福建省部分名校2020-2021学年上学期高一英语期中试题精选汇编：写作专题（部分详解）

福建省部分名校2020-2021学年上学期高一英语期中试题精选汇编写作专题福建省莆田第二中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中质量检测试题第四部分写作(满分15分)假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去北京游览长城。请你给你的好友李华写一封电子邮件，分享你的出行计划。要点：1．对长城的认识；2．其他旅游目的地——故宫和颐和园，以及交通方式；3．希望。注意：1．可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；2．词数100词左右。参考词汇：故宫(theImperialPalace);颐和园(theSummerPalace)DearLiHua,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，WangMing第四部分写作（15分）Onepossibleversion：DearLiHua,I’mgladtotellyouthatmyparentsandIareplanningtopayavisittotheGreatWall.TheGreatWall,agreatwondercreatedbytheancientChinesepeople,hasalonghistory.NowithasbecomeoneofthefamoustouristattractionsinChina,attractingalargenumberofvisitorsfromallovertheworldeachyear.Besides,we’realsoplanningtovisitotherplacesinBeijing,suchastheImperialPalaceandtheSummerPalace.We’retakingthetraintogothere.Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingholiday?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,WangMing福建省厦门市湖滨中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题第六部分：书面表达（满分20分）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容包括：1.

你建议的线路；2.

你的理由；3.

你的祝愿。注意：词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。DearJim,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletterandknowyouwillvisit

China.NowIwouldliketogiveyoumyadviceonyourvisit.Bothofthetwotripsarewonderful.ButIsuggestyoutakethetouroftheYangtzeRiver,thelongestriverin

Asia.Ithinkatriptherewillhelpyoulearnmoreaboutthehistoryandcultureof

China.What’smore,therearemanyplacesofinterestalongtheriverandyou’llhaveachancetorelaxorseethesights.SoIthinkitisabetterchoicetovisittheYangtzeRiver.Ihopemyadviceishelpfultoyouandyouwillhaveagoodtimein

China.Yours,LiHua福建省福州市第八中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题第二节应用文写作（满分20分）86.假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Tim是北京某中学新来的交换生，在生活学习中遇到一些困惑，感到焦虑，来信寻求你的帮助。请你根据以下要点给他写一封信。1.安慰Tim；2.提出建议(1)安排出游;(2)积极参加运动;(3)......注意：1.不要逐字翻译,适当增加细节,使行文连贯。2.词数100左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Apossibleversion：DearTim,Inyourlastletter,yousaidthatyouhavemetsomedifficultiesandfeltanxious.Iamwritingtocomfortyouandofferyousomeadvice.Itisnaturalforonetofeeluncomfortableinadifferentcountry.Therefore,youcanarrangeforanoutingtorelaxyourselfwhileadmiringwonderfulviewsalongthewayandexperiencingsomeChineseculture.Besides,sinceworkingoutproveseffectivewhenonefeelsdown，whynothaveago?Youneedtobepositiveaboutyourselfandyourbody.Itisalsosuggestedthatyoushouldmakefriendsatyourschooltokeepyourselffromloneliness.Cheerup.Thingswillworkoutforthebest.IwishyouwouldsoongetitoverandenjoyyourstudyandlifeinBeijing.Yours,LiHua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国笔友Tim写一封建议信，帮助他解决在生活学习中遇到的困惑，减少焦虑。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.安慰Tim；2.提出建议(1)安排出游;(2)积极参加运动;(3)......第二步:列提纲（重点词组）meetsomedifficulties;feelanxious;arrangeforanouting;workout;bepositiveabout;getover;keepyourselffromloneliness；cheerup第三步：连词成句1.Inyourlastletter,yousaidthatyouhavemetsomedifficultiesandfeltanxious.2.Therefore,youcanarrangeforanoutingtorelaxyourselfwhileadmiringwonderfulviewsalongthewayandexperiencingsomeChineseculture.3.Besides,sinceworkingoutproveseffectivewhenonefeelsdown，whynothaveago?4.Youneedtobepositiveaboutyourselfandyourbody.5.Itisalsosuggestedthatyoushouldmakefriendsatyourschooltokeepyourselffromloneliness.6.Cheerup.Thingswillworkoutforthebest.7.IwishyouwouldsoongetitoverandenjoyyourstudyandlifeinBeijing.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表并列补充关系：besides，also3.表因果关系：therefore，since连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】[高分句型1]Inyourlastletter,yousaidthatyouhavemetsomedifficultiesandfeltanxious.（that引导宾语从句）[高分句型2]Therefore,youcanarrangeforanoutingtorelaxyourselfwhileadmiringwonderfulviewsalongthewayandexperiencingsomeChineseculture.（现在分词作状语）[高分句型3]Itisalsosuggestedthatyoushouldmakefriendsatyourschooltokeepyourselffromloneliness.（it作形式主语）福建省长泰县第一中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题第四部分：写作（满分20分）假定你是李华,上周日是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。你本来答应参加她的生日聚会,但是你当时正忙于准备月考,不小心忘了赴约。请写信向Anne表达你的歉意,说明原因,并提出补救办法。注意:1.词数100词左右;2.文章中不得出现真实学校与班级名称;3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。书面表达：DearAnne,IamverysorrythatIdidn’tattendyourbirthdaypartylastSunday.Ifeelawfulaboutitandwanttoapologizetoyou.Itwasniceofyoutoinvitemetoyourparty.Ishouldhavecomeandcelebratedthepreciousmomentwithyou,butthemonthlytestisaroundthecorner,soIwassobusypreparingforthetestthatIforgottheappointment.Ihopeyouunderstandmysituationandforgiveme.Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeetingafterthetest?Idolongforapleasantchatwithyou.ItismuchtomyregretthatImissedthechanceofahappyget-together.Onceagain,pleaseacceptmysincereapology.Yours,LiHua福建省莆田第七中学2020-2021学年高一英语上学期期中试题第三部分写作(满分20分)假设你叫李华,你的朋友John沉迷于抖音(Douyin)而不能自拔,写信向你寻求帮助,请你给他回一封电子邮件。内容包括:1.表示理解和关心;2.沉迷抖音的影响;3.提出具体建议。要求:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:beaddictedto(doing)sth.沉迷于(做)某事addictionn.瘾;入迷DearJohn，_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________