After twenty years 读后续写课件-高三英语复习作文专题

1、After twenty yearsContinuation writingAfter learning, you are expected to be able to:Acquire and state the plots, characters and style of the story.Add an ending under the principle of agreements.Appreciate the true meaning of friendship.Learning objectives Jenny was the only child in her home. She

2、had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldnt help weeping when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered in the street for hours, she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat. She stood beside a stand for a while, watch

3、ing the middle-aged seller busy doing his business. However, with no money in hand, she sighed and had to leave. The seller behind the stand noticed the young girl and asked,“Hey, girl, you want to have the noodles?”“Oh,yes.but I dont have money on me,” she replied.“Thats nothing. Ill treat you toda

4、y,” said the man.“Come in.”The seller brought her a bowl of noodles, whose smell was so attractive. As she was eating, Jenny cried silently.“What is it?” asked the man kindly.“Nothing, actually I was just touched by your kindness!”said Jenny. “Even a stranger on the street will give me a bowl of noo

5、dles, while my mother drove me out of the house. She showed no care for me. She is so merciless compared to a stranger!” Hearing the words, the seller smiled, “Girl, do you really think so? I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you thanked me a lot. But it is your mother who has raised you since you

6、 were a baby. Can you number the times she cooked for you? Have you expressed your gratitude to her?” Jenny sat there, speechless and numb with shock; she remembered Mothers familiar face and weathered hands. “Why did I not think of that? A bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, but

7、I have never thanked my mum for what she has done for me.” On the way home, Jenny made up her mind to make an apology to her mother for her rudeness as soon as she arrived home.Paragraph 1Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath._Paragraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._Task

8、: a continuation(续写) of the story (150 words)Read what happened _in_ the story Write what happened _ the storyParagraph 1Nearing the doorway, Jenny took a deep breath._Paragraph 2A gentle touch on her hair called her mind back._afterLead inAfter this semester, will you choose physics or history?Will

9、 you choose the same subject with your deskmate?Three years later, you may be in different universities. Will you still be friends?If he/she fails to go to university, will you still be friends?What do you focus on when reading a story?1st Reading: reading settingsTip: A story usually has its settin

10、gs at the beginning.SettingsWhoWhereWhen2nd Reading: reading plotsWhat happened to the man and Jimmy?beginningthennow?3rd Reading: reading charactersHow was their relationship?best friendslost contactmeet?They dined together and made an apointment.The man went West while Jimmy stayed.The man was wai

11、ting for Jimmy to come.What: plotHow: feeling3rd Reading: reading charactersThe manJimmymoney chaserwent West for fortune?evidenceQuick summaryPrinciple of agreementsCore value:ThemeAgreement of plotsAgreement of language & styleAgreement of charactersPre-writingWhat questions do you want to ask?Wil

12、l Jimmy come?What will they say and do when they meet?What was the man doing in the past 20 years?What has Jimmy been doing in the past 20 years?Writing (10 min) Finish the story with the help of the mind-map.What: plotHow: feelingsWhat will the man and Jimmy do?Are they still friends?ReflectionWhat

13、 is real friendship?A true friendship is different from other kinds of friends or acquaintances because they possess certain qualities and take actions that stand them out consistently and make them real. The definition of a true friendship is someone who has your back, no matter what. They watch out for you and ensure you are not in danger.There are a thousand Hamelets in a thousand