Unit 4 Write a Summary 课件-高中英语人教版（2019）必修第一册

Writeasummaryn.影响；结果Followthestepsbelowtowriteasummaryforthetextonpage50.ReadingforWritingStep1.Writealistofthemaindetails.Step2.Writedownthemainideaofeachparagraphbasedonthedetails.Step3.Organizetheideasanddraftyoursummary.Step4.Exchangedraftsandgivefeedbackonyourpartner’sdraft.新闻摘要写作是对一篇新闻主要内容的提炼和浓缩，要求学生通过阅读，能理解新闻的主要内容、提炼其关键信息并能概括归纳其要点。这种写作方式既要求学生有准确的理解能力，又要求学生具有高度的概括能力。新闻摘要新闻摘要写作一般分为以下四个步骤：第一步：阅读新闻，摘选关键信息。掌握新闻主要内容和结构，摘出事件发生时间、地点、起因、结果以及可能的后续活动等。第二步：总结新闻各段主旨大意。概括总结新闻每段的中心意思，按照顺序列出要点，保留新闻中的主要事实，省略不必要的事实细节和事例。第三步：组织语言。用自己的语言表达，可借鉴词语和句子。长度是原文1/3，内容只包括重要信息或事例。不需要加入自己的感情色彩和评论。第四步：修改内容，定稿。

1.Asummaryisashortstatement.2.Ittellsthemainideasandonlyliststhemostimportantinformation.3.Itdoesn’tliterallycopytheoriginaltext,whichrequiresustowriteinourownwords.FeaturesofsummarySummary

概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再现。《考试说明》中规定概要写作阅卷时按5个档次给分，其中最高档次第五档(21-25points)的评分标准是：1.理解准确，涵盖全部要点；2.能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇；3.完全使用自己的语言；4.有效使用了语句间的连接成分，使完成的概要结构紧凑。

写作方法:1.定位——查找核心信息

通过阅读定位语篇的核心信息，包括核心单词，核心短语和核心句子。(句子为主，以单词和短语为辅)2.改写——用自己的语言改写信息

在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式尽可能实现大规模的改变。改写过程中，原则上字数不超过原句，不改变原文的逻辑结构，充分考虑语句压缩。3.核查——添加关联词，检查句子的连贯性

核查句子的连贯性。核查标点、语法、连接词及字数，优先考虑使用较短的连接词，如：but，then，later等。

Part1(paragraph1)Part2(paragraph2&3)Part3(paragraph4&5)A:Theeffectoftheearthquake.B:Thefollowingeventsaftertheearthquake.C:date,placeandevent.Figureoutmainideaofeachparagraph.Review

Part1(paragraph1):date,placeandevent.EventDatePlaceAnearthquakehitTangshanChinaon28July1976.(2).Reviewthemainpointsofeachparagraph.

Part2(paragraph2＆3):

TheeffectoftheearthquakeEffectEffect(2).Reviewthemainpointsofeachparagraph.

Part3(paragraph4＆5):Thefollowingeventsafterthequake

Soldiersandmedicalworkerscameandbeganrescuingandrebuildingthecitysoonafterthequakes.FollowingeventFollowingevent(2).Reviewthemainpointsofeachparagraph.Step1.Readthetextandwritealistofthemaindetails.Strangethingshappenedinthecountrysidebeforetheearthquake.Anearthquakehit_________Chinaon28July1976.TangshanThenumberofpeoplewhowerekilledorbadlyinjuredinthequakewasmorethan400,000.Nearlyeverythinginthecitywasdestroyed.Soldiersandmedicalworkerscameandbeganrescuingandrebuildingthecitysoonafterthequakes.Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthetirelesseffortsofthecity’speople,anewTangshanwasbuiltupontheearthquakeruins.Step2.Writedownthemainideaofeachparagraphbasedonthedetailsabove.StrangethingshappenedinthecountrysideofHebei,China.AstrongearthquakehitTangshanandmanypeoplewerekilledorinjured.Thecitywasgreatlyaffectedandnearlydestroyed.Therescueworkbegansoonafterthequakes.Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthecity’speople,thenewcityofTangshanwasbuilt.Step3.Organizetheideasanddraftyoursummary.Payattentiontothefollowing:Asummaryshouldbearoundonethirdthelengthoftheoriginaltext.Writedownthekeysupportingpointsforthetopic.Donotincludeunimportantdetailsorexamples.n.长；长度

Paraphrase/rewiteExpressthemeaningofusingdifferentwords,especiallytoachievegreaterclarity.Whatcanwedoafterfindingthemainpoints?Whatcanwedoafterfindingthemainpoints?On26December2004,atsunamikilledmorethan6,500tourists,fishermenand

otherlocalsinSoutheastAsia.

Monday,27December2004.Themostpowerfulearthquake…causedatsunami…yesterday,killing

morethan6500peopleinIndonesia,India,Thailand,Malaysia…Fishermen,tourists,hotels,homesandcarsweresweptaway.Listthemainpoints12RewritethemainpointsSimplifyandcombineChangethesentencepattern（Para1）

paraphrase(summary1)Thousandsofpeoplearemissingandthenumberofdeathsisexpectedtogrow.Thedamagecausedbythetsunamiismakingitdifficultforrescueworkerstohelpthesurvivors.

Thousandsofpeoplearestillmissing,andthenumberofdeathsisexpectedtogrow.However,dangerousconditionsanddamagedroadswillmakeitdifficultto

deliverfoodandsupplies.12RewritethemainpointsSimplifyandcombineChangethesentencepattern（Para3）（summary3）ListthemainpointsStepsofsummarywriting.paraphrase(3).Rewritethemainpointsofeachparagraph(inyourownwordsaspossibleasyoucan).Onepossibleversion:Strangethingsoccurredinthecountrysidebeforetheearthquake.On28July1976,Tangshanwashit\struckbyanearthquake.Para1.Strangethingshappenedinthecountrysidebeforetheearthquake.AnearthquakehitTangshanChinaon28July1976.

ChangethevoiceUsesynonymsoccurredstruckOnepossibleversion:Morethan400,000peopleweredeadorinjured.Para2.Thenumberofpeoplewhowerekilledorbadlyinjuredinthequakewasmorethan400,000.Changethesentencepatterndead(3).Rewritethemainpointsofeachparagraph(inyourownwordsaspossibleasyoucan).Onepossibleversion:Thecitywasnearly/almostruined.Para3.Nearlyeverythinginthecitywasdestroyed.Changethesubjectalmostruined(3).Rewritethemainpointsofeachparagraph(inyourownwordsaspossibleasyoucan).Onepossibleversion:Soldiersandmedicalworkersarrivedandstartedrescuingandrebuildingworkrightafterthequakes.Para4.Soldiersandmedicalworkerscameandbeganrescuingandrebuildingthecitysoonafterthequakes.Usesynonymsarrivedstarted(3).Rewritethemainpointsofeachparagraph(inyourownwordsaspossibleasyoucan).Onepossibleversion:Becauseofthegovernment’ssupportandthepeople'sefforts,webuiltanewTangshan.Para5.Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthetirelesseffortsofthecity'speople,anewTangshanwasbuiltupontheearthquakeruins.withthegovernment’ssupport/aidChangethevoice(3).Rewritethemainpointsofeachparagraph(inyourownwordsaspossibleasyoucan).sStrangethingsoccurredinthecountrysidebeforetheearthquake.on28July1976,Tangshanwashitbyanearthquake.Morethan400,000peopleweredeadorinjured.Andthecitywa