高中英语-新高考新题型-读后续写课件

Continuationwriting读后续写

Continuationwriting1camping真题回放camping真题回放2第二节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Requirementsforwriting第二节：读后续写（满分25分）Requirementsfo3OneweekendinJuly,

Janeandherhusband,

Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbya

lakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,Janewassoangry

thatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”and

walkedaway.

OneweekendinJuly,

Jan4

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehad

climbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”

Withnopathtofollow,5Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Noreply.Ifonlyshehad6Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhere

atadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoa

stream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Janeroseatthebreakofday,7Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janehearda

helicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffher

yellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Asshepickedherwaycarefull8Paragraph1Butnohelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakandJanewokeup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph19注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。注意：10whenwherewhowhathowwhyAstorysixelementsofastory（6要素）whenwherewhowhathowwhyAstory11whenwhowhatwhereJane&TomcampovernightbyalakeintheforestoneweekendinJulyReadforbasicinformationWhathappenednext?whenJane&Tomcampovernight12ReadforplotstimeWhatJanedidHowJanefeltonthewayAftershehadclimbed…AsnightwasbeginningtofallAtthebreakofthedayAsshepickedherwayAfewminuteslaterquarreledwaslosthadtostopforthenightfoundfoodandwaterheardahelicopterflagherblouseangryhelplessregretfuljoyfulexcitedupsethopefulReadforplotstimeWhatJaned13Para.1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Para.2:Itwasdaybreakwhenshewokeup.

Q1:Q2:Q3:Q1:Q2:Q3:HowdidJanefeel?Whatcouldshedo?/Whatdifficultiesdidshemeet?Whatwouldshethinkaboutduringthenight?WhatwouldJanedoafterwakingup?Wouldshebesaved?Whowouldcometosave?Howwouldtheyfeelwhenmeetingagain?Whatwouldtheydo?makeitlogical(合逻辑的）PredicttowriteShefellasleep.whatwouldtheylearnfromthisexperience?

Q4:Para.1:Butnomorehelicopte14

ChecktheunderlinedwordsPara.1:

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.1.Janewasupsetbutdeterminedtogooutoftheforest.2.Shewantedtoclimbupatreetoflagheryellowblousebutfailed.3.JanemissedTom.4.shefellasleep.10underlinedkeywords:Jane,Tom,walked,climbed,lake,stream,

helicopter,

yellowblouse,

tohergreatjoy,

atadistancePara.2:Itwasdaybreakwhenshewokeup.1.Janefoundsomeberriestoeatanddrankwater.2.ShesawTomcoming.3.Theywereexcitedtoseeeachotheragainandapologized.4.Theyreflected（反思)thatunderstandingisofimportance.walkedforawhileandfounddownfromthehelicopterChecktheunderlinedwordsPar15Polishthesentences1.Janewasupsetbutdeterminedtogooutoftheforest.(upsetasshewas,she...)2.Shewantedtoclimbupatreetoflagheryellowblousebutfailed.(定语从句)3.JanemissedTom.(动词ing形式做伴随状语)4.shefellasleep.（with结构）Shewantedtoclimbupatree，______turnedouttobeafailure.

Upsetasshewas,shedeterminedtogooutoftheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,

missingTomatadistance.Shefellasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.whichPolishthesentences1.Janewas161.Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.2.Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrossherface.3.Hewaswildwithjoy.4.Hestoodsilently,withtearsrollingdownhischeeks.5.IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.6.Fearfloodedoverhim.AppreciatemoresentencesAppreciatemoresentences17时间先后：later,soon,then,withtimegoingby,eventually因果或转折关系:so,therefore,instead,however,suddenly递进关系what‘smore,what’sworse,

并列关系Besides,meanwhile,atthesametimeMaketheparagraphcoherent时间先后：later,soon,then,witht18PossibleanswerforPara.7Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.upsetasJanewas,shedidn'tgiveup.Instead,shewantedtoclimbupatreetoflagheryellowblouse,whichturnedouttobeafailure.Lonelinessfloodedoverher.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownbesideastone,missingherhusbandTom.“Ifonlyhecouldbewithme.”Janemurmured.Justatthattime,shesuddenlyrealizeditwasherfoolishdecisionthatmadeherselfintrouble.shecouldnothelpburstingintotears.SoonJanefellasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.PossibleanswerforPara.7But19ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Weakasshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.

Tohergreatjoy,a

helicopterwasflyingoverheadagainandagain.Eagerandexcited,sheflaggedher

yellowblouseandsparednoefforttoyellsoastoattractothers’attention.Fortunately,shewaseventuallynoticedandbroughtintothehelicopter.There,shesawherhusband,amanstaringather,wearinganexpressionofrelief.Astightlyaspossible,shehuggedhimandwastoothrilledtosayanything.Besides,theyagreednevertoquarrelagain,determinedtolivethelifetothefullest.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewoke20writingstepsreadandunderstandpredictthestorywriteanoutline

checktheunderlinedwords

polishthesentences

addcoherentwords

writingstepsreadandundersta21AssessmentCriteria

forWriting

Items（条目）Levels（档次）Cohesion（与所给短文和段落开头衔接融合程度）☆☆☆☆☆Useofunderlinedwords（下划线词汇使用情况）☆☆☆☆☆Content（内容的丰富性）☆☆☆☆☆Accuracyoflanguage（语法结构和词汇使用的准确性）☆☆☆☆☆Varietyoflanguage（语法结构和词汇使用的丰富性）☆☆☆☆☆Coherence（上下文以及语句间的连贯性）☆☆☆☆☆AssessmentCriteriaforWritin22Homework1.Finishwriting.2.Shareyourwritingwithyourclassmates.Homework1.Finishwriting.23Continuationwriting读后续写

Continuationwriting24camping真题回放camping真题回放25第二节：读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。注意：所续写短文的词数应为150左右；应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Requirementsforwriting第二节：读后续写（满分25分）Requirementsfo26OneweekendinJuly,

Janeandherhusband,

Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbya

lakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,Janewassoangry

thatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp”and

walkedaway.

OneweekendinJuly,

Jan27

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehad

climbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”

Withnopathtofollow,28Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Noreply.Ifonlyshehad29Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhere

atadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoa

stream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Janeroseatthebreakofday,30Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janehearda

helicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffher

yellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.Asshepickedherwaycarefull31Paragraph1Butnohelicoptercameanditwasgettingdarkagain.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2ItwasdaybreakandJanewokeup.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph132注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。注意：33whenwherewhowhathowwhyAstorysixelementsofastory（6要素）whenwherewhowhathowwhyAstory34whenwhowhatwhereJane&TomcampovernightbyalakeintheforestoneweekendinJulyReadforbasicinformationWhathappenednext?whenJane&Tomcampovernight35ReadforplotstimeWhatJanedidHowJanefeltonthewayAftershehadclimbed…AsnightwasbeginningtofallAtthebreakofthedayAsshepickedherwayAfewminuteslaterquarreledwaslosthadtostopforthenightfoundfoodandwaterheardahelicopterflagherblouseangryhelplessregretfuljoyfulexcitedupsethopefulReadforplotstimeWhatJaned36Para.1:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Para.2:Itwasdaybreakwhenshewokeup.

Q1:Q2:Q3:Q1:Q2:Q3:HowdidJanefeel?Whatcouldshedo?/Whatdifficultiesdidshemeet?Whatwouldshethinkaboutduringthenight?WhatwouldJanedoafterwakingup?Wouldshebesaved?Whowouldcometosave?Howwouldtheyfeelwhenmeetingagain?Whatwouldtheydo?makeitlogical(合逻辑的）PredicttowriteShefellasleep.whatwouldtheylearnfromthisexperience?

Q4:Para.1:Butnomorehelicopte37

ChecktheunderlinedwordsPara.1:

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.1.Janewasupsetbutdeterminedtogooutoftheforest.2.Shewantedtoclimbupatreetoflagheryellowblousebutfailed.3.JanemissedTom.4.shefellasleep.10underlinedkeywords:Jane,Tom,walked,climbed,lake,stream,

helicopter,

yellowblouse,

tohergreatjoy,

atadistancePara.2:Itwasdaybreakwhenshewokeup.1.Janefoundsomeberriestoeatanddrankwater.2.ShesawTomcoming.3.Theywereexcitedtoseeeachotheragainandapologized.4.Theyreflected（反思)thatunderstandingisofimportance.walkedforawhileandfounddownfromthehelicopterChecktheunderlinedwordsPar38Polishthesentences1.Janewasupsetbutdeterminedtogooutoftheforest.(upsetasshewas,she...)2.Shewantedtoclimbupatreetoflagheryellowblousebutfailed.(定语从句)3.JanemissedTom.(动词ing形式做伴随状语)4.shefellasleep.（with结构）Shewantedtoclimbupatree，______turnedouttobeafailure.

Upsetasshewas,shedeterminedtogooutoftheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,

missingTomatadistance.Shefellasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.whichPolishthesentences1.Janewas391.Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.2.Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrossherface.3.Hewaswildwithjoy.4.Hestoodsilently,withtearsrollingdownhischeeks.5.IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.6.Fearfloodedoverhim.AppreciatemoresentencesAppreciatemoresentences40时间先后：later,soon,then,withtimegoingby,eventually因果或转折关系:so,therefore,instead,however,suddenly递进关系what‘smore,what’sworse,

并列关系Besides,meanwhile,atthesametimeMaketheparagraphcoherent时间先后：later,soon,then,witht41PossibleanswerforPara.7Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.upsetasJanewas,shedidn'tgiveup.Instead,shewantedtoclimbupatreetoflagheryellowblouse,whichturnedouttobeafailure.Lonelinessfloodedoverher.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownbesideastone,missingherhusb