2019高考英语写作专项讲解

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二、课堂练习练习一：GurdeciWriting1-3Directicns;WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-lSflword5日匚cordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.A练习一：GurdeciWriting1-3Directicns;WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-lSflword5日匚cordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.A.近些牟,村桶市先后出现了看琢恥象.iS绪合下固谀谨祢对勇垂冋陋（haze＞術看法，你旳丈草必烦包括:1.面客舟述週片内容:2.谈谀彳尔在詔SB氏的惑妥井4S出你的应对建Asisvividlyportrayedinthepicture,peopleinbigcitiesaresufferingfromhaze,forcingthemtoguardagainsthaze.Incontemporarysociety,hazehasbecomeoneoftheseriouspollutantsinChina,especiallyinhighly-developedcitiessuchasShanghaiandBeijing.Onconditionthatweareinhazeforalongtime,wewillnotonlyfeelfrustratedbutalsosufferfromavarietyofdiseases.Itsoundsunbelievable,butithappensarounduswheneverandwherever.Boththegovernmentandthecitizensshouldseeksolutionstohandlethisproblem.Initiallythegovernmentshouldspendmoremoneypromotingthedevelopmentofanti-pollutiontechnology.Moreover,moreeffectiveenvironmentalpoliciesoughttobemadeandcarriedout.Inaddition,thepublicawarenessofprotectingtheenvironmentissupposedtoberaised.Forexample,wecanchoosepublictransportationsandbicyclesinsteadofprivatecars.Tosumup,onlyinthesewayscanwerelieverenvironmentalpollutionlikehazetobetterourlife.三、课堂小结五、课后作业练习二：随着上海近几年的快速发展，私家车越来越多，曾经很宽阔的马路现在也变得很拥堵，作为上海市民中的一员，请你想出几条办法来解决交通拥堵现象。你的写作要满足以下要求：1.描述交通拥堵现象；2.说明你解决交通拥堵的办法。Currently,withtherapidgrowthineconomyofShanghai,privatecarshavebeenincreasinglypopularwithpeople.Meanwhile,theroadsarebecomingmorecrowdedasaresultoftheheavytraffic.Tosolvetheproblem,Iamgoingtoputforwardseveralfeasibleideasbelow.Firstly,takingataxishouldbeadvocated.Itistruethatgoinganywhereinaprivatecariscomfortableandconvenient.However,thecostofacarincludepetrolfees,parkingfees,insurancefeesandothercosts,whichresultsinabigsumofmoneypaidforcarswhilethereisnoneedforitbytakingataxi.What'smore,moreroadscanbebuilttorelievethetrafficburden.Andatthesametime,busesshouldhavetheirownspecialroutessothatmorepeoplewilltakethepublicbusesinsteadoftravellingbyprivatecarsandbicycles.Besides,takingundergroundisanotherbetterwaytogoout,especiallyinrushhoursaswellasinabusystreet.Inthisway,youwillneverbeworriedaboutthetrafficjam.Instead,youwillgetrelievedfromagreatamountofcostandatenselife.Tosumup,theproblemoftrafficjamisanurgentoneconcerningsafetyandconvenience.It'sourdutytotakeactionstosolveit.美文欣赏Whatishappiness?Whatishappiness?Onehundredpeoplehaveonehundredwaysoflife,thushaveonehundreddefinitionsforhappiness.Butonecommonpointisthatitissomethingthatmakesyouhappyandgivesyouwarmth.Infact,happinessissimple,andiseasytogetaslongasyoudonotwanttoomuch,Forabeggar,happinessmeansthathecaneatabigmeal.Forachild,happinessmeansthathecanplayasmuchashecan.Foranold,happinessmeansthatthefolkcouldaccompanyhimeveryday.Suchishappiness.Itdoesnotrelatehowmuchmoneyyouearn;Itdoesnotconcernhowluxuriousyourlifeis;Anditdoesnotmindhowcreditableyourjobis.JustlikeChrisGardner,theprotagonistofThePursuitofHappiness,thoughhardworkandlifeare,sufferingtheabandonmentfromhiswife,heisstilloptimisticandfeelssatisfied,becaussethereishissonaccompanyinghim.Hisson,forhim,meansthehappiness.Sosimplehappinessis,however,mostpeopledonotfeelhappy.Theycomplaintheydonothavemuchmoney,yetneglectthefamilyarearoundwithhim.Theyarealwaysfightingforahigherposition,yetignorethepeacefullifetheylive.Theythinktheyshouldalsoliveanextravagantlifeasotherpeople,yetdonotrealizethelonelinessthattherichexperience.Thushowcantheyfeelhappyinthisway?Forme,happinessmeansthatIhavethefamilytoaccompany,havefriendstohaveaheart-to-hearttalk,havesomethingmeaningfultodo.Suchishappiness.WhatishappinessHappinessisanicefeelingwhichcomesfromtheinside.Andinmyopinion,happinessisaneasythingthatwecanfeeleveryminute.Asachild,happinesssignifiesakindoffeelingofsatisfaction.Astheyoung,happinessmeanshavingaharmoniousfamily.Astheelderpeople,happinessindicatestheirchildrencouldaccompanywiththem.Inaword,peoplehavedifferentopinionsonhappinessatdifferentperiods:adolescence,middle-agedandelderlypeople.Forachild,happinessmeansjustakindoffeelingofsatisfaction.WhenIamyoung,myunderstandingofhappinessissimple.Forexample,myhappinesscomesfromtheSpringFestival.Becausemymotherwillbuymanynewclothesforme,myfatherwillbuymanysnacksformeandmygrandparentswillgivemelotsofmoneywhichIcanusetobuymanytoys,Ilikespringfestival.SohappinessindicatesthatIamtheemperorinourfamilies,wehaveneverbeenpunishedafterwedosomethingwrong,wecanplaygamesfreely;andwecanwatchTVwheneverwewant.Howsimplechildren'shappinessis!Forthemiddle-aged,happinessmeanshaveaharmoniousfamily.Ifwehaveastablejobandasatisfactorysalary,wewillfeelhappy.Inourholidays,ifwecantakeourfamiliestotravelandrelaxourselves,wewillfeelhappy.Forexample,theTVseries“TheHappinessofTheFirstChild”showsustheanswertohappinessandhappinesslifeistheordinarybutnotmediocrity.Happinessindicatesmakingdinnerformyfamilyontimeeveryday;orhappinessiswashingbowlsbutneversaytired;orhappinessisparingapplesformyparents;orhappinessisgivinghimacupofteaaftermyfatherfinishbathing.Sohavingharmoniousfamiliesishappinessforthemiddle-aged.However,forelderlypeople,theirhappinessissimple.Whattheyneedispromisetheirchildrencouldaccompanywiththemandtheyarehealthy.Forexample,mygrandparentsneednotworryabouttheirbasicnecessitiesoflife,buttheyalwaysfeellonelyatthesametime.ThedaytheyexpectmostistheSpringFestivalinwhichdaymyfamilymembersgettogether.Duringthosedays,weaccompanywiththem,andsmileisfulloftheirface.Atthattime,Iaskthemwhytheyaresopleased,theanswertheygivemeisjustthatyouareallhere.Soinourholidays,weshouldgohomeandseeourparentsandgrandparents.Itwillmakethemfeelhappy.Maybeinourlives,wealwayspursuehighgloryandmuchmoremoney.Howeverwhenwehaveallofthosethings,wefeelwearenothappy.Whatishappinessonearth?Inmyopinion,happinessdoesnotmeanpossessionmanyluxuriousthings,butitisafeelingwhenwestaywithourfamiliesandrecallthememorythatwehaveexperienced.Happinessisthemostpreciousofthingintheworld,soweshouldcherishhappinessaroundus.However,forelderlypeople,theirhappinessissimple.Whattheyneedispromisetheirchildrencouldaccompanyw