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四级写作考试冲刺班内部笔记写作的重要性6分最低限,只要结构不出错,得分应该为9分。评判作文四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。内容不跑题即可,注意:1.不要妄图以情动人;2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。(TopicSentence)(Conclusion)。语言最重要,往往使评分产生重大差异,语言要模仿和包装。基本表达人们认为人们普遍认为Itisgenerallyagreed/believedthat越来越:beincreasingly+adj.,beontherise,thegrowingnumberof万能理由(Omnipotence)1.方便:convenient/convenience2.效率:efficient/efficiently/efficiency3.节省和浪费:savetime/money/space;economical,thrift;wastetime/money/space;costly,lavish4.人的心理健康:independent,cooperative,competitive,considerate,confident,creative,sociable,perseverance;selfish,isolated,conservative5.人的身体健康:health,disease,strong,strength,energetic6.娱乐:colorful,pleasure,joy,recreation,entertainment,relax,tired,boring,lonely7.环境:environment,pollute,poisonous,dirty8.安全和危险:safe,danger,risk9.经验:experience,socialexperience,enterthesociety110.人际:humane,fair,unfair,help,assist,freedom,freely写完之后修改注意:(内容方面尽量不要修改)1、字母大小写2、怪符号3、单词拼写4、主谓一致5、动词时态6、名词单复数来源实例一题目:Bicycles――AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提纲:(1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及(2)和汽车的比较(3)自行车在中国的前途Score:14BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople--manandwoman,oldandyoung--ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled“thekingdomofbicycles”.注:1.第一句总写,第二句和第三句分写,最后总写。:考2.Duringtherushhour分词结构开头。3.Almostadv.几乎,差不多3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadriver2toparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.注:1.Comparedwithcars分词结构开头。2.besuperiorto/beinferiorto优于/低于3.First,second,third英语语言有层次感,信号词4.cheap便宜,最好用inexpensive5.begoodforhealth对健康有好处(万能理由)6.Moreover表示递进Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.注:promising有前途的apromisingyoungmanScore:11aaaaa注:第一句应该用therebe结构aaaaaaa3IaaaII、对比观点选择题:1.有人认为„„;2.另外一些人认为„„;3.谈谈你的观点和看法。(最好写成4段)实例二99年6月真题ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?Outline:1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应当博览群书3.我的想法Howshouldweread?Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?Everyonehashisownview.Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.4Who’sright?Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:(启)ParagraphI:(1)引出将要评论的事物或者是观点;(2)简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。Score:14分Howshouldweread?Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?Everyonehashisownview.(启)注:第一句提出问题,第二句提出两种见解典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:(承)ParagraphII:(1)提出一种观点或优点;(2)本段的支持性分论点;(3)本段总结(可以省略)。Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What’smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn’treadthem.Sincewecan’treadallthebooksandweshouldn’treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.(承)注:1.本段总分总结构52.theyarguethat=theythinkthat3.withthedevelopmentof...随着„„的发展4.what'smore递进关系,moreover5.bad=pornographic色情的&violent暴力的(转)ParagraphIII(1)承上启下的过渡句;(2)提出另一种观点或缺点;(3)本段的支持性分论点(4)本段总(可以省略)。Butothersmaynotagree,theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledge,hewillhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.(转)注:1.But转折词(信号词)2.theyemphasizethat=theythinkthat3.today'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas现代社会今昔非比4.许多知识awiderangeofknowledge/alargescopeofknowledge/muchknowledge;获取知识acquire/getknowledge65.knowsnothing→little;hemaybeuseless→hemaynotbeofgreatusetothesociety后者比前者更委婉典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构:(合)ParagraphIV:(1)平衡两种看法;(2)给出自己的观点。Who’sright?Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.(合)Score:11分Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.注:结构非常好,可以套用。Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.注:1.“people,who...,”应去掉逗号,改为限制性定语从句。2.asmanyasbadbooks改为asmanyasbadones3.leadustothewrongway改为leadsb.astray74.theysuggestthat=theythinkthat5.touch碰(闪光点词汇:如教材P7shoulderingtheresponsibilityofdoingsth.肩负起责任)But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthat“toknowmore,toreadmore”.Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.注:1.hold认为同样表示“think”的词还有argue,emphasize,believe,suggest,claim,insist,maintain,agree,hold2.thebestbook在西方国家是“圣经”的意思3.toknowmore,toreadmore错误,中式英语Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.范文22.IsTelevisionaBlessingoraCurse?Now,itisgenerallyacceptedthattelevisionplaysanimportantpartinpeople’slives.But,thereisanongoingheateddiscussionastowhethertelevisionisablessingoracurse.8注:itisgenerallyacceptedthat人们通常认为Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople,televisionkeepsonebetterinformedaboutcurrentevents,allowsonetofollowthelatestdevelopmentsinpoliticsandscience,andoffersanendlessseriesofprogramswhicharebothinstructiveandstimulating.Themostdistantcountries,thestrangestcustomsandthemostattractivescenesofnaturearebroughtrightintoone’sroom.试大-英语四级考试注:1.Asisoftenpointedoutbysomepeople=Somepeoplethinkthat2.“使„„”不用make,而用keep,allow,offerHowever,otherpeopleinsistthattelevisionisacurseratherthanablessing.Theyarguethatithasbroughtaboutmanyseriousproblems.Themajoroneisitseffectsonyoungpeople.Theyarenowsousedtogettingtheirinformation,educationandentertainmentfromtelevisionthattheirliteracyaswellasphysicalabilityhasbeengreatlyweakened.Evenworsethanthat,vulgarcommercialsandindecentprogramsmaycultivatetheirbadtastes,distorttheirviewpointstowardshumanlifetosuchadegreethattheirmindsmightbecorrupted.Insummary,televisionhasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Whatevereffectsithas,onethingiscertain,televisioninitselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itistheusestowhichitisputthatdeterminesitsvaluetosociety.范文5.TravellingPeoplewholiketravellinghavetheirreasons.Theymaintainthat9travellingcanhelpthemexpandtheirscopeofknowledge,especiallygeographicalandhistoricallearning.Theygoontopointoutthattouringwillprovidemorechanceforthemtoenjoyfoodandtryonclothesthattheyotherwisecannotpossiblehave.注:geographicalandhistorical押尾韵,如:押头韵clear&cleanThosewhodisliketravellinghavetheirreasons.Theywouldarguethattravellingmeansaconsiderableamountofmoneyandenergy.Forexample,trafficandaccommodationrequiremoneyandwalkingwhileseeingsightsoftentiresyou.Inpractice,travellingdoesmoregoodthanharm.Ifyourfinanceandhealthpermit,youmightaswelldosometravellingfromtimetotime.Itwillatleastenableyoutogetfamiliarwithpeopleandthingsthatyouwillprobablygrowtolikeandlove.注:1.inpractice=Ithink2.doesmoregoodthanharm好处比坏处多,其他表达方法:besuperiorto/inferiorto比如:theadvantagesaresuperiortothedisadvantages3.enable使范文1.IsaTestofSpokenEnglishNecessary?AtestofspokenEnglishwillbeincludedasanoptionalcomponentoftheCollegeEnglishTest(CET).SomepeoplearguethatitisabsolutelynecessarytoholdatestofspokenEnglishinChinabecausewehavebeeninformedfrequentlythataChinesestudentwhohasbeenlearningEnglishforovertenyearscannotevencommunicatewithanativespeaker.SometimeseventhosetopstudentswhoexcelingrammarandwritingskillsfindtheirEnglishinadequatetoexpresstheirthoughtsfreely.Atest10ofEnglishwillbringthecollegestudentsanawarenessoftheimportanceoforalEnglish,andwillthushelpthemwiththeircommunicatingskills.使句子具有表现力的手段:1、用形容词修饰名词;2、副词修饰动词、副词修饰形容词Ontheotherhand,someothersstillmaintainthatagoodcommandofreadingandwritingskillswillbeenoughfortheEnglishlearners.Tosomeextenttheiropinionderivesfromthefactthatstudentsarealreadyunderconsiderablepressurefromtheiropinionderivesfromthefactthatstudentsarealreadyunderconsiderablepressurefromtheircoursework.Anotherrequiredtestwillonlyaddtotheirburden.Moreover,somestudentsmaytaketheshortcutbyfocusingonseveralguessedquestionsaccordingtothefixedformatofthetest,hopingforacoincidencetobringthemgoodluck.Inmyopinion,atestofspokenEnglishwilldomoregoodthanharm.SinceChinawillcontinueitspolicyofopeningandreform,theabilitytospeakEnglishfluentlyisamustforanyonewhowantstosurpassothersinahighlycompetitivesociety.WhetherItakethetestornot,IshallsparenoeffortstopracticeoralEnglishintheremainingyearsofmycollegestudy.范文21.Shouldsmokingbebanned?Shouldsmokingbebanned?Answerstothisquestionvarygreatly.Somepeopleareinfavoroftheideaofsmoking.Theyalwayssaythatitcangetridofthetirednessandmakethemrefreshed.Andtheyalsosaythatgivingandbeinggivencigarettesisasignoffriendship.Therefore,theycarrycigaretteswiththemwherevertheygo.11注:1.varygreatly许多种2.beinfavorof=agree/beoftheopinionthat3.getridofthetirednessandmakethemrefreshed使人神清气爽4.Givingandbeinggiven给与被给。主、被动关系在英文中用现在、过去分词表达。a注:1.Theyhaveheardtheofficialreportsthat...官方报告表明..2.bemorelikelyto更有可能,更容易3.chance可能tooverweight超重2.最后用两句反问句结尾,非常精妙。课后作业PrivateCars写成4段的首段写法:①12②a③aa写成3段的首段写法:/)支持段的主题句:Somepeopleclaimthat/Asispointedoutthat/Itisgenerallybelievedthat/Itiswidelyacceptedthat,therearesomeadvantagesofowningaprivatecar.13Thereisnodoubtthatprivatecarsbenefitpeoplehugely.支持段的分论点:①方便First,privatecarsprovidepeoplewiththemostconvenientformoftransportation.②舒适Second,itiscomfortableforpeopletotravelin,especiallyinchangeableweather/rainingdays/sandstorm.③炫耀Third,onlyaprivatecarcanshowaperson'ssocialstatus/achievement/success/prosperityinhisorhercareer.否定段的主题句:①However(Nonetheless/Nevertheless/But),therearesomedisadvantagesofowingaprivatecar/Everycoinhastwosides.②Whileenjoyingtheconveniencethatprivatecarsbringus,weshouldnotignoretheproblemtheycreate/produce/introduce/make.③Despite/Inspiteof/Foralltheadvantages,theybringstheirowndisadvantages/problems/negativeeffects④Likeanythingelse,privatecarsalsohavetheirownweakness/limits.⑤However,privatecarsarenotwithoutshortcomings/faults.14⑥Yetotherspeakoftheproblemsprivatecarshavebrought.Theycomplainthat......⑦However,privatecarsmayalsobringwithitproblemsoursocietyhadnotpreviouslyfaced.⑧Despitetheincreaseinefficiencyandconveniencegeneratedbyprivatecars,thechangestheybringcouldverywellleadtopotentiallyadverseconsequences.否定段的分论点:①占有空间Ontheonehand,privatecarstakeup/occupytoomuchspace.②交通事故Ontheotherhand,adrivershouldbecareful/cautiouswhiledriving,otherwise,caraccidentsaremorelikelytohappen.③污染环境What'smore/Inaddition,privatecarsgiveoff/discharge/releaseCOwhichpollutetheenvironment/air.superordinate的词;而下义词就是具体的东西,即subordinate的东西。第四段(总结段)的写法:①Despiteallthedisadvantagesmentionedabove,Istillthinkthattheadvantagesoutweigh/aregreaterthanthedisadvantages.Asfortheaboveproblem,I'msuretheywillbesettledbythescientistsinthe15future/Itisonlyamatteroftimefortheproblemstobesolved.②Unquestionably,thechallengeofprivatecarsmeansweallshouldconsiderhowwecancontrolthem,sothattheywillnotcontrolus.③Whethertheprivatecarsareablessingoracurseisadifficultquestiontoanswer,yetthedesireforthecomfortandindependenceaprivatecarcanbringwillnotbeelminated.④Anyway/Anyhow/Inanycase,whethertheeffectisgoodorbad,onethingiscertain:privatecarshavechangedandwillcontinuetochangethewayofourtransportation,ourleisureandourlife.范文一:Withtheincreaseinthegeneralstandardofliving,someordinaryChinesefamiliesbegintoaffordacar.Yetopinionsofthedevelopmentofaprivatecarvaryfrompersontoperson.Itgivesamuchgreaterdegreeofcomfortandownerofacarisnolongerforcedtoreplyonpublictransport,andhencenoirritationcausedbywaitingforbusesortaxis.However,othersstronglyobjecttodevelopingprivatecars.Theymaintainthatasmoreandmorecarsareproducedandruninthestreet,alargevolumeofpoisonousgaswillbegivenoff,pollutingtheatmosphereandcausingactualharmtothehealthofpeople.WhetherprivatecarsshouldbedevelopedinChicagoisadifficultquestiontoanswer,yetthedesireforthecomfortandindependenceaprivatecarcanbringwillnotbeeliminated.16范文二Nowadaysmoreandmorefamiliesownprivatecars.Privatecars,astheproductofmodemcivilization,havebeenplayingavitalroleinpeople'sdailyFirst,privatecarsareaconvenientmeansoftransportation.Youcangowhereveryoulike.Secondly,thereisnodoubtthatprivatecarswillhaveagreatimpactontheTherapidcarindustrygrowthwillcontributemuchtokeepingthecountry'seconomygrowingatahigherrateinthenearfutrue.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thedevelopmentoftheprivatecarswillbringaboutaseriesofproblems.Forexample,thepollutedairgivenoffbycarswilldogreatharmtoourhealth,toomanyprivatecarswillleadtotrafficjamsandagreatdealofenergywillbewastedandsoon.SoIthinkweshouldtakeadvantagesofpr
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