(新高考)高考英语二轮专题读后续写精读精炼（六）（含答案解析）

高考英语读后续写精读精炼（六）一：原文重现Thatnight,Iquarreledwithmymother,andthenstormedoutofthehouse.Whileontheroad,IrememberedthatIdidnothaveanymoneyinmypocket,Ididnoteventakemycellphonewithmetomakeacallhome．Atthesametime,Iwentthroughanoodleshop,andIsuddenlyfeltveryhungry.Iwishedforabowlofnoodles,butIhadnomoney!Thesellersawmestandingbeforethecounterandasked,“Heylittlegirl,youwanttoeatabowl？”“But…butIdonotcarrymoney…”Ishylyreplied．“Okay,I’lltreatyou．”thesellersaid,“comein,Iwillcookyouabowl．”Afewminuteslatertheownerbroughtmeasteamingbowlofnoodles.Aftereatingsomepieces,Icried．“Whatisit？”Heasked．“Nothing.Iamjusttouchedbyyourkindness!”IsaidasIwipedmytears.“Evenastrangeronthestreetgivesmeabowlofnoodles,andmymother,afteraquarrel,chasedmeoutofthehouse.Sheiscruel（残忍的）!”21Thesellersighed,“Girl,whydidyouthinkso?Thinkagain.Ionlygaveyouabowlofnoodlesandyoufeltthatway.Yourmotherhasbeentakingcareofyousinceyouwerelittle,whywereyounotgratefulandwhydidyouhurtyourmom?Youshouldsaysorrytoyourmom.”Iwasreallysurprisedafterhearingthat．WhydidInotthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelgrateful,andmymotherhasraisedmesinceIwaslittleandIhaveneverfeltso,notevenalittle．注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分为两段，开头语已为你写好；Paragraph1：Justatthatmoment,manymemoriescamebackintomymind．【来源：21·世纪·教育·网】______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：BeforeIcouldapologize,mymothersawmeandrushedtome___________________________________________________________________________________________________________21*cnjy*com二：文本解析【分析】本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开，讲述了作者和妈妈吵了一架，然后冲出了房子,也没有给家里打电话。作者走过一家面馆，突然觉得很饿，想要一碗面条，但是没有钱，面馆老板免费请作者吃了一碗面。作者感悟到一个陌生人一碗面条都能让他心怀感激，从小妈妈就把他养大，但却从来没有这样的感觉，作者对此进行反思。【详解】1.段落续写：由续写段落的首句“Justatthatmoment,manymemoriescamebackintomymind．(就在那一刻，许多回忆涌上了我的脑海。)”及前文“WhydidInotthinkofthat?Abowlofnoodlesfromastrangermademefeelgrateful,andmymotherhasraisedmesinceIwaslittleandIhaveneverfeltso,notevenalittle.(我以前怎么从来没有感受到呢?一个陌生人给我的一碗面条让我心怀感激，从小妈妈就把我养大，我从来没有这样的感觉，一点也没有。)”可知，本段续写内容主要写作者经过反思，意识到母亲对自己的好，然后回家以及回家后母亲对他的宽容态度。2.续写线索：反思——回忆——生活细节——回家——款待——感动、羞愧3.词汇激活行为类①.到达：arrive/getto/reach②.回家：gobackhome/returnhome情绪类①.感谢：begrateful/showmyappreciation/showmygratitude21教育网②.羞愧：ashamed/blushfor[高分句型1.Whenarrivinghome,Isawmymothersittingatthedinnertable,worriedandtired.（此句运用了状语从句中的省略，从句的主语与主句一致，且从句中含有be动词时，从句中可将主语与be动词省略。）2.BeforeIcouldapologize,mymothersawmeandrushedtome“Oh,honey,you’reback!Ihavepreparedyourfavoritenoodles.”（本句中运用了before引导的时间状语从句。）三：续写单句训练就在这时，我又想起了许多记忆。当我生病的时候，她总是照顾我。当我回到家时，她总是准备我最喜欢的食物。她所有的善良都回到了我身上。我应该感激她为我所做的一切，我意识到我应该立即回家，向她说对不起。回到家，我看到母亲坐在餐桌旁，担心又累。我还没来得及道歉，妈妈就看见了我，冲向我说：“哦，亲爱的，你回来了！”我准备好了你最喜欢的面条。听到这话，我忍不住倒在她的怀里。“对不起，妈妈，请原谅我，”我低声对她说，眼泪流下来，为自己感到羞愧。四：佳作展现Justatthatmoment,manymemoriescamebackintomymind．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________BeforeIcouldapologize,mymothersawmeandrushedtome21·世纪*教育网__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________五：课后练笔Itwasoneofthehottestdaysofthedryseason.Wehadnotseenraininalmostamonth.Thecropsweredying.Cowshadstoppedgivingmilk.Thestreamswerelonggonebackintotheearth.Ifwedidn’tseesomerainsoonwewouldloseeverything.2·1·c·n·j·yIwasinthekitchenmakinglunchforthefamilywhenIsawmysix-year-oldson,Billy,walkingtowardthewoods.Icouldonlyseehisback.Hewasn’twalkinginhisusualway.Hewasobviouslywalkingwithagreateffort,tryingtobeasstillaspossible.Minutesafterhedisappearedintothewoods,hecamerunningoutagain,towardthehouse.【出处：21教育名师】Momentslater,however,hewasonceagainwalkinginthatslowpurposefullongsteptowardthewoods.Thisactivitywentonforoveranhour—walkingcautiouslytothewoods,thenrunningbacktothehouse.Finally,mycuriositygotthebestofme.Icreptoutofthehouseandfollowedhimonhisjourney.21教育名师原创作品Hewascuppingbothhandsinfrontofhimashewalked;beingverycarefulnottospillthewaterhecarried.Branchesandthornsslapped(拍打)hislittlefacebuthedidnottrytoavoidthem.Hehadamuchgreaterpurpose.AsIleanedintospyonhim,Isawthemostamazingsite.Severallargedeerappearedthreateninginfrontofhim.ButBillywalkedrightuptothem.Ialmostscreamedforhimtogetaway.AndIsawababydeerlayingontheground,obviouslysufferingfromheavylossofwaterandheatexhaustion,lifteitsheadwithgreatefforttolap(舔)upthewaterinmybeautifulboy’shand.Paragraph1:Whenthewaterwasgone,Billyjumpeduptorunbacktothehouse.

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__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:AndlaterIknewwhatwasgoingon.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________六：单句训练水没了后，比利跳起来跑回屋里。我的好奇心再次驱使我跟着他回来。他到达厨房后，打开了水龙头。当他努力用双手喝水来接水时，水还在通过他的手指跑开。他也很难把手关掉水龙头。他似乎为浪费水而感到难过，自判有罪。他脸上带着一种不安的表情，小心翼翼地把它朝树林走去。后来我知道了发生了什么。我开始明白他为什么不按照他平常的方式走路。我站在树林边，看着这颗最美丽的心如此努力地努力拯救生命。当我的眼泪开始落在地上，他们突然加入了其他多滴。我抬头看着天空。就好像上帝自己也被我儿子的巨大努力感动了，开始骄傲地哭泣。参考答案三：单句训练Justatthatmoment,manymemoriescamebackintomymind.21世纪教育网版权所有WhenIwasill,shealwaystookcareofme.WhenIarrivedhome,shealwayspreparedmyfavoritefood.【来源：21cnj*y.co*m】Allherkindnesscamebacktome.Ishouldbegratefulforallshehaddoneforme,IrealizedIshouldgobackhomeimmediatelyandsaysorrytoher.【版权所有：21教育】Whenarrivinghome,Isawmymothersittingatthedinnertable,worriedandtired.BeforeIcouldapologize,mymothersawmeandrushedtome“Oh,honey,you’reback!Ihavepreparedyourfavoritenoodles.”Hearingthis，Icouldn’thelpthrowingmyselfintoherarms.21·cn·jy·com“Sorry,Mom,pleaseforgiveme,”Iwhisperedtoherwithtearsstreamingdownmycheeks,ashamedofmyself.21*cnjy*com六：单句训练Whenthewaterwasgone,Billyjumpeduptorunbacktothehouse.Mycuriosityonceagaindrovemetofollowhimback.Afterhereachedthekitchen,heturnedonthetap.Ashewastryinghardtocupbothhandstoreceivethewater,itwasstillrunningawaythroughhisfingers.www-2-1-cnjy-comAndhealsohadgreatdifficultyturningoffthetapwithhandsoccupied.Heseemedtobesosorryandself-condemnedforhiswastingofwater.Wearinganoteofupsetonhisface,hecarrieditcarefullytowardsthewoods.AndlaterIknewwhatwasgoingon.Anditbegantomakesensetomewhyhewasn’twalkinginhisusualway.Istoodontheedgeofthewoodswatchingthemostbeautifulheartworkingsohardtosavealife.Asmytearsbegantohittheground,theyweresuddenlyjoinedbyotherdrops...andmoredrops.Ilookedupintothesky.ItwasasifGodhimselfwasmovedbythegreateffortmadebymysonandbegantoweepwithpride.四：佳作展现（一）Justatthatmoment,manymemoriescamebackintomymind.WhenIwasill,shealwaystookcareofme.WhenIarrivedhome,shealwayspreparedmyfavoritefood.Allherkindnesscamebacktome.Ishouldbegratefulforallshehaddoneforme,IrealizedIshouldgobackhomeimmediatelyandsaysorrytoher.Whenarrivinghome,Isawmymothersittingatthedinnertable,worriedandtired.BeforeIcouldaHYPERLINK