Unit 5 Reading for writing课件 【教材精讲精研】 人教版高中英语必修第一册

Unit5Readingforwriting

—AletterofaskingforhelpReadthepostsquicklyandanswerthefollowingquestions.Whostartsthisblog?Whorespondstoit?3.Whatistheblogmainlyabout?WangLeLiuWen,JiaXin,LiRuiProblemswithlearningEnglish.Hi!I'vebeenstudyingEnglishsinceprimaryschool.IusedtogethighmarksinEnglish,butnowI'mhavingalotoftroublewithmylistening.WhenIlistentonativeEnglishspeakerstalkinginavideo,Icancatchonlyafewwords.Icanneverquitegetthemainidea.Anyadvice?1.Readandfindoutwhat’stheirproblems.Topicsentence2.Findsupportingdetailsoftheseproblems.SupportingdetailsSupportingdetailsareusuallyexamplesorfactsthatareusedtodescribeorexplainthetopicsentence.Theycanmakeyourdescriptionorexplanationmorevivid（生动）andconvincing（令人信服）.Tips:ListeningtoEnglishradioprogrammershelpsmegetusedtohowfastnativespeakerstalk.IalsorepeatwhatIheartohelpmyselftoexperiencethefeelingofthelanguage.SometimesIevenrecordmyvoicesoIcanlistentomyselfandcomparemypronunciationwiththeradiohost's!MybiggestheadacheishowtobepoliteinEnglish.It'ssomucheasiertojustsay"Openthewindow!",butinEnglishthatcansoundreallyterrible.IhavetothinkaboutwhoI'mtalkingtoandthendecidewhethertosay,"Openthewindow,please!"or"Couldyouopenthewindow,please?"orevenlonger"Wouldyoumindopeningthewindow,please?"SupportingdetailsTopicsentenceYeah,that'sreallyhard!Ithinkitalldependsonwhoyou'retalkingto.IfI'mtalkingtoaclosefriend,Icanuseshortrequests,like“Openthewindow”—ourrelationshipiscloseandwe'reequals,soIonlyneedafewwordstobridgethegapbetweenus.ButifI'mtalkingtosomeonewhoisn'tveryclosetome,Imustmakemyrequestlonger—andImustmakeitaquestion,notademand,e.g.,"Couldyouopenthewindow,please?"IfI'mtalkingtosomeoneseniortome,thenIshouldsay,"Wouldyoumindopeningthewindow,please?"Forme,vocabularyismybiggestproblem—therearejustSOMANYnewwords!Ican'tkeepallthenewvocabularystraightinmyhead,andIcertainlycan'trememberhowtousethemallproperly.HELP!SupportingdetailsTopicsentenceNameProblemAdviceJiaXin'sadvice:listentoEnglishradioprogrammers,repeatwhatyouhear,recordyourvoiceandcomparetotheradiohost'sLiRui'sadvice:Youradvice:LiuWenJiaXinLiRuitroublewithlisteningtonativeEnglishspeakershowtobepoliteinEnglishuseshortrequestsforclosefriends,uselongerrequestsforpeoplewhoarenotsoclose,usemorepolitephrasesforpeopleseniortoyourememberingnewvocabularycreateyourownwordbank:carryasmallnotebookwithyoueverywhere,andaddnewwordswhenyoulearnthem,learnwordchunksinsteadofsingleword,learnwordformationExpressionsIamhavingalotoftroublewith…Mybiggestheadacheis….Forme,….ismybiggestproblem....isabigdifficultyforme.Whatsentencesareusedtoexpressproblems?Ifinditdifficult/challenging/demandingto...

我觉得…很困难/挑战/吃力Ifinditreallyachallenge/headacheformeto...我发现…对我来说确实是个挑战。Ihavebeenstrugglingwith...

我一直在努力…Ihavedifficulty/problemsin...

我在…方面有困难/问题。Whattroubles/bothersmemostis...

最困扰/烦恼我的是…Mybiggestweaknessliesin...

我最大的弱点在于…Mybiggestheadacheis...

我最头疼的是…Mytopchallengeis...

我最大的挑战是…...

isabigdifficulty/challenge/struggleforme

…对我是一个困难/挑战/斗争Ireallyhavenoideahowto...

我真的不知道该怎么ExpressionsHowtowritealetterofaskingforhelp?折衷式(Semi-BlockStyle)DearSirorMadam,…(Para1)…(Para2)…(Para3)

Yours(sincerely),Lihua求助信内容要点：---写信目的-->说明困难-->请求帮助

感谢并期待答复I’mwritingtoaskyouafavor.I’mwritingtoyouforsomehelp.I’mwritingalettertoyoutogetsomehelp.Ihavemetmuchdifficultyin...在……方面我遇到许多困难。Idon’tknowwhattodo.

起首句（theopeningsentence）Isincerelyhopeyoucan…Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.HopeforanearlyreplyIwouldbegratefulifyoucould…Iwouldappreciateitifyoucould…结束语(theclosingsentence)展望自己获得建议后可能会取得的进步I'msurewithyourhelpIcanmakegreatprogress.IthinkIwillsurely...withyouradvice.Inthenearfuture，IamsureIcan...表明获取信息的急切心情Lookingforwardtoyourimmediateresponse.Yourattentiontothisletterwouldbehighlyappreciated.Iamwaitingforyourquickreply.Thankyouinadvanceforyourcooperation/assistance.

假如你是李华，暑假参加了某微信公众号（Wechatofficialaccount）举行的英语原版书阅读活动，并写了一篇书评。现你用英语给外教Sam写一封信，希望他能帮你当面批改书评，内容包括：简要介绍活动提出请求提议见面时间注意：词数80次左右可适当增加细节，使行文连贯(1)文体(2)人称(3)时态(4)要点求助信第一人称一般现在时一般将来时写信目的求助内容结束语Dear…,…(Para1)…(Para2)

…(Para3)

Yours(sincerely),LiHua1、列出提纲，构建框架结构请求帮助提出请求&约定时间感谢并期待答复说明困难写信目的根据交流对象选用称呼和结尾礼语DearSam,Yoursrespectfully,Yourstruly,Yourssincerely,介绍活动

2.要点罗列❶ask

youafavor❷signupforareadingactivityandwriteabookreview❸helpmecorrectit/makesomecorrections❹meetafterclassonFriday/sparemesometime❺thanksandexpectations3、依据提纲，扩展成文❶askyouafavorIamwritingtoaskyouafavor.IamLiHua,astudentfromourschool.Iamwritingtoaskyouafavor.

3、依据提纲，扩展成文

❷signupforareadingactivityandwriteabookreview

AsakeenloverofEnglishbooks,IsignedupforanEnglishorigialreadingactivityduringthesummervocation.IwroteabookreviewonmyfavoritebookJaneEyre.AsakeenloverofEnglishbooks,Isignedupforareadingactivityduringthesummervocation,whereIreadsomeEnglishoriginalsandwroteabookreview.Supporting+Key3、依据提纲，扩展成文

❸helpmecorrectit/makesomecorrectionsIamnotsurewhetherIhavegotmyideaacross,soIsincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmetocorrectitandgivemesomeadviceonwriting.

Beingpoorinwriting,Iamworriedtheremightbesomemistakes.

Wouldyoubesokindastohelpmemakesomecorrections?Supporting+KeyUsingaquestiontobepolite3、依据提纲，扩展成文❹meetafterclassonFriday/sparemesometimeIfpossible,canImeetyouafterclassOnFriday?

IfyouareavialableafterclassonFriday,pleasetellmeandIwillmeetyouinyouroffice.CanyousparemesometimeandtellmewhensothatIcangotomeetyou?ConcessionConcession+hIgh-frenquencywords3、依据提纲，扩展成文❺thanksandexpectationI’dbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeahand.Lookingforwardtoyourkindreply.

DearSam,IamLiHua,astudentfromourschool.Iamwritingtoaskafavorofyou.AsakeenloverofEnglishbooks,Isignedupforareadingactivityduringthesummervocation,whereIreadsomeEnglishoriginalsandwroteabookreviewonmyfavoritebookJaneEyre.ButIamnotsurewhetherIhavegotmyideaacross,soIsincerelyhopeyoucanhelpmetomakesomecorrectionsandgivemesomeadviceonwriting.CanyousparemesometimeandtellmewhensothatIcangotomeetyou?

I’dbegratefulifyoucouldgivemeahand.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua格式、要点、语言亲爱的山姆：我叫李华，是我们学校的学生。我写信是想请你帮个忙。作为英语书的狂热爱好者，我在暑假期间报名参加了一个阅读活动，在那里我读了一些英文原著，并写了一篇关于我最喜欢的书《简·爱》的书评。但是我不确定我的想法是否被理解了，所以我真诚地希望你能帮我改正，并给我一些写作建议。你能抽出点时间告诉我什么时候去见你吗？如果你能帮我一把，我将不胜感激。期待您的回复。谨上，李华Homework:Writealetterofaskingforhelp假设你是高一学生李华，正在忙着备战

期末考试，但是发现很难集中精力学习，请给你的英国朋友Alex写一封邮件，向他求助。内容包括：1.你的困难；2.寻求帮助。PossibleVersion1Dear

Alex,I'mLiHua,aSenior1student.Occupiedinpreparingformyfinalexamination,Ifinditchallengingtodevotemyselftostudy.Therefore,I'mwritingforyourassistance.

Firstofall,spendingtoomuchtimeonhomework,Ihardlyhavetimetotakeexercise.Besides,themoreIthinkoftheexpectationfromtheteachersandmyparents,themorestressed

Ifeel.Whattroublesmemost

isthatit'saheadacheformetofallasleep.

Shouldyoubekindtoreplytomepromptly,Iwouldbehighlyappreciated.

Yours,

Li

Hua亲爱的亚历克斯：我是李华，一名高一学生。忙于准备期末考试，我发现全身心投入学习很有挑战性。因此，我写信是为了寻求您的帮助。首先，在作业上花费太多时间，我几乎没有时间去锻炼。此外，我越是想到老师和父母对我的期望，我的压力就越大。最让我烦恼的是，睡着对我来说是件头疼的事。如果您能及时回复我，我将不胜感激。你的，李华PossibleVersion2DearAlex,How'severythinggoing?ThesedaysIhavebeenstrugglingwithmyEnglishlearning.