读后续写写作主题“人与动物”讲义-2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项

读后续写写作主题〃人与动物〃讲义01AheroicdogLikemostdogswhosehomesaresituatedonlargeplotsofland,oneNewZealanddogregularlywentoffexploringthroughthefarmlandaroundhishomeforhoursatatime.ButasLouie,asheepdogrescuedfromashelterwhenhewasjustapuppy,gotolder,histripsgotshorterandshorter.NowthatLouieis12yearsold,hechoosestostayclosetohomeandhardlyevergoesouttoexploreanymore,whichiswhyhisfamilywassoworriedwhenherecentlydisappearedanddidn'treturnhomeasusual.“Mymotherwasalittleupsetashehadstoppedhiswandering,"saidMarolynDiver,whoseparentsownLouie."Wewereveryconcernedthathemightforgetwherehishomewas."Butthankfully,Louieturnedupatthehouseafewhourslater.“Helookedsotiredandhadbasicallyjustcollapsed（崩溃），“Marolynsaid/Wewereconcernedthatsomeonemighthavehurthim.ButthenwerealizedtherewasasmallnoteattachedtoLouie'scollar.Afterreadingthenote,Ifeltcompletereliefandrelaxed,andthenmyheartmelted.”“Louieistheherooftheday,"readthenote,whichwaswrittenbyaneighboraboutamileaway."HeledmetoMaddyindistressstuckunderapileofbranches.Cheers,Rob."/"AccordingtoRob,Louiewaswaitingforhimathishouseanddemandedtobefollowed.Robsaidthathewas100percentsurethatLouieknewwhathewasdoing,andleadinghimtoMaddywashispurefocus,"Marolynexplained.注意：.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1：OnceRobfoundMaddy,Louiehelpedhimdigherout.Paragraph2：“ThatnightwewereveryworriedaboutLouie,"Marolynsaid.【参考范文】OnceRobfoundMaddy,Louiehelpedhimdigherout.AccordingtoRob,Louiepulledatbranchesanddugheroutoftheground.RobsaidthatassoonasMaddywasfree,bothdogsrantoanearbypondandjumpedintoitandbegantodrinkwater.ThenhegaveLouieahugehandfulofdogbiscuitsasathank-you.HeknewthatLouiemightgetintroubleforbeinglateforhome,sohethoughthewouldwriteasmallnotetoexplainwhyLouiewasabsent.“ThatnightwewereveryworriedaboutLouie,“Marolynsaid/'Hecouldhardlywalkandlookedterrible.Wewereconcernedthathemightnotmakeitthroughthenight."Thankfully,LouiewasbacktonormalthenextmorningwhenRobcamebywithMaddyforavisit.Marolynsaid,“IthaschangedthewayIlookathim.AndIthinkmyparentsfeelthesameway.I'msoproudofhim."02阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Itwasoneofthehottestdaysofthedryseason.Wehadnotseenraininalmostamonth.Thecropsweredying.Cowshadstoppedgivingmilk.Thestreamswerelonggonebackintotheearth.Ifwedidn'tseesomerainsoonwewouldloseeverything.IwasinthekitchenmakinglunchforthefamilywhenIsawmysix-year-oldson,Billy,walkingtowardthewoods.Icouldonlyseehisback.Hewasn'twalkinginhisusualway.Hewasobviouslywalkingwithagreateffort,tryingtobeasstillaspossible.Minutesafterhedisappearedintothewoods,hecamerunningoutagain,towardthehouse.Momentslater,however,hewasonceagainwalkinginthatslowandpurposefulsteptowardthewoods.Thisactivitywentonforoveranhour：walkingcautiouslytothewoods,thenrunningbacktothehouse.Finally,mycuriositygotthebestofme.1creptoutofthehouseandfollowedhimonhisjourney.Hewascuppingbothhandsinfrontofhimashewalked；Beingverycarefulnottospillthewaterhecarried.Branchesandthornsslapped（拍打）hislittlefacebuthedidnottrytoavoidthem.Hehadamuchgreaterpurpose.AsIleanedagainstatreetospyonhim,Isawthemostamazingsite.Severallargedearsappearedthreateninginfrontofhim.ButBillywalkedrightuptothem.Ialmostscreamedforhimtogetaway.AndIsawababydeerlayingontheground,obviouslysufferingfromheavylossofwaterandheatexhaustion,liftitsheadwithgreatefforttolap（舔饮）upthewaterinmybeautifulboy'shand.Paragraph1：Whenthewaterwasgone,Billyjumpeduptorunbacktothehouse.Paragraph2：AndlaterIknewwhatwasgoingon.【参考范文】Whenthewaterwasgone,B川yjumpeduptorunbacktothehouse.Mycuriosityonceagaindrovemetofollowhimback.Afterhereachedthekitchen,heturnedonthetap.Ashewastryinghardtocupbothhandstoreceivethewater,itwasstillrunningawaythroughhisfingers.Andhealsohadgreatdifficultyturningoffthetapwithhandsoccupied.Heseemedtobesosorryandself-condemnedforhiswastingofwater.Wearinganoteofupsetonhisface,hecarrieditcarefullytowardthewoods.AndlaterIknewwhatwasgoingon.Itbegantomakesensetomewhyhewasn'twalkinginhisusualway.Istoodontheedgeofthewoodswatchingthemostbeautifulheartworkingsohardtosavealife.Asmytearsbegantohittheground,theyweresuddenlyjoinedbyotherdrops...Andmoredrops.Itwasasifthenatureitselfwasmovedbythegreateffortmadebymysonandbegantoweepwithpride.03阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Littlesnowhadfallenthiswinter.ForReuventhefrier"（皮衣制作工）itwasabadyear,andafterlonghesitationhedecidedtosellZlatehtheoldgoat.Thetownbutcherhadofferedeightsilvercoinsforthegoat.Reuventoldhisoldestboy,Aaron,totakethegoattotown.Aaronunderstoodwhatitmeant,buthehadtoobeyhisfather.Hissisterscriedloudly.Aarontookalongtwoslicesofbreadtoeatontheroad.Heneededtodeliverthegoatbyeveningandreturnthenextdaywiththemoney.Whilethefamilysaidgoodbye,Zlatehstoodaspatientlyasever.Zlatehtrustedhumanbeings.ThesunwasshiningwhenAaronleft.Suddenlytheweatherchanged,andafterawhileitbegantosnow.SoontheirpathwascompletelycoveredandAarongotlost.BeneaththesnowAaron'sbootstouchedthesoftnessofaplowedfield.Herealizedthathewasnolongerontheroad.Zlatehbleated（哀鸣）asifaskingtobetakenhome.Aaronlookedaroundhopingtofindafarmerdrivingasleigh（雪橇）alongtheway.Buthecouldseenothing.Aaronknewthatiftheydidnotfindshelter,theywouldfreezetodeath.Suddenlyhemadeouttheshapeofahill.Whenhecamenearit,herealizedthatitwasalargehaystack（大干草堆）coveredbysnow.Aaronknewthattheyweresaved.Whenhereachedthehay,heduganestforhimselfandthegoat.Itwasalwayswarminthehay.AndhaywasfoodforZlateh.Zlateh,satdownandseemedtohaveregainedherconfidenceinman.Aaronatehisbread,butafterthedifficultjourneyhewasstillhungry.HelookedatZlatehandrealizedthathewouldnotbestarvedtodeath.Goat'smilkwassweet.Zlatehatefrequentlyandherbodygaveforthanimalwarmth,andAaronhuggedhertightly.Thesnowfellfor3daysandthewindquieteddown.Paragraphl:.Onthemorningofthefourthday,Aaronheardtheringingofsleighbells.Paragraph2:ThenewsthatAaronandZlatehwerecominguptheroadwasagreatjoyinthefamily.04阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。AtDana'syardsale,Timchoseabaseballfromthetoysspreadonthecardtableandaskedabouttheprice.DanatoldhimeverythingwasaquarterexceptNezumi,acottontoyrat.Itwasgraywithsomecottonstickingoutfromtheholewhereanearhadbeentornoff."Nezumiisextraspecial,sohehastendollars.Heneedsasafenewhome,"Danasighed.Timlaughedsayinghedidn'thavetendollars.Danalaughed,tooandgaveNezumitoTimasafreegiftbecausehewasherfriend.WhenTimwhispereditwassortofold,Danasaidoldtoyswerethebest,ShetheninvitedTimtoherbirthdaypartythenextevening,addingthatherparentsweregivingherarealratforherbirthday.Timwasamazedandaskedifitwasaliverat,"Ofcourse,"Danasaid.Athome,Tim'smothershowedhimthegiftshehadboughtforDana.Itwasaknittingspool（编织线轴）shapedlikeamushroom.MomsaidDanacouldknitascarfforherdoll.TimsighedthatDanawasn'taknittingkindofpersonbutaratkindofperson.Momlaughedafterknowingwhathadhappened.Togethertheydrovetothepetstore,whereTimsearchedandsearchedandselectedaclearplasticball,oneinwhichtheratcouldrunaroundonthefloorsafefromcatsanddogs.TimthoughtofNezumi'searanddecidedDana'snewratwouldneedthisball.Thenextday,Danabroughtcupcakestoclass.WhenshehandedacupcaketoTim,sheaskedifTimbroughtNezumitoschoolasNezumilikedtorideinbackpacks.TimwasatalossbecauseNezumiwasathomeonhisbed.ThenDanaaskedwhatgifthewasgivingher.Timreplieditwasasurprise.InsilencetheysatforawhilebeforeheheardDanasayherparentsweregivingheranewbikeforherbirthdayinsteadofaliveratbecausetheythoughtratswouldbitethings.注意