高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件

Improveyourwriting高三作文专题课Improveyourwriting高三作文专题课高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件2Learningobjectives

Attheendofthisclass,youwillbeableto:

1.identifyproblemsrelatedtosupportingdetails,cohesion&coherence（衔接与连贯）,wordsandsentencevarietyinapassage;2.knowhowtoimproveapassagebyaddingdetails,makingitmorecohesiveandcoherentandvaryingthelanguage;

3.improveapassagewithsomeproblems.LearningobjectivesAtthe3Whataretheproblems？

Structure

ThreepartsTopicsentencesContentKeypointsSupportingdetailsLanguage

Correct,cohesiveandcoherent(衔接连贯),variedWhataretheproblems？Structu4Whatcanbedoneifyourwriting…？doesnothaveenoughsupportingdetailsforeachkeypoint;isnotcohesiveorcoherent(衔接连贯)doesnothavevariedlanguage

(dullandrepetitive重复的)Whatcanbedoneifyourwriti5SupportingdetailsHowtoaddsupportingdetails？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystoaddsupportingdetails.SupportingdetailsHowtoadds6Tomakethesentenceslongerandmorespecific,wecan:1.usespecificwords2.giveexamples3.explainreasons4.givefactsasevidence…SummaryTomakethesentenceslongera7(1)Ihatethebadweathertoday.(2)Myfatherisawarm-heartedman.(3)SquaredancingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinChina.Haveatry!(1)Ihatethebadweathertod8Cohesionandcoherence（衔接与连贯）

Howtomakeyourpassagecohesiveandcoherent？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystomakethepassagemorecohesiveandcoherent.Cohesionandcoherence（衔接与连贯）9Tomakethelanguagemorecohesiveandcoherent,we:1.canusetransitions（衔接词、短语）2.mustpayattentiontothelogicalrelationship···3.shouldmakesurethetopicisconsistent…SummaryTomakethelanguagemorecohe10Onlinecourseshavesomeadvantages.Theyareconvenient,becauseyoucanlearnsomethingthatcannotbegainedinclassroom.Theyhavedisadvantages,too.Manythingshavedisadvantages,soweshouldtakethemseriously.Haveatry!Onlinecourseshavesomeadvan11VariedlanguageHowtovarythelanguage？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystovarythelanguageinapassage.VariedlanguageHowtovarythe12Toavoiddullandrepetitivelanguage,wecanuse:1.pronouns2.synonyms3.differentsentencepatterns…SummaryToavoiddullandrepetitivel13Haveatry！

Doingsportsisausefulwaytoreducestress.Doingsportshelpsyouforgetthetroubleandmakesyourefreshed.Talkingwithyourfriendsisalsoausefulwaytoreducestress.Haveatry！Doings14SummarySummary15ImprovethewritingReadthepassage,findoutthepossibleproblemsanddecidewhatkindofproblemstheyare.①lackssupportingdetails②isnotcohesiveorcoherent③thelanguageisrepetitiveanddull2.Improvethepassage3.Discussingroupsandcollectyourideas.ImprovethewritingReadthepa16PresentationSharewhatyouhaveimproved.2.Explainthereasonswhyyourimproveitinthisway.PresentationSharewhatyouha17Homework

假定你是李华，你校学生会刚刚举办了“跳蚤市场（fleamarket）”活动。你的外国笔友Jenny对此很感兴趣，于是写邮件向你了解基本情况。请你给她写一封回信，简要介绍这次活动。要点如下：1.活动的目的和内容；2.你的心得体会。

注意：100词左右。1.Writeapassage.2.Findapartnerandpeer-edit（同伴互改）thepassageyou’vewritten.

Homework假定你是李华，你校学生会刚刚举办18Thankyou!Thankyou!Improveyourwriting高三作文专题课Improveyourwriting高三作文专题课高中英语：高三英语作文专题课课件21Learningobjectives

Attheendofthisclass,youwillbeableto:

1.identifyproblemsrelatedtosupportingdetails,cohesion&coherence（衔接与连贯）,wordsandsentencevarietyinapassage;2.knowhowtoimproveapassagebyaddingdetails,makingitmorecohesiveandcoherentandvaryingthelanguage;

3.improveapassagewithsomeproblems.LearningobjectivesAtthe22Whataretheproblems？

Structure

ThreepartsTopicsentencesContentKeypointsSupportingdetailsLanguage

Correct,cohesiveandcoherent(衔接连贯),variedWhataretheproblems？Structu23Whatcanbedoneifyourwriting…？doesnothaveenoughsupportingdetailsforeachkeypoint;isnotcohesiveorcoherent(衔接连贯)doesnothavevariedlanguage

(dullandrepetitive重复的)Whatcanbedoneifyourwriti24SupportingdetailsHowtoaddsupportingdetails？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystoaddsupportingdetails.SupportingdetailsHowtoadds25Tomakethesentenceslongerandmorespecific,wecan:1.usespecificwords2.giveexamples3.explainreasons4.givefactsasevidence…SummaryTomakethesentenceslongera26(1)Ihatethebadweathertoday.(2)Myfatherisawarm-heartedman.(3)SquaredancingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularinChina.Haveatry!(1)Ihatethebadweathertod27Cohesionandcoherence（衔接与连贯）

Howtomakeyourpassagecohesiveandcoherent？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystomakethepassagemorecohesiveandcoherent.Cohesionandcoherence（衔接与连贯）28Tomakethelanguagemorecohesiveandcoherent,we:1.canusetransitions（衔接词、短语）2.mustpayattentiontothelogicalrelationship···3.shouldmakesurethetopicisconsistent…SummaryTomakethelanguagemorecohe29Onlinecourseshavesomeadvantages.Theyareconvenient,becauseyoucanlearnsomethingthatcannotbegainedinclassroom.Theyhavedisadvantages,too.Manythingshavedisadvantages,soweshouldtakethemseriously.Haveatry!Onlinecourseshavesomeadvan30VariedlanguageHowtovarythelanguage？Workingroups,comparethesentencesandsummarizethewaystovarythelanguageinapassage.VariedlanguageHowtovarythe31Toavoiddullandrepetitivelanguage,wecanuse:1.pronouns2.synonyms3.differentsentencepatterns…SummaryToavoiddullandrepetitivel32Haveatry！

Doingsportsisausefulwaytoreducestress.Doingsportshelpsyouforgetthetroubleandmakesyourefreshed.Talkingwithyourfriendsisalsoausefulwaytoreducestress.Haveatry！Doings33SummarySummary34ImprovethewritingReadthepassage,findoutthepossibleproblemsanddecidewhatkindofp