意见征询信读后续写概要写作-2020-2021学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练(通用版)

1、2020-2021 学年下学期高一英语写作衔接练（通用版） 意见征询 +读后续写+要写作假设你是高一新生李华，你们学校要开设英音课程和美音课程，但你对要学英音是美音很是纠结，自己比较喜欢英音，但是怕美音难学。同时，美音在年轻人中比较普及，所以你在某英语网站论发， 征求网友们的建议。注意： 词数 左(头已给出，不计入总词数; 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Li at 13-11-2020 Hi, everyone. I am writing ask for advice on a question that has bothering me a lo 【答案】Li at 13-11-2020

2、I am writing ask for some advice a question that has me for long lime.Recently, our is British American English don kcourse I should I am more to choose British English. one it is recognized language. If I it well, I will be proud of myself. the other British English I am I wont master it very well.

3、 British English, American English more among youths. I with Id it if anyone give me professional advice. forward your reply.【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生在某英语网站论坛发帖，就自己选择学英音还是美音一事困惑向网 友征询意见。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，少量现在进行时、一般将来时和现在完成时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求： 讲述自己不知学英音还是美音一事的困惑；

4、 自己对英音和美音的各自看法； 希望他人提出建议。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组文的重点词组】be to do to sth.; be sth.; (be) look to 第三步：连词成句1. Recently, our school is going to offer British English courses and English courses, I don know course I should Actually, I am more choose British one hand, it is usually recognized noble If I it well, I w

5、ill be proud of myself. Compared to British American more popular the Looking forward to your 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）表转折对比关系 the one hand, On the hand连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】高分句型 1 Recently, our going offer British English courses and American English courses, do

6、nt which course I should 用了 which 导的宾语从句。高分句型 2 On other hand, knowing British is learn, I am afraid I master it well. 用现在分词短语作状语。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。续写的词数为 150 左。It New Year Eve. I was 15 and feeling because there was enough money buy the dress wanted.We did early that I thought Dad wante

7、d for us to together. he himself again outside. “Come on, Elizabeth, he said. “Dress yourself s cold out.Outside, I became even more annoyed. Not only getting the dress; Dad pulling out in cold. going to do going to be a I up cold biting We pulled in 柴棚) loading 装载wood. Finally, asked, what are doin

8、g? by Mrs. lately? he asked. Clark lived two miles down the from us. Her husband had passed the year before, leavingher three children to raise on her own. “Yeah, said. “Why? rode just today, Dad said. “Little Jake was out in the woodpile, trying to find a few pieces of wood. They out of Elizabeth.”

9、That all he a telling me go load He returned carrying large flour(粉) his right smaller bag of in lefthand. “What in bag?” I asked. . re of I got the children a box of candies, too. It justwouldn be Year without some candy. ”I tried to think through what Dad was doing. a big woodpile,meat flour, we g

10、ive but I knew we didn have any Mrs. Clark closer neighbors than us. Why We unloaded the wood behind the Clarks house and knocked the crack( 缝， a fearful voice is ” “James Cotton, am, and my daughter, Elizabeth. Could come in for a bit?注意：、续写词数应为 左右；、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 1: Clark opened of house where

11、 three children were wrapped 裹)in blanket. 2:I well that had me a gift much greater than a 【答案】 1:Mrs. Clark the door of the house where the children were wrapped in blanket. “We brought you afew things, maam, Dad said, handed the her. bag and shoes. And bit herlower to keep it from trembling as tea

12、rs ran down her cheeks. brought a of wood, ” Dad turnedto me, “Elizabeth, heat place up. Soon the fire worked and everyone in h The kids laughed them each piece of and Clark wore 2:I well that had me a gift much greater than a I three surrounding my dad, and laughing. I could see that they missed th

13、eir I that I mine.Dad look on Mrs. Clark face probably hadn been on her face for a long time, the smiles ofher best Year I am so grateful I got most valuable for the 【分析】这是一篇读后续写作文。【详解】通过阅读所给文章可知，除夕之夜 15 岁作者因为没有足够的钱买想要的连衣裙而伤心，她原以为早早做完家务，家人们一起过节，但是爸爸却带作者装木柴，要送到克拉克夫人家，因为她丈夫过世留下她和三个孩子相依为命过着艰苦的生活。续写部分分为

14、两段，第一段开头是：克拉克夫人打开门，面三个孩子裹着一个毯子。所以后文应该是讲述作者父亲给克拉克夫人一家送去她们需要过冬的木柴和子，以及孩子们开心的场面。第二段开头是：我理解爸爸给了我一个比连衣裙还珍贵的礼物。本段应该作者看到穷苦的克拉克一家在新年因为得到了帮助久违的笑脸，这段经历给作者和克拉克一家留下了快的回忆。 最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为 左。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如handed the ； high ； her lower lip ；imagination； it from ；wore a 高级词汇 bit her lower lip to keep

15、it from trembling ran down cheeks.运时间状语从句， I the three surrounding my running and laughing运 非谓语动词等高级句式。阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。Family problems be very especially like holidays. there to problems peace to the dynamic (活力) Life to waste. person family what make a If family members are waiting unti

16、l calms down deal with the argument. Aperson shouldnt discuss the family problem when he is feeling upset emotional. If he waits even a single night,the 强) of the emotion is to calm down if he is still unhappy. wait react emotionally. If takes a and himself some dealing with the he will deal with it

17、 wisely.Someone wants send off text an wishes he take back. Trying address anargument or family by instant or emails is worst possible choice. Thats because the too be misunderstand communication. The sends off text or an not he sounds angry person it. off pick telephone arrange in-person communicat

18、ion. Electronic means people lose meaning language, which can express feelings reduce the sting 不快) of a painful As the saying goes, is thicker than water.” People can choose friends, not their family. cut it could cause more down Understanding that family faults but can love their first step toward

19、s addressing problems. Accept your own too. 【答案】Family problems be very However, are always some ways handle them. Waiting until youare family can help them. Rather than off text or with familyproblems in which is way. it is necessary to try to the faults family members as well as your 【分析】这是一篇概要写作。【详解】写作步骤）细读原文。首先要仔细阅读短文