初中中考英语冲刺作文书写思路详细讲解优质公开课课件

中考英语作文快速提分

中考英语作文快速提分

1英语作文有多难？难于上青天？！英语作文有多难？难于上青天？！2初三学生英语作文调查问卷

1:你的英语作文得分通常是：A.≥18

B.15~17C.10~13

D.5~10E.<102：你觉得英语作文

A.难B.还好

C.简单D.很难E.很简单3：你最常用的句子有哪些？Asweallknow，Itis+adj.+forsb+todosthif条件句Ithink...so…that…4：你最常用到的形容词有哪些？beautifulwonderfulgoodhappyimportanteasypopularcareful5：你最常用的动词有哪些？thinklearnhelphavebelikelovemakewatchreadknowgetplaysee

初三学生英语作文调查问卷

1:你的英语作文得分通常是：36：你最常用的的逻辑词是哪些？优秀：Therefore,because,although,however,furthermore,Inaword中等：because,but,if,or,and,so,first,next,after,then7：你的作文中用到过名言警句吗？如果有，用过哪些？有：Failureisthemotherofsuccess.Goodmedicinetastesbad.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Practicemakesperfect.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.AllroadsleadtoRome.8：你希望获得写作中哪些方面的帮助？优秀：句型、易错点、结构中等：句型、词汇、逻辑稍差：句型、6：你最常用的的逻辑词是哪些？4内容：扣分制（8分）1.记叙文：6w+时态2.议论文：分清要求写的是How？还是Why？语言：扣分制（8分）1.拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。

2.语法：每错扣0.5分，同上

3.标点：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。4.大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。

5.词数：50-59词之间者,每少5个词扣0.5分，词不成句不给分。

组织结构（4分）

8+8+3~48+7+2~37+7+1~26+6+0.5~1.56+5+0分值分布内容：扣分制（8分）分值分布5作文表达：在娱乐和获取信息的方式多种多样的今天,我们还有必要阅读吗?书本会消失在人类历史发展的长河吗?作文表达：6

开头第1句：开门见山，表明观点。There’snodoubtthat

beoneofthe+a.最高级+n.复数+状语（毫无疑问…）e.g.There’snodoubtthatreadingisoneofthemostimportantthingsintheworld.Thereisnodenyingthat+S.+V.

(不可否认

)e.g.Thereisnodenyingthatreadingisoneofthemostimportantthingsintheworld.开头第1句：开门见山，表明观点。7第2句：简单明了，引出话题。1.不用说……

Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…eg：Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthereisnoendtolearning2.我认为，Inmyopinion，=Frommypointofview，eg:Frommypointofview，readingcanneverdisappeareventhoughthesocietyhasdevelopedsofastinrecentyears.3.我个人认为，AsfarasIamconcerned,readingcanneverdisappearwiththefastdevelopmentofsociety.第2句：简单明了，引出话题。8逻辑清晰，层次渐进。正文逻辑清晰，层次渐进。正文9逻辑过渡词⑴排序关系firstofall;secondly;lastbutnotleast,⑵并列关系and;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwith...⑶举例关系forexample;forinstance;like;suchas，⑷转折关系but;however;while;though;onthecontrary，⑸因果关系because;since;thanksto;asaresult;thus;therefore，⑹归纳总结inaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusion,⑺递进关系asaconsequence;what’sworse;worsestill;furthermore；moreover；inaddition逻辑过渡词⑴排序关系firstofall;second10Firstofall,readinggivesussomeplacestogowhenwehavetostaywhereweare.Themorepagesyouread,theharderitistoshutthebook.观点1，另辟蹊径。Firstofall,

观点1（ving作主语）.

展开

Firstofall,readinggivesus11Wecanwalktoschoolinsteadoftakingabus.第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld一天一苹果，医生远离我。第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld勤奋的hard-working—diligent第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld立即immediatelyPracticemakesperfect.标点：每两处错误扣0.注意focus—payattentiontodoingsthAsaresult,withreadingmore,wewouldgrowintoabetterperson.能够can—beabletodosth复数+状语（毫无疑问…）大小写：每两处错误扣0.AllroadsleadtoRome.有：Failureisthemotherofsuccess.Theythemselvesshould.=Christmassongsareusedtomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoneyduringthefestiveseason.开心的happy—delightful21观点2，升华高度

What’smore,

观点2（被动语态）.

展开eg:What’smore,it'sgenerallyconsideredthatreadingdoalotofbenefittoourstudents.itnotonlycanmakeourafter-schoollifemoremeaningful,butalsoitcanexpandourhorizons.Asaresult,withreadingmore,wewouldgrowintoabetterperson.

Wecanwalktoschoolinstead1221前后照应万能呼应结尾21前后照应结尾1331结尾第一句：Tosumup,onlybydoingcanwe…第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworldwillbecomemuchmorepeacefulandharmonious.31结尾第一句：Tosumup,onlybydoi14化妆篇技巧1：妙用形容词技巧2：妙用副词技巧3：妙用动词化妆篇技巧1：妙用形容词技巧2：妙用副词技巧3：妙用动词15技巧4：被动语态技巧5：妙用从句技巧6：名言警句技巧7：学霸句型技巧4：被动语态技巧5：妙用从句技巧6：名言警句技巧7：16技巧1：妙用形容词勤奋的hard-working—diligent聪明的clever—intelligent重要的important—essential美丽的beautiful—attractive开心的happy—delightful有害的bad—beharmfulto有意义的meaningful独立的independent有责任的responsible有效果的effective有效率的efficient技巧1：妙用形容词17技巧2：妙用副词

几乎almost尤其especially立即immediately宁静地peacefully完全地completely

耐心地patiently有效果地effectively令我惊讶的是Tomysurprise技巧2：妙用副词

几乎almost18技巧3：妙用动词

知道know—cometorealize/understand

解决solve—dealwith

给give—providewith

提高improve—makeprogress期待expect—lookforwardtodoingsth.能够can—beabletodosth满意satisfy—besatisfiedwith使用use—makefulluseof扮演act—playanimportantpartin注意focus—payattentiontodoingsth做到succeedindoingsth采取措施takemeasurestodosth技巧3：妙用动词知道know—cometorea19技巧4：被动语态SomeshopownersuseChristmassongsduringthefestiveseasontomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoney.=Christmassongsareusedtomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoneyduringthefestiveseason.技巧4：被动语态SomeshopownersuseC20Heinterviewedsomeneighborsofhersinordertogetinformation.=Heinterviewedsomeneighborsofherssothathecangetinformation.Hewassoexcitedthatherealizedhisfatherarrangedthisforhim.技巧5：妙用从句

Heinterviewedsomeneighbors21健康：Oneappleaday,keepsthedoctoraway.

一天一苹果，医生远离我。友情：Afiendinneedisafriendindeed.

患难见真情。学习：Nevertoooldtolearn.

活到老，学到老。毅力：Practicemakesperfect.

熟能生巧。方法：AllroadsleadtoRome.

条条道路通罗马。Asanoldsayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者，事竟成。.”技巧6：格言警句健康：Oneappleaday,keepsthe224211.妙用插入语

Luckily,infact，,asIseeit,,forexample,

,however,,whichissoessentialforus,

技巧7：学霸句型2.妙用同位语

Hehimself...

Theythemselvesshould...

Westudentsshouldconcentrateon...

Weteenagersmustdo...4211.妙用插入语

Luckily,infact，23213.妙用倒装句

Onlybydoing…canwedosth

4.主语从句

WhatIhavelearntisthatnothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.

Whatattractmemostisthat

5.定语从句HeisthemosthonestpersonthatIhaveeverseen.

213.妙用倒装句

Onlybydoing…canwe24补妆:修改瑕疵拼写正确动词时态名词单复标点无误书写美观补妆:修改瑕疵拼写正确25

TheWaytoKeepHealthy

It'simportantforustobehealthyinourlife.Wecan'tstudyorworkwellwithout

ahealthybody.

There'remanywaystokeephealthy.

Firstofall,

weshouldkeeptaking

exerciseeveryday.Wecanwalktoschool

insteadoftakingabus.Afterschool,wecanspendanhourplayingballgames.Ifwelive

inahigh-rise,wecanwalkupstairsordownstairs.Secondly,weshouldhavea

balanced

diet.Finally,

wemustremember:Earlytobed,earlytoriseisthewaytokeephealthy,wealthyandwise.

TheWay26Thankyou!Thankyou!27

中考英语作文快速提分

中考英语作文快速提分

28英语作文有多难？难于上青天？！英语作文有多难？难于上青天？！29初三学生英语作文调查问卷

1:你的英语作文得分通常是：A.≥18

B.15~17C.10~13

D.5~10E.<102：你觉得英语作文

A.难B.还好

C.简单D.很难E.很简单3：你最常用的句子有哪些？Asweallknow，Itis+adj.+forsb+todosthif条件句Ithink...so…that…4：你最常用到的形容词有哪些？beautifulwonderfulgoodhappyimportanteasypopularcareful5：你最常用的动词有哪些？thinklearnhelphavebelikelovemakewatchreadknowgetplaysee

初三学生英语作文调查问卷

1:你的英语作文得分通常是：306：你最常用的的逻辑词是哪些？优秀：Therefore,because,although,however,furthermore,Inaword中等：because,but,if,or,and,so,first,next,after,then7：你的作文中用到过名言警句吗？如果有，用过哪些？有：Failureisthemotherofsuccess.Goodmedicinetastesbad.Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Practicemakesperfect.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.AllroadsleadtoRome.8：你希望获得写作中哪些方面的帮助？优秀：句型、易错点、结构中等：句型、词汇、逻辑稍差：句型、6：你最常用的的逻辑词是哪些？31内容：扣分制（8分）1.记叙文：6w+时态2.议论文：分清要求写的是How？还是Why？语言：扣分制（8分）1.拼写：每错扣0.5分，同一错误不重复计数。

2.语法：每错扣0.5分，同上

3.标点：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。4.大小写：每两处错误扣0.5分，但扣分总和不超过1分。

5.词数：50-59词之间者,每少5个词扣0.5分，词不成句不给分。

组织结构（4分）

8+8+3~48+7+2~37+7+1~26+6+0.5~1.56+5+0分值分布内容：扣分制（8分）分值分布32作文表达：在娱乐和获取信息的方式多种多样的今天,我们还有必要阅读吗?书本会消失在人类历史发展的长河吗?作文表达：33

开头第1句：开门见山，表明观点。There’snodoubtthat

beoneofthe+a.最高级+n.复数+状语（毫无疑问…）e.g.There’snodoubtthatreadingisoneofthemostimportantthingsintheworld.Thereisnodenyingthat+S.+V.

(不可否认

)e.g.Thereisnodenyingthatreadingisoneofthemostimportantthingsintheworld.开头第1句：开门见山，表明观点。34第2句：简单明了，引出话题。1.不用说……

Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…eg：Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthereisnoendtolearning2.我认为，Inmyopinion，=Frommypointofview，eg:Frommypointofview，readingcanneverdisappeareventhoughthesocietyhasdevelopedsofastinrecentyears.3.我个人认为，AsfarasIamconcerned,readingcanneverdisappearwiththefastdevelopmentofsociety.第2句：简单明了，引出话题。35逻辑清晰，层次渐进。正文逻辑清晰，层次渐进。正文36逻辑过渡词⑴排序关系firstofall;secondly;lastbutnotleast,⑵并列关系and;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwith...⑶举例关系forexample;forinstance;like;suchas，⑷转折关系but;however;while;though;onthecontrary，⑸因果关系because;since;thanksto;asaresult;thus;therefore，⑹归纳总结inaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusion,⑺递进关系asaconsequence;what’sworse;worsestill;furthermore；moreover；inaddition逻辑过渡词⑴排序关系firstofall;second37Firstofall,readinggivesussomeplacestogowhenwehavetostaywhereweare.Themorepagesyouread,theharderitistoshutthebook.观点1，另辟蹊径。Firstofall,

观点1（ving作主语）.

展开

Firstofall,readinggivesus38Wecanwalktoschoolinsteadoftakingabus.第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld一天一苹果，医生远离我。第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld勤奋的hard-working—diligent第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworld立即immediatelyPracticemakesperfect.标点：每两处错误扣0.注意focus—payattentiontodoingsthAsaresult,withreadingmore,wewouldgrowintoabetterperson.能够can—beabletodosth复数+状语（毫无疑问…）大小写：每两处错误扣0.AllroadsleadtoRome.有：Failureisthemotherofsuccess.Theythemselvesshould.=Christmassongsareusedtomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoneyduringthefestiveseason.开心的happy—delightful21观点2，升华高度

What’smore,

观点2（被动语态）.

展开eg:What’smore,it'sgenerallyconsideredthatreadingdoalotofbenefittoourstudents.itnotonlycanmakeourafter-schoollifemoremeaningful,butalsoitcanexpandourhorizons.Asaresult,withreadingmore,wewouldgrowintoabetterperson.

Wecanwalktoschoolinstead3921前后照应万能呼应结尾21前后照应结尾4031结尾第一句：Tosumup,onlybydoingcanwe…第二句：ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosth,theworldwillbecomemuchmorepeacefulandharmonious.31结尾第一句：Tosumup,onlybydoi41化妆篇技巧1：妙用形容词技巧2：妙用副词技巧3：妙用动词化妆篇技巧1：妙用形容词技巧2：妙用副词技巧3：妙用动词42技巧4：被动语态技巧5：妙用从句技巧6：名言警句技巧7：学霸句型技巧4：被动语态技巧5：妙用从句技巧6：名言警句技巧7：43技巧1：妙用形容词勤奋的hard-working—diligent聪明的clever—intelligent重要的important—essential美丽的beautiful—attractive开心的happy—delightful有害的bad—beharmfulto有意义的meaningful独立的independent有责任的responsible有效果的effective有效率的efficient技巧1：妙用形容词44技巧2：妙用副词

几乎almost尤其especially立即immediately宁静地peacefully完全地completely

耐心地patiently有效果地effectively令我惊讶的是Tomysurprise技巧2：妙用副词

几乎almost45技巧3：妙用动词

知道know—cometorealize/understand

解决solve—dealwith

给give—providewith

提高improve—makeprogress期待expect—lookforwardtodoingsth.能够can—beabletodosth满意satisfy—besatisfiedwith使用use—makefulluseof扮演act—playanimportantpartin注意focus—payattentiontodoingsth做到succeedindoingsth采取措施takemeasurestodosth技巧3：妙用动词知道know—cometorea46技巧4：被动语态SomeshopownersuseChristmassongsduringthefestiveseasontomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoney.=Christmassongsareusedtomakeusmorecarelesswithourmoneyduringthefestiveseason.技巧4：被动语态SomeshopownersuseC47Heinterviewedsomeneighborsofhersinordertogetinformation.=Heinterviewedsomeneighborsofherssothathecangetinformation.Hewassoexcitedthatherealizedhisfatherarrangedthisforhim.技巧5：妙用从句

Heinterviewedsomeneighbors48健康：Oneappleaday,keepsthedoctoraway.

一天一苹果，医生远离我。友情：Afiendinneedisafriendindeed.

患难见真情。学习：Nevertoooldtolearn.

活到老，学到老。毅力：Pract