高考英语读后续写之环境描写 修辞手法讲义

新高考读后续写之环境描写&修辞手法一、环境描写烘托情感气用温暖阳光表现01.WhenIwasbathedinthesunlight,itfeltliketheamber-likesunshinewaskissingeveryinchofmyskin.当我沐浴在阳光下，那感觉就像是琥珀色的阳光亲吻着我每一寸肌肤。02.WhenIdrewthecurtainsback,thesunlightfloodedin.当我拉开窗帘，阳光倾泻而入。用蓝天白云表现01.Theclearblueskywasdottedwithfluttering（飘舞;

振翅）larks.天气晴朗，碧空里星星点点的云雀在翩翩飞舞。

bedottedwith意为“星星般点缀着…”.abutterflyflutteringitswings.…一只拍动着翅膀的蝴蝶。Thepaperflutteredtothefloor.

纸飘落到地板上。02.Whitecloudsflowintheblueskylikequietfishswimminginbroadocean.朵朵白云飘在蓝天中，就像安静的鱼儿在广阔的海洋中畅游。

用徐徐微风表现01.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain.一阵风吹，吹起了弯柳的低垂枝条，就像那卷起的窗帘。02.Therearemanykindsofflowersbloominginthecornerofthepark,eveninautumn.Ismellthefreshscentwithcoolbreeze.Howsweet!即使在秋日里，公园里都开满了各式各样的鲜花，香气伴着微风四处弥漫。多么香甜啊！

03.ItwasSaturdaymorning,andallthesummerworldwasbrightandfresh,andfilledwithlife.

Therewasasongineveryheart.

Therewascheerineveryface

and

aspringineverystep.

Theairwasfilledwiththepleasantsmellofflowers.夏日周六的早晨，阳光明媚，空气新鲜，处处洋溢着生机。每个人的心中都荡漾着一首歌。每个人脸上都洋溢着欢乐，每个人都迈着跳跃的步伐。空气里弥漫着芬芳的花香。

04.Colorfulflowerswerebloomingbeneaththebluesky,andthesunshinereflectedonthelake,makingitshinelikediamonds.ButSusanjustcouldn'tfocusherattentiononthebreathtakingbeauty.蔚蓝色的天空下，百花盛开，阳光洒在湖面上如同铺上了一颗颗闪耀的钻石。但是苏珊并没有被这令人窒息的美景所吸引。用风雨天气来表现1.Thefrostyairblewin,

cuttinglikeknife.寒冷的空气吹进来，如同刀割般的感觉。2.Therewasa

deathlystillness

inthehouse.房子里一片死寂。3.Theraincamepouringdown,thestreamsrose,andthewindsblewandbeatagainstthehouse.雨倾盆而下，洪流猛涨，狂风在肆意地冲击着房屋。4.Onthatdarkandstormynight,thewaveswerecrashingandthewindswerehowling.在那个狂风暴雨的夜晚，海浪在肆意地拍打着，劲风在愤怒地咆哮着。

5.Theboyswerefrightenedasthewindblewseveraltreesontheirsideandthelightcontinuedtocomeandgointhesky.

风猛刮着身侧的树木，闪电在空中持续乱舞，孩子们吓坏了。

Thenightwasveryquiet,soeventheslightestsoundmadetheboysjumpfromfear.夜晚非常安静，所以即使是最轻微的声音也使孩子们惊得跳起。二、修辞手法修辞手法

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明喻(simile)

like1.Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.（情感描写）她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。2.IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.（情感描写）我感觉自己像漂浮在悲伤的海洋中。3.Thesceneryalongthejourneyisjustlikeabreath-takinglandscapepainting.(景物描写)沿路的风景就像一幅美丽的山水画卷。4.Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.(景物描写)寒风开始咆哮，像锋利的小刀一样刺痛了我的脸。5.Clustersofstarsdecoratedthevastskylikesparklingjewels.(景物描写)繁星像闪闪发光的珠宝一样装饰了浩瀚的天空。as...as1.Thesmileonherfacewasasvibrantasthesunonasummerday.（情感描写）她脸上的笑容和夏天的太阳一样充满活力。2.Ireachedouttotouchherface,whichwasascoldastheice.(人物描写)我伸手去摸她的脸，发现她的脸像冰一样冰冷。更多搭配

asbusyasabee忙忙碌碌

ashungryasawolf饥肠辘辘

asproudasapeacock傲如孔雀

aseasyasABC极其容易

asbraveasalion勇猛如狮

asprettyasapicture美如画asif1.MrsSatherlookedatmyeyesasif(shewere)seeingmyinnerselflockedawayinside.Sather老师看着我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我灵魂深处封闭的自我。2.Herhairgrewgreyerandgreyer,asif(itwere)coveredwithsnowandfrost.（肖像描写）他的头发越来越白了，简直像盖了一头皑皑的霜雪。3.Shefeltasifherhearthadbeenrippedfromherbody.（情感描写）她感觉自己心好像从她的身体里被撕开了。(2)

暗喻(metaphor)

be1.Herhairwasaflowinggoldenriverstreamingdownhershoulders.（肖像描写）她的头发像是一条流淌在她肩上的金色河流。2.Thebeautifulparkwasascentedcarpetofcolor.(景物描写)美丽的公园就是一个芬芳的彩色地毯。3.Lifeisanunexploredriverfulloftwistsandturns.(哲理)生活就像一条未被涉足的河流，有各种曲折。(3)

拟人(personification)

把自然现象当作人来描写1.Thewindstoodupandgaveashout.

大风凛冽，发出怒吼。2.Thebreezegentlykissedhercheeks.

微风轻柔地亲吻着她的脸庞。3.Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.鹅毛般的雪花在空中飞舞，像一幅美丽的图画。4.Themistswallowedhimup.薄雾把他包围起来。5.Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒风开始咆哮，刺痛了我的脸。6.Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。7.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.顷刻间，黑暗统治了森林。8.我拾起头，望见两只红色的风筝，带着长长的蓝色尾巴，在天空中冉冉升起。它们舞动着，飞越公园西边的树林.ThenIglancedupandsawapairofredkiteswithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovethetreesonthewestendofthepark.把含蓄抽象的概念当作人来描写1.Fearseized/swallowedhim.恐惧把他吞噬了。2.Angerchokedmywords.我气得说不出话来。3.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.我突然想到一个好主意。4.Smiletookholdofhim.他笑容满面。5.Anxietytornhimintopieces.她焦虑不安，十分崩溃。6.Courage/Confidencedesertedhim.他没信心了。7.Excitementdeprivedmeofallpowerofspeech.我兴奋的啥也说不出来了。把动物当作人来描写1.Inthedeadofnight,thecricketsplayedonthe