高中英语高难度短文改错15篇(含详解)

1、9999高中英语高难度短丈改错15篇（含详解丿1.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每 句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下面写岀该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写岀修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：2.只允许修改2 0处，多者（从第M处起）不计分。This morning, our school held a fire drill. We were listening to the teacher atten

2、tively in the math class while we heard the fire alarm from the speaker on the wall The teachers stopped teaching immediately and instructing us to exit the classroom in orde匚 When it got into the passageway, we found we were surrounded by heavy smoke somewhere It was choking and our tears ran down.

3、 We bent down. covered our mouths with handkerchiefs, and ran downstairs rapid into the open on the playground. just as we had taught before When we come back to our classroom, we gave a summary of this fire drill. I think the fire disasters often happen So we should know the tips to escape from a f

4、ire for case of emergency.答案及解析:1.This morning, our school held a fire drill. We were listening to the teacher attentively in themath class while we heard the fire alarm from the speaker on the wall The teachers stoppedwhenteacherteachi ng immediately an d instructing us to exit the classroom in ord

5、er. When it got into theinstructedwepassageway, we found we were surrounded by heavy smoke somewhere It was choking and oureverywheretears ran down. We bent down, covered our mouths with handkerchiefs, and ran downstairsrapid into the open on the playground, just as we had a taught beforerapidlybee

6、nWhen we come back to our classroom, we gave a summary of this fire drill. I think4e-firecamedisasters often happen So we should know the tips to escape from a fire for case of emergency.inAt first I was not quite willing to sit down and TOC o 1-5 h z Watched the 90-minute football. Usually I just1

7、checked results because I thought that was dull2.To watch a game in which players kicked a ball each3.other. Therefore, my father loves football During the4.World Cup in 2002, my dad stays up late just to watch5.his favorite sport Seeing his strong interest in this6.game of 22 men run after a ball.

8、I decided to sit down7.to watch the game I found the game excited, and my8.dad explained for the rules We shared our joy. Football9.is not too badly as long as I watch it with my dad!10.2.答案及解析:2.1. watched-*watch2. that T3. each 前加 to4. Therefore-* However5. stays -*staged6. 77. run-running8. excit

9、ed-exciting61.61.62.69.10. badly-*badHe wanted very much 60.to learn to play the piano. So his mother found the teacher for him. At first Jimmy was very happy with the teacher because he was too strict with him. He decided to leave him, but his mother explained to him that if the teacher made the le

10、ssons too easily and allow him to do as he wished, he would never learn nothing. After thinking about this a few minutes, Jimmy thought of that his mother was quite right. Then the teacher taught him in two years.3.答案及解析:3 解析：60去years或years后加old表示某人多大岁数，可以直接用数字，也可以用数字加years old。61 第二个山已-a第一次提到一个可数需词

11、，要用不定冠词a或an。62.was后加not或happy unhappy 根据句意可知Jimmy是不髙兴。63Vexplained后加it explain sth. to sb.的含义是”向某人解释某事easily easy made接形容词作宾语补足语。allow allowed and连接并列成分，前而用过去式，后而也用动词过去式。67.nothing anythmg nothing 不与 never 连用。6&去掉of think of不接句子，接句子时应去掉o仁69.ui -for in加一段时间，用于将来时态，而for加一段时间用于过去时态。86.94.86.94.95.答案及解析

12、:4.86去掉9。attend to意为“照顾.关心二attend意为“参加,是及物动词，后面直接加宾语。87On改为At。at the meeting总为“在会上是介词的习惯用法。8& advancing 改为 advanced advanced 意为先进的二89. that改为whOo先行词是those, anyone, anybody等词时，关系代词应该用who。第一个was改为wers其主语是those,动词应用复数形式。正确。92.or改为and。表示并列关系应用连词and。both改为all。both指“两者“,all指“三者（或三者以上）”。ourselves 后加 to。dev

13、ote oneself to 意为献身于二with改为in 用什么声音应用介词in,如in a low/Ioud voiceo79.80.79.80.Most of the students think that music should be played. As we know.music can produce a lively and happy atmosphere However, after hard study , music can bring us relaxation , which reduce the tiredness .This can help us make

14、full preparations for the next class .Listen to music also makes us feel happy Oil the other hand, some students dont think it .In tlieir opinion , They81.cant get the expectmg effect from playing music , for die class break time82.83.is too short.What is needed most during the class break is peace

15、instead noise produced by music 83.8.98.999In my opinion, it is good to play some soft and peaceful music during the84.class break .In this way students can enjoy music as good as have a good rest.85.5.答案及解析:5.76. if改为whethero介词后而表示“是否时要用whethert不用if。students前加圧冠词the。Most of后接表示限上的词。However改为Besides

16、o根据句子之间的关系，应该表示递进关系，用besides。reduce改为reduces which引导的定语从句，指代前而的句子，谓语动词用单数。SO.Listen改为Listening。此处要用动拿词作主语,表示一般性、经常性的动作。81.it改为so本题考査固定结构I dont think so。82.expecting 改为 expected, expected 预期的。83.instead后加of。 Instead of为介词短语，意思为“而不是,代替“，后接名词、代词或动斜词。84 正确85.good改为well as well as为连词词组,连接两个平行结构，意思为“和；又：还

17、二 TOC o 1-5 h z One day we were having English class when Mr. Black saw81 a boy readmg a picture book and said. Tom、how do you82.usually do after lunch? Tom nervously got up his seat.83.He did not know what to answer. He thought for some84.tmie and then said. Waiting for supper. The teacher was85.un

18、happy, and at that moment he saw a boy was sleep He was86.angry but he tried not to show for it. Then he asked. And87.you. Joke? Joke waken up and did not hear the question. He asked8&his deskmate, who dared not tell him Then he stood up but89.replied in a loudly voice. So do I, sir Everybody laughe

19、d.90.6.答案及解析:6.81. having 后加上 an 82. how 改为 what 83. up 后加 from 84.正确85. Waiting 改为 Wait 86. sleep 改为 sleeping/asleep 87.去掉 for88. waken 改为 woke /waked 89. but 改为 and 90.1oudly 改为 loud56.57.59.Tlie Great Wall of Cliina is being called the56.57.59.Ten-Thousand-Li Great Wall in Clunese. It has tlie hi

20、story of over twenty centuries Parts of it were built through different dynasties.1( was during the Qin Dynasty when the parts were60.61.62.63.64.65.joined up into one long wall. Its very difficult build such a long wall in the ancient days without some modern machines.60.61.62.63.64.65.All the work

21、 were done by hand. Thousands of men died of cold and hungry when they were forced to work on the wall. Today the Great Wall has become a place of interesting to the Chinese and to the people in all over the world- 7.答案及解析：7.56.去being is being called是现在进行时态的被动语态。此处应该用一般现在时。is called表示“被称 57the改为a。ha

22、ve a history of为固定用法。58.when改为that。此处是强调句型。在build前面加too Itis+adj. +to do sth.结构中，it为形式主语。动词不定式是真正的主语。61some改为any。without表示否左意义。were改为was。work为不可数鋼词，谓语动词用单数形式。hungry 改为 hungera die Of cold and hunger：死于寒冷和饥饿.。interesting 改为 interestc 习惯用法a place Of interest：名胜。风景65in改为from。表示来自世界各地二 应用介词from。8.假左英语课上

23、老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在其下而写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第处起）不计分。Im glad to hear of you. As for living at home and living in your school dormitory, I think youd better to choose th

24、e latter. First of all, living in a dormitory will develop your ability of living independently and solve problems by yourself. Sec on dly, if you live there, you will find easier to share feelings with your friends; in all, you are of the same age and have common feelings towards many thing Most im

25、portant, living with your friends will improve your team spirit, that will be beneficial to your future career.I hope you can consider my advice seriously and then make you final decision答案及解析:fm glad to hear of you. As for living at home and living in your school dormitory, Iorfromorthink youd bett

26、er to choose the latter. First of all, living in a dormitory will develop your ability去掉of living independently and solve problems by yourself. Secondly, if you live there, you willsolvingfind A easier to share feelings with your friends; n all, you are of the same age andItafterhave common feelings

27、 towards many thing. Most important, living with your friends willthings importantlyimprove your team spirit, that will be beneficial to your future career.whichI hope you can consider my advice seriously and then make you final decision.yourl.offrom考查动词短语。Hear from收到某人的来信；hear of听说。andor考查连词。句意：至于住

28、在家里还是宿舍，我认为你最好选择后者。to choose 去掉 to考査动词短语。had better do最好做某事。solving考查动词的形式；句意：首先住校有助于发展独立生活和自己解决问题：and连接living与solving是并列 的。find 后加 it考査固左句型：find it adj. to do sth.其中it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不圧式。6.in all -after all考査固定短语 In all总共：after all最重要的是。7 .thing一things考査名词的单复数；many things许多事情。8.importantimportantly考

29、査副词。Most importantly更重要的是that一which考查左语从句：非限制性左语从句which代指这件事。youyour考查代词。句意：我希望你能考虑我的意见做出你的决左。99999.假左英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错 误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/),并在其下而写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及英修改均仅限一词：2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第处起)不计分。When I l

30、ook at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast 廿me flies I had grown not only physically.and also mentally in the past few years About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club Around me in picture are the thin

31、gs they were very important in my life at that timezcar magazines and musical instrumentsenjoyed studying difference kings of cars and plan es,playing pop musics nd collecting the late music albums.This picture ofte n brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days答案及解析:9.When I look

32、at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies I had grown not only去掉havephysically.and also men tally in the past few years Ab out one month after this photo was took,buttakenI entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school musicbecameclub Around me in A pi

33、cture are the things they were very important in my life at that time,this/thethat/whichcar magazines and musical instrumentsenjo yed studying differs nee kings of carsdifferentand planes,playing pop music,and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings backlatestto me many happy memo

34、ries of your high school daysmy短文改错(共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分)假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号A,并在此符号下而写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。修改：在错词下而划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分When I was an elementary school student aging ten, I took part in

35、 a singing competition in our city. This was my first time to be in a singing competi廿on. In the day of the competition, I was asked to enter into a studio room, which there was only one person and a piano. The man asks me to sing in front of the microphone, following his piano playing My mother was

36、 waiting for me outside the studio. I thought that I sang better at the time So when I finished and walked out the studio, my mother asked, What happened to your voice? Why couldnt we hear you? Then, I realized that I forget to switch on the microphone答案及解析:10.1. aging aged 2.This f That/It 3ln f On

37、entered into 去掉 into 5.asks f asked 6. which where7. better-* well 8. So But 9. out 后加 of 10. forget f forgot11.假左英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在此符号下而写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第处起）不

38、计分。Dear members,It is a great honor to speak here for our English club,which was formed two month agom also gladly that our club has held series of activities including offering services to the visitors to the Expo.As the Expo received a great many of visitors,it required helpers with a good command

39、 of English.On hearing the call.all members devote all their time to serve others.Not only did many improve his basic skills but improved communication between Chinese but western peopleI believe future activities will be organizing to make our club more attract.答案及解析：Df members.Itis a great hoacr t

40、ohw for our Euglisb club,which was toned two mnih ago rm also gladlynKrnihsgisdthat our club has held A series of activities including offering servios to ibe visitois to tbeEipo. As the Ex) arwFri a r3t many 屛听 sitxsji 氏帧检 igood mmsandQf EaglhLOn bmiz埸oli.aUS*afmembers devae all eirtime to serve ot

41、hers.Notonly didmany inprove Ws basic drills but improveddevotedservingtbeircommunicatioD between Chioese bit westeni people.udLI believe fiituce activities will bt mwiziitt to make cur 曲b mwe attract organizaL/orjanisodanractive第一处：考査餌词复数，two month ago两个月前为复数，故将month改为months。第二处:考査形容词的应用,Pm also gl

42、adly that此处是指我很高兴,故将gladly改为glad。第三处：考查短语的应用，a series of为一系列，故在series前加a0第四处：考查短语的应用，a great many为许多，故去掉of。第五处：考查时态的应用全文主要应用一般过去时 On hearing the call.all members devote all their time 故将 devote 改为 devoted o第六处：考査短语的应用，devote to后加动词ing,故将serve改为serving。第七处：考查前后文联系，故将many improve his basic skills中的man

43、y可知后文应该用复数，故将his改 为 their。第八处：考査固定短语,between and为在.之间，故将but改为and。第九处：考查被动，故将will be organizing to可知此处应该使用被动语态，故将organizing改为 organized/orga niseck第十处：考查形容词比较级，根据make our club more attract中的more可知此处为形容词的比较级，故将 attract 改为 attractive【名师点睛】动词常见的改错形式：时态和语态，常岀现在总体时态为过去或现在时，中间杂有不适的另一时态的现 象：或是及物动词后无宾语，或是不及物

44、动词后加了宾语；需要接ing形式的接了 to,或相反等。对于这 一类错误可根据上下文语境或者句子的平行结构确定动词时态。例如：第五处devote改为devoted,整篇文章都是一般过去时，故将此处改成一般过去时。12.假是英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文匚文中共有10处语言 错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：把缺词处加一个漏符号（A）,并在英下而写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不

45、计分。From my point of vievy, human beings should nt develop an emoti onal relationship with robots As we know, robots have no thoughts like human beings and artificial intelligence. They cant carry out spiritual communicate. Whats more, develop emotional relationships with robots is something ridiculo

46、us like falling in love with his cars, computers or other mamade productsI am afraid that some moral and social problems will sure appear, if human beings develop emotional relati on ships with robots. For one thing, it will bring destruction to nature breeding rules, for robots cannot give birth to

47、 child For another thing, though human beings who fall in love with robots focus more on robots than themselves, some mental crisis will take the place. And this will certainly destroy our harmonious society.In the word, human beings should not develop an emotional rela廿onship with robots答案及解析:12.Fr

48、om my point of viev; human beings should nt develop an emoti onal relationship with robots As we know robots have no thoughts like human beings and artificial intelligenee. They cant carry out spiritual communicate. Whats more, develop emotional relationships with robots is something ridiculous like

49、 falling in love with his cars, computers or other manmade productsI am afraid that some moral and social problems will sure appear; if human beings develop emotional relati on ships with robots For one thin g, it will bring destructio n to n ature breeding rules, for robots cannot give birth to chi

50、ld For another thing, though human beings who fall in love with robots focus more on robots than themselves, some mental crisis will take the place. And this will certainly destroy our harm on ious society.In the word, human beings should not develop an emotional relationship with robots1.第一段第二句：and

51、改为but2 第一段第三句：communicate 改为 communication第一段第四句:develop 改为 developing：his 改为 our 5.第二段第一句:sure改为surely6第二段第二句：nature 改为 natural；在child前加a或把child改为children第二段第三句：though改为if或when；9去掉 take the place 中间的 the10第三段:the改为a13.短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分）假左英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错 误，每句中最多有两处。每

52、处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A）,并在苴下而写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下而划一横线，并在该词下而写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：2.只允许修改20处，多者（从第H处起）不计分。Frank joined in the army after middle school. He did quite well in everything besides shooting, One day the new soldiers were practiced shooting, and all of them w

53、ere doing quite well except Frank. After he had shot at the target nine times and had not hit oncez the officer shouted at him, Youre quite hopeful. Dont waste your last bullet! Go behind that wall and shoot yourself with it ! Frank went behind the wall, and a few seconds late the sou nd of a shot w

54、as heard by the officer and the other soldier. Heavens! the officer said Has that silly man real done so? He ran behind the wall anxiously, and Frank was all right.Im sorryFrank said, but I miss again. 答案及解析:13.Frank joined4-the army after middle school. He did quite well in everything besidesexcept

55、shooting, One day the new soldiers were practiced shooting, and all of them were doingpracticingquite well except Frank After he had shot at the target nine times and had not hitAonce,itthe officer shouted at him, Youre quite hopeful. Dont waste your last bullet! Go behindhopelessthat wall and shoot yourself with it ! Frank went behind the wall, and a few seconds latelaterthe sou nd of a shot was heard by the officer and the other soldier/Heave ns! the officersoldierssaid Has that silly man real done so? He ran behind the wall anxiously, and Frank was allreallybut