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Deletionasaskilltosummaryalongtext

asummary

loseweightdelete

60-80words350words1.Maryisabeautifulgirlwhoalwayssmilestoothers.

√Threeexamples:summarywithinasentenceSummary:TomenjoyseatingfruitsContainthemainideaDeleteskill2:delete

thespecificexamples(“like,suchas,forexample,forinstance,listandsoon”)2.Tomisfondofeatingavarietyoffruitssuchaswatermelon,peach,grapesandsoon.√02Howtosummarize?Summary:Maryisagirl.

ContainthemainideaDeleteskill1:deletetheunnecessarydetails(qualifiersorattributiveclause)3.Onlineshoppingisbecomingmoreandmorepopularforanumberofreasons:pricesareoftenloweronline;youdon’thavetoqueueupinbusyshopsandyoucanbuyalmostanyproductimaginablewithjustafewclicksofyourmouse.Summary:Onlineshopping’sgreatstrengthscontributetotheincreasingpopularityofit√Containthemainidea

Deleteskill3:deletethesupportinglistsofdetailsReplace

somekeywords

Reorganizewordsinthesentencelowerprices

directaccesstoshopping

conveniencestrengthsThreeexamples:summarywithinsentences1.【original】BeautifulmountainslikeMountTai,LushanMountainandYellowMountainwerevisitedbyonlyfewpeopleinthepast.Today,betterwages,holidayswithpay,newhotelsandrestaurantsonthosemountainsandbettertrainandbusservices,havebroughtthemwithinreachofmanywhoneverthoughtofvisitingthentenyearsago.【summary】Reasonforthechange

Deleteskill4:*usesomeabstractedwordstoreplacesomespecificwordsBeautifulmountains,oncevisitedbyonlyafewpeople,aretodayaccessibletomany,thankstopaidholiday,betterwages,accomodationandtransportation.

abstractword:accomodation

transportation

2.【original】ShebroughthomeseveralChineseandEnglishnovels,afewcopiesofTimesandNewsweekandsometextbooks.Sheintendedtoreadallofthemduringthewintervacation.【summary】magazines“todosth”canexpresstheintention

Deleteskill5:*refinethesentenceintoawholesentenceindeletingoverlappedwordsandadoptingproperlinkingmethodsShebroughthomealotofbooksandmagazinestoreadduringthevacation.

3.【original】Intheworldofentertainment,TVtalkshowshaveundoubtedlyfloodedeveryinchofspaceondaytimetelevision.Andanyonewhowatchesthemregularlyknowsthateachonevariesinstyleandformat.【summary】Deleteskill6:*

seizetheboneofeachsentencetorecontructtheoriginalmeaningbyusinglinkingwordsandsimplealternativewordsregularwatcher

theirvariousstylesandformatsTalkshowshavefloodedthespaceofdaytimetelevison,and

regularwatchersknowtheirvariousstylesandformatsApplication:summarywithinawholetext

1.Whatistopicofthetext?2.Whatisthewriter’sintention?3.Whatisthewritingstyles?4.Whatisthe

mainidea

ofeach

paragraph?Para1Para2Para3Para4Step1generalbutnecessaryself-questionsHistoricalreviewofearlygardenthe______________ofgardernto________________gardernhistory/development

introducethehistoryofA.Argumentative（议论文)）writingB.Expository（说明文）writingC.Narrative（记叙文)writing*Usesofgarden*Gardendebelopedasanartform*Historicalreviewofearlygarden

*OtherpurposesofEuropeangarden

OtherpurposesofEuropeangarden

Usesofgarden

Gardendevelopedasanartform

Step2deletingandreorganizingwithinpassages

Themoderngardenhasahistorygoingbackmanythousandsofyears.Earlyhumanswerehuntersandgatherers,anddidn‘tactuallystayinoneplaceforalongtime.Instead,theytravelledfromplacetoplacefollowingthefoodaccordingtotheseasons.DuringtheNeolithicPeriodthisslowlybegantochange;humansstartedtogrowcertainplants,whichmeanttheycouldremaininoneplaceandgrowtheirownfood.Thefirst“garden”wasavegetablegarden,whereearlyhumansgrewdifferenttypesofplantsforfood.1.DeletebackgroundsandexampleSuggestedsummary:Moderngardensdatebacktothetimeswhenearlyhumansgotdowntogrowingtheirownfood.

2.Reorganizetheotherwordsintoawholesentencebasedonthemainideabackground

change

theoriginofgardenwhendatebackto

Para1:HistoricalreviewofearlygardenEarlyagricultureinEuropenotonlyincludededible（可食用的）plantssuchaswheatorlentils,butalsoincludedmanydecorativeplantsforotherpurposes.Plantsformedicineweregrown,aswereherbsandspicesforflavoringorpreservingfood.Certainplantsalsohadreligiousorspiritualvalueandweregrownnotonlybecausetheywereusefuloredible.Growingplantsnotonlyforfoodwasthebeginningofgardening.Suggestedsummary:

whenpeoplegrewplantsnotonlyforfoodsbutalsoforotherpurposes,gardeningbegan.

1.Findthekeywordsthatdetailsreferto

3.Reorganizethekeywordsintoawholesentencebyusingpropersentencepatternsandrelatives:edibleplants,otherpurposes,thebeginningofgardening

Para2:OtherpurposesofEuropeangarden

2.Deletedetailsthatsupportthekeywordnotonly...butalso.../aswellasGardenstodayarebeautifulplacestogoandrelax,buthavehadmanypurposesovertheyears.Inthepast,theywereplantedtohonorthegods,orusedinreligiousceremoniessuchasfuneralsandweddings.Theywerealsoawaytoshowthattheirownerswererichorpowerful.Ancientrulerscreatedhugegardenstodisplaytheirwealth,inthesamewaythatlargepalacesweresymbolsofprosperity.InRomantimesthegardenbecameanextensionofthehouse,representingtheowner'sstatusinsociety,ratherthanaholyplace.2.Reorganizethekeywordsinwaysof:*Affixation:prefix&suffix*Changeformsofwords:V.N.adj.adv.*Changemeaningofwords:synonym（同义词）&antonym（反义词）

Suggestedsummary:Whileancientgardensweremoreforreligiouspurposes,orasymbolofwealth,powerorsocialstatus,amoderngardenismorerelaxingplace.Para3:Usesofgarden

1.Deletingsupportingdetailscomparison

rich---richenesspowerful---powerrichness---wealthAsgardenshavedeveloped,designandbeautyhavebecomemoreandmoreimportant.Humanshavelearnedtocontrolnatureandtodesigngardenscarefully,likecreatingaworkofartorabuilding.TheGardensofVersaillesinFranceareanexcellentexampleof“gardenarchitecture”;everythingissymmetrical（对称的）andeventhetreesareprunedtofitinwiththedesign.1.Deletereplaceabledetails

Suggestedsummary:Withtimegoingon,peoplereallyvaluegardens'designandbeauty,andgardeningdevelopslike“anartform”Para4:Gardendevelopedasanartform

4.reorganizethereplacedwordstoawholesentence

sth.beofgreatimportance/sth.bevalued/attatchmuchimportancetosth.From328wordsto75words,

actuallysummarybeginswithaprocessofdeletionModerngardensdatebacktothetimeswhenearlyhumansgotdowntogrowingtheirownfood.（point1）whenpeoplegrewplantsnotonlyforfoodsbutalsoforotherpurposes,gardeningbegan.（point2）Whileancientgardensweremoreforreligiouspurposes,orasymbolofwealth,powerorsocialstatus,amoderngardenismorerelaxingplace.（point3）Withtimegoing