最新-考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误及句子升级-课件

考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误中式英语主谓不一致句子不完整句子成分多余时态语态使用错误词性理解错误单词使用错误倒装平行结构错误从句使用错误错误大杂烩考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误中式英语词性理解错误1中式英语1.Environmentalpollutionhurtspeople’shealth.Environmentalpollutionisphysicallyharmful/detrimental.中式英语1.Environmentalpollution2中式英语2.Non-stopstudyingknowledgeisveryimportant.Itisofvitalimportancetokeepacquiringknowledge.中式英语2.Non-stopstudyingknowl3中式英语3.Ifyoudonotpayattentiontoenvironmentalproblems,youmustsufferhugelosssoonerorlater.Ifenvironmentalproblemsarenotgivenenoughattention,hugelossisinevitable.中式英语3.Ifyoudonotpayatten4中式英语4.Pollutionmakesuscannotbreathefreshair.Pollutiondisablesustobreathefreshair.中式英语4.Pollutionmakesuscann5中式英语5.Pleasegivemeareplyifyouareconvenient.Pleasegivemeareplyifitisconvenientforyou.中式英语5.Pleasegivemeareply6中式英语7.Theoldareinevitabletohavegenerationgapwiththeirchildren.Itisinevitablefortheoldtohavegenerationgapwiththeirchildren.中式英语7.Theoldareinevitable7中式英语Overseasstudymakesstudents’eyeswider.Overseasstudywidens/broadensstudents’vision/horizon.中式英语Overseasstudymakesstude8中式英语Thereasonsforthechangehave5points.5reasonsleadto/bringabout/resultinthechange.中式英语Thereasonsforthechange9主谓不一致Smoking,coupledwith/aswellasalcohol,arephysicallydetrimental.Smoking,coupledwith/aswellasalcohol,isphysicallydetrimental.主谓不一致Smoking,coupledwith/a10主谓不一致Theproblemswhicharebroughtaboutbyraisingpetsishardtosolve.Theproblemswhicharebroughtaboutbyraisingpetsarehardtosolve.主谓不一致Theproblemswhicharebr11主谓不一致Television,alongwithothermeansofcommunication,helpustokeepinformedaboutthelatestnews.Television,alongwithothermeansofcommunication,helpsustokeepinformedaboutthelatestnews.主谓不一致Television,alongwithot12主谓不一致Oneofthemostpressingproblemconfrontinghumanbeingsaretheoldageboom.Oneofthemostpressingproblemsconfrontinghumanbeingsistheoldageboom.主谓不一致Oneofthemostpressing13句子不完整Itiseasyforpeoplewhooverweighttogetheartattack.Itiseasyforpeoplewhoareoverweighttogetheartattack.Itiseasyfortheoverweighttogetheartattack.句子不完整Itiseasyforpeoplewho14句子不完整Iwilldiscussindetailinthefollowingparagraphs.Iwilldiscusstheissueindetailinthefollowingparagraphs.句子不完整Iwilldiscussindetail15句子不完整ItisunclearRedBullcanhelpreviveenergy.ItisunclearwhetherRedBullcanhelpreviveenergy.句子不完整ItisunclearRedBullca16句子不完整Theoutputof2019ismorethan2019.Theoutputof2019ismorethanthatof2019.句子不完整Theoutputof2019ismor17句子不完整Itisadvertisementmakessomesportsbrandsfamousworldwide,suchasNikeandAdidas.Itisadvertisementthatmakessomesportsbrandsfamousworldwide,suchasNikeandAdidas.句子不完整Itisadvertisementmakes18句子成分多余Humanraceneedwaterandairtosurviveineveryday.Humanraceneedwaterandairtosurviveeveryday.句子成分多余Humanraceneedwateran19句子成分多余Thereare70%childrenthinkthatthemainaimoftheireducationshouldbetodevelopthemselves.70%childrenthinkthatthemainaimoftheireducationshouldbetodevelopthemselves.句子成分多余Thereare70%childrent20句子成分多余Thereisasocialphenomenonhasarisenthatfamiliesarenotascloseasbefore.Asocialphenomenonhasarisenthatfamiliesarenotascloseasbefore.句子成分多余Thereisasocialphenom21句子成分多余AlthoughwithInternet,itisconvenienttodosomesearchjobs,butchildrenaremorelikelytobeaddictedwithon-linegames,suchasCS.AlthoughwithInternet,itisconvenienttodosomesearchjobs,childrenaremorelikelytobeaddictedwithon-linegames,suchasCS句子成分多余AlthoughwithInternet,22句子成分多余Itisatruefactthatloveistime-consuming.Itisafactthatloveistime-consuming.句子成分多余Itisatruefactthatl23句子成分多余Fromwhatwehavediscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawafinalconclusionthatloveistime-consuming.Fromwhatwehavediscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawaconclusionthatloveistime-consuming.句子成分多余Fromwhatwehavediscus24时态语态使用错误Obesityisaproblemtomostteenagersforyears.Obesityhasbeenaproblemtomostteenagersforyears.时态语态使用错误Obesityisaproblemt25时态语态使用错误Thetimespentonsleepingandworkingshouldbalanceeveryday.Thetimespentonsleepingandworkingshouldbebalancedeveryday.时态语态使用错误Thetimespentonslee26时态语态使用错误Theinternationaltouristindustryisbooming,drivingbytheadvancedtransportation.Theinternationaltouristindustryisbooming,drivenbytheadvancedtransportation.时态语态使用错误Theinternationaltour27时态语态使用错误Comparingwiththeadvancedwesterncountries,Chinaisabitslowininformationtechnology.Comparedwiththeadvancedwesterncountries,Chinaisabitslowininformationtechnology.时态语态使用错误Comparingwiththeadv28时态语态使用错误Withtheopeninguptotheoutsideworld,greaterchangeshavebeentakenplaceinpeople’sattitudetowardsfamilyandmarriage.Withtheopeninguptotheoutsideworld,greaterchangeshavetakenplaceinpeople’sattitudetowardsfamilyandmarriage.时态语态使用错误Withtheopeningupto29词性理解错误Somepeopleconsiderthatcomputerscaninsteadhumanbeings.Somepeopleconsiderthatcomputerscanreplacehumanbeings.词性理解错误Somepeopleconsidertha30词性理解错误Manyteenagersareunwillingtostopsmokingdespitetheyknowitisphysicallydetrimental.Manyteenagersareunwillingtostopsmokingthoughtheyknowitisphysicallydetrimental.词性理解错误Manyteenagersareunwil31词性理解错误Environmentalpollutioncanleadtodamageacountry’seconomy.Environmentalpollutioncanleadtodamagingacountry’seconomy.词性理解错误Environmentalpollution32词性理解错误Internethassomedisadvantages,forexample,physicallydetrimental,negativeimpactontheyouthandpersonalinformationdisclosure.Internethassomedisadvantages,suchasphysicaldetriment,negativeimpactontheyouthandpersonalinformationdisclosure.词性理解错误Internethassomedisadv33词性理解错误Youngadultsaremorepossiblytobeaddictedwithsmokingthanadults.Youngadultsaremorepossibletobeaddictedwithsmokingthanadults.Youngadultsaremorelikelytobeaddictedwithsmokingthanadults.词性理解错误Youngadultsaremorepo34单词使用错误Thegovernmentwillcostalargesumofmoneyonthemasstransitsystem.Thegovernmentwillspendalargesumofmoneyonthemasstransitsystem.单词使用错误Thegovernmentwillcost35单词使用错误Hefailedashelackedofadequateexperience.Hefailedashewaslackof/inadequateexperience.单词使用错误Hefailedashelackedo36倒装平行结构错误SopopularInternetisthatitsimpactondailylivesshouldnotbeignored.SopopularisInternetthatitsimpactondailylivesshouldnotbeignored.倒装平行结构错误SopopularInternetis37倒装平行结构错误Onlybythecooperationwecouldsolvetheproblem.Onlybythecooperationcouldwesolvetheproblem.倒装平行结构错误Onlybythecooperatio38错误InChina,becauseitstradition,theoldismostraisedbytheirchildren.InChina,becauseofitstradition,theoldaremostlysupportedbytheirchildren.错误InChina,becauseitstradit39错误Itcanimaginethatinthenearfuture,thelocalresidentswillhaveabetterlife.Itcanbeimaginedthat,inthenearfuture,thelocalresidentswillhaveabetterlife.错误Itcanimaginethatinthen40用句升级练习互联网是一个公众感兴趣和关注的话题。Internetisatopicthatpeopleareinterestedinandpayattentionto.Internetisatopicofpublicinterestandconcern.用句升级练习互联网是一个公众感兴趣和关注的话题。41没有比接受教育更重要的事。Nothingismorecrucialthantoreceiveeducation.没有什么比保护环境更重要的了。没有比接受教育更重要的事。42我们再怎么强调保护环境的重要性也不为过。Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectiontoomuch.我们再怎么强调合作的重要性也不为过。我们再怎么强调经济发展的重要性也不为过。我们再怎么强调锻炼身体的重要性也不为过。我们再怎么强调保护环境的重要性也不为过。43不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

Itisundoubtablethatourlivingqualitieshavegonefrombadtoworse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。44我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。Weshouldsparenoefforttobeautifyourenvironment.

我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。45我们必须重视这个问题。Wemustlayemphasisonthisproblem.我们必须重视这个问题。46越来越多的专家开始相信这种情形会对当地经济增长产生不利影响。Expertsinincreasingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatsuchsituationwouldproduceunfavorableeffectsoneconomicgrowthoflocalareas.越来越多的专家开始相信这种情形会对当地经济增长产生不利影响。47人们对此意见不一。Differentpeoplehavedifferentideasaboutthis.Ideasonthisissue/topicvaryfrompersontoperson.人们对此意见不一。48这些活动大大提高了我们的环保意识。Theseactivitiesimproveourawarenessofenvironmentprotectiongreatly.Theseactivitiescontributemuchtoourawarenessofenvironmentprotection.这些活动大大提高了我们的环保意识。49要是团队里的每个人都竭尽全力,他们的工作效率会有很大提高。Ifallthestaffsparenoefforts,theworkingefficiencywillbesharplyimproved.Workingefficiencywouldbeconsiderablyenhancedbytheintenseteamworkspirit.要是团队里的每个人都竭尽全力,他们的工作效率会有很大提高。50句型升级许多专家指出体育锻炼与身体健康息息相关。Manyexpertspointoutthatexercisecontributesdirectlytoaperson’sphysicalfitness.句型升级许多专家指出体育锻炼与身体健康息息相关。51句型升级考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有效的措施。Inviewoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.句型升级考虑到问题的严重性，在事态进一步恶化之前，必须采取有52任何忽视这一点的政府都将在某种程度上付出沉重的代价。Anygovernmentwhichisblindtothispointmaypayaheavypricetosomeextent.

任何忽视这一点的政府都将在某种程度上付出沉重的代价。53污染对我们的生存造成巨大威胁。Pollutionposesagreatthreattoourexistence.污染对我们的生存造成巨大威胁。54没有人能否认这一重要事实：最近几年交通问题在全世界受到了普遍关注。越来越多的专家开始认为这种状况将对当地的经济发展产生不利影响。

Noonecandenytheessentialfactthatthetrafficproblemoverthelastyearshascausedwidepublicconcernallovertheworld.Expertsinincreasingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatsuchsituationwouldproduceunfavorableeffectsoneconomicgrowthoflocalareas.没有人能否认这一重要事实：最近几年交通问题在全世界受到了普遍55任何家长都应非常重视孩子在学习与玩耍之间的平衡。Anyparentshouldplaceconsiderableemphasisontheirchildrentokeepthebalancebetweenplayandstudy.任何家长都应非常重视孩子在学习与玩耍之间的平衡。56随着健康和生活条件改善，人们的寿命快速延长。Withtheimprovementofhealthandlivingconditions,people’slifebecomeslongerquickly.Withtheimprovementofhealthandlivingconditions,lifespanextendsquickly.随着健康和生活条件改善，人们的寿命快速延长。57在中国，由于传统的原因，老人主要是由他们的子女赡养。InChina,becauseofthetraditionalreasons,theoldaremainlyraisedbytheirchildren.InChina,traditionally,theoldaremainlysupportedbytheirchildren.在中国，由于传统的原因，老人主要是由他们的子女赡养。58老年人需要的是更多的精神安慰。Oldmenneedmorespiritualcomfort.Whattheseniorcitizensneedismorementalcomfort.最新-考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误及句子升级-课件59很显然，穿校服会使校园生活变得乏味。Obviously,wearinguniformmakescampuslifeboring.Itisobviousthatuniformmakescampuslifedull.很显然，穿校服会使校园生活变得乏味。60最近几年，网上购物正以惊人的速度流行开来。Inrecentyears,on-lineshoppinghasbeenpopularatanamazingspeed.Inrecentyears,on-lineshoppinghasbeengainingitspopularityatanamazingrate.最新-考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误及句子升级-课件61为了找出解决这一问题更好的办法，有必要来分析一下其根源。Inordertofindabetterwaytosolvetheproblem,itisnecessarytoanalyzewhereitcomesfrom.Inordertofindabetterwaytoeradicatetheproblem,itisofnecessitytoanalyzeitsroots.最新-考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误及句子升级-课件62考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误中式英语主谓不一致句子不完整句子成分多余时态语态使用错误词性理解错误单词使用错误倒装平行结构错误从句使用错误错误大杂烩考研英语写作遣词用句常见错误中式英语词性理解错误63中式英语1.Environmentalpollutionhurtspeople’shealth.Environmentalpollutionisphysicallyharmful/detrimental.中式英语1.Environmentalpollution64中式英语2.Non-stopstudyingknowledgeisveryimportant.Itisofvitalimportancetokeepacquiringknowledge.中式英语2.Non-stopstudyingknowl65中式英语3.Ifyoudonotpayattentiontoenvironmentalproblems,youmustsufferhugelosssoonerorlater.Ifenvironmentalproblemsarenotgivenenoughattention,hugelossisinevitable.中式英语3.Ifyoudonotpayatten66中式英语4.Pollutionmakesuscannotbreathefreshair.Pollutiondisablesustobreathefreshair.中式英语4.Pollutionmakesuscann67中式英语5.Pleasegivemeareplyifyouareconvenient.Pleasegivemeareplyifitisconvenientforyou.中式英语5.Pleasegivemeareply68中式英语7.Theoldareinevitabletohavegenerationgapwiththeirchildren.Itisinevitablefortheoldtohavegenerationgapwiththeirchildren.中式英语7.Theoldareinevitable69中式英语Overseasstudymakesstudents’eyeswider.Overseasstudywidens/broadensstudents’vision/horizon.中式英语Overseasstudymakesstude70中式英语Thereasonsforthechangehave5points.5reasonsleadto/bringabout/resultinthechange.中式英语Thereasonsforthechange71主谓不一致Smoking,coupledwith/aswellasalcohol,arephysicallydetrimental.Smoking,coupledwith/aswellasalcohol,isphysicallydetrimental.主谓不一致Smoking,coupledwith/a72主谓不一致Theproblemswhicharebroughtaboutbyraisingpetsishardtosolve.Theproblemswhicharebroughtaboutbyraisingpetsarehardtosolve.主谓不一致Theproblemswhicharebr73主谓不一致Television,alongwithothermeansofcommunication,helpustokeepinformedaboutthelatestnews.Television,alongwithothermeansofcommunication,helpsustokeepinformedaboutthelatestnews.主谓不一致Television,alongwithot74主谓不一致Oneofthemostpressingproblemconfrontinghumanbeingsaretheoldageboom.Oneofthemostpressingproblemsconfrontinghumanbeingsistheoldageboom.主谓不一致Oneofthemostpressing75句子不完整Itiseasyforpeoplewhooverweighttogetheartattack.Itiseasyforpeoplewhoareoverweighttogetheartattack.Itiseasyfortheoverweighttogetheartattack.句子不完整Itiseasyforpeoplewho76句子不完整Iwilldiscussindetailinthefollowingparagraphs.Iwilldiscusstheissueindetailinthefollowingparagraphs.句子不完整Iwilldiscussindetail77句子不完整ItisunclearRedBullcanhelpreviveenergy.ItisunclearwhetherRedBullcanhelpreviveenergy.句子不完整ItisunclearRedBullca78句子不完整Theoutputof2019ismorethan2019.Theoutputof2019ismorethanthatof2019.句子不完整Theoutputof2019ismor79句子不完整Itisadvertisementmakessomesportsbrandsfamousworldwide,suchasNikeandAdidas.Itisadvertisementthatmakessomesportsbrandsfamousworldwide,suchasNikeandAdidas.句子不完整Itisadvertisementmakes80句子成分多余Humanraceneedwaterandairtosurviveineveryday.Humanraceneedwaterandairtosurviveeveryday.句子成分多余Humanraceneedwateran81句子成分多余Thereare70%childrenthinkthatthemainaimoftheireducationshouldbetodevelopthemselves.70%childrenthinkthatthemainaimoftheireducationshouldbetodevelopthemselves.句子成分多余Thereare70%childrent82句子成分多余Thereisasocialphenomenonhasarisenthatfamiliesarenotascloseasbefore.Asocialphenomenonhasarisenthatfamiliesarenotascloseasbefore.句子成分多余Thereisasocialphenom83句子成分多余AlthoughwithInternet,itisconvenienttodosomesearchjobs,butchildrenaremorelikelytobeaddictedwithon-linegames,suchasCS.AlthoughwithInternet,itisconvenienttodosomesearchjobs,childrenaremorelikelytobeaddictedwithon-linegames,suchasCS句子成分多余AlthoughwithInternet,84句子成分多余Itisatruefactthatloveistime-consuming.Itisafactthatloveistime-consuming.句子成分多余Itisatruefactthatl85句子成分多余Fromwhatwehavediscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawafinalconclusionthatloveistime-consuming.Fromwhatwehavediscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawaconclusionthatloveistime-consuming.句子成分多余Fromwhatwehavediscus86时态语态使用错误Obesityisaproblemtomostteenagersforyears.Obesityhasbeenaproblemtomostteenagersforyears.时态语态使用错误Obesityisaproblemt87时态语态使用错误Thetimespentonsleepingandworkingshouldbalanceeveryday.Thetimespentonsleepingandworkingshouldbebalancedeveryday.时态语态使用错误Thetimespentonslee88时态语态使用错误Theinternationaltouristindustryisbooming,drivingbytheadvancedtransportation.Theinternationaltouristindustryisbooming,drivenbytheadvancedtransportation.时态语态使用错误Theinternationaltour89时态语态使用错误Comparingwiththeadvancedwesterncountries,Chinaisabitslowininformationtechnology.Comparedwiththeadvancedwesterncountries,Chinaisabitslowininformationtechnology.时态语态使用错误Comparingwiththeadv90时态语态使用错误Withtheopeninguptotheoutsideworld,greaterchangeshavebeentakenplaceinpeople’sattitudetowardsfamilyandmarriage.Withtheopeninguptotheoutsideworld,greaterchangeshavetakenplaceinpeople’sattitudetowardsfamilyandmarriage.时态语态使用错误Withtheopeningupto91词性理解错误Somepeopleconsiderthatcomputerscaninsteadhumanbeings.Somepeopleconsiderthatcomputerscanreplacehumanbeings.词性理解错误Somepeopleconsidertha92词性理解错误Manyteenagersareunwillingtostopsmokingdespitetheyknowitisphysicallydetrimental.Manyteenagersareunwillingtostopsmokingthoughtheyknowitisphysicallydetrimental.词性理解错误Manyteenagersareunwil93词性理解错误Environmentalpollutioncanleadtodamageacountry’seconomy.Environmentalpollutioncanleadtodamagingacountry’seconomy.词性理解错误Environmentalpollution94词性理解错误Internethassomedisadvantages,forexample,physicallydetrimental,negativeimpactontheyouthandpersonalinformationdisclosure.Internethassomedisadvantages,suchasphysicaldetriment,negativeimpactontheyouthandpersonalinformationdisclosure.词性理解错误Internethassomedisadv95词性理解错误Youngadultsaremorepossiblytobeaddictedwithsmokingthanadults.Youngadultsaremorepossibletobeaddictedwithsmokingthanadults.Youngadultsaremorelikelytobeaddictedwithsmokingthanadults.词性理解错误Youngadultsaremorepo96单词使用错误Thegovernmentwillcostalargesumofmoneyonthemasstransitsystem.Thegovernmentwillspendalargesumofmoneyonthemasstransitsystem.单词使用错误Thegovernmentwillcost97单词使用错误Hefailedashelackedofadequateexperience.Hefailedashewaslackof/inadequateexperience.单词使用错误Hefailedashelackedo98倒装平行结构错误SopopularInternetisthatitsimpactondailylivesshouldnotbeignored.SopopularisInternetthatitsimpactondailylivesshouldnotbeignored.倒装平行结构错误SopopularInternetis99倒装平行结构错误Onlybythecooperationwecouldsolvetheproblem.Onlybythecooperationcouldwesolvetheproblem.倒装平行结构错误Onlybythecooperatio100错误InChina,becauseitstradition,theoldismostraisedbytheirchildren.InChina,becauseofitstradition,theoldaremostlysupportedbytheirchildren.错误InChina,becauseitstradit101错误Itcanimaginethatinthenearfuture,thelocalresidentswillhaveabetterlife.Itcanbeimaginedthat,inthenearfuture,thelocalresidentswillhaveabetterlife.错误Itcanimaginethatinthen102用句升级练习互联网是一个公众感兴趣和关注的话题。Internetisatopicthatpeopleareinterestedinandpayattentionto.Internetisatopicofpublicinterestandconcern.用句升级练习互联网是一个公众感兴趣和关注的话题。103没有比接受教育更重要的事。Nothingismorecrucialthantoreceiveeducation.没有什么比保护环境更重要的了。没有比接受教育更重要的事。104我们再怎么强调保护环境的重要性也不为过。Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofenvironmentalprotectiontoomuch.我们再怎么强调合作的重要性也不为过。我们再怎么强调经济发展的重要性也不为过。我们再怎么强调锻炼身体的重要性也不为过。我们再怎么强调保护环境的重要性也不为过。105不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

Itisundoubtablethatourlivingqualitieshavegonefrombadtoworse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。106我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。Weshouldsparenoefforttobeautifyourenvironment.

我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。107我们必须重视这个问题。Wemustlayemphasisonthisproblem.我们必须重视这个问题。108越来越多的专家开始相信这种情形会对当地经济增长产生不利影响。Expertsinincreasingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatsuchsituationwouldproduceunfavorableeffectsoneconomicgrowthoflocalareas.越来越多的专家开始相信这种情形会对当地经济增长产生不利影响。109人们对此意见不一。Differentpeoplehavedifferentideasaboutthis.Ideasonthisissue/topicvaryfrompersontoperson.人们对此意见不一。110这些活动大大提高了我们的环保意识。Theseactivitiesimproveourawarenessofenvironmentprotectiongreatly.Theseactivitiescontributemuchtoourawarenessofenvironmentprotection.这些活动大大提高了我们的环保意识。111要是团队里的每个人都竭尽全力,他们的工作效率会有很大提高。Ifallthestaffsparenoefforts,theworkingefficiencywillbesharplyimproved.Workingefficiencywouldbeconsiderablyenhancedbytheintenseteamworkspirit.要是团队里的每个人都竭尽全力,他们的工作效率会有很大提高。112句型升级许多专家指出体育锻炼与身体健康息息相关