高考英语复习备考：英语读后续写-寻找林中莺

高考英语复习备考：英语读后续写一寻找林中莺阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。ASweetSong“Nothingwilleverbethesameagain,〃Allywhispered.Shesankslowlyintoherfather5sfavoritechairandstaredatthesmal1Americanflagonhisdesk.ItwastheflagwhichChiefRussellhadgiventoherafterthefunerallastsummer,whenhehuggedherandtoldherhowproudthePoliceDepartmentwasofherdad'sworkforthem.HistearshadwarmedAlly'scheeks;herowntearswerestillfrozeninsideherheart.Allylookedatherfather5spictureonthebookcase.Dadwassittinginthemiddleofastream,wetthroughbutgrinningproudly.〃Imissyou,Dad,〃shesaidsoftly.Bythistimelastyearshehadalreadytakendozensofpictures.Eversinceshecouldremember,sheandDadhadbeenateam,searchingthewoodsbehindthehouseeachweekendforaglimpseofthespecialwoodwaeblar（林中莺）.AllyreachedforthefirstphotoalbumsheandDadhadputtogether.Onthecoveratinyorangebirdwithbluegraywingsandsharpblackeyespeeredoutofthephotoherfnthenhadclippedfromalocalnewspaper.Allysmiled,rememberingtheexcitedlookonhisfacewhenhefirstshowedhertheprettybird.“Ally,Ibetifwesearchrealhard,we'11seethislittleguytogethersomeday.〃They'dneverspottedthewarbler,butherfatherhadanamazingwayofmakingeachoutingseemspecial.StayingwithDad,Allyfeltcomfortable,〃IfonlyIcouldgetthatgoodfeelingback,〃shethought,sighing.Staringatthebird,suddenly,sheknewexactlywhatshehadtodo.Grabbingthelittleflag,sheplacedhercameraaroundherneckandhurriedoutside.Allystucktheflagamongtheflowersinthegarden."Pleaseletmeseethewarbler,〃shemurmuredtoherself.ShegaveherworriedMomakissandthensetoffintothewoods.注意：1）所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.Paragraph2:Determinedtostartoutthenextmorning,shewasabouttoheadhomewhenaringingbirdsongfloateddowntoher.01文本解读本文是一篇记叙文。Ally的父亲去世了，他曾经是一名好警察；Ally非常伤心，但是她尽力克制自己的泪水；Ally看着书架上父亲的照片，想到了和父亲在一起的那些美好的时光，特别是寻找林莺的那些日子;但是，虽然曾经他们一再寻找，却从未发现一只林莺；于是，Ally带上相机，决定独自一人再次去寻找林莺。02写作指导(1)明确故事中心。故事主要人物为Ally以及她的父亲。(2)抓住主要事件。父亲去世，Ally很想念他，于是开始自己寻找林莺。(3)根据已知事件及续写段落首句预测故事发展。续写的第一段是以描述泥土的味道开始的，续写部分需要侧重Ally在没有父亲陪伴的情况下，独自一人去寻找林莺的心情以及寻找的结果。续写的第二段的首句交代了一个新的线索，即Ally听到了一声清脆的鸟鸣。那么在续写的时候，我们就要着重思考Ally究竟有没有找到林莺；若找到了，那结果又会如何呢。03PossibleVersionsVersion1:来自范文Paragraph1：Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.Somethingsneverchange,Allythought.Quickeningherpace,shehurriedtotherockbythestreamwheresheandherfatherusedtositandeatlunch.Shesatonit,withherfacetowardthesun.Overheadtheskywasfilledwithbirdsbusilydivingtogatherdriedgrasstoplaceintheirnests.Theirsweetsongsechoedthroughoutthewoods.Allyfeltcontentforthefirsttimeinalongwhile.Shecouldalmosthearherfather'slaughterinthegentlebreezeasshelistenedforthesweetsongofthespecialbird.Alltoosoon,thesundisappearedbehindthickgrayclouds.Paragraph2：Determinedtostartoutagainthenextmorning,shewasabouttoheadhomewhenringingbirdsongfloateddowntoher.Itwasprettierthananyshehadheardbefore.AnexcitedfeelingbubbledupinsideAllyasshesearchedthesky.Aflashoforangedasheddownandrestedonanearbybranch.ForamomentAllycouldn5tbelievehereyes,butitwastrue.Thetinywoodwaoblerjustsatthere,lookingaround,asifitwaswaitingforsomething.Allyblinkedbacktears."Thanks,Dad,“shewhisperedslowlyliftinghercameraandtakingcarefulaim."Thingswillbedifferentwithoutyou.「11alwaysmissourtimestogether,butIfeelbetternow.”Version2:改自学生习作Paragraph1：Familiarsmellsoftheearthroseuptogreether.Treebranchesstillwavedgentlyinthebreeze.Thestreamwheresheandherfatherusedtotakeabreakstillflowedmurmuringaround.“Nothingchangedbutmyfather,“Allysaidtoherself.Withtearsinhereyes,shethreadedherwaythroughthewoods,squeezedbetweenbushes,andsearchedeverywherecarefully,hopingtocapturetherarebutlovelycreature.Timeflew.Thesearch,however,turnedouttobefruitless.Unknowingly,pastmemoriesofherhavingfunwithherdadcrowedintohermind.Downhearted,sheletoutalongsigh.Paragraph2：Determinedtostartoutagainthenextmorning,shewasabouttoheadhomewhenringingbirdsongfloateddowntoher.Chirp.Chirp.Tweet.Tweet.Theysoundedlikeasingersingingasweetestsong.Withherpassionreignited,shesearchedeveryinchoftheskyforfearofmissingthelasthope.Suddenly,aflashoforangedasheddownandrestedonanearbybranch.Itwasawarbler!Overwhelmedbyamixtureofjoyandexcitement,Allygrabbedhercamera