限时作文专项训练应用文 续写练习-高三英语写作专项

作文练习1假定你是李华，你的表妹Alice去市区的一所高中学校上学。由于离家很远，她很不适应离开父母后的生活，于是向你写信求助。请你给她回封信，信的内容包括：1.给与安慰；2.分析现状；3.提出建议。注意：1.词数80左右；2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearAlice,Iamsosorrytohearfromyouthatyouhavesometroubleinyournewlife.Wishyouhappyeveryday!Yours,LiHua续写：Itwastimetogohome.“Remembertoworkonyourclassspeechesforhomework,”MissWalker

calledaseveryonestartedtalkingandpackingtheirschoolbags.

Jenny

feltsick.Shehatedhavingtoreadaloudinclass.Shewassureeveryonegotreallyboredlisteningtoher.Once,whenJennywasreadingoutherholidaydiary,

Lee

wasevenlookingathis

watch,asilverandblueonewhichseemedjust

magical.JennywatchedLee

walk

aheadofherastheyleftschool.Heseemedsoclever,andhehadacertainsortofshining

confidence.Hewasjustoneofthosepeoplewhoweregoodateverything.Jennysighed.Assheturnedthecomer,shesawLee’swatchlyingrightinthemiddleofthepath.Jennyknewsheshouldjustpickitupand

return

ittohim,butshedidn’twanttorunafterhim.Jennybentdownquickly,pickedupthewatchandranhome.Onarrivinghome,Jennyputitonalmostwithoutthinking.Shewassurpriseditfittedsowell.Shewalkedtothemirrorandstartedpracticingher

speech.Wordsjust

floodedout

ofher.“I’mgoingtotalkaboutswimming.Ihavebeenlucky.I’vewonlotsofcompetitions.ButwhenI’minarace,I’mnotreallythinkingaboutwinning.I’mjustlovingthefeelingofbeinginthewater…”Jennylaughedwithexcitement.Shewalkedacrosstheroom.Shesuddenlyseemedtohaveacertainsortofconfidence.Turningbacktothemirror,Jennysawaflashoflightfromthewatchintheglass.Theflashesofsilverseemedalmostmagical.SomaybeLee’swatchreallyDIDhavesomethingmagicaboutit.Thenextday,asthelessonbegan,MissWalkeraskedwhowasgoingtobebraveandgofirst.Nobodymoved.Jennyslowlyraisedherarm.BeforeMissWalkercouldsayanything,therewasashoutfrombehind.“She’sstolenmywatch!”Leesaidangrily,“Itwentmissingatschoolyesterday.”EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeechfirst.__________________________________________________________________________DearAlice,Iamsosorrytohearfromyouthatyouhavesometroubleinyournewlife.Itisnaturalforustomissourparentsthefirsttimeweleavehome.However,wecannotlivewithourparentsforeverbecauseoffurthereducation,employmentorsomethingelse.Ibelieveyoumustrealizethatpresentseparationwillnotonlyhelpyourstudybutalsoimproveyourpersonalability.Youcanmakenewfriendsinyourschoolandshareideaswithyourclassmateswhoarephysicallyclosesttoyounow.Ialsosuggestyouenjoyyourselfbytakinganactivepartindifferentkindsofactivitiesinschool.Youwillgetmuchpleasurefromit.Wishyouhappyeveryday!Yours,LiHua【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给表妹Alice写一封信，针对她遇到的问题给与安慰并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累正常的：normal→natural永远，总是：always→forever参加：participatein→takepartin各种各样的：various→differentkindsof2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Youwillgetmuchpleasurefromit.拓展句：Ibelievethatyouwillgetmuchpleasurefromit.【点睛】[高分句型1]Ibelieveyoumustrealizethatpresentseparationwillnotonlyhelpyourstudybutalsoimproveyourpersonalability.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Youcanmakenewfriendsinyourschoolandshareideaswithyourclassmateswhoarephysicallyclosesttoyounow.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)Onepossibleversion:EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.

Jennydidn’tanswer.Howcouldsheexplainaboutthewatchanditsmagic?Noonecouldunderstand.Noonecouldbelieve.“ButIsawyouwearingityesterday,”MissWalkergentlyremindedhim.ForamomentLeeremainedsilentandthenheapologizedhehadjustrememberedthat.Jennywasrelievedsayingshehadfounditonthewayhomeanddecidedtoreturnitafterthespeech.Everybodywaspuzzledandaskedwhy.Jennyagainwasspeechless.

MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeechfirst.Jennywalkedslowlytothefront.Shecouldn’tthinkproperly.Allroundher,aseaoffaceswaswatching.Shefeltsofrightenedandthewatchdidn’tseemmagicalatall.SuddenlyshesawMissWalker’sencouragingeyes.Jennytookadeepbreath.“I’mgoingtotalkaboutswimming…”TenminuteslaterthewholeclassstoodupapplaudingJenny’swonderfulspeech.Jennysmiledassheeventuallyrealizedtherealsourceofconfidence.Anotherversion:EverybodywasfixingtheireyesinJenny,waitingforanexplanation.Deadsilencesuddenlyfell.SoembarrassedwasJennythatshefeltherfaceburningandhermindgoingblank.Despitetheunwillingnesstoadmitit,shehadactuallymadethemostshamefulmistake.

Jenny

wasthrownintoadilemmawhethertotellthetruthornot.Consideringthewell-prepared

speech

andthemagicofthewatch,shepluckeduphercourage,utteringinabeggingtone,“But

MissWalker,couldIdeliverthespeechfirst?”Alltheclassmatesfellintotremendouscuriosity,eagertowitnessherperformance.Atthat,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeech.Overwhelmedwithexcitement,Jennyconfidentlymadeherwaytotheplatform,words

floodingout

ofherfluently.Neverbeforeinherlifehadshedeliveredsuchaterrificspeech.PraisesspreadaroundtheclassroomandevenMissWalkernoddedwithapproval.Feelingincrediblyrefreshed,Jennyfinishedherspeech,whichwasgreetedwiththunderousapplause.Relieved,Jennyexposedthetruthandespeciallythemagicofthe

watch.“Butit’sjustanordinarywatchwithoutanymagic.”announced

Lee.NotuntilthendidJennyrealizetherealsourceof

confidence

comesfromhiseffortratherthanthewatch.【分析】本文为读后续写。前文是Jenny捡到了Lee的手表，感觉自己的演讲变得流畅了。可是在她第二天要上台演讲时，Lee指认Jenny偷了他的手表，Jenny恳求老师让自己先演讲，Jenny流利的演讲得到了老师和同学们的赞扬，Jenny分享了手表有魔力的事情，可是Lee说手表没有魔力，其实是Jenny自己努力的结果。【详解】根据前文的故事以及第一段EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.可知第一段应该是Jenny在被Lee揭穿后所做的反应，再根据第二段Atthatmoment,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny’sspeechfirst.可知第一段中Jenny应该是要求先听完Jenny的演讲，或者是老师要求先听Jenny的演讲，稍后处理Lee的watch的事。第二段则应该主要写Jenny演讲的效果良好以及演讲后对Lee的手表做出解释。高分句型1:倒装句型SoembarrassedwasJennythatshefeltherfaceburningandhermindgoingblank.本句使用了倒装句型。本句使用了so…that句型，so+形容词放句首句子用部分倒装。Neverbeforeinherlifehadshedeliveredsuchaterrificspeech.本句never为否定词，放句首，句子用部分倒装。NotuntilthendidJennyrealizetherealsourceofconfidencecomesfromhiseffortratherthanthewatch.本句notuntil否定短语放句首，句子要用部分倒装。高分句型2：Consideringthewell-preparedspeechandthemagicofthewatch,shepluckeduphercourage,utteringinabeggingtone.现在分词做原因状语。Overwhelmedwithexcitement,Jennyconfidentlymadeherwaytotheplatform,wordsfloodingoutofherfluently.过去分词做原因状语。Feelingincrediblyrefreshed,Jennyfinishedherspeech,whichwasgreetedwiththunderousapplause.现在分词做伴随状语。Relieved,Jennyexposedthetruthandespeciallythemagicofthewatch.过去分词做伴随状语。这几句都使用了非谓语动词做状语。应用文典型错误改错：Ifeelsympathytoyourfeelings.同情(n.)____________同情的(adj.)______________同情(v.)______________我同情你。(1)___________________________（2）___________________________（3）_______________________________Youwon’tfeelalone.Youcanaskhelpforyourteacher.Everyfeelsadwhentheyfirstleavehome.Youcancallaphonetoyourparents.Isuggestyoutohangout.Isuggestthatyoucanplanyourtime.Isuggestyoufindingnewfriends.Youshouldadjustthenewenvironment/life.应用文典型错误改错：Ifeelsympathytoyourfeelings.同情(n.)____________同情的(adj.)______________同情(v.)______________我同情你。(1)___________________________（2）___________________________（3）_______________________________2.Youwon’tfeelalone.3.Youcanaskhelpforyourteacher.4.Everyfeelsadwhentheyfirstleavehome.5.Youcancallaphonetoyourparents.6.Isuggestyoutohangout.Isuggestthatyoucanplanyourtime.Isuggestyoufindingnewfriends.7.Youshouldadjustthenewenvironment/life.应用文典型错误改错：1.Ifeelsympathytoyourfeelings.同情(n.)____________同情的(adj.)______________同情(v.)______________我同情你。(1)___________________________（2）___________________________（3）________________________