2021年浙江省高考新题型概要写作训练指导

1、2021 年浙江省高考新题型概要写作训练指导 概要写作纲解读 提供一篇 350 以内的短文要求考生基于该短文写出一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。题分析 1原文材料 350 以内概要写作 80 。2原文以说明文、议论文为主。3概要基本就是段落大意。每段用一句话概括或者两段一个 大意最多用两句话概括。4要着重训练自己文章主旨大意和各段段落大意的归纳概括 能力。作注意事项 1找关键词和主题句准确理解、分析原文要点归纳段落大 意。2各要点的表达要相对独立。3各要点之间要有适当的衔接。4句型力求简单每句话要表意明白无空泛、笼统、含混之 词。5尽量使用短句慎用长难句。例如尽量少用关系代词 whichwho

2、等引导的定语从句而第 1 页 共 8 页采用ing 式和- 形式作定语。6多使用概括性词语少用具体描述性词语。要模板及句型 1表示文章的内容以及研究目的This paper is aimed at/covers/mainly deals with.The article focuses on the topic of.2表示研究的结论The result showed that.The author found that.It was concluded that.3表示、观点或建议The author suggests/considers that.Suggestions are made

3、for.实战演练 1阅读下面短文根据其内容写一篇 60 左右的内容概要。 As most children return to school, many affluentfamilies are choosing to pull their children out of the mainstream education system altogether in favor ofhaving a tutor at home “Around 50 percent of the inquiries we're getting at the moment are for daily hom

4、e tutoring,” Steve Spriggs, managing第 2 页 共 8 页director of London-based private tutoring service And, he adds, the trend has grown from families asking forpersonal tutors to replicate the classroom environment in their own homes. Many families that were makingthe inquiries for full-time home tutors,

5、 Spriggs said, were either travelling so frequently that sending theirchildren to one school was impractical and others did not want their children to go into boarding school.Home tutoring is nothing new, and many tuition firms also offer e_tra tutoring services to familieswanting their children to

6、have a little e_tra help learning aheadof entrance e_ams at petitive privateschools in the U.K., such as Harrow, St. Pauls or Eton.“We always make it clear to parents that we will only offer full-time home schooling for a yearthough,” Spriggs e_plained. “Any more than a year and children start to lo

7、se out on what a schoolenvironment can give them, such as social skills and that vital interaction they need although we try to第 3 页 共 8 页mitigate that anyway in our home tutoring with sports clubs of museum trips as part of the teachingprogram.”Spriggs said that the costs of hiring a full-time tuto

8、r would e_ceed the fees of a top boarding school,which usually charge around ($54,400) a year. Some families employ two full-time tutors, one tocover humanities and the other to cover science and maths. Devising an educational plan for youngsters inthese situations is not a quick process, however, t

9、aking up to si_ weeks to plan, Spriggs said, with a tutorbeing matched to the child to ensure they are patible. 参考范文： Home tutoring isn trare in society. Somerich families choose full-time tutors because of frequent travelling or because they don t want theirchildren to go into boarding sch 点 l.( 1)

10、 Meanwhile, to perform betterin entrance e_ams, some children need e_tra tutoring services.( 要点 2) Some tuition firms add some activities to第 4 页 共 8 页improve the social skills of the children .( 要点 3) Although the costs of home tutoring are high, some families stillemploy two full-time tutors to en

11、sure their children can gain balanced development.( 要点 4)实战演练 2阅读下面短文根据其内容写一篇 60 左右的内容概要。 Getting rid of dirtin the opinion of most peopleis agood thing.Howeverthere is nothing fi_ed aboutattitudes to dirt.In the early 16th centurypeople thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease

12、asmedical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up the skin and let ills in.A particulardanger was thought to lie in public baths.By 1538the French king had closed the bath houses in hiskingdom.So did the king of England in 1546.Thus began a long time when the rich and the p

13、oor in Europelived with dirt in a friendly way.Henry King of Francewas famously dirty.Upon learning that anobleman had taken a baththe king ordered that to avoid the attack of disease the nobleman should not go第 5 页 共 8 页out.Though the belief in the merit(好) dirt was long- liveddirt has no longer be

14、en regarded as a niceneighbor ever since the 18 century.Scientifically speakingcleaning away dirt is good to health.Clean watersupply and hand washing are practical means of preventing disease.Yet it seems that standards ofcleanliness have moved beyond science since WorldWar .Advertisements repeated

15、ly sell the ide need to be whiter than whitecloths eversoftersurfaces to shine.Has the hate for dirt howevergone toofar?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays.Many first - time parents nervously try to warn theirchildren off touching dirt which might be responsible for the spread of disease.

16、On the contraryMaryRuebushan American immunologist(疫学家encourages children to play in the dirt to build up a strongimmune system.And the latter (者 position is gaining some ground.【参考范文】第 6 页 共 8 页People have mi_ed opinions towards dirt on our skin. 要 1)For a long time in historypeople of someEuropean

17、 countriessuch as Francebelieved that dirt protected people from getting ill.(要 2)Howeverpeople began to change their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago.People have been told that washing dirt offour body can keep us healthy 要. 3)Howeversome scientists believe that e_posure to some dirt may helpour immune system.(要 4)附：概要写作评分原则及给分范围一、评分原则1本题总分为 25 分按 5 档次给分。2评分时先根据所写概要的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次 然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次最后给分。3词数少于 40 的和多于 80 从总分