高中英语讨论型作文 完整版课件

1、书面表达(满分30分)1.暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇关于讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。(2006年陕西卷）优点缺点待在家中花费少，舒适方便不能亲身了解外界外出旅游增长知识，开阔眼界（horizon/view）花费多，旅途不便注意：1.词数100-120 2.短文必须包括表中所列要点。 3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.convenient and com

2、fortablecost less / save money lose the chance of getting to know the outside world2. increase ones knowledge and broaden ones horizons/views1.(待在家中)花费少，舒适方便 不能亲身了解外界2.(外出旅游)增长知识，开阔眼界花费多，旅途不便 spend more money and meet some difficultiesbeginninghave different views on sth /react to sth in different w

3、ays.differ in their attitudes towards sth.conclusion my opinion(待在家中)(外出旅游)The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.someothersThe summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. People react to th

4、is problem in different ways. Some are in favor of staying at home. They think its both convenient and comfortable. Whats more,they can save money for other purposes. But They will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can incre

5、ase their knowledge and broaden their views. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. Actually I have more reasons for it. When staying at home,I can do what I like,such as reading books,watching TV,and helping

6、my parents with the housework. In a word, to stay at home is better than to travel.词汇,句型 , 语法多样化 1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全连接词如何算是一篇好文章？1.(因为)_ his help, I finished the work at last.Thanks toAs a result ofOwing to Due to 因为Because of /with2.More roads will have to be bu

7、ilt with more cars, _（所以）well have less field to grow rice. thereforeso as a result/consequence thus 结果3.The rent is reasonable, _, the location is perfect. 房租很合理，另外，位置也很好。whats moremoreover/furthermorein addition besides 另外(递进）4. The young man didnt enjoy his old job. _(相反 ) he finds the new job ve

8、ry interesting. On the contrary,However,转折But/yet/while5. _(总之), we should make good use of computer.In generalIn a word/all in all总结In short/briefGenerally speaking6._(我认为) , students had better not buy a cellphone.we should spend time and money on other more important things.As far as Im concerned

9、In my opinion/its my opinion that个人观点I think/believe递进型：besides，whats more, what was worse, moreover , even等；解释型：that is（to say），in other words，or，in the same way，等； 转折型：however，but，yet，although，otherwise, instead等； 列举型：firstlysecondlyfinally，first，at first，at last，next,举例型：for example/instance, suc

10、h as, that is, like,等； 因果型：because（of），since，as，therefore，so，as a result，thanks to，thus，owing to，seeing that等； 让步型：though，although，in spite of, despite, regardless of等； 时序型：firstnextand thenfinally，at the same time，meanwhile，firstthenafter thatfinally等； 并列型：and，or，also，as well as等； 时间型：now，just now，

11、just then，afterwards，soon，five minutes later，before long，shortly after that，to this day，soon after supper等；强调型：above all，indeed，surely，certainly，of course，after all，at least，at most，first of all，等； 归纳总结型：in conclusion，in a word，in the end，at last，finally，to sum up, in short, in general, generally sp

12、eaking, in all, in a word等； 一、适当地使用一些单词、词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采，丰富语气的表现力。1.A new building is being built in our school.2. He pretended not to see the pretty girl. hear what I said. He turned a blind eye to the pretty girl. a deaf ear to what I said. A new building is under construction in our school.Writ

13、ing beautiful sentences3. It is raining heavily.4. The PRC was founded in the year 1949. It is raining cats and dogs. The year 1949 saw the foundation of the PRC.二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词。 1.I like reading while he likes playing football. 2. When summer comes, the day is getting longer and longer, and the n

14、ight is getting shorter and shorter. I like reading while he enjoys playing football.When summer comes, the day is getting longer and longer, and the night shorter and shorter.Hardworking and careful, the girl passed the test.Its I who hit him in the face.How glad Im that you have made so much progr

15、ess.三、可适当地打破常规，用一些倒装句、强调句或感叹句,可以为文意的表达增添一点新意。1. The girl was hardworking and careful, and she passed the test.2. I hit him in the face.3. I am glad that you have made so much progress.四、使用主从复合句、分词、不定式等来代替简单句，能使书面表达行文更加流畅有力。He being humorous, we all like to play with him.In order to pass the entrance

16、 examination, we are studying hard. He lay on the grass, counting the stars in the sky.3. He was very humorous. We all like to play with him.2. We are studying hard in order to pass the entrance examination.1. He lay on the grass and counted the stars in the sky.五、改变句子开头方式，适当地把一些成份提前位于句子的开头，使整个句子读起来

17、跌宕起伏，增加书面表达的表现力。Between the two buildings stood a temple, in which an old monk lived.On the surface of the river is floating the remains of Tom.Deep in thought, he forgot his lunch.1. A temple stood between the two buildings , in which an old monk lived.2. The remains of Tom is floating on the surfa

18、ce of the river.3. As he was deep in thought, he forgot his lunch.书面表达(满分30分)当前越来越多的人们关注住房问题。有人喜欢住在传统的房子里，有人喜欢住在公寓里，请你以“Live in a traditional house or live in an apartment”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文。1.住在传统的房子里：可以在院子里种花，树，可以养宠物，可以在院子里锻炼身体。2.住在公寓里：干净，安全，离工作地方近3.我的看法及理由。注意：词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数） Live in a tr

19、aditional house or live in an apartmentNowadays, more and more people/ a growing number of people pay more attention to their lives. Live in a traditional house or live in an apartmentNowadays, more and more people/ a growing number of people pay more attention to their lives. But people differ in t

20、heir opinions on the matter. Some people prefer to live in a traditional house. There might be several reasons, I think. In the first place, you can grow flowers and tress in the yard if you live in a traditional house. Besides, you can keep pets if you like . Finally, people can take exercise in th

21、e yard. However,some people prefer to live in an apartment. On one hand, it is clean and safe. On the other hand, it is close to your work. As far as Im concerned, I prefer living in a traditional house. My reason is that I like enjoying sunlight, especially in winter. Moreover, my grandparents woul

22、dnt happy if they live in an apartment. As they argue that it is not convenient for them to have outdoor activities. So I think living in a traditional house is good and healthy lifestyle .Part 1: (beginning)have different opinions on sth. react to sth in different waysdiffer in their attitudes towa

23、rds sthPart 2: (body) some. others/ prefer to do A.rather than do B.Part3: (conclusion) in a word / in short / in my opinion /I am in favor of the idea that/for/againststructure2006高考浙江卷书面表达(满分30分) 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以 “Film or book, which do you prefer？” 为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：看电影：省时、有趣、易懂

24、读原著：细节更多、语言优美我的看法及理由注意：1. 词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数） 2. 参考词汇： original work 或 book in the original（原著） Film or book, which do you prefer？ Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. Film or book, which do you prefer？ Some of us think that it is better to

25、 see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from

26、 the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.经过调查，人们对于学生上网交友持不同意见（见下表）。