四六级写作指导市公开课金奖市赛课一等奖课件

写英语作文极难，为何？英汉语言特点差异：1.汉语重简约，英语重结构。2.汉语重意合，英语重形合。（隐性语法Vs显形语法）3.汉语多详细，英语多抽象。4.英语多被动，汉语多主动。5.汉语叙述较主观，英语叙述较客观。

第1页四级写作常见问题第一、英语底子太薄，语法错误连篇，复杂单词拼写基本没有正确。现在我们看2篇文章第2页第二、缺乏思想，深度不够。

考试中很大一部分学生不能得高分还有一个主要原因，就是他们作文缺乏思想，深度不够。很多学生即使已是大二学生，甚至是大三大四学生，不过他们在作文当中所表现出智力水平与阅历似乎只相当于一个初高中生，写出来文章看起来很幼稚。所以，课下背景知识积累很主要，是写作中关键。第3页第三、实践上严重误区。所想即所写，拘泥于汉语思维产物，其思维模式为：

第4页合理模式为：

第5页提升方法1、形式要求1)卷面整齐，字迹清楚。忌讳：打补丁，扯电线，用修改液及胶带。2)字数不够，字号微调。第6页2.内容扣题思想表示清楚，最好正反论证某一观点。文字通顺，连贯性好基本无原始语法、词法及拼写错误。第7页怎样变换句型使英文表示更多样化？1.短句长句交替出现，给人一个一张一弛感觉。Peopleinfavorofthetraditionalinformationsourcesalwaysprovidethefollowingevidence.Firstly,thehistoryofhumancivilizationisthewrittenhistory.Secondly,peoplearefreetochooseanypostureandplacethatmakesthemcomfortablewhenreading.Finally,traditionalinformationsourcesarereliable.Theyareespeciallysowhenitcomestopreservingthehumaninformation.2.双重否定句使用。3.有比较级句子。Eg.Nobetterchancecouldbefoundtotrainourwillthantravelingalone.4.非谓语动词（3kinds）①不定式Itisofnousetomerelypunishthechildrenfortheirwrongdoings.②-ing分词

Beforemakingthedecisiontofacelife’schallengesalone,theyhavetothinkofbothitsadvantagesanddisadvantagesseriously.③-ed分词

ComparedtotheirAmericancounterparts,Chineseteenagerstendtobemoredependent.第8页5.倒装句

NotonlydoesTVpresentavividworldinfrontofus,butitalsobringslivebroadcastofsportseventtous.6.同位语从句Shanghai,whichwasoncetheparadiseforadventurers,isnowthelargestindustrialbaseinChina.7.后置修饰语Alifelivedwithoutfantasiesanddaydreamsisn’tasrichandrewardingaslifecanbe.8.插入语Ｗemaywellbeproudthatthevastcountryhas,strictlyspeaking,onlyonelanguage.9.被动句，英文中被动语态很多，汉语则极少，所以该项为难点。10.名词化句子a.Peopleareawareoftheshortageofnaturalresourcesandtheybegintobeinterestedinconservingpower.b.People’sawarenessoftheshortageofnaturalresourcesresultsintheirinterestinconservingpower.第9页11.排比句12.定语从句使用，没有定语从句文章给人一个简单幼稚感觉。13.强调句式14.感叹句15.疑问句16.what从句使用17.极为地道动宾短语（如attributesthtosb，imposesthonsb等等）使用，会使你文章档次提升很多。

第10页详细技巧开头万能公式：1．开头万能公式一：名人名言

Aproverbsays…Aseveryoneknows…

Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…

2．开头万能公式二：数字统计

Accordingtoarecentsurvey,…

Arecentstatisticsshowsthat…第11页结尾万能公式

：1．结尾万能公式一：结论总结型wecandrawtheconclusionthat…tosumup…

inaword…2．结尾万能公式二：提议型

Obviously,itishightimethat

…

Accordingly,Irecommendthat…Consequently,tosolvetheproblem,somemeasuresshouldbetaken.

第12页考究逻辑性文章要有条理，让人感觉到很有逻辑性。

1）first,second,third,last（不推荐，原因：俗）

2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推荐，原因：俗）

3）thefirst,thesecond,thethird,thelast（不推荐，原因：俗）

4）inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）

5）tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐）

6）tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally（强烈推荐）

7）firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast（强烈推荐）

8）mostimportantofall,moreover,finally

9）ontheonehand,ontheotherhand（适合用于两点情况）

10）foronething,foranotherthing（适合用于两点情况）

第13页写作过程1.审题：英语和汉语都要读，不要认为看到题目和以前背过文章类似就直接把以前背过文章直接写上去，这么轻易跑题！2.列提要(图画)或扩充提要(已提供)5分钟不需要写完整句子，只列关键点。最好不要打初稿第14页让我们再看一篇文章第15页第一套题参考范文SteppingAwayfromOnlineGamesNowadays,moreandmorecollegestudentsareaddictedtoonlinegames.Thosegamesmaybefunnyandexciting,butareveryharmfultothoseaddicts.Inmyopinion,therearemanydisadvantagesofgameaddiction（名词化）.Firstly（逻辑词）,onlinegamestakeupalotofplayers’timeforstudy.Manyoftheaddictsfoundthemselvesforcedtodropoutofschoolforpooracademicperformance.Secondly（逻辑词）,addictstendto

isolatethemselvesfromthereality.What’sworse（逻辑词）,indulgingin（沉湎于）thevirtualworldforalongtime,theyaremoreliabletosuffermentalproblemandphysicalcollapse.Thirdly（逻辑词）,playersareexposedtotoomuchviolentandunhealthymaterial,whichisdefinitelyharmfultotheirgrowth.Inshort（逻辑词）,Icannotseeanybenefitsfromonlinegames.Studyshouldbetheprimaryconcernofcollegestudents.Therefore,Ido（强调句式）hopetheycanstepawayfromonlinegames.第16页第二套题参考范文KeepOurCampusCleanThecampusisourhome.Throughouttheyearsofourcollegelife,wesleepinthedormitories,eatintheschoolcanteens,studyintheclassroom,readinthelibrary,andrefreshandamuseourselvesoncampus.（排比句）Sincethecampusiswhereweliveandstudy,everyoneofushastheobligationtokeepincleanandlookingnice.Buthowisitnow,thecampus?Actuallyitisnotallthatitshouldbe.Hereandthereyoufindhalf-eatenpiecesofbread,bananapeels,wastepaper,orangejuicecartons,etc.Theboys’dormitoriesarelitteredwithemptyglassbottles,dityshoesandunwashedclothes.Totopitall,someoftheroomsaresuffocatingwithcigarettesmoke.Beforestartingtosolvetheproblem,weshouldfirstofall,letthosewholitterknowthatacleancampusisvitaltoeverystudent.Ifthecampuslookedlikeagarbagedump,woulditbepossibleforustoliveandstudycomfortably?Thingswouldbequitedifferentifthesepeoplewatchedtheirbehaviorandstoppedthrowingwastearoundastheydonow.Persuasionaloneisnotenough.Thereshouldbestrictmeasurestodealwiththosewhodefyregulationsandpubliceethics.Ido（强调句式）believethatthroughthepesistenteffortsofboththeschoolauthoritiesandthestudentcommunitywewillbeabletoturnourcampusintoagarden-likeplacewherewecanenjoyabeautifultranquillearningenvironment.第17页第三套题参考范文AShoppingMallintheNeighborhoodItissaidthatajoint-venturecompanywillinvestlargeamountofmoneyonbuildingamodernshoppingmallintheneighborhoodofourcommunity.Thenewshasarousedmuchcontroversy（名词化）amongtheresidents.Asonememberofthiscommunity,Ivigorously

opposesuchaproject.Youknow,ourcommunityisbeautifullydecoratedwithtreesandflowers,filledwithsweetairlikeagarden.（排比句）

Oncetheshoppingmallisbuilt,ourquietlifewillbedisturbed.Furthermore,theflowingoflargepopulationwillcausenotonlytrafficjams,butalsoairandnoisepollution.Inaddition,thelocationoftheshoppingmallisreportedtobejustontheoppositetoaprimaryschool.Howdangerousitistothekids!（感叹句）Canthechildrenconcentratetheirmindwhenkeptinsuchacrowdedbusinesscenter?（疑问句）

Inaword,Istronglydisapproveofthisidea.Ihopeourcommunitywillkeepcleanandpeacefulforeverandeveryresidentcanenjoythispleasurablelife.第18页第四套题参考范文WhatisinthewayofpayingbacktheloansEversincecollegestartedtochargethestudentsfortheeducationtheyreceive,therehasalwaysbeenaproblemforsomestudents,especiallyforthosefromremote

ruralregions,togetthemoneyforit.Sothegovernmentoffersthemanoptionofborrowingmoneyfrom