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ReadingSelectivelyor有人认为读书要有有人认为应当博览看（1999年6月的典型的比较型论说文8分结构未达标Peopleallknowthatreadingisveryimportant.Withoutreadingwecouldhardlygetknowledge,andwithoutitwecouldhardlyknowthecurrentaffairs.Lookthroughourhistory,howmanyfamousbooksexistforourreading.(典型的中式迂回思维模式，未直击问题，无)Somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisveryimportant.peoplethinkthatweshouldreadextensively.Afterworkpeoplehavemanyotheractivitiesbesidesreading.Theydonothaveenoughtimetoreadextensively.Butdifferentbranchesofknowledgearecloselyrelated.Ifonewantstomakegreatachievements,hewillhavetoreadbooksaboutotherfieldsofstudy.Andsomebooksareharmfulandnotworthreading.(主体段对比论述层次，对精读和泛读的优缺点的比较无规律可寻，令读者看得一头雾水。Ithinkweshouldreadmorebooks.Soeverybody,let’s trightnowandarmourselvestotheteethwit (结尾段：无，以作结，苍白无力8分达标作文Peopleallknowthatreadingisveryimportant.Peoplehavedifferentopinionstowardshowtoread.Somepeoplesaywe’dbetterreadselectively.Otherpeoplebelievethatweshouldreadextensively.Asforme,Iprefertostrikeabalancebetweenthe(首段：直击问题，引出观点，提出论点。Somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisveryimportant.,afterworkpeoplehavemanyotheractivitiesbesidesreading.Theydonothaveenoughtimetoreadextensively.Second,withoutcarefulselection,wemayreadharmfulbooks.AndharmfulbooksmaydoharmtoourSomepeoplethinkthatweshouldreadextensively.Now,differentbranchesofknowledgearecloselyrelated.Ifonewantstomakegreatachievements,hewillhavetoreadbooksconcerningnotonlyhisownfieldofstudybutalsootherfieldsofstudy.Readingextensivelycangiveusexperience,broadenourviewandmakeusIthinkweshouldreadbothselectivelyandextensively.Astobooks,weshouldneverreadthem.Asfoofbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan.(结尾段：呼应首段句，得出中立的结论，并提出建议11分达标作鸡尾酒作文Peopleallknowthatreadingisveryimportant,however,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowardshowtoread.Somepeoplesaywe’dbetterreadselectively,onthecontrary,Othersbelievethatwewouldreadextensively.ButasfarasIamconcerned,,Ipreferabalancebetweenthetwo.Somepeoplethinkthatselectivereadingisveryimportant.Tobeginwith,afterworkpeoplehavemanyotheractivitiesexceptreading,asaresult/forthisreason,itwillbeimpossibleforthemtoreadextensively.Second,selectreadingmaterialcarefully,otherwisewewillreadbooksthatareharmfultoourminds.Somepeoplethinkthatextensivereadingisveryimportant.Admittedly,differentbranchesofknowledgecloselyrelate.Togaingoodachievements,hehastoreadbooksconcerningotherfieldsofstudybesideshisownfieldofstudy.What’smore,throughextensivereadingwecanbewiserandmoreexperienced,andourviewwillbebroadened.Asforme,I’minfavorofacombinationofselectivereadingandextensivereading.Astobadbooks,weshouldneverreadthem.Buttogoodbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan.Itistruethatpeopleallknowthatreadingisveryimportant,butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowardshowtoread.Somepeoplesaywe’dbetterreadselectivelywhileothersbelievethatwewouldreadextensively.Nevertheless/Nonetheless,inmyopinion,Iaminfavorofabalancebetweenthetwo.Insomepeople’sopinion,selectivereadingisveryimportant.andforemost,afterworkpeoplehavesomanyactivitiesexceptreadingthatextensivereadingwillbelesspossibleforthem.What’smore,wecan’timaginewhateffectsharmfulbookswouldbringtouswithoutcarefulselection.Insomepeople’sopinion,extensivereadingisequallyimportant.Asisgenerallyaccepted,differentbranchesofknowledgecloselyrelate.Hehastoreadbooksconcerningbothhisownfieldofstudyandotherfieldsofstudysoastogaingoodachievements.Furthermore,readingextensivelycangiveusexperience,broadenourviewandmakeuswiser.ally,Ithinknothingwillbesorewardingthancombiningselectivereadingandextensivereading.Asfarasbadbooksareconcerned,weshouldneverreadthem.Butasfoodbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan.Inspiteofpeople’suniversalknowledgeoftheimportanceofreading,differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionstowardshowtoread.Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively? ally,Ithinkbothareimportanttosomeextent.Somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisofgreatimportance.Foronething,numerousactivitiesafterworkleavenotimeforthemtoreadextensively.Foranother,ifwecannotselectreadingmaterialcarefully,wewillreadbooksthatmaydoharmtoourminds.Somepeoplethinkthatreadingextensivelyisofequalimportance.Asisknowntoall,differentbranchesofknowledgecloselyrelate.Inordertogaingoodachievements,hehastoreadbooksconcerningnotonlyhisownfieldofstudybutotherfieldsofstudy.Inaddition,extensivereadingcangiveusexperience,broadenourviewandmakeuswiser.Inmyopinion,weshouldreadselectivelyandextensivelyaswell.Withbadbooks,weshouldneverreadthem.Butforgoodbooks,weshouldreadasextensivelyaswecan.。11分作文Cooperationor1有人认为合作精神2有人认为竞争精神更3你的看Thereisusedtobeheateddiscussionoverwhethercooperationismoreessentialthancompetition.Asforme,bothofthemareimportant.ly,each isamemberofthesociety.Andseveraltasksneedthecooperationofallthemembersofagroup.Youmustperformyourowntaskscarefully.Keeppacewithyourclassmatesorcolleaguesandlistentoothers’suggestionshelpsyousucceedin However,beingcompetitivealsohasaplaceinlife.Asamemberofthegroup,ifwewanttoachievemoreandbebetterthanothers,youmustpaymuchmoreefforts,workingharderorstudyingmorediligently.Moreover,weshouldhavethecompetitivespiritanptourselvestoInaword,wemustlearntobebothcooperativeandcompetitiveinordertosucceedinlife.Whatweneedtolearnarewhentobecooperativeandwhentobecompetitive.Thereusedtobeheateddiscussionoverwhethercooperationismoreessentialthancompetition.Asforme,theimportanceofcooperationandcompetitionequals.ly,each islikeascrewofthemachine.Andseveraltaskscallforthecooperationofallthemembersofagroup.Performingyourowntaskscarefully,keepacewithyourclassmatesorcolleaguesandlisteningtoothers’suggestionshelpyousucceedin.However,beingcompetitivealsohasaplaceinlife.Asamemberofthegroup,ifyouwanttoachievemoreandbebetterthanothers,youmustpaymuoreefforts,workingharderorstudyingmorediligently.Moreover,youshouldhavethecompetitivespiritanptyourselftoInaword,wemustlearntobebothcooperativeandcompetitiveinordertosucceedinlife.Whatweneedtolearniswhentobecooperativeandwhentobecompetitive.AGoodMajororaGood1有人认为选择一个好专业很2有人认为选择一所好大学3你的看EverystudentwillbefacedwiththesamequestionwhentheypasstheCollegeEntranceExamination:Shouldhechooseagoodmajororagooduniversity?Therearedifferentanswersasfordifferentgroupsofpeople.Somestudentsthinkchoosingagoodmajorisveryimportant.Theycherishisaspecialtytheylikemost.Intheirmind,whethertheuniversityisfamousisnotveryimportant---solongasheworkshard,hecanachievealotinanyuniversity,andabrightfutureisawaitinghim.Otherstudentspaymoreattentiontotheuniversity.Intheirmind,choosingagooduniversityisveryimportant,becausetheenvironmentofuniversityisvitaltothemakingofanexcellent .Howcanyouhaveawidevisionandabroadhorizonifyoureceivededucationinanunknowncollegewherethereislessexchangeofinformation?Inaword,thebestchoiceisagoodmajoratagooduniversity,whichcanonlybegotaftergreatefforts.Ifwecannotobtainboth,inmyopinion,thethingtoconsiderisagoodmajor.EverystudentwillbefacedwiththesamequestionwhenhepassestheCollegeEntranceExamination:Shouldhechooseagoodmajororagooduniversity?Answersdifferasfordifferentgroupsofpeople.Somestudentsgiveprioritytoagoodmajor.Whattheycherishisaspecialtytheylikemost.Intheirmind,whethertheuniversityisfamousisnotveryimportant---solongastheyworkhard,theycanachievealotinanyuniversity,andabrightfutureisawaitingthem.Otherstudentspaymoreattentiontotheuniversity.Theyattachgreatimportancetotheuniversity,becausetheenvironmentofuniversitytothemakingofanexcellent isfertilesoiltothegrowthofaplant.Howcanyouhaveawidevisionandabroadhorizonifyoureceiveeducationinanunknowncollegewherethereislessexchangeofinformation?Inaword,thebestchoiceisagoodmajoratagooduniversity,butwithoutgreateffortswecanhardlygetsuchachoice.Ifwecannotobtainboth,inmyopinion,thethingtoconsiderisagoodmajor.8分作文结构突破比较型论说文一般有两首段=引言句+引言句（第一句：引出比较的对象。引言句一般为与作文题紧密相句（第二句：提出，明确表明作者的个人立场、观点、取主体部对比点的笔墨分对比点的位置分结尾段=呼应句+强调被肯定事物的积极作用等。结尾段=让步句+呼应句模板作文有人认为大学住宿应该有人认为应该与同学3观Itisoftendifficultfor todecidewhether .Inmyopinion, isalwaysbetter.(首段直接提出个人观点。Somestudentsdon’tlike .,theythink .Second, .Third, parableadvantage is . . （主体段一、二采用单项交替比较的方法I asapreciousopportunityforitisthebestway.AndIconfidentlybelieve （结尾段的首句与首段的句遥相呼应，体现整个篇章论述的Itisoftendifficultforastudenttodecidewhetherhewillhaveroommateornot.Inmyopinion,havingroommateisalwaysbetter.Somestudentsdon’tlikehavingroommates.Theythinkseveralpeoplelivingtogethercausessomeunpleasantnessbecauseeveryhashisorherownway.Wehavethechancetolearntoadjusttherivialwillenrichourexperienceandhelpusunderstandothersandlearnto parableadvantageisthatlivingtogetheroffersusexcellentchanceofcooperation.Planningapartysingle-handedlymaybeaboringanddifficultjob.Ourroommates’helpmakeitenjoyableandeasy.Combiningeverymember’switandtalenttogether,wemaydoanythingperfectly.Iregardroomingtogetherasapreciousopportunityforitisthebestwayoflearningcooperationandunderstanding.AndIconfidentlybelievethatsuchexperiencewillbehelpfulinone’slaterlife.8分作文结构临摹练习WillInternetReplace 有人认为类似于因特网的高科技产品会代替书2有人认为传统的信息产品书籍不会3看法具体要1：人类文明的历史就是书写的历史；原因2：人们可以随处用自己喜欢的阅读书籍原因3：书写形式更有利于安全保存信息。主体段落二：如因特网之类的现代技术的优点优点1：新科技的出现历来都会给人类生活带来许多好处；优点2优点3。练习模板Nowadays,theinfluenceof provestobeprofound.Andtherehasbee ycontroversialdebateasto (引出话题和争论，但保留作者个人的看法。Peopleinfavorof alwaysprovidethefollowingevidence. .Secondly, .Finally, （偏爱书籍的理由Conversely,asforthemerit ,inthe .Atthesame （因特网等现代科技的优点Inshort,Iagree （明确提出作者个人观点参考范WillInternetReplaceNowadays,theinfluenceofinternetprovestobeprofound.Andtherehasbee ycontroversialdebateastowhetherornotInternetwillreplacethebookasthemainsourceofinformation.Peopleinfavorofthetraditionalinformationsourcesalwaysprovidethefollowingevidence.ly,thehistoryofhumancivilizationisthewrittenhistory.Secondly,peoplearefreetochooseanypostureandplacethatmakethemcomfortablewhenreading.Finally,traditionalinformationsourceslikebooksarerelativelystableandreliabletopreservethehumaninformationwell.Conversely,asformeritsofmoderntechnologies,intheplace,inhistory,wecanseethateverynewtechnologybringsaboutgreatchangestoourlife.Secondly,moderntechnologylikecomputersisanothergreatinventionthatcanstoreahugeamountofdata.Atthesametime,weareabletoprocessthedatamorerapidlyandaccuraythanwecaneverimagine.Inshort,Iagreethatmoderntechnology,suchastheInternet,willonedayreplacethewrittenwordasthemainsourceofinformation.Therefore,Iameagerlylookingforwardtothatday.题二BookKnowledgeorPractical1有人认为书本知识举2有人认为实践经验更3观点具体要主体段一：直接经验对的工作有利有弊1直接经验对的帮助结尾段：呼应句+分别概括二者的优势。练习模板Whichismoreimportantinlife, ,or .Theanswermayveryfrom .Butinmyopinion,theyareofthesame(明确提出中立的观点ispricelessforithelpsonedealwiththeproblems ,however,islimitedinterms .Forone.For（分述直接经验的利弊Onewaytocompensateforitis （书本知识的补充作用 areessential. makesone makesone （响应，得出中立的结论参考范文BookknowledgeorPracticalWhichismoreimportantinlife,Knowledgefromthebooksyouread,or alexperienceyougaininreality?Theanswermayvary .Butinmyopinion,theyareofthesameExperienceispricelessforithelpsonedealwiththeproblemswitheaseandconfidence.Experience,howeverislimitedintermsoftimeandspace.Foronething,itisimpossibleforanyonetoexperiencealltheimportantevents.Foranother,asthespeedwithwhichskillsareobsolete(过时的，废弃的)andnewproblemscropup（突然出现）isunprecedented（空前的）becauseofthefastdevelopmentofsociety,experienceisfarlessOnewaytocompensateforitistoreadbooks.Booksofvariouskindscanbringusalmostunlimitedadditionalexperience.Tobesure,it’ssecondhandexperience.Butitistheidealsupplementtoourownlimitedexperience.Fewofuscantravelaroundtheworld,orlivelongbeyondonehundredyears,butallofuscanlivemanylivesbyreadingbooks.Bothbookknowledgeand alexperienceareessential.Whileexperiencemakesonemoreresourceful,bookknowledgemakesonemorelearned.题三Communicating ephoneorby1有人认为现代社会交流最有2有人认为现代社会书信交流不容忽3看法具体要首段两句话模式：引出关于交流的话题+当代社会交流方式由信件向的转变。主体段一：交流的优点，一笔带过书信交流的缺点1有急事时，最为快捷 生活节奏加快，没时间写信，能解决这个问题3似乎能缩短人与人之间的距离主体段二：交流的缺点，从而突出书信交流的优点 交流让人变的懒惰，人们不愿提笔组织自己的语言2在中无法直接表达的话语，可以通过书信传达。结尾段两句话模式：提出句+概括优势。练习模板isveryimportantbothinthepastandatpresent.Withthedevelopmentof （首段不直接提出个人观点isveryconvenientindeed,especiallywhenyou Today,withthequickrhythmoflifepeopleusuallydonothaveasmuchtimeto asbefore.And solvestheproblem.Moreover,itseemsthat （主体段采用欲擒故纵法，先肯定交流有一定的优点 .Somepeopledon’twant People .Atthis （“but”一词笔锋一转，转而书信交流的优点Therefore,Istrongly .Anditwillproveto.(结尾段自然而然地得出结论，明确立场参考CommunicatingbyephoneorbyCommunicationisveryimportantbothinthepastandatpresent.Withthedevelopmentoftransportation,letterscanbesentmuchmorequicklythaneverbefore,butwhentheephoneappeared,mostpeoplehaveturnedtoit.Communicatingwithotherpeoplebyephoneisveryconvenientindeed,especiallywhenyouhavesomethingurgent.Today,withthequickrhythmoflifepeopleusuallydonothaveasmuchtimetowritelettersasbefore.Andephonesolvestheproblem.Moreover,itseemsthatephoneshortensthedistancebetweenpeople.Butephoneismakingpeoplelazy.Somepeopledon’twanttowritelettersbecausetheymustanizetheirmindmorelogicallytoexpresstheirideas.Peoplecsoexpresstheirthoughtsbyletters,whichtheyfeeluneasytosaydirectlyoverphone.Atthispointephonelengthensthedistancebetweenpeople.Progressturnstohavemorethanonefaces.Therefore,Istronglyadvocatecommunicatingbyletter.Anditwillprovetobeoneofthewaystobeindependentfromephonewhenyoupickupyourpentowritealetter.练HowtoHuntforanIdeal1大学生就业的现状（说明原因2找到理想工作的成功3你的理想工作是什么（说明理由。第一段：简要交代大学生就业现状，重点分析原大学生和毕业人数增多，客观上造成就有点大学生就业思路不正确，过于强调薪酬和好的工作环境，如大城市；第二段：分析找到理想工作的成功因专业交际沟通好的品性，如自信和独立解决问题的第三段：表明自己的理想是做一名合格的语文老师，并说明原1专业是中我文学的酷我期望能为贫困地区的失学儿童贡献一练习模板isgettingincreasinglyserious.ly,itisbecauseofthegrowingnumberof ,whiakes thanever.What’smore,dueto mostofthemfailtobe enough,butgivetoomuchprioritytoand willensureyourchancesofsuccessin arevitalingredients.Andwhatreallycountsisthecapacityfor.Lastbutnotleast, ,suchas importantroles Iaspiretobeaqualifying aftergraduationbecauseofmymajorand alkeeninterestsin .Itismywishesto 参考范文Theemploymentforcollegegraduatesisgettingincreasinglyserious.ly,itisbecauseofthegrowingnumberofcollegestudentsandgraduatesaswellinrecentyears,whiakesjobmarkettighterthanever.What’smore,duetostudents’falseattitudetowardemployment,mostofthemfailtoberealisticenough,andgivetoomuchprioritytopaymentandopportunitiesofworkinginmetropolitanDoubtlessly,asoundbackgroundofexpertisewillensureyourchancesofsuccessinapplyingforanidealjob.Inter alskillsarevitalingredients.Andwhatreallycountsisthecapacityforconveyingyourownviewpoints.Lastbutnotleast,appealing alities,suchasself-confidenceandindependenceintacklingproblemsplayimportantrolesinjob-hunting.IaspiretobeaqualifyingChineseteacheraftergraduationbecauseofmymajorand alkeeninterestsinChineseliterature.ItismywishtoimparttheessenceandthebeautyofChineselanguagetothestudentsintheimpoverishedinlandareas,whohavebeendeprivedofrighttobeeducated.练习ReducetheNegativeEffectofOnlineGameson1在校园盛行2的影响3应该平衡与学习的关系。具第一段：简要说明盛行的现状，并具体分析现象成为谈论的主要报纸杂志上有许多相关信息有的学生甚至熬夜打第二段：分析影响有的学生自控能力不强，经常打影响了他们的学业熬夜和长时间面对电脑会影响他们的视力和身体沉迷于虚拟世界会让学生难以适应现实生活 练习模板areverypopularnowoncampus.Wecanhearlotsofstudentstalkingabouttheirexperienceof .Wecangetaccesstovariouskindsofinformationconcerning .Somestudentsevenburnthemselvesoutto exertseveralunfavorableeffectson .Someyoungstersarenotmatureenoughtorestrictthemselvesandtendtobeindulgedin ,whichwillbeboundtoinfluence .Moreover,stayinguplateatnightandtoomuchexposureto surely .Indulgence willhardtobeadjusted Itcomesundoubtedlythatitisofgreatimportancefor balancethetimeattributedto .Treatedappropriay,thelatterwillcertainly 参考范文Onlinegamesareverypopularnowoncampus.Wecanhearlotsofstudentstalkingabouttheirexperienceofplayingonlinegames.Wecangetaccesstovariouskindsofinformationconcerningonlinegamesonnewsprsandmagazines.Somestudentsevenburnthemselvesouttoplayonlinegamesallnightlong.Onlinegamesexertseveralunfavorableeffectsoncollegestudents.Someyoungstersarenotmatureenoughtorestrictthemselvesandtendtobeindulgedinthegames,whichwillbeboundtoinfluencetheirdailystudy.Moreover,stayinguplateatnightandtoomuchexposuretothecomputerwillsurelyundermineyoungpeople’seye-sightandhealthycondition.Indulgenceintothevirtualworldwillmakethestudentshardtobeadjustedtotheirreallife.Itcomesundoubtedlythatitisofgreatimportanceforuscollegestudentstobalancethetimeattributedtostudyandonlinegames.Treatedappropriay,thelatterwillcertainlylessenthestrainsofstudyandstimulateourinspirationasameansofentertainment.练：MyViewonRemedialClassfor有人认为孩子上补习班可以学到知有人认为让孩子上补习班加重了学生的身心负担，不宜提3看法是…….首段两句话模式：引出关于补习班引起了广泛的争议+提出两种不同主体段落一：有的人支持送孩子上补习班的理由（采用正反论证法孩子上补习班能学到知危害二：孩子还处在玩耍的，补习班会增加孩子的身心负2的原因并提出建议。练习模板Apublicdebatehasrisentothephenomenonthat.Someholdthatitisofgreatbenefit,butsomesetforthatotallydifferentargumentaboutit.ThoseinfavoroftheideaofRemedialClassesargue.However,therearealsopeoplewhothinkdifferently,forthey ThereisprobablysometruthinbothargumentsAsfarasIamconcerned,theformer(latter)opinionispreferablebecause 参考范文Apublicdebatehasrisentothephenomenonthatmanyparentssendtheirchildrentovariouskindsofremedialcourses.Someholdthatitisofgreatbenefit,butsomesetforthatotallydifferentargumentaboutit.Thoseinfavoroftheideaofremedialclassesarguethatremedialclassesofferanopportunitytolearnmorethings.Theyalsoaddthatchildrennotattendingremedialclasseswillnotbeascompetitiveasthosewhodo.However,therearealsopeoplewhothinkdifferently,fortheybelievestudentslearnlittleinremedialclassessincemostofthemarereluctanttoattendsuchclasses.What’smore,theythink,childrenareinastageofplayingfreelysothesecolorfulremedialclassesarenothingbutaburdenforthem.Worstofall,believingwhattheymissinclasseswillbetaughtagaininremedialclasses,someeabsent-mindedinThereisprobablysometruthinbotharg