2021届高考英语一轮复习考点47短文改错二考点归纳

1、2021届高考英语一轮复习考点47短文改错二考点归纳2021届高考英语一轮复习考点47短文改错二考点归纳2021届高考英语一轮复习考点47短文改错二考点归纳考点47 短文改错（二）专题四 备考策略 一、把握三四五,共十二个考点三个必考点：1. 名词的单复数；2. 介词的误用、多用或少用；3。 动词时态不一致。四个常考点：1。 连词的误用、多用或少用；2。 冠词的误用、多用或少用;3。 词语辨析;4。 词性误用。五个考点：1. 代词；2. 非谓语动词；3。 情态动词;4。 主谓一致;5. 形容词的比较级和最高级。二、考法1。 8个改词1个添词1个删词,记住比例是:8:1：1；2。 每句有0-2个

2、错误；3。 需要变形的词语通常是名词、动词、形容词、副词等；4。 少词一般是添加冠词、介词、连词、不定式的to，以及物主代词；5。 多词一般是删掉冠词、介词、助动词等。【核心思路】根据考点找错误,又快又准高速度.三、三个方面1。 词法：介词、冠词、连词的多用,少用或误用，词性误用，非谓语动词，各类词缀,如否定前缀，名词、形容词、副词后缀；2。 句法：主谓一致，时态一致，名词的单复数一致，代词的格和数一致;3。 行文逻辑:并列句中两个简单句的关系，因果、转折、选择、并列关系等。短文改错解题口诀口诀一：短文改错有妙计,完整一致看仔细。词法侧重冠名动，形副互换要留意。分词出现多琢磨，主动被动加语气。

3、全文一处多一词,一处少词关介词.时态人称要统一，连词用法重逻辑。短文改错要做好, 常见类型应记牢。口诀二:名词爱考数与格，冠词在前错、多、少； 动词时态和语态，非谓语搭配莫错了；连代形副错一样，多是故意来混淆;介词多半考搭配,多漏误用想周到；句法涉及到一致,从句多考关系词。词法句法均未错,逻辑推理去寻找.811 排列是规律，回读复查敲定稿。注 1. 一致包括主谓一致,数、性、格等的一致。2. 811常指：8处错误，1处多词，1处少词。 四、解题步骤1 浏览全文,掌握大意2 分句阅读,逐行找错3 由易到难, 各个击破 4 检查核对，注意方法具体解题步骤：做短文改错通常遵循以下几个步骤：通读文章，

4、了解大意；逐句分析，行中找错；再读短文，检查漏洞。即按照文章句子行文章的顺序.第一步：通读全文，了解大意。短文改错是考查考生在理解的基础上对语篇整体的识错、纠错能力，必须从全篇考虑，而不能只顾一句或一行。要理解文章的谋篇布局，弄清楚整篇文章的意思.在阅读过程中，要注意行文逻辑、文章的时态以及人称等。第二步：逐句分析，行中找错。尽管短文改错是以行设置错误的,但语言毕竟是以句子为完整意义单位的。所以，可以逐句分析，看看单句是否有错；如果有错,有几处错误，是什么错误，再看看错误在哪一行。把短文改错转化为单句改错，然后再在行中找错，这样就会降低难度。第三步：再读短文,检查漏洞.做完以后，再把文章阅读一

5、遍，检查是否有遗漏情况，尤其注意上下句之间的逻辑关系。多读一遍，就有可能把某些不清楚的地方理顺.名校模拟题汇编Text 1（2020湖北蔡甸汉阳一中高三三模)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线（)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1。每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2。只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。My friend Fang, an exchange

6、student in UK, is one of the most amazing people I have ever met。 He just never seemed to suffer from any kind of stress, even when he faces unexpecting difficulties. To everyones surprise， he has never failed an exam。 Fang believes that exams are just exams but that its necessary to worry about the

7、m all the time. He is an optimistic person by nature and I real admire his way of thinking。 Which makes me ashamed of is that I am always nervous facing the exams. For examples， I cant concentrate on my studies; I am too afraid of the results before the exams。 Its time for me to learn from her now.T

8、ext 2（2020六盘山高级中学高三二模）On January 5th, students in our school visited Robot World, which we saw a great diversity of robot。 It was amazed to find those robots could do a great number of things just like real people, including playing chess， playing piano and drawing pictures. Whats more, the robots w

9、ere in different kinds and shapes, which made us enjoyable. In addition， that excited me most was the show given by a group of robots。 They danced just as if they are dancers on the stage. By visiting Robot World, I have learned a lot of about robots， especial about their functions and shapes。 The g

10、reat human wisdom is S0 powerful that it make us feel more comfortable live in the world.Text 3(2020西藏乃东山南二中高三三模）A proverb says, “Time is money。” But on my opinion, time is even more valuable than money。 Why? Because when money is spent， we can earn them back。 However, when time is gone， it will nev

11、er return。 This is the reason that we must value time. The time for our study and work is quite limit. But there are a number of people who do not know the important of time。 They kill time by chatting or drinking. They didnt realize that wasting time is simple wasting their valuable lives. In word，

12、 we should develop the good habit of saving time。 Dont leave what can be do today till tomorrow。 Laziness will not only bring to us failure but also make us lead a poor life.Text 4 (2020安徽马鞍山高三一模）Sun Yang, a famous Chinese swimmer, is known to the world。 Born in 1991， he is 1。98 meters in high and 8

13、9 kilos in weight. As swimmer， he always trains hardly。 Thats why he could win two gold prize in the 2012 London Olympics, which were a great honor for our country。 Although he once makes mistakes in the view of the public, but in the 2013 World Swimming Championships he made amazed achievements. Su

14、n Yang is very brilliant that he has many fans。 We should be pleased to take her as our role model。Text 5（2020宜宾市叙州区第一中学校高三开学考试）Sometimes 1 feel that living in a city makes people lonely than before。 People always feel strangers cannot trusted. They think this is not normal to start talking to anyon

15、e or even smile at anyone。 I desire to change that。 Last week， while I was skate， a man ran by, smiling at me。 He said something to me about doing sports or he hoped to be able to finishing his run。 I smiled back and said that he certain would. And then a family cycles by when I was in the park。 One

16、 of the girl waved at me with a big smile， and I waved back enthusiastically. I do believe such small gestures can change into the world we live in.Text 6（2020云南民族大学附属中学高三二模）Senior Three student will face the question after they pass by the college entrance examination。 “Should I choose a good major

17、 and a good university?” Some students prefer to consider majors first so that they can learn which they are interested in。 It will also make it possible for them take their favorite jobs in the future. However， those who think differently believes that the environment is important to ones developme

18、nt。 They also believe that students graduated from leading universities are often more likely to find good jobs。 In my opinion， a best choice is to choose a good major at a good university。 But if they cant obtain both, the first thing to consider was a good major. Because no matter where they study

19、， we can still achieve a lot in a certain field if they try their best。Text 7(2020河北石家庄高三月考）Dear Jim,How is everything going？ Known that you are curious about Peking Opera, Im more than glad to introduce it to you。Dating back to late 18th century， Peking Opera becomes fully developed and recognized

20、during the Qing Dynasty。 As a combination of music, vocal performance or dance, Peking Opera can offer audience with a feast for the eyes and ears。 Performer wear colorful costumes and makeups, that are in line with the personalities of the roles that they play。I high recommend you visit the Mei Lan

21、fang Theater to see a Peking Opera show. Hopefully， my introduction has helped you well understand Peking Opera than before. If you have any question， dont hesitate to ask myself。Text 8（2020湖南高三二模）What people need is love and support， especially some special group of people. Here is my loving ideas

22、for students with difficulty in learning。I think the main problem with most of whom is that they lack of motivation。 So we may help them to get motivated by setting goal for them or then work together towards it。 Meanwhile, we can give them as more help as possible， sharing good study methods with t

23、hem or solve problems for them。 Whats more, we should always encourage them to believe in ourselves. Confidence， what we all know，is absolutely vital to learning。Text 9(2020湖南高三二模）Dear editor,My friend Li Ming, he studies in a high school, living in a dormitory。 He talks with me about one student li

24、ving with him who never think about how other people feel. For example, the student often throws his dirty socks on the table， which it often fall onto the lunch box of mine friend. Whats more, he sometime drinks the water from other peoples teacups without ask for permission. Worse still, he even u

25、ses other peoples toothbrush。 Just imagine sharing a room with such person！ How can my friend do？ He has asked me for help and now Im asking for yours。Yours sincerely,Wang PingText 10（2020重庆北碚高三一模）Yesterday， Tom and I were walking down the street when we saw the old man fall off his bike. I suggeste

26、d we carried the old man to hospital， and Tom did not agree。 He had learned first aid， so I said that the old man mustnt be moving。 We should leave him what he was and check him first。 Seeing that the old man wasnt breathing， Tom asks me to call the Firstaid Center and he used the mouth-to-mouth way

27、 make the old man breathe。 Soon the old man began to move on a little and the doctors also arrived. They said what we had done were right。Text 11(2020安徽淮北高三一模）My senior high school life is almost over。 Although exciting about entering college, I cant help miss those good old days so much that I feel

28、 sad. Im unwilling to say goodbye to everyone and everything I am familiar。 However, I come to realize nature never. stood still。 Different seasons come and go。 Plants and animals die mid new one come to life. We, like everything in nature， has to adapt to the changes. Before knowing it， I am a kind

29、 of calm. Now Id like to recall the most wonderful things which have happened, and accept happy whatever is to happen.Text 12（2020福建三明一中高二期中)Dear Ben，As graduation is draw near，Id like to express my sincere gratitude to you for your kind。In the last three years，you had shared my joys and sorrows，mak

30、ing my school life unforgettable.I remember very much that you sent me to hospital when I had my left leg break.During the days when I had to stay in the bed,you comforted me and helped me my lessons。It is your friendship which fills my life with sunshine。I hope my friendship will last forever and I

31、 also hope all your dreams will come truly in the future.Best wishes！Yours，Li HuaText 13（2020河南罗山高三一模）Born in America, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and an inventor. He was once thought to be a boy whom was not worth educating。 In fact, he was a man full of imagine.I admire Edison a lot becaus

32、e his great contributions to the world. He is said to having more than 1,000 inventions。 In his lifetime, he was always eager to know what everything worked. He was also very diligent and works day and night。 And this explained why he had so much great inventions。Success can never be easy achieved。

33、Probably I cant be another Edison himself， but I will work hard to be a worthy person。Text 14（2020石嘴山市第三中学高三三模）Ive been in Shanghai for weeks and it has all gone by so quick. Now Im there reflecting on how this experience has helped I better understand Chinese culture。 Shanghai has population of ove

34、r 23 million people, who is more than the population of the top 8 most populated cities in the U。S。 combined。 All throughout my stay in China， Ive seen Chinese people wore shirts with English words on them, and heard American music coming from speaker. Ive felt comfortable in China， and although the

35、re were differences， its not hard to adjust. Chinese culture is different， so Western culture is too, and in this way, theyre so similar to.Text 15（2020四川成都龙泉中学高三开学考试）I like Li Ziqi， which has inspired many people all over the world。 Over the years， she had transformed from a village girl into food

36、and lifestyle expert. She has become worldwide famous by making videos introduced the beauty of traditional Chinese culture。 Therefore, Lis success did not come easy。 Her fathers death left her living with her grandparents in a poor village after she went to work in the city on the age of 14. In 201

37、2， Li returned to home and opened an online shop to sell locally products。 In 2016, she began to display Chinese culture by filming how his products were created。Text 16(2020四川成都经开区实验中学高三开学考试)I like travelling and my dream of visiting Beijing, the capital city of our country, come true during the Na

38、tional Day holidays this year. My mother booked an one-day tour for me. On the morning of October 1st I went to Tiananmen Square with one of my classmates ， there we watched the flag-raising ceremony. As I watched the flag rising slowly， I sang the national anthem， feeling extreme proud. Several hou

39、rs later， a grand military parade was held mark the Peoples Republic of Chinas 70th founding anniversary. In the afternoon we decided to go to other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. When we reached the destination， it was crowded with tourists。 I was glad for which those volunteers ha

40、d done for little kids and elderly people 。 Standing on the Great wall, we couldnt help admire the splendid scenery. This travelling, with doubt, meant a lot of to me。Text 17(2020甘肃高三二模）Dear Mike，How is it going? I am flying to your country to attend the Culture Trip to America in next week。 I feel

41、exciting because my dream of visiting America will come true。 Through the trip, I hope to open my eyes and learning more about the customs and history of your country。 Besides， it is the good chance to practise my English.Therefore， one thing Im concerned about is because I may have difficulty commu

42、nicating with local people。 After all， there have many cultural differences between China or America， Id appreciate if you could give me some proper advises.Im looking forward to your early reply。Yours,Li HuaText 18（2020湖北高三二模）As a child I always wanted to become a doctor。 Ikept my dreams throughout

43、 primary school and middle school。 When I admitted to a medical college, I was very exciting. After years of study I graduated and entered a childrens hospital。 I worked hard and soon became a experienced doctor。 I did not get married with until I was over thirty. I worked during the day and after w

44、ork enjoyed life with my family. In the age of 60 I retire， but I often helped young doctors when they needed me。 You dont worry too much about my health problem. I believe that I dont care about them， they wont hurt me。 So I am still health and happy today.Text 19（2020陕西安康高三三模）This weekend, our sch

45、ool is scheduled to plant tree on the West Hill, that is about 10 miles west of our town. Im written to invite you to take part this meaningful activity， we will gather at the school gate at seven and then take the bus there. We neednt to carry food or water, for our school would prepare them for us

46、。 All we need to do is wearing sports shoes and loose trousers. Please bring a towel as we are certain going to sweat. Please dont be later and we will set off on time.Text 20（2020北大成都附属实验学校高三开学考试）About how to keep healthy, Id like to offer my advices. As we know, we teenagers are going through a ra

47、pid growth which needs to be support by a healthy and balanced diet. Thus, we need a variety of food but cut out the food rich in sugar or fat. However， we should take physical exercise regular. For example, we can play basketball or take walk after school. Have enough sleep is of great importance。

48、Therefore， you should have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not stayed up too late. Only in this way that can we keep fit。Text 21（2020贵州铜仁高三二模）Thanks to Chinas anti-poverty policy, great changes have been taken place in my hometown in the past decade, especial in the living conditions。 Ta

49、ke my grandparents home in the countryside as a example。 They used to live in a small house with little furniture, and now they have moved into a two-storied building with modern electric equipments。 In the past， we had to ask someone to write to my parents to keep contact. But they each has a mobil

50、e phone now， that makes the communication more convenient. They even have learned to use WeChat talk to us. And they mostly drive out instead of walk or ride bicycles at times。Text 1(2020湖北蔡甸汉阳一中高三三模）【答案】1. seemedseems 2。 unexpectingunexpected 3. butand 4。 necessaryunnecessary 5。 realreally 6。 facin

51、g前面加when 7. examplesexample 8. tooso 9. beforeafter 10. herhim【解析】【分析】本文是记叙文，描述了作者的一个来自英国交换生朋友对考试从不紧张，让作者很佩服.【小题1】考查时态。此处是描述现在的常态，时态是一般现在时，主语是第三人称单数he,故将seemed改成seems。【小题2】考查形容词。unexpected表示“难以预料的”，是固定词汇，故将unexpecting改为unexpected。【小题3】考查连词.句意：方认为考试仅仅就是考试，没有必要一直担心。前后句是顺承关系，所以这里用and连接。故将but改为and。【小题4】

52、考查形容词。句意：方认为考试仅仅就是考试，没有必要一直担心。根据句意，此处是没有必要担心,应该用反义词，故将necessary改为unnecessary。【小题5】考查副词。此处修饰动词admire，需要用副词形式，故将real改为really。【小题6】考查连词。句意：让我感到非常羞愧的是我在面临考试的时候总是很紧张。此处I am always nervous和facing the exams之间缺少连词连接，表示当。.。时候，故在facing前面加when。【小题7】考查固定搭配。for example表示例如，是固定搭配.故将examples改为example。【小题8】考查副词。too

53、表示太。.的时候需要和to搭配,此处改为so.故将too改为so。【小题9】考查介词。句意:我在考试之后会特别害怕考试结果。根据句意，是考试之后害怕结果，故将before改为after。【小题10】考查代词。根据前文的he,可知这里是男性，故将her改为him。Text 2(2020六盘山高级中学高三二模）【答案】1which where;2robotrobots；3amazedamazing； 4piano前加the；5thatwhat; 6arewere;7of去掉；8especialespecially;9makemakes； 10live前加to;【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。文章主要介绍

54、了我们学校去参观机器人世界的所见所闻。【详解】第一处：考查定语从句。先行词为Robot world, 从句缺地点状语，所以用关系副词where。故将which 改为where.第二处：考查名词单复数.a diversity of 表示各种各样的，所以要用复数，robot要用robots。故将robot改为robots。第三处：考查形容词。看到机器人能像人一样做很多事情，令人惊讶，要用amazing，amazed 表示人感到吃惊.故将amazed改为amazing。第四处：考查冠词.弹钢琴要用play the piano。故将piano前加the.第五处：考查名词性从句。此处为主语从句,主语从句

55、中作主语,要用what，that 在主语从句中不做成分。故将that改为what.第六处：考查时态.此句话中的主句用了一般过去时danced,所以后句也要用过去式，they 后要用were,此处也可理解为虚拟语气,表与现在情况相反，用过去式。故将are改为were.第七处:考查介词。of 为介词，介词后要有宾语，而此句中of 后无宾语,因此多余,a lot 做副词，在句中修饰动词learn。故将of去掉。第八处:考查副词.此处表示尤其是他们的功能和形状，是突出强调作用,作状语，所以用especially.故将especial改为especially.第九处：考查主谓一致。根据主句时态可知用一般

56、现在时，再跟据主语为it，谓语用第三人称单数makes。故将make改为makes。第十处：考查不定词，此处放在形容词后，用不定式，表原因，固定句式。故将live前加to。Text 3（2020西藏乃东山南二中高三三模）【答案】1。 on in2. them it3. that why4. limit limited5。 important importance6。 didnt dont7。 simple simply8。 word前加a9. do done10。 bring后的to去掉【解析】这是一篇议论文。作者认为时间比金钱更宝贵并讲述了原因。【详解】1。 考查介词。固定短语in my o

57、pinion“在我看来。故将on改为in。2. 考查代词。句意：因为钱花了,还能挣回来。根据Because when money is spent可知此处是用代词指代money，而money是不可数名词，因此用代词it。故将them改为it。3. 考查同位语从句的引导词。句意：这就是我们必须珍惜时间的原因。分析句子可知，此处是由why引导的同位语从句，做the reason的同位语.This is the reason why“这就是的原因”.故将that改为why。4. 考查形容词.根据副词quite可知此处要用形容词，limited“有限的.故将limit改为limited。5. 考查名词

58、。根据冠词the和介词of可知此处要用名词.故将important改为importance。6。 考查时态。根据上文时态是一般现在时，此处也用一般现在时，且主语是They可知此处要用助动词dont表示否定.故将didnt改为dont。7。 考查副词。句意：他们没有意识到浪费时间就是浪费他们宝贵的生命。根据谓语动词is wasting可知此处要用副词修饰动词,simply“简直，仅仅”.故将simple改为simply。8。 考查冠词.固定短语in a word“总之”。故将word前加a。9. 考查过去分词。根据can be可知此处要用过去分词，构成被动语态。故将do改为done。10. 考查

59、介词。根据bring是及物动词，可直接加宾语，因此介词to多余.故将bring后的to去掉。Text 4 （2020安徽马鞍山高三一模)【答案】1. highheight；2.在As和swimmer之间加a；3。hardlyhard；4.prizeprizes；5。werewas;6.makesmade；7.去掉in前面的but；8。amazedamazing；9.veryso；10.herhim.【解析】这是一篇人物传记。文章介绍中国著名游泳运动员孙杨。【详解】1。考查名词。句意：他出生于1991年，身高1。98米，体重89公斤。根据下文and 89 kilos in weight可知，此处

60、使用in height“高度,在高度上”。故high改为height。2.考查不定冠词。句意：作为一名游泳运动员，他总是努力训练。此处泛指“一名游泳运动员”，应用不定冠词，swimmer是以辅音音素开头的词，应使用a。故在As和swimmer之间加a。3.考查副词.句意：作为一名游泳运动员，他总是努力训练。根据句意可知,此处指“他总是努力训练”, hard“努力地”，hardly “几乎不”不符合句意。故hardly改为hard。4。考查名词复数。句意:这就是为什么他能在2012年伦敦奥运会上赢得两枚金牌，这是我们国家的巨大荣誉。根据two可知，后面的名词是复数形式。故prize改为prize