2022-2023学年新教材高中英语Unit3GettingalongwithothersSectionⅣWriting人际关系学案牛津译林版必修第一册

1、PAGE PAGE 5Section Writing人际关系1写作任务假定你是李华。你们班刚转入的新同学李明一时无法融入新班级，感到很苦恼。请写一封信表示你的关心，并且提出你的建议。注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_2写作思路(1)一审：确定写作体裁和主题 eq blc(avs4alco1(体裁：应用文（写信提建议）,主题：表示关心，提出建议) (2)二定：确定时态和人称 eq blc(avs4alco1(时态：一般现在时为主,人称：第一人称（I）和第二人称（you）) (3)三明确：明确写作要点得知李明的苦恼表示关心提出建议(4)结合要点分三个段落3素材整理(

2、1)关键词语李明苦恼(have difficulty doing，suffer, at a loss)；表示关心(be concerned，cheer sb. up，keep ones company)；提出建议(in my opinion, take action, feel stressed，get along well with, go over the lessons together, take part in, count on)。(2)完成句子看到你苦于融入新班级，我非常难过。I am sad to see that _ fitting in the new class.我曾经也

3、不知道怎么跟陌生人交朋友。I was once at a loss _ with strangers.作为你的同班同学，我非常关心你，想提出几点建议来帮你。As your classmate, I _ about you and willing _ some suggestions to help you.在我看来，你不必感到有压力。_，you neednt _不是所有人都能很容易交到朋友。Not all people _你可以和他们一起复习功课，在他们遇到难题的时候提供帮助。You can _ with them and offer to help when they_为了多结交朋友，你还可

4、以多参加班级活动。_， you can also take part in more class activities.希望我的建议对你能有用。I hope you find my suggestions _4满分作文(连句成篇)请将以上句子连成一篇语言流畅、用词准确、逻辑严密的短文。参考范文：Dear Li Ming，I am Li Hua. I am sad to see that you have difficulty fitting in the new class. I can understand your suffering because I was once at a los

5、s how to make friends with strangers. As your classmate, I am concerned about you and willing to offer some suggestions to help you.First, you neednt feel stressed. Not all people can make friends easily. Second, you can go over lessons together with our classmates and offer to help when they are fa

6、ced with problems. Last, to make more friends, you can also take part in more class activities.I hope you find my suggestions beneficial to you and adapt to the new life as soon as possible. Yours，Li Hua综合点评范文要点齐全，语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在其中使用了地道的短语和句式来达到写作目的，例如：“have difficulty; at a loss how to make frie

7、nds with strangers；I am concerned about you; offer some suggestions; when they are faced with problems；to make more friends; beneficial to you”。要点过渡时使用正确的过渡词，例如第二段中的“first，second，last”简洁串联三个建议。整篇文章以关心开头，以祝福结尾，符合作者身份，完成了写作要求。5佳作背诵(1)佳作一假定你是李华，经常帮你学习英语的Alex即将回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：表示感谢；回顾Alex对你的帮助；临别祝愿。

8、注意：词数80左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。_(2)佳作二一份调查显示，当今中学生最关心的一个问题就是人际关系的处理。良好的人际关系能使他们的生活更愉快，精力更充沛，身体更健康。但是，对于中学生来说，处理好人际关系并不是一件容易的事，仅有主观热情是不够的，还要讲求方法。请你结合下列要点写一篇主题为“How to Improve Interpersonal Relationship”的英文演讲稿。尊重他人；消除自私心理；主动交往，消除自卑心理；尊重他人权利，虚心接受他人的忠告和建议；乐于助人。注意：对所给要点不要简单翻译，可以适当发挥； 词数80左右； 参考词汇：自卑inferiority

9、。_Section Writing人际关系3you have difficultyhow to make friendsam concernedto offerIn my opinionfeel stressedcan make friends easilygo over lessons togetherare faced with problemsTo make more friendsbeneficial to you5(1)参考范文：Dear Alex，I am so sad to know that you are going to return to your country bef

10、ore long. We get along well during your stay in China and you have offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English. While staying in China, you always spend your time helping me improve my oral English. It is you who share rich knowledge of English

11、and English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible.Yours，Li Hua(2)参考范文：Good morning, everyone !The topic of my speech today is “How to Improve Interpersonal Relationship”. To improve interpersonal relationship , a student should respect others and be generous. In a way a selfish person cannot make true friends. It is better to be active and get rid of the sense of inferiority. It is wise of you to respect others and follow their advice