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1、13号复盘：Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.Youth unemploymenthas become a serious problem, and it is important for young people to make the r

2、ight decision on thecareer path. I would argue that they should have freedom to choose the job they like, although they should also pay attention to the potential benefits of this job, such as pay andworking conditions.If they choose jobs freely,they are likely tohave a fulfilling career.They may ch

3、oose to do some jobs contributing to society or jobs that they specialise in.They willdevote time and energiesto their favourite jobs.This means that they work hard,undergo traininginfree time andshow determinationwhenfacing challenges.All these actions can lead tocareer success, which enables them

4、togain high payas well as asense of achievement.On the other hand, it is argued that young job-seekers should keep somepractical considerationsin mind.It is not easy tosecure a job andcover living expenseswith abasic salarytoday.For this reason, young people should consider a wide range of factors,

5、including income and opportunities for promotions, when theypursue a career.For example,students frombusiness schoolscan choose to work for banks and other highly profitable organisations, instead of NGOs.They are able to improve living standards with thiscareer choice.From my personal perspective,

6、young adults can choose whatever jobs they like.They maytake up different jobsand have avaried career.With such experience, they can become well-rounded individuals and have a better understanding of what jobs they can fit into and how toachieve their potential.They can thus choose a job thatsuits t

7、heir skills andpersonality.in conclusion, I believe that young people should be encouraged to choose their favourite jobs, which can contribute to theircareer achievement.复盘的要求：1所谓的复盘，就是不看课堂的范文，自己按照ABC写一次。可以使用词伙，也可以不使用，自己写出来2确定至少两种拓展方法（按照我上课的方式）3规定时间（大概8分钟一段）写完后，对照范文，关注：1范文在哪里出现了关键词或者关键词的替换词去扣题？2范文使

8、用了什么拓展的方式？在哪里拓展？3范文使用了什么代词增加句子联系？4范文使用了什么词伙去避免中国式表达？和你的表达有什么不同？5范文的句子结构是如何变化的？使用了什么连接词？什么从句？14号写全文：Children spend long time studying in school and after school. What are the positive or negative effects on children and society they live in?简单20141110精品20150312精品选择不准确或者不恰当的观点A孩子花大量时间在课上和课下学习，学习成绩提高，进

9、入理想大学B孩子长时间在校内校外学习，没时间运动和参加课外活动，对身体健康产生威胁C孩子长时间在校内校外学习，孩子发展不全面，情商低，将来很难与人相处并融入社会D长时间学习占用了学生大部分时间课外活动匮乏，对学习产生厌恶，感到疲惫把学习看负担E学生长时间在校学习和课外学习，更容易培养出专业精英，为社会各行各业的发展输送人才答案：选ABCD。这些观点都可以，但是最后最好要讨论一下对“society they live in”的影响，确保扣题。学生作业自我评分的要点语法 出现谓语动词的错误、名词单复数和冠词的错误，5.5分 句子成分（譬如说主谓宾等）不懂，句子缺成分，5.5分 单词词性不懂（譬如说

10、形容词和副词混淆、连词和介词混淆）等，5.5分 多动词没有连词或者从句，5.5分如果上面的语法问题都没有，恭喜你，你已经是6分的同学了，如果你处理好下面两个扣题的细节扣题 中心句没有题目关键词或者关键词的替换表达 主体段如果出现两句话表达的意思类似，就是重复 论述过程中有没有多注意解释原因、解释名词和给例子，多阐述结果14号练习小作文：图的类型：静态时态：一般现在时思路提示：主体段落1：1 polystyrene cups用的steam最多，然后对比paper cups的steam；2 paper cups的主要原料是wood，而polystyrene cups不用木材；3两个杯子都用很多的p

11、etroleum主体段落2：对比剩下的三种材料，polystyrene cups除了chemicals多之外，其他材料都少15号练习写着三篇的ABC：Some people believe that the range of technology available to individuals today is increasing the gap between the poor people and the rich people, while some others say this has an opposite effect. Discuss both views and give

12、 your opinion.Developments of technology are causing environmental problems. Some people think the solution is that everyone acceptsa simpler life, while others believe that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.Some people think music plays an important role

13、in society. Others think it is only a form of individual entertainment. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion.此外我发现很多同学基本句子写不好，请大家阅读下面这个文章关于13大基本句型的几个常见问题的总结1 enable/allow somebody to do something,后面一般都是接比较正面的东西。错误的例子：smoking enables people to suffer from lung disease.（生病不是什么

14、好事）改正：smoking is responsible for lung disease.2 make it possible/ easy for somebody to do something,后面一般都是接比较正面的东西错误的例子：advertisements make it possible for people to squander money. (浪费钱不是什么好事)3 provide somebody with opportunities to do something,后面一般都是接比较正面的东西错误的例子：the lack of education provides yo

15、ung people with opportunities to drop out of school. (退学是不好的事情)4 it is easy for somebody to do something是指做一个事情很“简单”，不是指“有可能”做一个事情。错误的例子：it is easy for young people to watch TV long hours. (长时间看电视不是什么简单的事情)改正：many young people are likely to watch TV long hours.5 pose a threat to, give importance to,

16、 cause damage to, have a beneficial effect on, play a vital role in这些短语的最后一个词都是介词，一般加名词比较多，很少加动名词，加动词肯定错。错误的例子：Education has a beneficial effect on finding good jobs.改正：education has a beneficial effect on ones job prospect.6很多同学都喜欢用make, let，其实都不是很恰当，MAKE很多时候用强迫的意思，LET是允许的意思，可以使用enable, allow替换。7人没

17、有难易之分, people are easy或者people are difficult to 都是错的错误的例子：people without computer literacy are hard to seek employment改正：It is difficult for people without computer literacy to find employment错误的例子：people with computer skills can be easy to find jobs.改正：people with computer skills can find jobs easi

18、ly.8 it makes it possible to do something也是错的9 something is helpful to do something or something is beneficial/important/useful to do something都是错的。因为只有it is important to do something或者something is important to something大家喜欢写something is important to do something是因为这是中文的直译可以改成something can help some

19、body do something.翻译：旅游业有助于提高人们的生活。错误的表达：Tourism is helpful to improve peoples living standards.准确的表达：Tourism can help improve peoples living standards.10 it is important to do something的意思“做什么事情很重要”，而不是表示“前面某事对这个事情很重要”如果什么东西对什么重要，是something is important to something.看看这个例子：It is important to improv

20、e young peoples job skills. These skills are important to their job prospect.注意翻译：提高年轻人的工作技能是重要的。这些技能对他们的工作前景很重要。明白了？前者是一个建议，后者是一个因果关系。11 lead to, result in后面只能加名词，不能加动词，动名词也很少见。错误的例子：Poor education can lead to children behave badly (这是个句子).改正：Poor education can lead to behavioural problems.12 it is helpful to do something并不是“什么东西有