努力学习快乐生活作文

读写任务作文评讲第1页，共21页。Howcanwesummarizethegivenmaterial?Herearethreestepstofollow!第2页，共21页。Thefirststep.

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Findoutthekeypointsofthepassage.How第3页，共21页。Threemostcommontypesofwriting:Thenarrativewriting（记叙文）Ex.EnglishWeeklyThe13thissueC2（挫折中笑迎生活）Theargumentativewriting（议论文）Ex.EnglishWeeklyThe16thissueC2（耐心的重要性）Theexpositorywriting（说明文）Ex.EnglishWeeklyThe5thissueC2（中学生劳动现象）紧扣主线，找要点论点，论据在每段中找中心句第4页，共21页。Thefirststep.

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Presentthekeyinformationproperly.第5页，共21页。注意：时态（记叙文通常用一般过去时）人称（第三人称）字数（30字左右），句型（1-3句，2句最合适）不能整句照抄第6页，共21页。Summary开头（参考五三333页和雅美英语107页）Thestory/passageisabout…Theauthortellsus/shareswithus…Thepassage/authorhighlightstheimportanceof…Thepassage/authordiscusses/displaystheeffect/impact/influenceof…Thepassage/authorcompares…Thepassage/authorarguesfor/against…Thepassage/authortellsusabout…/that…Accordingtothepassage/author,…Ascanbeseenfromthepassage,…Itcanbeeasilyconcludedfromthepassagethat..Bypresentingtheexampleof…,theauthortriestotell/showus

第7页，共21页。Example:Thepassageshowstheviewthatworkishelpfultohealthforthereasonthatkeepingbusyletspeoplegetawayfromloneliness,andgetasenseoffulfillmentandachievement.Theauthorholdstheviewthatworkcanmakepeoplehealthierbecauseithelpspeopletogetawayfromlonelinessandgainasenseoffulfillmentandachievement.Theauthorhighlightstheeffectofworkonpeople’shealth,becauseitcanridoneofloneliness,andmakeonefeelfruitfulandproudofhimself,whichalwayscontributestoagoodbody.第8页，共21页。正文：注意：1.认真理解写作要求2.分段来写3.要点要齐全4.要有自己的观点，即就此话题，要有话可说5.语言要准确，句型不能单一，或过于简单，运用丰富的词汇和非谓语结构第9页，共21页。以下按段落赏析好句好观点第二段：你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗？简要阐述理由！(要表明自己的态度，还要讲讲理由）Iabsolutelyagree(withtheview)thatwecanstudyhardandleadahappylifeatthesametime.Itisalwaysmybeliefthatonecanstudyhard…Ifullysupportthestatementthatwecanstudyhardandinthemeanwhilelivehappily.Frommyperspective,studyinghardisnotcontradictorywithlivinghappily.Isupporttheopinionthatwecanworkhardaswellaslivehappily.AsfarasIamconcerned,therearenoconflictsbetweenworkinghardandenjoyingahappylife.第10页，共21页。第二段：你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗？简要阐述理由！(要表明自己的态度，还要讲讲理由）Itisgenerallybelievedthatwecansleepbetterafterworkinghard.Thereisnodenyingthefactthat…Althoughstudymeansthatwehavetospendmostofourtimelearningsomethingwedon’tknow,itwillmakeusfeelhappywhenweapplyournewknowledgetolife.Studyinghardmeanstreasuringouryouthandnotwastingtime,whichcankeepapersoninhighspiritsandleadtoabusybuthappylife.Eventhoughstudyingisabitboring,wecanstillmakeprogressinlearning,whichcanconsiderablyprovide第11页，共21页。第二段：你赞同“努力学习也可以快乐生活”这一观点吗？简要阐述理由！(要表明自己的态度，还要讲讲理由）uswithconfidence.Asourconfidencebeginstoaccumulate,wewillfeelasenseofachievementandtendtobemoreconfident,whichinturnwillleadtoahappierlife.Thereasonsforthatcanbelistedasfollows:workinghardmeansapositiveattitudetolife.What’smore,onlybyworkinghardcanweachievesuccessandunderstandtherealmeaningofhappylife.第12页，共21页。第三段：举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的？（要有例子）Mostofmyfriendsneverfailtostudyhardandatthesametime,enjoytheirlife.Whenevertheyareworn-outafterhardwork,theymaygototheplaygroundforsomeexercise.Aftertheexercise,theyreturntothegoodmoodandkeepworkingon.Myclassmate,Jack,studiesveryhardandhealsohasahappylife.Jacklovesliteratureverymuchandheisinterestedinwhatheislearning,sohecandevotehimselftostudyingit.Thereisnodoubtthatheisveryhappywithit.Jackhasfoundhisinterestsohecannotonlystudyhardbutalsokeepapositiveattitude.第13页，共21页。第三段：举例说明你的同学是如何努力学习并保持健康乐观的心态的？（要有例子）Therearemanyexamplesinmylife,whostudyhardandkeepahealthyandpositiveattitude.Theymakethemselveslikelearningwhattheylearn,sothattheynevercomplain.Whentheyfeeltiredofstudying,theywilldosomeexercise,likeplayingbasketball,orjogging.Furthermore,theyallliketocommunicatewithclassmates.第14页，共21页。第四段：简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活？Thereisnodoubtthatwehavealotofhomeworktodoinourschoollife,whichsometimesisreallydullandstressful,butifwecanfindouttheadvantagesofstudy,keepcalmandpatientwhenwearetiredoutbecauseofstudy,wecanleadahappylifemeanwhile.Inmyopinion,itisimportanttoplayhappilywhenyouareplayingandtostudyattentivelywhenyouarestudying.Toenjoyahappylifeandworkhardatthesametime,first,weshouldholdapositiveattitudetoourlife.Thensetagoalforourselves.Bysettingagoal,weareonestepclosertoourdreams.Justassomeone第15页，共21页。第四段：简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活？says,“atnoageshouldwebedisappointedifwehaveadreamandiswillingtoworkhard.”Thus,wecanfocusontheprogresswemakeeveryday,anditistheprogressthatmakesyouhappyandwillingtoworkharder.Obviously,apositiveattitudeplaysaveryimportantrolewhileyouarestudying.Ifyoulovewhatyouarestudying,nomatterhowhardyouwork,youwillfeelitenjoyable.Andyoucangainthebiggesthappinesswhenyoumakeprogress.Ofcourse,youcanalsofindawaytorelaxwhenyoufeelstressed.第16页，共21页。第四段：简述如何才能做到努力学习并快乐生活？Itisnotthestudythatmakesustiredbutourunwillingmindsthattakeustothedarkside.Ifweareoptimisticenoughtoovercomethedifficulties,nothingcandefeatusorpreventusfromenjoyingahappylife.Frommypointofview,toworkhardaswellasenjoyahappylife,wecan’tbeinfluencedbyfailures.Allweshoulddoistoencourageourselvesandholdapositiveattitude.Communicatingwithfriendsalsobringsalotofhappiness.Inbrief,happinesscomesfromourminds.第17页，共21页。DecidetotryforajobataradiostationWenttoChicago3.Knockonthedoor4.Bedisappointed5.ItriedWOCradio6.Themothersaid:everythinghappensforthebest7.Aladytoldmetogotosmalltownstofindasmallstation8.Theprogramdirectorwassatisfiedwithme.9.Ibecameasportsannouncer.Findthekeypoints:Whilehuntingforajob,theauthorsufferedonefailureafteranother,whichmadehimfeelverydisappointed.Itwashismother’sencouragingwordsthatinspiredhimtogoontryinguntilhesucceeded.第18页，共21页。Whentheauthorwasupsetthathecouldn’tfindajobaftergraduating,hismotherencouragedhimnottogiveup.Sohekeptontryingandfinallybecameasportsannouncer.

Theauthorofthepassagecouldn’tgetajobaftergraduating,buthekeptontryingashismothertoldhimwhenhewasdisappointedandfinallyhewashiredasasportsannouncer.第19页，共21页。Bytellingusthreestories