高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇课件

应用文写作——建议信

培优篇应用文写作——建议信

1建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法和主张，解决有关问题的一类信件。写建议信时，应礼貌当先，给出的建议合情合理，目的在于解决问题。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有说服力。建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法和主张，解2建议信的正文框架：第一段：得知缘由，说明目的

弄清对方问题，顾及对方感受第二段：提出建议，给出理由

说明建议的内容

提出具体建议的原因

指出采纳建议的益处第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿

避免笼统的期待和祝愿建议信的正文框架：第一段：得知缘由，说明目的3假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Mark本学期选修了汉语课程。最近，他来信询问你如何学好汉语。请你根据如下提示给与他一些建议。认真听讲，积极练习广泛阅读欣赏影视作品注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

2.词数：80词左右假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Mark本学期选修了汉语课程。最近4第一段：得知缘由，说明目的Mark本学期选修了汉语课程，需要学习建议基本思路：得知你本学期选修了汉语课程，我向你提出一些建议。第一段：得知缘由，说明目的Mark本学期选修了汉语课程，需要5潜在词汇及句型本学期为...提供...得知...,某人做了某事thisterm/semesterprovidesb.withsth.Hearing/Knowing/Learningthat...,sb.doessth.KnowingthatyouarelearningChinesethissemester,IamwritingtoprovideyouwithsomeadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.潜在词汇及句型本学期thisterm/semester6修改和润色KnowingfromyourletterthatyouarelearningChinesethissemester,IammorethanpleasedtoprovideyouwithsomeadviceonhowtoacquireagoodknowledgeofChinese.Sb.bemorethanpleasedtodosth.某人非常乐意做某事toacquireagoodknowledgeofsth.精通某事物

KnowingthatyouarelearningChinesethissemester,IamwritingtoprovideyouwithsomeadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)修改和润色Knowingfromyourletter7第二段：提出建议，给出理由认真听讲，积极练习广泛阅读欣赏影视作品原因：语言学习离不开大量的练习原因：有助于扩充词汇量原因：可以获取习惯用语高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第二段：提出建议，给出理由认真听讲，积极练习原因：语言学习离8潜在词汇及句型认真听讲积极练习大量的练习广泛阅读有助于扩充词汇量获得习惯语第一，...第二，...第三，...如果你做某事话会很有帮助。如果你能够...我认为那会更有帮助。做某事最好的方法莫过于...高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型认真听讲第一，...第二，...第三，...高9潜在词汇及句型认真听讲积极练习大量的练习广泛阅读有助于扩充词汇量获得习惯语listenattentively/closelypractiseregularly/constantlyagreatdealofpracticereadasmuchaspossiblecontributetoenlarge/enrichthevocabularygainidiomaticChinese高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型认真听讲listenattentively/10潜在词汇及句型Firstly,...Secondly,...Thirdly,...Itwillbeofgreathelpforyoutodosth.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...Thereisnobetterwaytodosththantodosth.Firstly,thereisnobetterwaytolearnalanguagewellthantolistenattentivelytoyourteacherinclassandconstantlypractiseafterclassasmasteringalanguagerequiresagreatdealofpractice.Besides,Ithinkitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldreadasmuchaspossible,whichcontributestoenlargingyourvocabulary.Finally,youcangainidomaticChinesethroughmoviesandsongs.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型Firstly,...Secondly,..11修改和润色Firstly,thereisnobetterwaytolearnalanguagewellthantolistenattentivelytoyourteacherinclassandconstantlypractiseafterclassasmasteringalanguagerequiresagreatdealofpractice.Secondly,Ithinkitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldread

asmuchaspossible,whichcontributestoenlargingyourvocabulary.Thirdly,youcangainidomaticChinesethroughChinesemoviesandsongs.Tobeginwith,thereisnobetterwaytolearnalanguagewellthantolistenattentivelytoyourteacherinclassandconstantlypractiseafterclassasmasteringalanguagedoesrequireagreatdealofpractice.Besides,Ithinkitbeneficialtoreadasmuchaspossible,whichcontributesalottoenlargingyourvocabulary.Finally,youcangainidomaticChinesethroughmoviesandsongs.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)修改和润色Firstly,thereisnobett12Tobeginwith,...Besides,...Finally,...首先，...此外，...最后，...tothinkitbeneficialtodosth.认为做某事有好处do+动词原形表示强调tocontirbutealotto...极大地有助于...高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)Tobeginwith,...Besides,...13第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿希望这些建议有效，祝愿学业有成高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿希望这些建议有效，祝愿学业有成高中14我真心希望这些建议证明是有效果的。Igenuinelyhopethesuggestionswillturnoutuseful.祝你...Wishyousth./Mayyoudosth.潜在词汇及句型Igenuinelyhopethesuggestionswillturnoutuseful.Wishyouasuceessfulsemester.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)我真心希望这些建议证明是有效果的。潜在词汇及句型Igenu15DearMark,KnowingfromyourletterthatyouarelearningChinesethissemester,IammorethanpleasedtoprovideyouwithsomeadviceonhowtoacquireagoodknowledgeofChinese.Tobeginwith,thereisnobetterwaytolearnalanguagewellthantolistenattentivelytoyourteacherinclassandconstantlypractiseafterclassasmasteringalanguagedoesrequireagreatdealofpractice.Besides,Ithinkitbeneficialifyoureadasmuchaspossible,whichcontributesalottoenlargingyourvocabulary.Finally,youcangainidomaticChinesethroughmoviesandsongs.Igenuinelyhopethesuggestionswillturnoutuseful.Wishyouasuceessfulsemester.Yourssincerely,LiHuaOnepossibleversion高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)DearMark,Onepossibleversion16假设你是李华。来自外国的好友Amber因为当地有数人感染新型冠状病毒而向你求助一些自我保护措施，据此请你给出相应的建议。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

2.词数：80词左右参考词汇：新型冠状病毒thenovelcoronavirus高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)假设你是李华。来自外国的好友Amber因为当地有数人感染新型17第一段：得知缘由，说明目的Amber居住的地方有数人感染了新型冠状病毒，急需自我保护措施的建议可添加细节：你非常担忧Amber的安全高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第一段：得知缘由，说明目的Amber居住的地方有数人感染了新18潜在词汇及句型感染了...对...表示担忧为...提供...自我保护得知...,某人做了某事videsb.withsth.self-protectionHearingthat...,sb.doessth.Hearingthatseveralpeopleinyourtownhavebeeninfectedwiththenovelcoronavirus,Iamveryconcernedaboutyoursafety.Therefore,Iamwritingtoprovideyouwithsomepracticaladviceonself-protection.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型感染了...beinfectedwith.19Hearingthatseveralpeopleinyourtownhavebeeninfectedwiththenovelcoronavirus,Iamveryconcernedaboutyoursafety.Therefore,Iamwritingtoprovideyouwithsomepracticaladviceonself-protection.修改和润色Hearingthatseveralpeopleinyourtownhavebeeninfectedwiththenovelcoronavirus,Iamsoconcernedaboutyoursafetythat

Icanhardlywaittoprovideyouwithsomepracticaladviceonself-protection.Attention:相邻语句之间尽量避免重复；可以考虑句子之间的整合，使语言更简洁高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)Hearingthatseveralpeoplein20第二段：提出建议，给出理由1.尽量待在家里，取消聚会原因：病毒易感，远离感染者和携带者2.出门戴口罩，远离人群原因：防止吸入病毒3.增强免疫力方法：注意休息，平衡饮食，在家适度锻炼高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第二段：提出建议，给出理由1.尽量待在家里，取消聚会原因：21潜在词汇及句型取消聚会容易感染感染者携带者戴口罩远离人群防止...做...吸入病毒增强免疫力平衡饮食适度锻炼首要的是,...此外,...最后但也重要,...你最好做某事。强烈建议你做某事。某事情是备受推从的。高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型取消聚会首要的是,...此外,...最后但也22潜在词汇及句型取消聚会容易感染感染者携带者戴口罩远离人群防止...做...吸入病毒增强免疫力平衡饮食适度锻炼cancelthegatheringseasyinfectionthose(whoare)infectedviruscarrierswearamaskstayawayfrom/avoidcrowdspreventsb.fromdoingsth.breatheinthevirusenhance/strengthentheimmunitybalanceddietsproperamountsofexercise潜在词汇及句型取消聚会cancelthegatherin23潜在词汇及句型Firstandforemost,...Moreover,...Lastbutnotleast,...Youhadbetterdosth.Youarestronglyrecommendedtodosth.Itishighlyadvisablethat...Firstandforemost,duetotheeasyinfectionofthedisease,youarestronglyrecommendedtokeepyourselfathomeasmuchasallowedandcancelallyourgatherings,inwhichwayyoumaystayawayfromthoseinfectedorviruscarriers.Moreover,youhadbetterwearamaskandavoidcrowdstopreventyourselffrombreathinginthevirus.Lastbutnotleast,itishighlyadvisableforyoutoenhanceyourimmunitytotheinfectionthroughregularrest,balanceddietsandproperamountsofexerciseathome.潜在词汇及句型Firstandforemost,...24修改和润色Firstandforemost,duetotheeasyinfectionofthediseaseamongpeopleofallages,youarestronglyrecommendedtokeepyourselfathomeasmuchasallowedandcancelallyourgatherings,inwhichwayyoumaystayawayfromthoseinfectedorviruscarriers.Moreover,youhadbetterwearamaskandavoidcrowdstopreventyourselffrombreathinginthevirus.Lastbutnotleast,itishighlyadvisableforyoutoenhanceyourimmunitytotheinfectionthroughregularrest,balanceddietsandproperamountsofexerciseathome.Duetotheeasyinfectionofthediseaseamongpeopleofallages,__________________________________________________________________(我的首要建议便是尽可能多地待在家里)andcancelallyourgatherings,inwhichwayyoumaystayawayfromthoseinfectedorviruscarriers._______________,(如果不得不出门)

youhadbetterwearamaskandavoidcrowdstopreventyourselffrombreathinginthevirus.Lastbutnotleast,itishighlyadvisableforyoutoenhanceyourimmunitytotheinfectionthroughregularrest,balanceddietsandproperamountsofexerciseathome.Attention:避免句式生搬硬套，灵活使用连接词foremostsuggestionistokeepyourselfathomeasmuchasallowedMyfirstandIfforcedoutdoors修改和润色Firstandforemost,duet25第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿采取以上步骤，尽可能降低感染风险，相信能度过难关可添加细节：期待病毒流行期过去后的重逢第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿采取以上步骤，尽可能降低感染风险，26潜在词汇及句型采取以上步骤降低感染风险渡过难关流行期重逢通过做某事，我希望...takethestepsabovelowerthepossibilityofgettinginfectedgetthroughthehardtimeepidemicreunionBydoingsth.,Ihope...Bytakingthestepsabove,Ihopeyoucangreatlylowerthepossibilityofgettinginfectedandthatwewillgetthroughthehardtime.Lookingforwardtoourreunionaftertheepidemic.潜在词汇及句型采取以上步骤takethestepsab27Bytakingthestepsabove,Ihopeyoucangreatlylowerthepossibilityofgettinginfectedandthatwewillgetthroughthehardtime.Lookingforwardtoourreunionaftertheepidemic.Bytakingthestepsabove,Ibelieveyoucangreatlylowerthepossibilityofgettinginfectedandthatwearesuretogetthroughthehardtime.Lookingforwardtoourreunionaftertheepidemic.修改和润色Attention:注意对情感的把握，语言的目的是表达思想Bytakingthestepsabove,I28DearAmber,Hearingthatseveralpeopleinyourtownhavebeeninfectedwiththenovelcoronavirus,IamsoconcernedaboutyoursafetythatIcanhardlywaittoprovideyouwithsomepracticaladviceonself-protection.Duetotheeasyinfectionofthediseaseamongpeopleofallages,myfirstandforemostsuggestionistokeepyourselfathomeasmuchasallowedandcancelallyourgatherings,inwhichwayyoumaystayawayfromthoseinfectedorviruscarriers.Ifforcedoutdoors,youhadbetterwearamaskandavoidcrowdstopreventyourselffrombreathinginthevirus.Lastbutnotleast,itishighlyadvisableforyoutoenhanceyourimmunitytotheinfectionthroughregularrest,balanceddietsandproperamountsofexerciseathome.Bytakingthestepsabove,Ibelieveyoucangreatlylowerthepossibilityofgettinginfectedandthatwearesuretogetthroughthehardtime.Lookingforwardtoourreunionaftertheepidemic.Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversionDearAmber,Onepossibleversio29建议信注意事项第一段：弄清对方问题，顾及对方感受第二段：说明建议的内容（是什么）

提出具体建议的原因（为什么）

指出采纳建议的益处（怎么样）第三段：避免笼统的期待和祝愿建议信注意事项第一段：弄清对方问题，顾及对方感受30建议信注意事项尽量避免重复；考虑句子之间的整合避免句式生搬硬套，灵活使用连接词注意把握情感，精准表达思想建议明确，语言合理，情真意切建议信注意事项尽量避免重复；考虑句子之间的整合建议明确，语言31假设你是李华。你的交换生好友Sofia因为新型冠状病毒爆发而无法去学校参加汉语课程，因此向你咨询如何在家学习汉语，请你给出相应的建议。注意:1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

2.词数：80词左右参考词汇：新型冠状病毒thenovelcoronavirus课后练习假设你是李华。你的交换生好友Sofia因为新型冠状病毒爆发而32DearSofia,KnowingthatyouareunabletoattendyourChineselessonsduetotheoutbreakofthenovelcoronavirus,IamquitewillingtoofferyousomeadviceonhowtoimproveyourChinesecompetenceathome.First,youcanregisterforsomeonlinecoursesandpracticebyyourselfaftereachlessonasmasteringalanguagedorequirelargeamountsofpractice.AndI’dalsoliketorecommendthatyoureadsomeChinesestorybooksonline,whichwillcontributealottoenlargingyourvocabulary.Additionally,idomaticChineseiseasilyaccessibletoyouthroughChinesemoviesandsongsdownloadedfromtheInternet.Igenuinelyhopethesuggestionswillturnoutbeneficial.WishyouallbestandabigleapintheChineselearning.Yourssincerely,LiHuaDearSofia,33本课结束本课结束34应用文写作——建议信

培优篇应用文写作——建议信

35建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法和主张，解决有关问题的一类信件。写建议信时，应礼貌当先，给出的建议合情合理，目的在于解决问题。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理由充足，具有说服力。建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法和主张，解36建议信的正文框架：第一段：得知缘由，说明目的

弄清对方问题，顾及对方感受第二段：提出建议，给出理由

说明建议的内容

提出具体建议的原因

指出采纳建议的益处第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿

避免笼统的期待和祝愿建议信的正文框架：第一段：得知缘由，说明目的37假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Mark本学期选修了汉语课程。最近，他来信询问你如何学好汉语。请你根据如下提示给与他一些建议。认真听讲，积极练习广泛阅读欣赏影视作品注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

2.词数：80词左右假如你叫李华，你的美国笔友Mark本学期选修了汉语课程。最近38第一段：得知缘由，说明目的Mark本学期选修了汉语课程，需要学习建议基本思路：得知你本学期选修了汉语课程，我向你提出一些建议。第一段：得知缘由，说明目的Mark本学期选修了汉语课程，需要39潜在词汇及句型本学期为...提供...得知...,某人做了某事thisterm/semesterprovidesb.withsth.Hearing/Knowing/Learningthat...,sb.doessth.KnowingthatyouarelearningChinesethissemester,IamwritingtoprovideyouwithsomeadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.潜在词汇及句型本学期thisterm/semester40修改和润色KnowingfromyourletterthatyouarelearningChinesethissemester,IammorethanpleasedtoprovideyouwithsomeadviceonhowtoacquireagoodknowledgeofChinese.Sb.bemorethanpleasedtodosth.某人非常乐意做某事toacquireagoodknowledgeofsth.精通某事物

KnowingthatyouarelearningChinesethissemester,IamwritingtoprovideyouwithsomeadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)修改和润色Knowingfromyourletter41第二段：提出建议，给出理由认真听讲，积极练习广泛阅读欣赏影视作品原因：语言学习离不开大量的练习原因：有助于扩充词汇量原因：可以获取习惯用语高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第二段：提出建议，给出理由认真听讲，积极练习原因：语言学习离42潜在词汇及句型认真听讲积极练习大量的练习广泛阅读有助于扩充词汇量获得习惯语第一，...第二，...第三，...如果你做某事话会很有帮助。如果你能够...我认为那会更有帮助。做某事最好的方法莫过于...高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型认真听讲第一，...第二，...第三，...高43潜在词汇及句型认真听讲积极练习大量的练习广泛阅读有助于扩充词汇量获得习惯语listenattentively/closelypractiseregularly/constantlyagreatdealofpracticereadasmuchaspossiblecontributetoenlarge/enrichthevocabularygainidiomaticChinese高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型认真听讲listenattentively/44潜在词汇及句型Firstly,...Secondly,...Thirdly,...Itwillbeofgreathelpforyoutodosth.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...Thereisnobetterwaytodosththantodosth.Firstly,thereisnobetterwaytolearnalanguagewellthantolistenattentivelytoyourteacherinclassandconstantlypractiseafterclassasmasteringalanguagerequiresagreatdealofpractice.Besides,Ithinkitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldreadasmuchaspossible,whichcontributestoenlargingyourvocabulary.Finally,youcangainidomaticChinesethroughmoviesandsongs.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型Firstly,...Secondly,..45修改和润色Firstly,thereisnobetterwaytolearnalanguagewellthantolistenattentivelytoyourteacherinclassandconstantlypractiseafterclassasmasteringalanguagerequiresagreatdealofpractice.Secondly,Ithinkitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldread

asmuchaspossible,whichcontributestoenlargingyourvocabulary.Thirdly,youcangainidomaticChinesethroughChinesemoviesandsongs.Tobeginwith,thereisnobetterwaytolearnalanguagewellthantolistenattentivelytoyourteacherinclassandconstantlypractiseafterclassasmasteringalanguagedoesrequireagreatdealofpractice.Besides,Ithinkitbeneficialtoreadasmuchaspossible,whichcontributesalottoenlargingyourvocabulary.Finally,youcangainidomaticChinesethroughmoviesandsongs.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)修改和润色Firstly,thereisnobett46Tobeginwith,...Besides,...Finally,...首先，...此外，...最后，...tothinkitbeneficialtodosth.认为做某事有好处do+动词原形表示强调tocontirbutealotto...极大地有助于...高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)Tobeginwith,...Besides,...47第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿希望这些建议有效，祝愿学业有成高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿希望这些建议有效，祝愿学业有成高中48我真心希望这些建议证明是有效果的。Igenuinelyhopethesuggestionswillturnoutuseful.祝你...Wishyousth./Mayyoudosth.潜在词汇及句型Igenuinelyhopethesuggestionswillturnoutuseful.Wishyouasuceessfulsemester.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)我真心希望这些建议证明是有效果的。潜在词汇及句型Igenu49DearMark,KnowingfromyourletterthatyouarelearningChinesethissemester,IammorethanpleasedtoprovideyouwithsomeadviceonhowtoacquireagoodknowledgeofChinese.Tobeginwith,thereisnobetterwaytolearnalanguagewellthantolistenattentivelytoyourteacherinclassandconstantlypractiseafterclassasmasteringalanguagedoesrequireagreatdealofpractice.Besides,Ithinkitbeneficialifyoureadasmuchaspossible,whichcontributesalottoenlargingyourvocabulary.Finally,youcangainidomaticChinesethroughmoviesandsongs.Igenuinelyhopethesuggestionswillturnoutuseful.Wishyouasuceessfulsemester.Yourssincerely,LiHuaOnepossibleversion高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)DearMark,Onepossibleversion50假设你是李华。来自外国的好友Amber因为当地有数人感染新型冠状病毒而向你求助一些自我保护措施，据此请你给出相应的建议。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

2.词数：80词左右参考词汇：新型冠状病毒thenovelcoronavirus高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)假设你是李华。来自外国的好友Amber因为当地有数人感染新型51第一段：得知缘由，说明目的Amber居住的地方有数人感染了新型冠状病毒，急需自我保护措施的建议可添加细节：你非常担忧Amber的安全高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第一段：得知缘由，说明目的Amber居住的地方有数人感染了新52潜在词汇及句型感染了...对...表示担忧为...提供...自我保护得知...,某人做了某事videsb.withsth.self-protectionHearingthat...,sb.doessth.Hearingthatseveralpeopleinyourtownhavebeeninfectedwiththenovelcoronavirus,Iamveryconcernedaboutyoursafety.Therefore,Iamwritingtoprovideyouwithsomepracticaladviceonself-protection.高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型感染了...beinfectedwith.53Hearingthatseveralpeopleinyourtownhavebeeninfectedwiththenovelcoronavirus,Iamveryconcernedaboutyoursafety.Therefore,Iamwritingtoprovideyouwithsomepracticaladviceonself-protection.修改和润色Hearingthatseveralpeopleinyourtownhavebeeninfectedwiththenovelcoronavirus,Iamsoconcernedaboutyoursafetythat

Icanhardlywaittoprovideyouwithsomepracticaladviceonself-protection.Attention:相邻语句之间尽量避免重复；可以考虑句子之间的整合，使语言更简洁高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)Hearingthatseveralpeoplein54第二段：提出建议，给出理由1.尽量待在家里，取消聚会原因：病毒易感，远离感染者和携带者2.出门戴口罩，远离人群原因：防止吸入病毒3.增强免疫力方法：注意休息，平衡饮食，在家适度锻炼高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)第二段：提出建议，给出理由1.尽量待在家里，取消聚会原因：55潜在词汇及句型取消聚会容易感染感染者携带者戴口罩远离人群防止...做...吸入病毒增强免疫力平衡饮食适度锻炼首要的是,...此外,...最后但也重要,...你最好做某事。强烈建议你做某事。某事情是备受推从的。高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)高中英语应用文写作一建议信培优篇(共34张PPT)潜在词汇及句型取消聚会首要的是,...此外,...最后但也56潜在词汇及句型取消聚会容易感染感染者携带者戴口罩远离人群防止...做...吸入病毒增强免疫力平衡饮食适度锻炼cancelthegatheringseasyinfectionthose(whoare)infectedviruscarrierswearamaskstayawayfrom/avoidcrowdspreventsb.fromdoingsth.breatheinthevirusenhance/strengthentheimmunitybalanceddietsproperamountsofexercise潜在词汇及句型取消聚会cancelthegatherin57潜在词汇及句型Firstandforemost,...Moreover,...Lastbutnotleast,...Youhadbetterdosth.Youarestronglyrecommendedtodosth.Itishighlyadvisablethat...Firstandforemost,duetotheeasyinfectionofthedisease,youarestronglyrecommendedtokeepyourselfathomeasmuchasallowedandcancelallyourgatherings,inwhichwayyoumaystayawayfromthoseinfectedorviruscarriers.Moreover,youhadbetterwearamaskandavoidcrowdstopreventyourselffrombreathinginthevirus.Lastbutnotleast,itishighlyadvisableforyoutoenhanceyourimmunitytotheinfectionthroughregularrest,balanceddietsandproperamountsofexerciseathome.潜在词汇及句型Firstandforemost,...58修改和润色Firstandforemost,duetotheeasyinfectionofthediseaseamongpeopleofallages,youarestronglyrecommendedtokeepyourselfathomeasmuchasallowedandcancelallyourgatherings,inwhichwayyoumaystayawayfromthoseinfectedorviruscarriers.Moreover,youhadbetterwearamaskandavoidcrowdstopreventyourselffrombreathinginthevirus.Lastbutnotleast,itishighlyadvisableforyoutoenhanceyourimmunitytotheinfectionthroughregularrest,balanceddietsandproperamountsofexerciseathome.Duetotheeasyinfectionofthediseaseamongpeopleofallages,__________________________________________________________________(我的首要建议便是尽可能多地待在家里)andcancelallyourgatherings,inwhichwayyoumaystayawayfromthoseinfectedorviruscarriers._______________,(如果不得不出门)

youhadbetterwearamaskandavoidcrowdstopreventyourselffrombreathinginthevirus.Lastbutnotleast,itishighlyadvisableforyoutoenhanceyourimmunitytotheinfectionthroughregularrest,balanceddietsandproperamountsofexerciseathome.Attention:避免句式生搬硬套，灵活使用连接词foremostsuggestionistokeepyourselfathomeasmuchasallowedMyfirstandIfforcedoutdoors修改和润色Firstandforemost,duet59第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿采取以上步骤，尽可能降低感染风险，相信能度过难关可添加细节：期待病毒流行期过去后的重逢第三段：表达期待，给予祝愿采取以上步骤，尽可能降低感染风险，60潜在词汇及句型采取以上步骤降低感染风险渡过难关流行期重逢通过做某事，我希望...takethestepsabovelowerthepossibilityofgettinginfectedgetthroughthehardtimeepidemicreunionBydoingsth.,Ihope...Bytakingthestepsabove,Ihopeyoucangreatlylowerthepossibilityofgettinginfectedandthatwewillgetthroughthehardtime.Lookingforwardtoourreunionaftertheepidemic.潜在词汇及句型采取以上步骤takethestepsab61Bytakingthestepsabove,Ihopeyoucangreatlylowerthepossibilityofgettinginfectedandthatwewillgetthroughthehardtime.Lookingforwardtoourreunionaftertheepidemic.Bytakingthestepsabove,Ibelieveyoucangreatlylowerthepossibilityofgettinginfectedandthatwearesuretogetthroughthehardtime.Lookingforwardtoourreunionaftertheepidemic.修改和润色Attention:注意对情感的把握，语言的目的是表达思想Bytakingthestepsabove,I62DearAmber,Hearingthatseveralpeopleiny