喜悦之情-当我病了的时候-WhenIWasIll

1、喜悦之情 -当我病了的时候 -WhenI Was Ill当我病了的时候【内容提示】你因某种疾病在医院住了几天。在病床上，除了受着病的折磨你还觉得专门孤寂，十分想念老师和同学。病情稍一好转你就要求出院。你刚回到家正预备复习功课时有人敲门。你开门一看，来的是班主任老师和几个同学。这时你的心情十分兴奋，见到了好几天不见的同学、老师的那种欢乐之情真是用言语无法描述。【作文示范】When I Was IllFive days ago, I had a terrible headache and ran a high temperature.The doctor told me to stay in ho

2、spital. These days I was very lonely, Istayed in the sick bed and looked at the white ward quietly every day. I couldn t help thinking of my teachers and classmates.When I felt a little better, I wanted to leave hospital at once. One afternoon the doctor agreed that I could leave. It meant I would s

3、ee my friends again next day! On my way home, I found the air outside was nice and fresh.As soon as I arrived at home, I was busy going over my lessons. Suddenly, there was a knock at the door. “ Who is it?” I thought. WhenI opened the door I shouted,“Jiang Min! ”She was my best friend. Behi nd her

4、were my head teacher Mr. Hu and some of my classmates.“Come in!”I said with a big smile. How surprised and happy I was! One of t hem said, “You were ill in hospital, werent you? We were sorry to he ar that.” Another one smiled, saying, “We went to the hospital just now, but you had already gone.” Mr

5、. Hu said, “We all hope you will get w ell soon. Welcome back to school.” I was so excited that I didn t know what to say or what to do. I only said, “Thank you for coming to see me. Thanks a lot.”Theyalso asked about my illness and told me to have a good rest and not to worry about the lessons. The

6、n they said good-bye to me.I looked at the food they had brought to me.“How kind they are!”Isaid to myself, “ I must make up for the lessons I missed. I willtrymy best and study harder.”【词语讲明】ward w&:dn. 病房make up for补偿【写法指要】按理讲，人病了应该是一件悲伤的事，然而本文作者选择的题材恰恰是从其反面切入，写的是欢乐的心情。这是作者选材的成功之处。文章用了渐进（ climax）的宏观修辞手法，使欢乐心情由低潮逐步达到高潮，这点能够从几处的选词和手法看得出来： nice