycloselinkwithordinarypeople’slives.3.Youngpeopledon’twanttowatchTV,sotheypayattentiontootherformsofcelebration.4.YoungpeoplefocustheirattentiononotherformsofcelebrationinsteadofimmersingthemselvesinTV.______________________________________________________________________________________~~~~~~~~~{{Whichsentencedoyouthinkat影响给分的因素之二：

文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B.句型结构运用灵活多变;影响给分的因素之二：人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新PracticeFindsomesimilarwordsorphrasesofthefollowings

good2.think3.cleverperfect

excellentoutstandingpleasantwonderfulfavorablemagnificent

inone'sopinion/viewholdtheviewthat…itiswidelysharedthat…

wisebrightsmartintelligentcutePracticeFindsomesimilarword改变句子结构,与众不同1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。Astrong/bigearthquakehappenedinTangshaninthe1980s.TherewasastrongearthquakeinTangshaninthe1980s.Aterribleearthquakehit/struckTangShaninthe1980s.2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.IreceivedyourletterwhichwaswrittenonAugust15ththismorning.YourletterofAugust15threached/gottomethismorning.改变句子结构,与众不同1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化1.Hegotexcitedwhenheheardthenews.→___thenews,hegotexcited.2.Thegirlwenthome,becauseshewashungryandthirsty.→_________________,thegirlwenthome.3.IstudiedChinese,EnglishandPhysicsatschool.→______________________________includeChinese,EnglishandPhysics.4.Itwasearlyinthemorning.Mr.Smithwasinhisgarden.Hewaswateringflowers.→_________________,Mr.Smithwaswatering_________________.HearingHungryandthirstyThemainsubjectsIstudiedatschoolEarlyinthemorninginthegarden改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化1.Hegotexcit使用强势句式，增强语句表现力1.Weweregladtoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.→_______weweretoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell!2.Radiobroadcastsdidn’tbeginuntil1920.→Itwas__________________________________________.3.Heneverspeaksabouthisownfamily.→Never__________________________________________.4.Anoticeissaying”PleaseSaveWater”onthewall.→Onthewall______________________________________.5.Thoughheisachild,heknowsalot.→___________________________________.Howgladnotuntil1920thatradiobroadcastsbegandoeshespeakabouthisownfamilyisanoticesaying”PleaseSaveWater”Childthough/asheis,heknowsalot使用强势句式，增强语句表现力1.Weweregladt影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅上下贯通、一气呵成and,then,also,besides,morever,what'smorefurthermore,inaddition,morethanthat...1.表递进２.表转折３.表因果４.表目的５.表归纳but,however,although,though,inspiteof,despiteafterall,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand...because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequentlyasaresult/consequence,onaccountof...inorderthat,sothat,forthepurposeof...ingeneral,inbrief,inshort,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole...1.表递进but,however,although,thou如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？Manyhousesandschoolsweredestroyed.Morethanfivemillionpeoplearelivinga

hardlifenow.

Thestudentsthereneedhelpand

schoolsshouldbebuilt.

Studentscanreturntoclassessoon.如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，

WilliamShakespeare(2008高考湖南卷书面表达)

DoyouknowHamlet?HaveyoureadTheMerchantofVenice?ThesetwogreatworksarebothwrittenbyWilliamShakespeare,myfavoriteEnglishwriterandthemanofallages!

Shakespeare,asonfromapoorfamily,amanoflittleeducation,wroteplaysandpoemsthatarereadallovertheworld,Ilikehimbecausehiscomediesandtragediesbringmeintoafantasticworld;IlovehimbecausehispoemsletmeenjoythebeautyoftheEnglishlanguage;Iadmirehimbecausehiskeensightssetmethinkingandteachmehowtoleadameaningfullife!

Since“Lifeisastage”,weareactuallyallactorsandactresses.Onthisstage,everyonehadhisownroletoplay.andIwilltrymybesttoplaymyrolewell.

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＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿___________________________影响给分的因素之四：文章的思想WilliamShakespeare小结：

1.作文的卷面；-----整洁的卷面

2.文章的语言；-----丰富的词汇3.行文的流畅；-----流畅的结构

4.文章的思想；-----独到的见解小结：HomeworkBuildaHarmoniousSociety-建立和谐社会

假设你是李晓平，是湖南某中学的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题，根据下面所给出的提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封100词左右的倡议书。

1．人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心；

2．人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助；

3．人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护；

4．你的态度：内容由自己拟定。

HomeworkBuildaHarmoniousSocWriting主讲人：黄永霞高考英语写作高分策略Writing高考英语写作高分策略高考英语写作高分策略[课件]Whichcompositionfeelsmoreattractive,why?Whichcompositionfeelsmorea漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点影响给分的因素之一：作文的卷面Whichsentencedoyouthinkattractstheteachers?1.Thecharacterofthisgalaisthatitrelatespeople’slives2.Themoststrikingfeatureofthisgalaisitstraditionallycloselinkwithordinarypeople’slives.3.Youngpeopledon’twanttowatchTV,sotheypayattentiontootherformsofcelebration.4.YoungpeoplefocustheirattentiononotherformsofcelebrationinsteadofimmersingthemselvesinTV.______________________________________________________________________________________~~~~~~~~~{{Whichsentencedoyouthinkat影响给分的因素之二：

文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B.句型结构运用灵活多变;影响给分的因素之二：人靠衣装，文靠词装A.词汇的选择灵活新PracticeFindsomesimilarwordsorphrasesofthefollowings

good2.think3.cleverperfect

excellentoutstandingpleasantwonderfulfavorablemagnificent

inone'sopinion/viewholdtheviewthat…itiswidelysharedthat…

wisebrightsmartintelligentcutePracticeFindsomesimilarword改变句子结构,与众不同1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次大地震。Astrong/bigearthquakehappenedinTangshaninthe1980s.TherewasastrongearthquakeinTangshaninthe1980s.Aterribleearthquakehit/struckTangShaninthe1980s.2.你八月十五的来信我今天早晨收到了.IreceivedyourletterwhichwaswrittenonAugust15ththismorning.YourletterofAugust15threached/gottomethismorning.改变句子结构,与众不同1.唐山曾在二十世纪八十年代发生过一次改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化1.Hegotexcitedwhenheheardthenews.→___thenews,hegotexcited.2.Thegirlwenthome,becauseshewashungryandthirsty.→_________________,thegirlwenthome.3.IstudiedChinese,EnglishandPhysicsatschool.→______________________________includeChinese,EnglishandPhysics.4.Itwasearlyinthemorning.Mr.Smithwasinhisgarden.Hewaswateringflowers.→_________________,Mr.Smithwaswatering_________________.HearingHungryandthirstyThemainsubjectsIstudiedatschoolEarlyinthemorninginthegarden改变句子语序，实现句子形式多样化1.Hegotexcit使用强势句式，增强语句表现力1.Weweregladtoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.→_______weweretoseecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell!2.Radiobroadcastsdidn’tbeginuntil1920.→Itwas__________________________________________.3.Heneverspeaksabouthisownfamily.→Never__________________________________________.4.Anoticeissaying”PleaseSaveWater”onthewall.→Onthewall______________________________________.5.Thoughheisachild,heknowsalot.→___________________________________.Howgladnotuntil1920thatradiobroadcastsbegandoeshespeakabouthisownfamilyisanoticesaying”PleaseSaveWater”Childthough/asheis,heknowsalot使用强势句式，增强语句表现力1.Weweregladt影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词影响给分的因素之三：行文的流畅上下贯通、一气呵成and,then,also,besides,morever,what'smorefurthermore,inaddition,morethanthat...1.表递进２.表转折３.表因果４.表目的５.表归纳but,however,although,though,inspiteof,despiteafterall,onthecontrary,ontheotherhand...because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequentlyasaresult/consequence,onaccountof...inorderthat,sothat,forthepurposeof...ingeneral,inbrief,inshort,inconclusion,inaword,onthewhole...1.表递进but,however,although,thou如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？Manyhousesandschoolsweredestroyed.Morethanfivemillionpeoplearelivinga

hardlifenow.

Thestudentsthereneedhelpand

schoolsshouldbebuilt.

Studentscanreturntoclassessoon.如何将这几个讲述汶川地震的句子更好地连接起来，显得更有文采，

WilliamShakespeare(2008高考湖南卷书面表达)

DoyouknowHamlet?HaveyoureadTheMerchantofVenice?ThesetwogreatworksarebothwrittenbyWilliamShakespeare,myfavoriteEnglishwriterandthemanofallages!

Shakespeare,asonfromapoorfamily,amanoflittleeducation,wroteplaysandpoemsthat