新中考英语复习初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导复习课件经典

书面表达备考指导

中考英语复习书面表达备考指导

中考英语复习

一、认真审题认真审题的目的就是要确定时态及人称,同时关注题材格式。时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要与时间状语一致。如ago,lastnight等用于一般过去时。nextyear,“in+一段时间”等一般用于将来时。人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。例如:Thankstotheteachers,wehaveimprovedourEnglish.其中we和our就是人称的统一。格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。一、认真审题二、找全信息点1.切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再擦掉。2.根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。值得注意的是找全信息点的时候,尤其要紧扣主题,突出重点。二、找全信息点三、成文时表述正确英语写作和语文写作一样,文字表述正确还只是基本的要求,文字的流畅程度同样重要。不过有三点依旧需要注意:1.切忌与汉语提示一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。2.首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾、主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,较好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。3.认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。三、成文时表述正确四、认真检查,然后将作文誊写在答题卷上。书写时注意按结构分段,书写力求清晰。典例1(2018·安徽)某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为“Thankyou,myteacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:1.严格要求;2.耐心指导;3.热情鼓励;4.……注意:1.词数80~100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。四、认真检查,然后将作文誊写在答题卷上。写作思路一、审题这是一篇提纲作文,写对老师的感谢。写作注意事项如下:1.本文属于记叙文,文章所用的时态要以一般过去时态或一般现在时态为主;2.人称上以第三人称为主,注意代词的运用;3.注意多使用一些好的句型、句式,以使文章表达流畅,有节奏感。写作思路二、可用素材1.词汇:bestrictwith,fail,patient,difficult,dealwith,encourage,help,giveup,makeprogress2.句式:WhenshefoundIwasveryworried,sheencouragedmetostudyharder.Shewasalwayspatienttomakemeunderstandeverysinglequestion.Withherhelp,I’vehadenoughcouragetofacedifficultiesandmademuchprogressinEnglish.Notonlydoessheexplaineverythingclearlybutalsosheisverypatientwithus.二、可用素材One

possible

version:Thank

you,my

teacher!Mrs.LiismyEnglishteacherduringmythree-yearmiddleschoolstudies.Shehasleftaverygoodimpressiononme.Sheisareallywonderfulteacher.Notonlydoessheexplaineverythingclearlybutalsosheisverypatientwithus.Besides,herclassiswellorganizedandinclassshealwaysencouragesusandavoidsmakingusfeelembarrassedevenwhenwemakemistakes,soeverystudentisveryactiveintheclassdiscussion.Shehasalreadybeenpopularwithallofthestudentsinourclass!WithMrs.Li’shelp,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglish.Thankyou,Mrs.Li!Thanksforhelpingandencouragingme!Onepossibleversion:典例2上高中后的第一节英语课上,老师要求每个同学用英语做一分钟的自我介绍。请准备一份80~100词的发言稿,内容应涉及以下四个方面:1.家庭情况;2.学习上的强项与弱项;3.兴趣与爱好;4.对高中生活的期待。要求:1.内容反映自己的真实情况,但不得在文中提及真实的人名、地名和校名;2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。Hello,everybody,Nicetomeetyou.MynameisLiHuan.I’mfromRainbowHighSchool.典例2写作思路一、审题本篇作文是一篇提纲作文,要求写作的内容是自我介绍,需要介绍的内容要点已经全部给出。考生需要做的就是把这些信息整合到一起,组成一篇完整的文章。此话题正是初中英语的重点话题之一,也是常考的写作话题之一。注意事项:1.本文是说明文,以一般现在时为主;2.本文是自我介绍,写作时以第一人称为主;3.写作注意包含所给提示的所有要点,不要遗漏。写作思路二、可用素材1.词汇:parents,member,brother,work,doctor,teacher,interest,hobby,begoodat,bepoorin,lookforwardto...2.句型:Bothmyparentsareworkingfarawayfromhome.AtschoolIamgoodatmath,physicsandchemistry.Iamgoingtoworktogetherwithmynewteachersandnewclassmates.I’mlookingforwardtomakingfriendswithyou.二、可用素材One

possible

version:Hello,everybody,Nicetomeetyou.MynameisLiHuan.I’mfromRainbowHighSchool.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Myfatherworksinacomputercompanyandmymotherisahousewife.I’mtheonlychildinmyfamily.

I’mgoodatmathandphysicswhichareinterestingforme.ButI’mweakingeography.Itisdifficultforme.Inmysparetime,Iliketoreadnovelsandplaysports.LuXunismyfavoriteauthorandIadmirethebasketballstar,YaoMing.Ihopetogetgoodgradesatseniorhighschool,andgetalongwellwithalltheteachersandclassmates.That’sall.Thanksalot!Onepossibleversion:素养训练提高【1】(2018·安徽明光二模)近年来,人们非常关注学生的安全。很多学校为此取消了许多有意义的外出活动,如春游、夏令营、野餐等。假如你是育英中学的一名学生张硕,请给曾校长发一封电子邮件,就此发表自己的见解。要点如下:1.安全第一,但开展一些户外活动也是很有必要的;2.通过这些活动,学生不仅能增长知识,还能开拓视野;3.与大自然亲密接触,能增强同学们的环保意识;4.建议学校在活动之前教给学生一些安全常识,让学生学会保护自己和自救。参考词汇:outdooractivities户外活动;widenone’shorizon开拓视野素养训练提高注意:1.词数80~100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;4.邮件的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。注意:1.词数80~100;DearMr.Zeng,I’msorrytotroubleyou.I’mZhangShuo,astudentfromYuyingMiddleSchool.I’mwritingtoyouaboutoutdooractivities.Could

you

please

organize

some

outdoor

activities

for

us?Of

course,safety

comes

first.But

it’s

necessary

for

us

to

take

part

in

such

activities.

DearMr.Zeng,In

my

opinion,we

can

learn

more

knowledge

and

widen

our

horizon

in

this

way.What’s

more,it’s

a

good

way

for

us

to

learn

to

protect

the

environment

by

staying

close

to

the

nature.And

we

can

get

on

well

with

our

teachers

and

classmates.

Why

not

show

us

some

safety

knowledge

before

these

activities?It’s

a

good

chance

for

us

to

learn

to

protect

and

save

ourselves.

Bestwishes!Yours,ZhangShuoInmyopinion,wecanlearnmor【2】(2018·安徽安庆模拟)再过半年你将成为一名高中生,那么你应该怎样完善自己呢?请以“Howtobeanexcellentstudent”为题,写一篇英语短文。提示:1.遵守校纪校规(按时到校,不吸烟);2.养成良好的学习习惯(上课认真听讲、课后复习、学会放松等);3.与人沟通,学会分享,互相帮助;4.在家为父母做些力所能及的家务活(洗碗、打扫卫生等);5.保护环境,积极参与志愿者工作。【2】要求:1.词数:80~100。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.必须包括全部要点,但不能逐词翻译,可适当发挥。要求:How

to

be

an

excellent

studentI’mgoingtobeaseniorhighschoolstudent.How

can

I

be

an

excellent

student?First,I

will

follow

the

school

rules.I

will

go

to

school

on

time

and

I

won’t

smoke.Second,it’s

also

important

to

have

good

study

habits.I

will

listen

to

the

teachers

carefully

in

class.Third,I

am

going

to

learn

to

share

what

I

have

with

my

classmates

and

help

my

classmates.Fourth,at

home,I

will

try

to

help

my

parents

do

some

housework

because

they

are

very

tired

every

day.At

last,I

will

protect

the

environment

and

actively

participate

in

volunteer

work.

I

believe

I’ll

be

an

excellent

student

in

senior

high

school.

Howtobeanexcellentstudent【3】(2019·预测)假如你是杨洋,目前正在美国学习,你在网上看到圣约瑟夫孤儿院(St.JosephOrphanage)正在招募暑假志愿者。请你根据以下招聘信息,给这家孤儿院写一封申请信。招募志愿者:1.工作时间:7月1日至8月31日,每周工作10个小时。2.工作范围:给孩子提供帮助;帮助老师组织班会等等。【3】注意:1.词数80~100;2.不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearSirorMadam,IreadyouradvertisementontheInternetyesterday.I’m

writing

to

tell

you

that

I’d

like

to

work

as

a

volunteer

in

St.Joseph

Orphanage.

注意:1.词数80~100;DearSirorMadaAs

a

student,I

have

enough

free

time

during

the

coming

summer

vacation.So

I

can

work

ten

hours

per

week

during

the

requested

two

months.Besides,I’m

outgoing

and

careful.This

makes

it

easy

for

me

to

provide

care

for

the

children.What’s

more,I

can

also

be

a

good

helper

in

class.I

am

really

good

at

organizing

class

activities

since

I

am

a

leader

of

our

school’s

study

club.

If

I

am

lucky

enough

to

become

a

volunteer,I

will

try

my

best

to

do

the

job

well.

I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,YangYangAsastudent,Ihaveenoughfre【4】时间对每个人来说都是宝贵的,那么怎样才能更好地利用时间呢?请用英语写一篇题目为“HowtoSaveTime”的短文。内容包括:1.时间的意义和重要性;2.人们浪费时间的现象(至少3种);3.节省时间的方法(至少3个);4.号召大家节约时间。注意:1.词数80~100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。【4】How

to

Save

TimeWe

have

ever

heard

of

“Time

is

money.Time

is

life.”

Time

is

very

important

to

everyone.But

we

can

see

people

waste

their

time

everywhere.They

spend

much

time

playing

computer

games,drinking,sleeping

late

and

so

on.

It’s

necessary

for

us

to

save

our

valuable

time.We

have

to

listen

to

our

teachers

carefully

in

class

so

that

we

can

save

more

time

to

learn

something

else

after

class.We

should

make

a

plan

to

study

at

home

so

that

we

can

learn

more

with

less

time.We

should

spend

more

time

reading

instead

of

playing

games.

If

we

can

make

good

use

of

time,we

are

sure

to

get

more.Saving

time

is

to

saving

life.Let’s

save

time

from

now

on.

HowtoSaveTime中考书面表达解题指导中考书面表达解题指导

中考英语书面表达专项复习中考英语书面表达专项复习中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（0-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。书写(卷面)：隐藏的评分标准！中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）书写(卷面)：隐藏的评Aliceismyabestfriend,shecomefromCanada.sheisverytall,hairisverylong,helikesports.butIdon‘tknowifdoesshelikeswim?Shelikeschinese,andshedowellinit,weallverylikeshe.去掉comesShehershelikes去掉likesswimmingChinesedoes去掉herverymuchAliceismyabestfriend,HowtoWriteEnglishCompositionsHowtoWriteEnglishCompositi分析结构

HobbiesandstudiesMikeiscrazyaboutfootball!Heloveswatchingfootballmatches.Ofcourse,helovesplayingfootballtoo.Heoftenspendsaboutonehourplayingfootballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Hisparentsdon’tlikethisandhaveaskedhimtogohomebefore5:30.Hethinksitisimportantforhimtospendsometimeonhishobbies.Hewisheshecouldhavehisparents’support.IntroductionMainbodyConclusion分析结构HobbiesandstudiesHowtowrite?Thebeginning三段式（总-分-总）ThebodyTheending主题句----说出文中的要点、核心【写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半】支持句----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用连接词】结论句----对全文的总结和概括。【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】Howtowrite?Thebeginning三段式誊查美连列审作文好词好句，美化文章查是否无误审清题意巧用关联词列出要点誊写规范

Writingskills—sevensteps加加首尾誊查美连列审作文好词好句，美化文章查是否无误审清题意巧用关联审时态人称体裁（记叙文，应用文，议论文）第一步:审审清题意,找出文章要表达的中心。具体做法：用笔勾画主题审时态人称体裁（记叙文，第一步:审具体做法：用笔勾画主题。节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。LiMing是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他,请以“MyLow-carbonLife”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。要点：(1)每天步行上学;(2)离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3)不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；（4)充分使用纸张（5)不使用塑料袋。参考词：onfoot,turnoff,tap(水龙头),reuse,makefulluseof,plasticbag写作要求：（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；（2）不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。主题人称时态体裁字数要点以一般现在时为主。节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。LiMing具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.

第二步：列抓住题意，列出要点具体做法：不要遗漏要点！用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.Igotoschoolonfooteveryday./Iwalktoschooleveryday.2.Remembertoturnoffthelights,theTVandthefans.3.Turnoffthetap.reusewater.4.Imakefulluseofpaper.5.Don’tuseplasticbags.要点:(1)每天步行上学;(2)离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3)不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；（4)充分使用纸张;（5)不使用塑料袋。列Igotoschoolonfootevery开头：MynameisLiMing.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Ilikehavingalow-carbonlife.结尾：It’simportantforustoprotecttheenvironment./It’simportantforustolivealow-carbonlifetoprotecttheenvironment.

第三步：加加首尾，使文章结构完整。开头:简洁、漂亮，开门见山，表明观点。结尾:给出评论，发表己见，画龙点睛，首尾呼应。开头：第三步：加注意：恰当运用关联词和过渡句，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然。Ialwaysremembertoturnoffthelights,theTVandthefanswhenIleavetheclassroom.

Ithinksavingpaperisnecessary,soImakefulluseofpaper第四步:连巧用联词过渡句注意：恰当运用关联词和过渡句，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自美善用词汇活用句型谚语俗语第五步:美好词好句，美化文章在有把握的情况下，展示自己的写作功底。妙用关联词美善用词汇活用句型谚语俗语第五步:美在有把握的情况下，展变换句式时间状语从句Turnoffthetap.reusewater.WhenIamnotusingwater,Ialways

turnoffthetap.Ioften

reusewater.forexample,

whenIfinishwashingtheclothes,Iusethewatertocleanthefloorandwaterflowers.Ialwaysremembertoturnoffthelights,theTVandthefanswhenIleavetheclassroom.Remembertoturnoffthelights,theTVandthefans.

变换句式时间状语从句Turnoffthetap.r第六步:查通读全文，检查复核九查：1.格式、时态是否正确2.主谓是否一致3.要点是否全面4.人称是否正确5.语序是否有问题6.语言是否符合习惯7.句子结构是否完整8.固定短语是否恰当9.拼写、标点、大小写、名词的单复数是否准确等第六步:查九查：1.格式、时态是否正确

卷面整洁不一定加分，卷面潦草一定要扣分。第七步:誊誊文章，规范整洁书写注意事项：1、规范书写，字母饱满圆润，格式正确。2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的感觉3、一旦写错，规范修改——用一条斜线划掉即可。eg:HecanspekerspeakEnglishverywell.卷面整洁不一定加分，第七步:誊书写注意事MynameisLiMing.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Ilikehavingalow-carbonlife.

Igotoschoolonfooteveryday.Ialwaysremembertoturnoffthelights,theTVandthefanswhenIleavetheclassroom.WhenIamnotusingwater,Ialwaysturnoffthetap.Ioftenreusewater,forexample,whenIfinishwashingtheclothes,Iusethewatertocleanthefloorandwaterflowers.Ineveruseplasticbags.Ithinksavingpaperisnecessary,soIoftenmakefulluseofpaper.It’simportantforustolivealow-carbonlifetoprotecttheenvironment.anicehead(总)anicebody（分）anicetail（总）范文展示MynameisLiMing.IamamidIX.书面表达（共1题，计15分）每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，“Myfavorite________”为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。1.时态2.人称3.首尾用书面表达七步法写这篇短文。直击中考IX.书面表达（共1题，计15分）每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，范文MyfavoriteT-shirt

Amongallmyclothes,IlikeoneoftheT-shirtbest.Itiswhite.Itismadeofcottonandfiber,soit’sverycomfortable.Ilikeitbecausethereisaphotoofmybestfriendandmeonit.It’saspecialgiftfromhim.Hesentittomelastyearformy14thbirthday.IoftenweartheT-shirtwhenIhavepartieswithmyfriends.Itmakesmerememberthetimewetwospendtogether.ThisismyfavoriteT-shirt.Itbringsmealotofhappymemories.范文SummarySummaryHowtowriteagoodcomposition开头:开门见山中间结尾:与主题相呼应强劲有力书面表达七步法（审-列-加-连-美-查-誊）抓要点找连接词造好句连句成段Howto开头:开门见山书面表达七

1.时态、人称把握准；2.主谓一致细检查；3.上下文连贯很重要；4.多用熟悉、有把握的词汇和基本句型，避免汉语式英语；5:多记同义句和同义词,不会表达，化难为易，化繁为简，另辟蹊径；6.适当使用并列句或主从复合句提分；

7.注意单词拼写、标点符号和大小写。牢记写作小法宝：1.时态、人称把握准；牢记写作小法宝：Wishyousucceed!Wishyousucceed!新中考英语复习初中英语书面表达写作技巧指导复习课件经典

书面表达备考指导

中考英语复习书面表达备考指导

中考英语复习

一、认真审题认真审题的目的就是要确定时态及人称,同时关注题材格式。时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要与时间状语一致。如ago,lastnight等用于一般过去时。nextyear,“in+一段时间”等一般用于将来时。人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。例如:Thankstotheteachers,wehaveimprovedourEnglish.其中we和our就是人称的统一。格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。一、认真审题二、找全信息点1.切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔标出,写完后再擦掉。2.根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。值得注意的是找全信息点的时候,尤其要紧扣主题,突出重点。二、找全信息点三、成文时表述正确英语写作和语文写作一样,文字表述正确还只是基本的要求,文字的流畅程度同样重要。不过有三点依旧需要注意:1.切忌与汉语提示一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。2.首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾、主系表等)。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,较好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。3.认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语使用、单词拼写是否准确等。三、成文时表述正确四、认真检查,然后将作文誊写在答题卷上。书写时注意按结构分段,书写力求清晰。典例1(2018·安徽)某英文杂志社正面向九年级毕业生征文,请从以下要点中选择一至两个方面,并结合具体事例,用英语写一篇题为“Thankyou,myteacher!”的短文参加此次活动。要点如下:1.严格要求;2.耐心指导;3.热情鼓励;4.……注意:1.词数80~100;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。四、认真检查,然后将作文誊写在答题卷上。写作思路一、审题这是一篇提纲作文,写对老师的感谢。写作注意事项如下:1.本文属于记叙文,文章所用的时态要以一般过去时态或一般现在时态为主;2.人称上以第三人称为主,注意代词的运用;3.注意多使用一些好的句型、句式,以使文章表达流畅,有节奏感。写作思路二、可用素材1.词汇:bestrictwith,fail,patient,difficult,dealwith,encourage,help,giveup,makeprogress2.句式:WhenshefoundIwasveryworried,sheencouragedmetostudyharder.Shewasalwayspatienttomakemeunderstandeverysinglequestion.Withherhelp,I’vehadenoughcouragetofacedifficultiesandmademuchprogressinEnglish.Notonlydoessheexplaineverythingclearlybutalsosheisverypatientwithus.二、可用素材One

possible

version:Thank

you,my

teacher!Mrs.LiismyEnglishteacherduringmythree-yearmiddleschoolstudies.Shehasleftaverygoodimpressiononme.Sheisareallywonderfulteacher.Notonlydoessheexplaineverythingclearlybutalsosheisverypatientwithus.Besides,herclassiswellorganizedandinclassshealwaysencouragesusandavoidsmakingusfeelembarrassedevenwhenwemakemistakes,soeverystudentisveryactiveintheclassdiscussion.Shehasalreadybeenpopularwithallofthestudentsinourclass!WithMrs.Li’shelp,IhavemademuchprogressinEnglish.Thankyou,Mrs.Li!Thanksforhelpingandencouragingme!Onepossibleversion:典例2上高中后的第一节英语课上,老师要求每个同学用英语做一分钟的自我介绍。请准备一份80~100词的发言稿,内容应涉及以下四个方面:1.家庭情况;2.学习上的强项与弱项;3.兴趣与爱好;4.对高中生活的期待。要求:1.内容反映自己的真实情况,但不得在文中提及真实的人名、地名和校名;2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。Hello,everybody,Nicetomeetyou.MynameisLiHuan.I’mfromRainbowHighSchool.典例2写作思路一、审题本篇作文是一篇提纲作文,要求写作的内容是自我介绍,需要介绍的内容要点已经全部给出。考生需要做的就是把这些信息整合到一起,组成一篇完整的文章。此话题正是初中英语的重点话题之一,也是常考的写作话题之一。注意事项:1.本文是说明文,以一般现在时为主;2.本文是自我介绍,写作时以第一人称为主;3.写作注意包含所给提示的所有要点,不要遗漏。写作思路二、可用素材1.词汇:parents,member,brother,work,doctor,teacher,interest,hobby,begoodat,bepoorin,lookforwardto...2.句型:Bothmyparentsareworkingfarawayfromhome.AtschoolIamgoodatmath,physicsandchemistry.Iamgoingtoworktogetherwithmynewteachersandnewclassmates.I’mlookingforwardtomakingfriendswithyou.二、可用素材One

possible

version:Hello,everybody,Nicetomeetyou.MynameisLiHuan.I’mfromRainbowHighSchool.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Myfatherworksinacomputercompanyandmymotherisahousewife.I’mtheonlychildinmyfamily.

I’mgoodatmathandphysicswhichareinterestingforme.ButI’mweakingeography.Itisdifficultforme.Inmysparetime,Iliketoreadnovelsandplaysports.LuXunismyfavoriteauthorandIadmirethebasketballstar,YaoMing.Ihopetogetgoodgradesatseniorhighschool,andgetalongwellwithalltheteachersandclassmates.That’sall.Thanksalot!Onepossibleversion:素养训练提高【1】(2018·安徽明光二模)近年来,人们非常关注学生的安全。很多学校为此取消了许多有意义的外出活动,如春游、夏令营、野餐等。假如你是育英中学的一名学生张硕,请给曾校长发一封电子邮件,就此发表自己的见解。要点如下:1.安全第一,但开展一些户外活动也是很有必要的;2.通过这些活动,学生不仅能增长知识,还能开拓视野;3.与大自然亲密接触,能增强同学们的环保意识;4.建议学校在活动之前教给学生一些安全常识,让学生学会保护自己和自救。参考词汇:outdooractivities户外活动;widenone’shorizon开拓视野素养训练提高注意:1.词数80~100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;4.邮件的开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。注意:1.词数80~100;DearMr.Zeng,I’msorrytotroubleyou.I’mZhangShuo,astudentfromYuyingMiddleSchool.I’mwritingtoyouaboutoutdooractivities.Could

you

please

organize

some

outdoor

activities

for

us?Of

course,safety

comes

first.But

it’s

necessary

for

us

to

take

part

in

such

activities.

DearMr.Zeng,In

my

opinion,we

can

learn

more

knowledge

and

widen

our

horizon

in

this

way.What’s

more,it’s

a

good

way

for

us

to

learn

to

protect

the

environment

by

staying

close

to

the

nature.And

we

can

get

on

well

with

our

teachers

and

classmates.

Why

not

show

us

some

safety

knowledge

before

these

activities?It’s

a

good

chance

for

us

to

learn

to

protect

and

save

ourselves.

Bestwishes!Yours,ZhangShuoInmyopinion,wecanlearnmor【2】(2018·安徽安庆模拟)再过半年你将成为一名高中生,那么你应该怎样完善自己呢?请以“Howtobeanexcellentstudent”为题,写一篇英语短文。提示:1.遵守校纪校规(按时到校,不吸烟);2.养成良好的学习习惯(上课认真听讲、课后复习、学会放松等);3.与人沟通,学会分享,互相帮助;4.在家为父母做些力所能及的家务活(洗碗、打扫卫生等);5.保护环境,积极参与志愿者工作。【2】要求:1.词数:80~100。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.必须包括全部要点,但不能逐词翻译,可适当发挥。要求:How

to

be

an

excellent

studentI’mgoingtobeaseniorhighschoolstudent.How

can

I

be

an

excellent

student?First,I

will

follow

the

school

rules.I

will

go

to

school

on

time

and

I

won’t

smoke.Second,it’s

also

important

to

have

good

study

habits.I

will

listen

to

the

teachers

carefully

in

class.Third,I

am

going

to

learn

to

share

what

I

have

with

my

classmates

and

help

my

classmates.Fourth,at

home,I

will

try

to

help

my

parents

do

some

housework

because

they

are

very

tired

every

day.At

last,I

will

protect

the

environment

and

actively

participate

in

volunteer

work.

I

believe

I’ll

be

an

excellent

student

in

senior

high

school.

Howtobeanexcellentstudent【3】(2019·预测)假如你是杨洋,目前正在美国学习,你在网上看到圣约瑟夫孤儿院(St.JosephOrphanage)正在招募暑假志愿者。请你根据以下招聘信息,给这家孤儿院写一封申请信。招募志愿者:1.工作时间:7月1日至8月31日,每周工作10个小时。2.工作范围:给孩子提供帮助;帮助老师组织班会等等。【3】注意:1.词数80~100;2.不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。DearSirorMadam,IreadyouradvertisementontheInternetyesterday.I’m

writing

to

tell

you

that

I’d

like

to

work

as

a

volunteer

in

St.Joseph

Orphanage.

注意:1.词数80~100;DearSirorMadaAs

a

student,I

have

enough

free

time

during

the

coming

summer

vacation.So

I

can

work

ten

hours

per

week

during

the

requested

two

months.Besides,I’m

outgoing

and

careful.This

makes

it

easy

for

me

to

provide

care

for

the

children.What’s

more,I

can

also

be

a

good

helper

in

class.I

am

really

good

at

organizing

class

activities

since

I

am

a

leader

of

our

school’s

study

club.

If

I

am

lucky

enough

to

become

a

volunteer,I

will

try

my

best

to

do

the

job

well.

I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,YangYangAsastudent,Ihaveenoughfre【4】时间对每个人来说都是宝贵的,那么怎样才能更好地利用时间呢?请用英语写一篇题目为“HowtoSaveTime”的短文。内容包括:1.时间的意义和重要性;2.人们浪费时间的现象(至少3种);3.节省时间的方法(至少3个);4.号召大家节约时间。注意:1.词数80~100;2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。【4】How

to

Save

TimeWe

have

ever

heard

of

“Time

is

money.Time

is

life.”

Time

is

very

important

to

everyone.But

we

can

see

people

waste

their

time

everywhere.They

spend

much

time

playing

computer

games,drinking,sleeping

late

and

so

on.

It’s

necessary

for

us

to

save

our

valuable

time.We

have

to

listen

to

our

teachers

carefully

in

class

so

that

we

can

save

more

time

to

learn

something

else

after

class.We

should

make

a

plan

to

study

at

home

so

that

we

can

learn

more

with

less

time.We

should

spend

more

time

reading

instead

of

playing

games.

If

we

can

make

good

use

of

time,we

are

sure

to

get

more.Saving

time

is

to

saving

life.Let’s

save

time

from

now

on.

HowtoSaveTime中考书面表达解题指导中考书面表达解题指导

中考英语书面表达专项复习中考英语书面表达专项复习中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（0-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。书写(卷面)：隐藏的评分标准！中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）书写(卷面)：隐藏的评Aliceismyabestfriend,shecomefromCanada.sheisverytall,hairisverylong,helikesports.butIdon‘tknowifdoesshelikeswim?Shelikeschinese,andshedowellinit,weallverylikeshe.去掉comesShehershelikes去掉likesswimmingChinesedoes去掉herverymuchAliceismyabestfriend,HowtoWriteEnglishCompositionsHowtoWriteEnglishCompositi分析结构

HobbiesandstudiesMikeiscrazyaboutfootball!Heloveswatchingfootballmatches.Ofcourse,helovesplayingfootballtoo.Heoftenspendsaboutonehourplayingfootballwithhisclassmatesafterschool.Hisparentsdon’tlikethisandhaveaskedhimtogohomebefore5:30.Hethinksitisimportantforhimtospendsometimeonhishobbies.Hewisheshecouldhavehisparents’support.IntroductionMainbodyConclusion分析结构HobbiesandstudiesHowtowrite?Thebeginning三段式（总-分-总）ThebodyTheending主题句----说出文中的要点、核心【写好开头，好的开始是成功的一半】支持句----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用连接词】结论句----对全文的总结和概括。【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】Howtowrite?Thebeginning三段式誊查美连列审作文好词好句，美化文章查是否无误审清题意巧用关联词列出要点誊写规范

Writingskills—sevensteps加加首尾誊查美连列审作文好词好句，美化文章查是否无误审清题意巧用关联审时态人称体裁（记叙文，应用文，议论文）第一步:审审清题意,找出文章要表达的中心。具体做法：用笔勾画主题审时态人称体裁（记叙文，第一步:审具体做法：用笔勾画主题。节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。LiMing是一个注重“低碳”生活的中学生，假设你是他,请以“MyLow-carbonLife”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，简单描述自己的“低碳生活”。要点：(1)每天步行上学;(2)离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3)不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；（4)充分使用纸张（5)不使用塑料袋。参考词：onfoot,turnoff,tap(水龙头),reuse,makefulluseof,plasticbag写作要求：（1）内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；（2）不得透露考生姓名、学校等信息。主题人称时态体裁字数要点以一般现在时为主。节约资源,保护环境,从我们身边的小事做起。LiMing具体做法：根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点！用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.

第二步：列抓住题意，列出要点具体做法：不要遗漏要点！用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.Igotoschoolonfooteveryday./Iwalktoschooleveryday.2.Remembertoturnoffthelights,theTVandthefans.3.Turnoffthetap.reusewater.4.Imakefulluseofpaper.5.Don’tuseplasticbags.要点:(1)每天步行上学;(2)离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；（3)不用水时，记得关水龙头，循环使用水；（4)充分使用纸张;（5)不使用塑料袋。列Igotoschoolonfootevery开头：MynameisLiMing.Iamamiddleschoolstudent.Ilikehavingalow-carbonlife.结尾：It’simportantforustoprotecttheenvironment./It’simportantforustolivealow-carbonlifetoprotecttheenvironment.

第三步：加加首尾，使文章结构完整。开头:简洁、漂亮，开门见山，表明观点。结尾:给出评论，发表己见，画龙点睛，首尾呼应。开头：第三步：加注意：恰当运用关联词和过渡句，使文章层次清晰，各部分衔接自然。Ialwaysremembertoturnoffthe