中考英语复习书面表达写作技巧课件

1、书面表达 英语中考备考复习一档1315 分包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇、准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连惯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力（从句，短语等）。二档1012分基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。三档79 分内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解四档46 分只包含了少数要点，语言表达不规范句子无条理，行文不连惯，语言错误严重，影响理解。五档03 分只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息词语，语言错误多Part1 中考书面表达评分标准1. 不一致（主谓 数 时态 代词）2. 修

2、饰语错位3. 句子不完整4. 句子的短语与后面句子逻辑关系混乱不清5. 词性误用6. 指代不清7. 间断句子 8. 措辞问题9. 累赘10.不连贯11. 综合性语言错误（时态 语态 标点 大小写等） Part2 常见写作错误抄改连扩抓审书面表达 Part3 写作基本步骤：六步法010203040506审题抓要点扩展句子查错改错连句成文誊写Steps:技巧一：中心明确，围绕发展 My Father误：My father has various hobbies . He likes doing sports, surfing, listening to music and so on. I lik

3、e music ,too. I think music is very important. It is文章中心：fathermusicPart4 书面表达写作技巧技巧二： 巧用衔接词选择 or, and, bothand 原因 so, because时间 at first, then, later, in the end, at last转折 on the other hand(另一方面), but , however总结 in a word（总之）, in all（总之） 递进 not onlybut (also),举例 and so on，for example技巧三：句式多样化长短句连

4、用简单句/复合句交叉倒装句感叹句原句：It was a wonderful day.What a wonderful day it was!原句：I have never seen such a lovely dog.Never have I seen such a lovely dog.原句: We heard beautiful songs everywhere. Beautiful songs were heard here and there.技巧四：优美句子和词语运用likegoodmanyandbutbe fond ofwonderful, excellent, amazing,a

5、 large number ofas well ashoweverIt is importantChanges have taken place sinceIt is good/helpful/harmful toIts said thatWhat a/How+形容词！技巧五：适当运用名言或俗语Time is money. 一寸光阴一寸金Time waits for no man.岁月不待人Knowledge is power.知识就是力量Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧Its n

6、ever too old to learn. 活到老，学到老Part5 书面表达写作要求要求二：语句通顺，语法正确要求一：主题明确 I have a lovely dog which is called Jeff. It has brown hair with long ears. It is so clever that he can even understand a few English words主谓一致时态正确运用单词拼写正确要求三：标点使用正确汉语英语句号。.逗号，,省略号顿号、无感叹号！!温馨提示：英语中无顿号 、 1. My father has various hobbie

7、s . He likes doing sports, surfing, listening to music2. He was late for school, because he missed the bus.3. What a beautiful girl!4. Why was he late?要求四：避免句式单一结构He didnt say anything. He left.He left without a word.We think the story is true.The story is believed to be true.组合句子变换主语(主动变被动)复合句I los

8、t my watch in that shop. He said He said that he lost his watchin that shop.英语思维表达法大雨大病大桥 大楼大错 大写 大big a heavy raina serious illnessa long bridgea high rise/large buildinga terrible/serious mistakea capital letter英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高分作文方法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大程度地提高作文成绩。需要指出的是：所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文（80字以下）的句子数量都在8至10句之间（以句子长短和结构不同而变化）。如按每个句子平均812个单词计算，用710个句子便能完成一篇要求在80词左右的作文。Part6 写作模式：十句作文法第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提出本段的主体，它应与第一段的主体相一致。第二句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主体。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。三段之间的衔接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的过渡手段。第三段为结尾，简化为一句，是对全文的总结，并说明作者自己的观点。第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出问题并通过问题点明全文