高中英语教案必修4unit4问题拓展03 2

1、人教版 Module4 Unit 4 Body language问题拓展评判单课题： Writing 反映性写作：关注信【题目要求】假设你是李华, 你所在城市的交通拥挤问题日趋严峻,交通事故时有发生, 特殊是在上下班高峰时段；请依据以下提示,用英语给市政府写一份信,放映交通状况并提出自己的建议；提示： 1.反映交通状况；2. 提出改善建议；3. 期望和祝愿；留意： 1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；2. 词数 120 左右；3. 信的开头和结尾已经为你写好,不计入总词数；Dear Sir/Madam, Im writing to reflect the traffic situation o

2、f our city. _ Yours , Li Hua 一 构思谋篇关交通现状The traffic problem is becoming more and more serious. 注解决措施repair the roads; build overpasses; limit the number of private cars 信期望The traffic problem will be solved and the traffic accidents will be controlled. 二 关键词语众所周知 as everyone knows/as is known to all

3、 加宽和修缮大路 widen and repair the roads 修建立交桥 build overpasses 缓解交通堵塞 cut down traffic jams 实行措施 take measures 三 连词成句1. 众所周知,我市的交通问题越来越严峻,特殊是高峰时段；As everyone knows, the traffic problem in our city is becoming more and more serious, especially during the rush hours. 2 我认为到了必需实行有效措施来解决这一问题的时候了；I think its

4、 high time that the city government took some effective measures to solve the problem. 3 我们需要修建立交桥来缓解交通堵塞；We need to build overpasses so as to cut down traffic jams. 4 私家车的数量必需严格掌握；The number of private cars must be strictly controlled. 5. 我信任交通问题会得到解决,交通事故会得到掌握；Im sure the traffic problem will be s

5、olved and the traffic accidents will be controlled. 四 连句成篇 Dear Sir/Madam, Im writing to reflect the traffic situation of our city. As everyone knows, the traffic problem in tour city is becoming more and more serious, especially during the rush hours. Many cars are running on the roads every day, s

6、ome of which are in bad condition and it is difficult for the drivers to go across. some effecttive measures to solve the problem. Its high time that the city government took Firstly, many roads need to be widened and repaired. Secondly, we need to build overpasses so as to cut down traffic jams. Th

7、irdly, the number of private cars must be strictly controlled. As long as we take the above measures, Im sure the traffic problem will be solved and the traffic accidents will be controlled. AndI do hope our government will accept my suggestions. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点点评】亮点一：本文结构严谨,层次分明；本文由三部分构成,先提出问题,然后

8、提出解决方案,最终总结并表达期望和祝愿；亮点二：高级短语和句型的应用； 例如,As everyone knows. Its high time that .As long as. I do hope.等；亮点三 : 句式敏捷多变, 错落有致；作者在提建议的过程中, 交替使用主动语态和被动语态, 如we need to build overpasses 和 the number of private cars must be strictly controlled,使得行文丰富多彩；【练一练】假设你是李华,上周你买了一本英文词典,回家后发觉有缺页的质量问题,所以你去书店要求退仍；但是书店的服务态度不好,你打算给该书店的经理写封信；提示： 1. 事情的起因； 2. 与书店交涉的经过； 3. 呼吁服务行业提高服务质量；留意： 1. 词数 100 左右； 2. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数；Dear Manager, Im writing this letter to complain