版高考英语新增分大一轮复习渐进写作全辑StepOne第4讲润色添彩定语从句讲义牛津译林版

1、第4讲润饰添彩的定语从句定语从句的正确使用表现学生关于语言拥有较高的掌握能力，在写作中使用一到两个定语从句能够提高文章的品位。一、写作中定语从句的常有种类关系代词指引的定语从句关系代词who，whom，whose，that，which，as指引的定语从句是写作的一大重点，特别是which和as指引的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是常有。(1)Ihavealreadybeenavolunteerforthe13thNationalGameswhichwillbeheldattheendofAugustinTianjin.我已经是八月尾将在天津举行的第十三届全运会的志愿者了。(2017天津)(2)

2、ThereisnodoubtthatyouaresupposedtoknowaboutthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance，whichwillmaketheclassgosmoothly.毫无疑问你应当提早认识唐代的历史，这会使得课程进展顺利。(2017全国)(3)Anystudentwhoisinterestediswelcometoparticipate.欢迎任何感兴趣的同学参加。(2016全国)2.关系副词指引的定语从句关系副词指引的定语从句是指when，where，why指引的定语从句。(1)Ithinkthereasonwhyyouarealways

3、angrymaybethehighpressureofstudy.我以为你老是发性情的原由可能是学习上的巨大压力。(2)Tohelpthembetterunderstandourtea-drinkingculture，wetookthemtothetearoominourschool，whereIintroducedthehistoryoftea-makinganddifferentkindsoftea.为了更好地让他们认识我们的喝茶文化，我们率领他们去了学校的茶馆，在那边我向他们介绍了制茶的历史及茶的种类。(2018北京)3.“介词which/whom”指引的定语从句(1)Itssaidth

4、atalargenumberofpaper-cutworksbyexpertsthroughoutChinawillbeonshow，someofwhicharemadebyfamousartists.听说出自全国各地的专家之手的大批剪纸作品会被展出，此中一些是有名艺术家的作品。(2017全国)(2)Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek，duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.1采集资料花了我一周的，在那期我采了老，学校生活的每个方面拍了照片。(201

5、7北京)即1我的英老是一位中年女士，她的儿子在美国。OurEnglishteacherisamiddle-agedwomanwhosesonisstudyingintheUSA.上周我和父亲母亲去参了父从前工作的。LastweekmyparentsandIpaidavisittothefarmwheremyfatheronceworked.3.再一个月就是7月尾了，届世界青少年机器人技术大(theWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetition)划在我的城市，天津。(2018天津)TherewillbeamonthbeforetheendofJuly，whentheWorl

6、dAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionisscheduledtobeheldinmycity，Tianjin.二、定从句的常句型1.Asweallknow./Asisknowntousall.尽人皆知Asweallknow，ourearthhasbeenpollutedheavilysofar.尽人皆知，当前我的地球已被重染了。2.Astheoldsayinggoes.常言道Astheoldsayinggoes，“WheninRome，doastheRomansdo.”常言道，“入随俗。”such.as.像的；这样的Heissuchakindteacheraswealll

7、ike.他是那么和的老，因此我都喜他。4.thesame.as./thesameas.像一的Hermannertowardshimwasquitethesameasithadalwaysbeen.她他的方式与从前完整一。5.oneofthe复数名定从句中的一个Hersisterisoneofthestudentswhoareadmittedintothefamousuniversity.她妹妹是考入所有名大学的学生之一。6.theonlyoneofthe复数名定从句中独一的一个Sheistheonlyoneofthestaffwhoisqualifiedforthejob.她是独一一个能任工作

8、的工。即2尽人皆知，在我学校舞弊是要遇到的。2Asweallknow/Asisknowntousall，ifwecheatinourschool，wewillbepunished.她是那么风趣的一个女孩，我们都喜爱和她在一同。Sheissuchahumorousgirlaswealllikestayingwith.李萍是我们班勤苦学习的学生之一。LiPingisoneofthestudentswhoareworkinghardinourclass.三、定语从句的写法定语从句在写作时可采纳“三步法”。第一步：写出两个简单句。(1)Thescientistwillpayavisittooursch

9、oolnextweek.(2)Thescientistisveryintelligentandmodest.第二步：在一个简单句中找出一个要被修饰的词汇，这个词汇在两个简单句中都要有。依据句意在第一个句子中找出要被修饰的词汇：thescientist。第三步：用第二个简单句充任定语从句，要注意关系词的选择。把第一个句子改为含有定语从句的复合句，thescientist作为先行词，指人，在从句中作主语，因此关系词能够是thatwho。Thescientistwho/thatisveryintelligentandmodestwillpayavisittoourschoolnextweek.即时训

10、练3用定语从句连结以下每组简单句1.Iamherevisitingmyuncle.Hehappenstobeworkinginyourcity.Iamherevisitingmyuncle，whohappenstobeworkinginyourcity.2.Ioftenhelpmydeskmate.Ithasbeenappreciatedbyourteachers.Ioftenhelpmydeskmate，whichhasbeenappreciatedbyourteachers.3.IveIveeablealwayslookedforwardtotheday.Iwillbeabletobein

11、dependentthen.alwayslookedforwardtothedaywhen/onwhichIwillbtobeindependent.四、在写作中使用定语从句时的常有错误1.关系词误用误Iwonthefirstprize，thatmademyparentsveryhappy.正Iwonthefirstprize，whichmademyparentsveryhappy.3Shewasborninavillage，wherewaslocatedatthefootofahill.正Shewasborninavillage，whichwaslocatedatthefootofahill

12、.IhaveagoodfriendIhaveagoodfriendwhoshandwritingisnice.whosehandwritingisnice.句子成分残破Look！Therearealotofoldwomenaredancingthere.正Look！Therearealotofoldwomenwhoaredancingthere.误Thosewhoinfavorofmysuggestion，pleaseraiseyourhands.正Thosewhoareinfavorofmysuggestion，pleaseraiseyourhands.有剩余的代词或副词误Thepictur

13、ehedrewitlastSundaywasreallybeautiful.ThepicturehedrewlastSundaywasreallybeautiful.误IreturnedtothevillagewhereIgrewupthereinmychildhoodlastsummer.IreturnedtothevillagewhereIgrewupinmychildhoodlastsummer.混杂定语从句与并列句SmokingisabadhabitSmokingisabadhabitSmokingisabadhabitTheboyhasmanyfriendsTheboyhasmany

14、friendsTheboyhasmanyfriends.用定语从句达成句子，itdoesgreatharmtopeopleshealth.，anditdoesgreatharmtopeopleshealth.，whichdoesgreatharmtopeopleshealth.andsomeofwhomareforeigners.andsomeofthemareforeigners.，someofwhomareforeigners.综合操练上周，我们带着本校的外国学生去体验了正宗的茶文化，结果证明这是很存心义的。(2018北京)Lastweek，wetooktheforeignstudents

15、inourschooltoexperiencetheChineseteaculture，whichturnedouttobeextremelyrewarding.这部电影主要与学校的发展相关，这将有助于我们学生更好地认识学校的历史。(2018全国)Thefilmismainlyrelatedtothedevelopmentofourschool，whichwillgreatlyhelpusstudents4knowtheschoolshistorybetter.我们学校近来刚建成了一座体育馆，它就在图书室的后边。(2018全国)Ourschoolhasbuiltanewstadiumrecen

16、tly，whichislocatedbehindthelibrary.我买了好多书，这些书花了我全部的存储。Iboughtagreatmanybooks，onwhichIspentallmymoneythatIsaved.我们班由40位同学构成，全部人都待人友善，学习勤苦。Ourclassismadeupof40students，allofwhomarefriendlyandhard-working.那座建于100年前的石桥将被拆掉。Thestonebridgewhich/thatwasbuiltonehundredyearsagoistobepulleddown.警察搜寻了嫌疑人以前住过的房

17、屋。Thepolicesearchedthewholehousewhere/inwhichthesuspectoncelived.他还没去过你在信里提到过的那个城市。Hehasntbeentothecity(which/that)youmentionedinyourletter.依据以下内容重点写一篇短文，介绍你的同学Mary，尽可能多地使用定语从句我有一个同学叫Mary，她的爸爸是我从前的语文老师。2.Mary乐于助人，对自己特别严格，可是很简单相处，我们都特别喜爱她。3.Mary学习特别努力，昨年被一所重点大学录取了，这使得她父亲母亲很快乐。寒假就要到了，到时Mary会和她的好朋友一同去北京。尽人皆知，北京有好多名胜，她们在那边会学到好多东西并且会玩得高兴。参照范文IhaveaclassmatecalledMary，whosefatherismyformerChineseteacher.Maryisagirlwhoishelpfulandstrictwithherselfbuteasytogetalong