中考英语专题作文-交通问题及绿色出行课件

1、中考英语专题作文交通问题及绿色出行Traffic Problems and Green Commuting中考英语专题作文brainstormway to school AndWay to workOn foot/walk .By bike.By bus.By horse/carriage.By subway.By plane.By train.By boat.How do you go to school/work?brainstormOn foot/walk .By bikTypes of vehciles:bustraincartaxiTypes of vehciles:bustrain

2、cartDiscuss the means of transportation you have used.planesubwaylight railferryDiscuss the means of transportCan you guess the meaning of these two words？ carriage spaceshipCan you guess the meaning of tTraffic AccidentsPage 6Traffic AccidentsPage 6What are the reasons that cause more and more traf

3、fic accidents today? more cars on the road road designs are not clearlack of driver educationtoo many bad and dangerous drivers: not skillful enough, irresponsibleWhat are the reasons that causWhat behaviors can result in traffic accidents?for driversdriving too fast /speedingdriving while on the ce

4、ll phonesrunning the red lightsudden lane（车道） changingdrunk drivingnot using signal(信号 ）lightsWhat behaviors can result in for pedestrians（行人）running the red lightcrossing the road while listening to the music or using the mobile phone.get over the fence（栅栏）What behaviors can result in traffic accid

5、ents?for pedestrians（行人）running ththe sign of bans 禁止标志the sign of bans 禁止标志禁止通行No entry禁止驶车No driving禁止停车No parking禁止通行No entry禁止驶车No driving禁止停车the sign of directions 指示标志the sign of directions 指示标志单行路（直行）straight-going only允许掉头Turn around环岛行驶Round about单行路（直行）straight-going only允许掉头the sign of ca

6、utions 警示标志the sign of cautions 警示标志事故易发路段Accidents happen easily注意落石Falling rocks两侧变窄Road Narrows 事故易发路段Accidents happen easily注What can we do to avoid the traffic accidents? Education for drivers self-discipline(自律） education for pedestrians self-protectionStrict official management Drive patientU

7、se seat-belt and other safety devices.Do not run red light.What can we do to avoid the trWhat should the pedestrians do ? Crossing with the signal in a crosswalkDont walk on the high way Follow the traffic rulesWalking along a sidewalkRemember the above four pointsWhat should the pedestrians doWhat

8、traffic problems do you know?traffic jamsparking problemsnoise pollutionair pollutionstraffic accidentsWhat traffic problems do you kPage 19How to solve these traffic problems ? Choose green commuting.Drive less, try to choose the public transport. try to walk or ride a bikePage 19How to solve these

9、 traf中考专题作文随着人民生活水平的提高，开车出行的人越来越多，交通越来越拥堵，某中学英文报刊的主编邀请你为该报纸写一篇小短文，呼吁人们绿色出行（Green commuting)内容包括：1 如何做到绿色出行？2 作为中学生，我们如何支持绿色出行？3 说说绿色出行的重要性及呼吁人们绿色出行。写作要求：1 文中不得出现学校和本人的真名；2、80词左右，作文开头已给出，不记入总词数。开头：As we know,too much trafiic has caused too many problems.中考专题作文随着人民生活水平的提高，开车出行的人越来越多，交内容分：7分（1）绿色出行重要性（

10、1分），呼吁（1.5分）（2）如何做到（每条建议1.5分） 4.5分内容要点完整且词数符合写作要求的作文可以得7分，词数在70个以下的作文在内容分上酌情扣分。语言分：8分第一档：8分 要求：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。第二档：67分 要求：内容涵盖绝大多数要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少量语言错误。 第三档：45分 要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚 ,连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。第四档：13分 要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少数正确句子，但整体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。 第五档：0分 空白卷或你没有相关内容。评分档次和要求：

11、内容分：7分评分档次和要求：认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步审写作第一步审审:随着人民生活水平的提高，开车出行的人越来越多，交通越来越拥堵，某中学英文报刊的主编邀请你为该报纸写一篇小短文，呼吁人们绿色出行（Green commuting)。(80词左右）内容包括：1 如何做到绿色出行？2 作为中学生，我们如何支持绿色出行？3 说说绿色出行的重要性及呼吁人们绿色出行。找出关键词、明确作文要求_ 因开头已给出，决定将呼吁部分当作结尾，其它要求作为正文。审:随着人民生活水平的提高，开车出行的人越来越多，交通越来越用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列写作第二步用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列

12、写作第二步 1、开头已给出2、正文（body)分述1）、如何做到？可用句型:We should/can/are supposed to/. We should drive less and try to choose the public transport. We can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far.2）、如何支持？Students can go to school on foot or by bike, try not to take a car列 1、开头已给出列 3）绿色出行的重要性. 可用句型:it can help. /it c

13、an give us可用句子:It can help solve the traffic problems and give us a green life. 3、结尾总结（呼吁人们绿色出行）.Green commuting is necessary. Why not come and join us?列 3）绿色出行的重要性. 列We should drive less and try to choose the public transport. We can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far. It can help solve the t

14、raffic problems and give us a green life. As we know,too much trafiic has caused too many problems.Green commuting is necessary. Why not come and join us?a nice heada nice taila nice bodyWe should drive less and try t加加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：加加首尾，使结构完整。写作第三步：加加首尾，使结构完整。首：As

15、we know,too much trafiic has caused too many problems. To solve these problems, we have to do something.尾：Green commuting is necessaryIt can help solve these traffic problems, it will give us a green life.Why not come and join us?写作第三步：加加首尾，使结构完整。写作第三步：加加正文，使内容丰富。We should drive less and try to choo

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23、olve these problems, we have to do something. First, we should drive less and try to choose the public transport. Like the bus, the subway, the train and so on. Second, we can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far. That will help reduce these traffic problems. Students can go to school on foot or

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